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* HilariousInHindsight: [[spoiler: Jonah]]'s gem resembles a heart, much like that [[WesternAnimation/StevenUniverseTheMovie of another Gem Pearl is familiar with]].
* {{Narm}}: Due to how the fanfic is written, it can sometimes be hard to take certain scenes seriously, such as when Garnet suddenly kisses Pearl in Chapter 3 or Garnet confesses her feelings to her two chapters later.
* {{Narm}}: Due to how the fanfic is written, it can sometimes be hard to take certain scenes seriously, such as when Garnet suddenly kisses Pearl in Chapter 3 or Garnet confesses her feelings to her two chapters later.
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* HilariousInHindsight: [[spoiler: Jonah]]'s [[spoiler:Jonah]]'s gem resembles a heart, much like that [[WesternAnimation/StevenUniverseTheMovie of another Gem Pearl is familiar with]].
* {{Narm}}: Due to how the fanfic is written, it can sometimes be hard to take certain scenes seriously, such as when Garnet suddenly kisses Pearl in Chapter 3 or when Garnet confesses her feelings to her two chapters later.
* {{Narm}}: Due to how the fanfic is written, it can sometimes be hard to take certain scenes seriously, such as when Garnet suddenly kisses Pearl in Chapter 3 or when Garnet confesses her feelings to her two chapters later.
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* {{Narm}}: Due to the writing style, it can sometimes be hard to take certain scenes seriously, such as when Garnet suddenly kisses Pearl in Chapter 3.
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* {{Narm}}: Due to how the writing style, fanfic is written, it can sometimes be hard to take certain scenes seriously, such as when Garnet suddenly kisses Pearl in Chapter 3.3 or Garnet confesses her feelings to her two chapters later.
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* HilariousInHindsight: [[spoiler: Jonah]]'s gem resembles a heart, much like that [[WesternAnimation/StevenUniverseTheMovie of another Gem Pearl is familiar with]].
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* HilariousInHindsight: [[spoiler: Jonah]]'s gem resembles a heart, much like that [[WesternAnimation/StevenUniverseTheMovie of another Gem Pearl is familiar with]].with]].
* {{Narm}}: Due to the writing style, it can sometimes be hard to take certain scenes seriously, such as when Garnet suddenly kisses Pearl in Chapter 3.
* {{Narm}}: Due to the writing style, it can sometimes be hard to take certain scenes seriously, such as when Garnet suddenly kisses Pearl in Chapter 3.
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* HilariousInHindsight: [[spoiler: Jonah]]'s gem resembles a heart, much like that [[WesternAnimation/StevenUniverseTheMovie of another Gem Pearl is familiar with]].
