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* SpiritualSuccessor: With the way that the Ability Decks grant people abilities to use outside of their suits and how the TransformationTrinket are sunglasses, this may be more of a successor to Disney-Era ''Franchise/PowerRangers'' than Kamen Rider.
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* SpiritualSuccessor: With the way that the Ability Decks grant people abilities to use outside of their suits suits, the overall focus on RecruitTeenagersWithAttitude, and how the TransformationTrinket are sunglasses, this may be more of a successor to Disney-Era ''Franchise/PowerRangers'' than Kamen Rider.
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* SpiritualSuccessor: With the way that the Ability Decks grant people abilities to use outside of their suits and how the TransformationTrinket are sunglasses, this may be more of a successor to Disney-Era ''Franchise/PowerRangers'' than Kamen Rider.
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* SpiritualSuccessor: With the way that the Ability Decks grant people abilities to use outside of their suits and how the TransformationTrinket are sunglasses, this may be more of a successor to Disney-Era ''Franchise/PowerRangers'' than Kamen Rider.Rider.
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* AngstWhatAngst: For being an unwed teenaged mother who hasn't seen her baby's daddy in three years, Carly seems pretty chill with it all and the hardships this would impose on her life and the negative PR this would've done to her web show are never even so much as glanced upon.
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* AngstWhatAngst: For being an unwed teenaged mother who hasn't seen her baby's daddy in three years, Carly seems pretty chill with it all and the hardships this would impose on her life and the negative PR this would've done to her web show are never even so much as glanced upon.upon.
* SpiritualSuccessor: With the way that the Ability Decks grant people abilities to use outside of their suits and how the TransformationTrinket are sunglasses, this may be more of a successor to Disney-Era ''Franchise/PowerRangers'' than Kamen Rider.
* SpiritualSuccessor: With the way that the Ability Decks grant people abilities to use outside of their suits and how the TransformationTrinket are sunglasses, this may be more of a successor to Disney-Era ''Franchise/PowerRangers'' than Kamen Rider.
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Lots of negativity
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* AngstWhatAngst: For being an unwed teenaged mother who hasn't seen her baby's daddy in three years, Carly seems pretty chill with it all and the hardships this would impose on her life and the negative PR this would've done to her webshow are never even so much as glanced upon.
* BadassDecay: Len and Kit, the two Riders who spearheaded the resistance against Xaviax in a major uphill battle and ''won'' in the original series are reduced to being powerless pushovers.
* CanonDefilement: Almost to ''Fanfic/MyInnerLife'' levels!
* CreatorsPet: Erik. Either he'll be onscreen out-staging everyone and proving he's stronger than they'll ever be combined, or he'll be off-screen and the other characters will gush about much better he is than them at everything.
* DesignatedVillain: Freddie is the only character in the third chapter who doesn't [[CreatorsPet rave about how awesome Erik is at everything]], so ''obviously'' he must be jealous and want to vent him.
* DieForOurShip
* RonTheDeathEater: Freddie, who is turned into the villainous Kamen Rider, Intel.
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* BadassDecay: Len and Kit, the two Riders who spearheaded the resistance against Xaviax in a major uphill battle and ''won'' in the original series are reduced to being powerless pushovers.
* CanonDefilement: Almost to ''Fanfic/MyInnerLife'' levels!
* CreatorsPet: Erik. Either he'll be onscreen out-staging everyone and proving he's stronger than they'll ever be combined, or he'll be off-screen and the other characters will gush about much better he is than them at everything.
* DesignatedVillain: Freddie is the only character in the third chapter who doesn't [[CreatorsPet rave about how awesome Erik is at everything]], so ''obviously'' he must be jealous and want to vent him.
* DieForOurShip
* RonTheDeathEater: Freddie, who is turned into the villainous Kamen Rider, Intel.
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* RonTheDeathEater: Freddie, who's was turned into the villainous Kamen Rider, Intel.
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* RonTheDeathEater: Freddie, who's was who is turned into the villainous Kamen Rider, Intel.
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* BlackHoleSue: The entire universe seems to bend to Erik's will. He's never wrong about anything. Everybody drops several levels in competence just so he'll look more awesome than them. ''Nobody'' even questions his getting a sixteen-year-old girl pregnant.
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* DesignatedVillain: Freddie is the only character in the third chapter who doesn't [[CreatorsPet rave about how awesome Erik is at everything,]] so ''obviously'' he must be jealous and want to vent him.
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* DesignatedVillain: Freddie is the only character in the third chapter who doesn't [[CreatorsPet rave about how awesome Erik is at everything,]] everything]], so ''obviously'' he must be jealous and want to vent him.
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* FixerSue: Whenever there's a problem, Erik will just [[AssPull pull something out of thin air]] and fix everything.
* RelationshipSue: Erik.
* RonTheDeathEater: Freddie, who's was turned into the villainous Kamen Rider, Intel.
* VillainSue: Flight, who effortlessly takes on Kit and Len, who were outright stated to be [[DemotedToExtra buying time until Erik showed up to save them.]]
* RelationshipSue: Erik.
* RonTheDeathEater: Freddie, who's was turned into the villainous Kamen Rider, Intel.
* VillainSue: Flight, who effortlessly takes on Kit and Len, who were outright stated to be [[DemotedToExtra buying time until Erik showed up to save them.]]
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* RelationshipSue: Erik.
* VillainSue: Flight, who effortlessly takes on Kit and Len, who were outright stated to be [[DemotedToExtra buying time until Erik showed up to save them.]]
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unfortunate implications need citations
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* UnfortunateImplications: "An ID number is given to every person in the entire universe. It lets the government in each world keep control of their population."
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* DidNotDoTheResearch: In the series it was previously established that the Advent Decks are manually assigned to an individual's specific DNA sequence so that only one person or by extension their cross-dimensional twin can use. But in this story it's implied that the new Decks are sentient and choose the Riders themselves. On top of that, seeing as how past unsanctioned Riders in the original series such as Drew or the Cho brothers have caused so much damage, why would Master Eubulon even ''think'' that making the new Riders that way was a good idea?
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* CreatorsPet: Erik. Either he'll be onscreen out-staging everyone and proving he's stronger than they'll ever be combined, or he'll be off-screen and the other characters will gush about much better he is than them at everything.
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* BadassDecay: Len and Kit, the two Riders who spearheaded the resistance against Xaviax in a major uphill battle and ''won'' in the original series are reduced to being powerless pushovers.
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* DesignatedVillain: Freddie is the only character in the third chapter who doesn't [[ShillingTheWesley rave about how awesome Erik is at everything,]] so ''obviously'' he must be jealous and want to vent him.
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* DesignatedVillain: Freddie is the only character in the third chapter who doesn't [[ShillingTheWesley [[CreatorsPet rave about how awesome Erik is at everything,]] so ''obviously'' he must be jealous and want to vent him.