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* LikeYouWouldReallyDoIt: Rather than killing off Anne or Holmes, the author has the kindhearted {{romantic false lead}} rescue both characters by shooting the Barnslake Killer. This bluff may detract from the tension of the story for some readers.
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* LikeYouWouldReallyDoIt: Rather [[spoiler:Rather than killing off Anne or Holmes, the author has the kindhearted {{romantic false lead}} rescue both characters by shooting the Barnslake Killer. This bluff may detract from the tension of the story for some readers.]]
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* AssPull: Rather unexpectedly, Elsie and William are revealed as murderers, and Anne's uncle is revealed to be her father halfway through the novel
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* LikeYouWouldReallyDoIt: Rather than killing off Anne or Holmes, the author has the kindhearted {{romantic false lead}} rescue both characters by shooting the Barnslake Killer. This bluff may detract from the tension of the story for some readers.
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* ShockingSwerve: Rather unexpectedly, Elsie and William are revealed as murderers, and Anne's uncle is revealed to be her father halfway through the novel.
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* LikeYouWouldReallyDoIt: Rather than killing off Anne or Holmes, the author has the kindhearted {{romantic false lead}} rescue both characters by shooting the Barnslake Killer. This bluff may detract from the tension of the story for some readers.
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* ShockingSwerve: Rather unexpectedly, Elsie and William are revealed as murderers, and Anne's uncle is revealed to be her father halfway through the novel.
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* CompleteMonster: [[spoiler:[[SerialKiller Robin Chapman, the Barnslake Killer]], successfully kills eleven people over the span of a month in an effort to stave off boredom. Chapman eventually finds himself [[FameThroughInfamy seeking notoriety for his crimes]], targeting Sherlock Holmes himself by [[TamperingWithFoodAndDrink spiking his tea with morphine]], only to be thwarted by Holmes using the poisoned beverage in an experiment. When Holmes and Anne Chantrey go to confront him after his latest murder, Chapman takes Anne hostage, [[SadisticChoice threatening to shoot Anne unless Holmes shoots himself]].]]
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* CompleteMonster: [[spoiler:[[SerialKiller Robin Chapman, the Barnslake Killer]], successfully kills eleven people over the span of a month in an effort to [[ForTheEvulz stave off boredom.boredom]]. Chapman eventually finds himself [[FameThroughInfamy seeking notoriety for his crimes]], targeting Sherlock Holmes himself by [[TamperingWithFoodAndDrink spiking his tea with morphine]], only to be thwarted by Holmes using the poisoned beverage in an experiment. When Holmes and Anne Chantrey go to confront him after his latest murder, Chapman takes Anne hostage, [[SadisticChoice threatening to shoot Anne unless Holmes shoots himself]].]]
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*CompleteMonster: [[spoiler:[[SerialKiller Robin Chapman, the Barnslake Killer]], successfully kills eleven people over the span of a month in an effort to stave off boredom. Chapman eventually finds himself [[FameThroughInfamy seeking notoriety for his crimes]], targeting Sherlock Holmes himself by [[TamperingWithFoodAndDrink spiking his tea with morphine]], only to be thwarted by Holmes using the poisoned beverage in an experiment. When Holmes and Anne Chantrey go to confront him after his latest murder, Chapman takes Anne hostage, [[SadisticChoice threatening to shoot Anne unless Holmes shoots himself]].]]
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* LikeYouWouldReallyDoIt: Rather than killing off Anne or Holmes, the author has the kindhearted {{romantic false lead}} rescue both characters by shooting the Barnslake Killer. This bluff may detract from the tension of the story for some readers.
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* ShockingSwerve: Elsie and William are revealed as murderers halfway through the novel, and are surprisingly dealt with quickly. From there on, Holmes and Anne deal with other cases, culminating in a confrontation with a SerialKiller.
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