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* HilariousInHindsight: At the time the fic was written, it was generally considered a given by the fanbase that Naruto would become the 6th Hokage after Tsunade, and [[spoiler:Kakashi being made 6th Hokage while Naruto was indisposed]] was an interesting plot twist in this fic. [[spoiler:Then Kakashi became 6th Hokage in the actual manga, with Naruto only succeeding him as the 7th years after the story ended, shortly before the DistantFinale]].
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* GodModeSue: Averted; Naruto is quite easily the strongest character in the entire story so far, with his elemental mastery of wind, sage training and [[spoiler:demon powers]] making him a supremely powerful warrior- but not only is he still far from invincible (as [[spoiler:his demon blood brings certain vulnerabilities with it which lead to his betrayal, capture and imprisonment by Akatsuki]]), but much of his power also comes with a hefty price. He also is fully aware that despite being the srongest fighter in the world, that doesn't mean he can accomplish anything and everything and all he ''really'' wants is to raise his daughter in peace.
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** Naruto taking young Hitomi [[spoiler:to visit her mother's grave in chapter 16, 'Daddies Don't Cry'.]]
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** Naruto taking young Hitomi [[spoiler:to visit her mother's grave in chapter 16, 'Daddies Don't Cry'.]]Cry']].
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* CompleteMonster: Arguably this version of Hoshigaki Kisame. [[spoiler:He brutally murders Kensha, a heavily pregnant teenage girl, ''just because she was there.'']]
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* GodModeSue: ''Fantastically'' averted; Naruto is quite easily the strongest character in the entire story so far, with his elemental mastery of wind, sage training and [[spoiler:demon powers]] making him a supremely powerful warrior- but not only is he still far from invincible (as [[spoiler:his demon blood brings certain vulnerabilities with it which lead to his betrayal, capture and imprisonment by Akatsuki]]), but much of his power also comes with a hefty price. He also is fully aware that despite being the srongest fighter in the world, that doesn't mean he can accomplish anything and everything and all he ''really'' wants is to raise his daughter in peace.
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* GodModeSue: ''Fantastically'' averted; Averted; Naruto is quite easily the strongest character in the entire story so far, with his elemental mastery of wind, sage training and [[spoiler:demon powers]] making him a supremely powerful warrior- but not only is he still far from invincible (as [[spoiler:his demon blood brings certain vulnerabilities with it which lead to his betrayal, capture and imprisonment by Akatsuki]]), but much of his power also comes with a hefty price. He also is fully aware that despite being the srongest fighter in the world, that doesn't mean he can accomplish anything and everything and all he ''really'' wants is to raise his daughter in peace.
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* GodModeSue: ''Fantastically'' averted; Naruto is quite easily the strongest character in the entire story so far, with his elemental mastery of wind, sage training and [[spoiler:demon powers]] making him a supremely powerful warrior- but not only is he still far from invincible (as [[spoiler:his demon blood brings certain vulnerabilities with it which lead to his betrayal, capture and imprisonment by Akatsuki]]), but much of his power also comes with a hefty price. He also is fully aware that despite being the srongest fighter in the world, that doesn't mean he can accomplish anything and all he ''really'' wants is to raise his daughter in peace.
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* GodModeSue: ''Fantastically'' averted; Naruto is quite easily the strongest character in the entire story so far, with his elemental mastery of wind, sage training and [[spoiler:demon powers]] making him a supremely powerful warrior- but not only is he still far from invincible (as [[spoiler:his demon blood brings certain vulnerabilities with it which lead to his betrayal, capture and imprisonment by Akatsuki]]), but much of his power also comes with a hefty price. He also is fully aware that despite being the srongest fighter in the world, that doesn't mean he can accomplish anything and everything and all he ''really'' wants is to raise his daughter in peace.
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* {{Narm}}: While the QuitYourWhining speech Naruto gives to [[spoiler:Sasuke]] is certainly awesome, when the two men descend into screaming "FUCK YOU!" at each other it doesn't help the gravity of the situation.
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* GodModeSue: ''Fantastically'' averted; Naruto is quite easily the strongest character in the entire story so far, with his elemental mastery of wind, sage training and [[spoiler:demon powers]] making him a supremely powerful warrior- but not only is he still far from invincible (as [[spoiler:his demon blood brings certain vulnerabilities with it which lead to his betrayal, capture and imprisonment by Akatsuki]]), but much of his power also comes with a hefty price. He also is fully aware that despite being the srongest fighter in the world, that doesn't mean he can accomplish anything and all he ''really'' wants is to raise his daughter in peace.
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* CompleteMonster: Arguably this version of Hoshigaki Kisame. [[spoiler:He brutally murders Kensha, a heavily pregnant teenage girl, ''just because she was there.'']]
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* CompleteMonster: Arguably this version of Hoshigaki Kisame. [[spoiler:He brutally murders Kensha, a heavily pregnant teenage girl, ''just because she was there.'']]'']]
* TearJerker: [[spoiler:Kensha's death and its effect on Naruto.]]
** Naruto taking young Hitomi [[spoiler:to visit her mother's grave in chapter 16, 'Daddies Don't Cry'.]]
** Rather unexpectedly, [[spoiler:Karin's death, using the last of her life to save Juugo -the man who ''truly'' loved her- with her healing power, and Juugo's reaction to it.]]
* TearJerker: [[spoiler:Kensha's death and its effect on Naruto.]]
** Naruto taking young Hitomi [[spoiler:to visit her mother's grave in chapter 16, 'Daddies Don't Cry'.]]
** Rather unexpectedly, [[spoiler:Karin's death, using the last of her life to save Juugo -the man who ''truly'' loved her- with her healing power, and Juugo's reaction to it.]]
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* CargoShip: Naruto is ''really'' attached to his precious Stick.
* CompleteMonster: Arguably this version of Hoshigaki Kisame. [[spoiler:He brutally murders Kensha, a heavily pregnant teenage girl, ''just because she was there.'']]
* CompleteMonster: Arguably this version of Hoshigaki Kisame. [[spoiler:He brutally murders Kensha, a heavily pregnant teenage girl, ''just because she was there.'']]
