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* UselessProtagonist: Abeille. Others characters either make important choices for her, or the choices she makes doesn't effect the plot that much. A few examples include her not getting the cafeteria job on her own; Ivy did it for her. She didn't become a gardener due to any required skills; Miel got it for her. Making peace with her cafeteria co-workers came from Clove's suggestions, and competing in her company's Sport's Day required Poppy and Miel's gentle pushing.
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* UselessProtagonist: Abeille. Others characters either make important choices for her, or SweetnessAversion: A common complaint from readers is that the choices she makes comic doesn't effect the plot have much of an actual story and is incredibly cutesy, often bringing up problems and then immediately having them resolved with little to no fanfare. The most obvious one is that much. A few examples include her not getting the cafeteria job on her own; Ivy did it for her. She didn't become a gardener due issue of physical touching being obsolete is {{Retconned}} to any required skills; Miel got it for her. Making peace with her cafeteria co-workers came from Clove's suggestions, merely being "outdated" and competing in her company's Sport's Day required Poppy then no longer becomes an issue at all after the first chapter, as people regularly get close to each other and publicly post about a "Touching Club" to do just that. Abeille and Miel's gentle pushing.relationship is completely smooth sailing, with whole chapters devoted to them doing things as a couple and no conflict that doesn't come from outside sources, making readers complain that the romance is dull.
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* StrangledByTheRedString: Abeille and Miel are the main couple, yet there isn't much chemistry or common interests (besides experimenting and plants) between them to justify them being together.
* UselessProtagonist: Abeille. Others characters either make important choices for her, or the choices she makes doesn't effect the plot that much. A few examples include her not getting the cafeteria job on her own; Ivy did it for her. She didn't become a gardener due to any required skills; Miel got it for her. Making peace with her cafeteria co-workers came from Clove's suggestions, and competing in her company's Sport's Day required Poppy and Miel's gentle pushing.
* UselessProtagonist: Abeille. Others characters either make important choices for her, or the choices she makes doesn't effect the plot that much. A few examples include her not getting the cafeteria job on her own; Ivy did it for her. She didn't become a gardener due to any required skills; Miel got it for her. Making peace with her cafeteria co-workers came from Clove's suggestions, and competing in her company's Sport's Day required Poppy and Miel's gentle pushing.
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* {{Expy}}: Gina admitted that the male lead is, in appearance, a combo of both Makoto and Kazuo, though he's clearly not the same race.
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* {{Expy}}: Gina admitted that the male lead is, in appearance, a combo of both Makoto and Kazuo, though he's clearly not the same race.
