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* MoralEventHorizon: Dave could be argued to cross this when he feeds the inspector to Otto. [[CruelAndUnusualDeath His death is not a pleasant or quick]].
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* MoralEventHorizon: Dave could be argued to cross this when he feeds the inspector to Otto. [[CruelAndUnusualDeath His death is not a pleasant or quick]].quick one]].
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* UnintentionallySympathetic: The inspector is supposed to come across as obnoxious and demeaning to Ugly Dave. But even ignoring the horror that is Otto, Dave's dump is a health code nightmare and deserves to be shut down. Especially if there's going to be people living nearby. The inspector is completely justified in his actions and even more so when Dave feeds him to an abomination living in the junkyard.
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* UnintentionallySympathetic: The inspector is supposed to come across as obnoxious and demeaning to Ugly Dave. But even ignoring the horror that is Otto, Dave's dump is a health code nightmare and deserves to be shut down. Especially if there's going to be people living nearby. The inspector is completely justified in his actions and even more so when Dave feeds him to an abomination living in the junkyard.junkyard.
** A line of dialog mentioning new development hints at eminent domain abuse, but still doesn't really call for being fed to a monster.
** A line of dialog mentioning new development hints at eminent domain abuse, but still doesn't really call for being fed to a monster.
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Ugly Dave is not a TheHero defending his land from evil big business looking to take away his land. He's a madman feeding people to a monster that may one day turn on him without a moments notice.
* MoralEventHorizon: Dave could be argued to cross this when he feeds the inspector to Otto. [[CruelAndUnusualDeath His death is not a pleasant or quick]].
* StrawmanHasAPoint: The story tries to frame the inspector as an AssholeVictim who had it coming for wanting to evict Ugly Dave. In actuality, he was trying to shut down a dump that was a nuisance for the neighbors at best, and a health hazard at worst. And that's without taking into account the cannibal monster. [[UnintentionallySympathetic In the end, he was eaten for doing his job.]]
* UnintentionallySympathetic: The inspector is supposed to come across as obnoxious and demeaning to Ugly Dave. But even ignoring the horror that is Otto, Dave's dump is a health code nightmare and deserves to be shut down. Especially if there's going to be people living nearby. The inspector is completely justified in his actions and even more so when Dave feeds him to an abomination living in the junkyard.
* MoralEventHorizon: Dave could be argued to cross this when he feeds the inspector to Otto. [[CruelAndUnusualDeath His death is not a pleasant or quick]].
* StrawmanHasAPoint: The story tries to frame the inspector as an AssholeVictim who had it coming for wanting to evict Ugly Dave. In actuality, he was trying to shut down a dump that was a nuisance for the neighbors at best, and a health hazard at worst. And that's without taking into account the cannibal monster. [[UnintentionallySympathetic In the end, he was eaten for doing his job.]]
* UnintentionallySympathetic: The inspector is supposed to come across as obnoxious and demeaning to Ugly Dave. But even ignoring the horror that is Otto, Dave's dump is a health code nightmare and deserves to be shut down. Especially if there's going to be people living nearby. The inspector is completely justified in his actions and even more so when Dave feeds him to an abomination living in the junkyard.
