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* HilariousInHindsight: A few parts of the fic seem rather prophetic about ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsRainbowRocks''.
** The gang has a sleep-over at Pinkie's house, where Maud frightens them, and there's a scene where Sunset can't sleep and confides in Twilight. An identical scene happens in the film, just flipped to Twilight confiding in Sunset.
** The gradual destruction and ultimate loss of Sunset's leather jacket serves as a symbol of her CharacterDevelopment into a better person. In ''Rainbow Rocks'', Sunset casts off her jacket when she steps up to help the Rainbooms fight the Dazzlings, and transforms into her own Anthro-Form shortly after.
** The gang has a sleep-over at Pinkie's house, where Maud frightens them, and there's a scene where Sunset can't sleep and confides in Twilight. An identical scene happens in the film, just flipped to Twilight confiding in Sunset.
** The gradual destruction and ultimate loss of Sunset's leather jacket serves as a symbol of her CharacterDevelopment into a better person. In ''Rainbow Rocks'', Sunset casts off her jacket when she steps up to help the Rainbooms fight the Dazzlings, and transforms into her own Anthro-Form shortly after.
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* HilariousInHindsight: A few parts of the fic seem rather prophetic about ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsRainbowRocks''.
** The gang has a sleep-over at Pinkie's house, where Maud frightens them, and there's a scene where Sunset can't sleep and confides in Twilight. An identical scene happens in the film, just flipped to Twilight confiding in Sunset.
** The gradual destruction and ultimate loss of Sunset's leather jacket serves as a symbol of her CharacterDevelopment into a better person. In ''Rainbow Rocks'', Sunset casts off her jacket when she steps up to help the Rainbooms fight the Dazzlings, and transforms into her own Anthro-Form shortly after.future ''Equestria Girls'' media, or are amusingly inaccurate.
** The gang has a sleep-over at Pinkie's house, where Maud frightens them, and there's a scene where Sunset can't sleep and confides in Twilight. An identical scene happens in the film, just flipped to Twilight confiding in Sunset.
** The gradual destruction and ultimate loss of Sunset's leather jacket serves as a symbol of her CharacterDevelopment into a better person. In ''Rainbow Rocks'', Sunset casts off her jacket when she steps up to help the Rainbooms fight the Dazzlings, and transforms into her own Anthro-Form shortly after.
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** The gang has a sleep-over at Pinkie's house, where Maud frightens them, and there's a scene where Sunset can't sleep and confides in Twilight. An identical scene happens in ''Rainbow Rocks'', just flipped to Twilight confiding in Sunset.
** The gradual destruction and ultimate loss of Sunset's leather jacket serves as a symbol of her CharacterDevelopment into a better person. In ''Rainbow Rocks'', Sunset casts off her jacket when she steps up to help the Rainbooms fight the Dazzlings, and transforms into her own Anthro-Form shortly after.
** The gradual destruction and ultimate loss of Sunset's leather jacket serves as a symbol of her CharacterDevelopment into a better person. In ''Rainbow Rocks'', Sunset casts off her jacket when she steps up to help the Rainbooms fight the Dazzlings, and transforms into her own Anthro-Form shortly after.
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** Sunset having a motorcycle, guess who is in motocross come ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsFriendshipGames''.
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** Sunset having has a motorcycle, guess who is motorcycle years before ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsFriendshipGames'' had her participate in the motocross come ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsFriendshipGames''.competition.
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** The gradual destruction and ultimate loss of Sunset's leather jacket serves as a symbol of her CharacterDevelopment into a better person. In ''Rainbow Rocks'', Sunset casts off her jacket when she [[spoiler:steps up to help the Rainbooms fight the Dazzlings, and transforms into her own Anthro-Form shortly after]].
** The film confirms [[spoiler:there is an alternate version of Twilight who has her own dog named Spike. And she's a nerdy scientist to boot.]]
** Sunset's interactions with "Princess Twilight" become a mix of this and HarsherInHindsight with the film implying [[spoiler:Sunset is going to write Twilight for advice like Twilight's old friendship reports. In the fic, Sunset's conversations with "Princess Twilight" are a mark of her insanity and lingering hate towards Twilight.]]
** The film confirms [[spoiler:there is an alternate version of Twilight who has her own dog named Spike. And she's a nerdy scientist to boot.]]
** Sunset's interactions with "Princess Twilight" become a mix of this and HarsherInHindsight with the film implying [[spoiler:Sunset is going to write Twilight for advice like Twilight's old friendship reports. In the fic, Sunset's conversations with "Princess Twilight" are a mark of her insanity and lingering hate towards Twilight.]]
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** The gradual destruction and ultimate loss of Sunset's leather jacket serves as a symbol of her CharacterDevelopment into a better person. In ''Rainbow Rocks'', Sunset casts off her jacket when she [[spoiler:steps steps up to help the Rainbooms fight the Dazzlings, and transforms into her own Anthro-Form shortly after]].
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** Sunset's interactions with "Princess Twilight" become a mix of this andHarsherInHindsight with the film implying [[spoiler:Sunset is going to write Twilight for advice like Twilight's old friendship reports. HarsherInHindsight. In the fic, Sunset's conversations with "Princess Twilight" are a mark of her insanity and lingering hate towards Twilight.]]Twilight, while in the film Sunset starts using the magical journal to write for Twilight for advice now that they're friends.
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* BrokenBase: Chapter 33 confirms [[spoiler:Artemis and the Lulamoons have real magic, including telekinesis and teleportation, and they use these powers to subdue Gilda's gang]]. Some don't mind this and thought seeing it was cool, others felt it ruined the tone of the story. The author is on record feeling TheReveal (which would get explained next story) came too soon.
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* BrokenBase: Chapter 33 confirms [[spoiler:Artemis and the Lulamoons have real magic, including telekinesis and teleportation, and they use these powers to subdue Gilda's gang]]. Some don't mind this and thought seeing it was cool, others felt it ruined the tone of the story. The author is on record feeling TheReveal (which would get explained next story) in ''Spectacular Seven'') came too soon.
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** In this story, Sunset lives in an abandoned factory. the song ''Monday Blues'' shows she lives in a pretty nice looking apartment.
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* TheWoobie: Fluttershy. Despite [[spoiler:nearly being DrivenToSuicide by Sunset Shimmer]], she still came to her animal shelter, because no one would take care of them if she didn't.
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* TheWoobie: Fluttershy. Despite [[spoiler:nearly nearly being DrivenToSuicide by Sunset Shimmer]], Shimmer, she still came to her animal shelter, because no one would take care of them if she didn't.
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** In this story, Sunset lives in an abandoned factory. the song ''Monday Blues'' shows she lives in a pretty nice looking apartment.
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** Sunset having a motorcycle, guess who is in motocross come ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsFriendshipGames''.
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* BrokenBase: Chapter 33 confirms [[spoiler:Artemis and the Lulamoons have real magic, including telekinesis and teleportation, and they use these powers to subdue Gilda's gang]]. Some don't mind this and thought seeing it was cool, others felt it ruined the tone of the story. The author is on record admitting feeling TheReveal (which would get explained next story) came too soon.
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* BrokenBase: Chapter 33 confirms [[spoiler:Artemis and the Lulamoons have real magic, including telekinesis and teleportation, and they use these powers to subdue Gilda's gang]]. Some don't mind this and thought seeing it was cool, others felt it ruined the tone of the story. The author is on record admitting TheReveal (which would get explained next story) was came too soon.
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* NightmareFuel: Sunset's nightmares can come across as this, especially one where [[spoiler:Fluttershy blissfully drops herself off a cliff and the rest of the Mane Six get burnt to the ground by Demon!Sunset.]]
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* NightmareFuel: Sunset's nightmares can come across as this, especially one where [[spoiler:Fluttershy blissfully drops herself off a cliff and the rest of the Mane Six get burnt to the ground by Demon!Sunset.Demon Sunset.]]
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* BrokenBase: Chapter 33 confirms [[spoiler:Artemis and the Lulamoons have real magic, including telekinesis and teleportation, and they use these powers to subdue Gilda's gang]]. Some don't mind this and thought seeing it was cool, others felt it ruined the tone of the story and story. The author is on record admitting TheReveal (which would get explained next story) was a JumpingTheShark moment.too soon.
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* BrokenBase: Chapter 33 confirms [[spoiler:Artemis and the Lulamoons have real magic, including telekinesis and teleportation]]. teleportation, and they use these powers to subdue Gilda's gang]]. Some don't mind this and thought seeing it was cool, others felt it ruined the tone of the story and raised was a lot of questions.JumpingTheShark moment.
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** Sunset's interactions with "Princess Twilight" become a mix of this and HarsherInHindsight with the film implying [[spoiler:Sunset is going to write Twilight for advice like Twilight's old friendship reports.]]
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** Sunset's interactions with "Princess Twilight" become a mix of this and HarsherInHindsight with the film implying [[spoiler:Sunset is going to write Twilight for advice like Twilight's old friendship reports. In the fic, Sunset's conversations with "Princess Twilight" are a mark of her insanity and lingering hate towards Twilight.]]
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** The gang has a sleep-over at Pinkie's house, where Maud frightens them, and there's a scene where Sunset can't sleep and talks to Twilight. An identical scene happens in the film.
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** The gang has a sleep-over at Pinkie's house, where Maud frightens them, and there's a scene where Sunset can't sleep and talks to confides in Twilight. An identical scene happens in the film.film, just flipped to Twilight confiding in Sunset.
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** The gang has a sleep-over at Pinkie's house, where Maud frightens them, and there's a scene where Sunset can't sleep and talks to Twilight. It seems a pair of identical scenes are in the film.
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* HilariousInHindsight: A few parts of the fic seem rather prophetic about ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsRainbowRocks''.
** The gang has a sleep-over at Pinkie's house, where Maud frightens them, and there's a scene where Sunset can't sleep and talks to Twilight. It seems a pair of identical scenes are in the film.
** The gradual destruction and ultimate loss of Sunset's leather jacket serves as a symbol of her CharacterDevelopment into a better person. In ''Rainbow Rocks'', Sunset casts off her jacket when she [[spoiler:steps up to help the Rainbooms fight the Dazzlings, and transforms into her own Anthro-Form shortly after]].
** The gang has a sleep-over at Pinkie's house, where Maud frightens them, and there's a scene where Sunset can't sleep and talks to Twilight. It seems a pair of identical scenes are in the film.
** The gradual destruction and ultimate loss of Sunset's leather jacket serves as a symbol of her CharacterDevelopment into a better person. In ''Rainbow Rocks'', Sunset casts off her jacket when she [[spoiler:steps up to help the Rainbooms fight the Dazzlings, and transforms into her own Anthro-Form shortly after]].
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* NightmareFuel: Sunset's nightmares can come across as this, especially one where [[spoiler:Fluttershy blissfully drops herself off a cliff and the rest of the Mane Six get burnt to the ground by Demon!Sunset.]]
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* TheWoobie: Fluttershy. Despite [[spoiler:nearly being DrivenToSuicide]] by Sunset Shimmer]], she still came to her animal shelter, because no one would take care of them if she didn't.
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* TheWoobie: Fluttershy. Despite [[spoiler:nearly being DrivenToSuicide]] DrivenToSuicide by Sunset Shimmer]], she still came to her animal shelter, because no one would take care of them if she didn't.
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* JerkassWoobie: Sunset Shimmer. She's still as catty and mean as ever, even after she starts to reform. But, she's lost everything she's worked so hard for, can't go back to Equestria, and lives in a rathole of a factory, with her money and food rapidly dwindling.
* TheWoobie: Fluttershy. Despite [[spoiler:nearly being DrivenToSuicide]] by Sunset Shimmer]], she still came to her animal shelter, because no one would take care of them if she didn't.
** Most of the animals in the shelter also qualify, since Fluttershy says many were abandoned or [[KickTheDog abused]].
* TheWoobie: Fluttershy. Despite [[spoiler:nearly being DrivenToSuicide]] by Sunset Shimmer]], she still came to her animal shelter, because no one would take care of them if she didn't.
** Most of the animals in the shelter also qualify, since Fluttershy says many were abandoned or [[KickTheDog abused]].
