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*** Although far from the only ''Kirby'' fan work to do so, this story featured a sand-themed copy ability (Sandstorm) long before ''[[VideoGame/KirbysReturnToDreamLand Kirby's Return to Dream Land Deluxe]]'' introduced an official Sand ability.
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*** [[spoiler:The FusionDance between Zero and Marx comes out looking like a large, winged creature with a horned crown, floating hands, and an eye in its mouth--a near-identical description to [[VideoGame/KirbysReturnToDreamLand Magolor Soul]].]]
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*** [[BonusBoss Proteaus the Primordial]] shares more than a few similarities with [[VideoGame/KirbyStarAllies Void Termina]], being a massive, ancient being that created the world who's defeated by shooting at various weak points that appear on his body.
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*** [[BonusBoss [[spoiler:[[{{Superboss}} Proteaus the Primordial]] shares more than a few similarities with [[VideoGame/KirbyStarAllies Void Termina]], being a massive, ancient being that created the world who's defeated by shooting at various weak points that appear on his body. body.]]
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*** General Dee's secret weapon turns out to be [[spoiler:a giant freight train with a Waddle Dee's face on the front, which bears a striking resemblance to the Waddle Dee Trains from [[VideoGame/KirbyTripleDeluxe Old Odyssey]].]]
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*** Chapter 29 features [[spoiler:a Meta Knight from an alternate timeline who became a {{Cyborg}}. [[VideoGame/KirbyPlanetRobobot Mecha Knight]], anyone?]]
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*** It also has Bandana Dee using a Parasol [[VideoGame/KirbyBattleRoyale years before he canonically did]].
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** Chapter 6 has a mermaid named [[VideoGame/UnderTale Undyne]].
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*** Chapter 21 features [[spoiler:a cult that worships Dark Matter, which is remarkably similar in concept to the Cult of the Jamba Heart from ''VideoGame/KirbyStarAllies''.]]
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*** Bandana Dee and King Dedede (and later Adeleine) becoming [[VideoGame/KirbysReturnToDreamLand playable]] [[VideoGame/KirbyStarAllies characters]]. Bandana Dee even has a spear as one of his weapons!
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*** Bandana Dee and King Dedede (and later Adeleine) Adeleine becoming [[VideoGame/KirbysReturnToDreamLand playable]] [[VideoGame/KirbyStarAllies characters]]. Bandana Dee even has a spear as one of his weapons! weapons, though a much different kind. The rewrite acknowledges this, and gives Waddle Dee his regular spear from the games as an early weapon.
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*** One of Dedede's weapons being [[VideoGame/KirbyTripleDeluxe an axe]].
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* HilariousInHindsight:
** Although the story was written back in 2008, it seems to have predicted quite a few elements in future ''Kirby'' games:
*** Bandana Dee and King Dedede (and later Adeleine) becoming [[VideoGame/KirbysReturnToDreamLand playable]] [[VideoGame/KirbyStarAllies characters]]. Bandana Dee even has a spear as one of his weapons!
*** Meta Knight getting [[VideoGame/KirbyStarAllies possessed by the main villainous force]].
*** One of Dedede's weapons being [[VideoGame/KirbyTripleDeluxe an axe]].
*** [[BonusBoss Proteaus the Primordial]] shares more than a few similarities with [[VideoGame/KirbyStarAllies Void Termina]], being a massive, ancient being that created the world who's defeated by shooting at various weak points that appear on his body.
** Chapter 6 has a mermaid named [[VideoGame/UnderTale Undyne]].
* HilariousInHindsight:
** Although the story was written back in 2008, it seems to have predicted quite a few elements in future ''Kirby'' games:
*** Bandana Dee and King Dedede (and later Adeleine) becoming [[VideoGame/KirbysReturnToDreamLand playable]] [[VideoGame/KirbyStarAllies characters]]. Bandana Dee even has a spear as one of his weapons!
*** Meta Knight getting [[VideoGame/KirbyStarAllies possessed by the main villainous force]].
*** One of Dedede's weapons being [[VideoGame/KirbyTripleDeluxe an axe]].
*** [[BonusBoss Proteaus the Primordial]] shares more than a few similarities with [[VideoGame/KirbyStarAllies Void Termina]], being a massive, ancient being that created the world who's defeated by shooting at various weak points that appear on his body.
** Chapter 6 has a mermaid named [[VideoGame/UnderTale Undyne]].
