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** It may seem strange that [[spoiler:the song title "A-A-Ai" was untranslated until you notice it was written for '''A'''riu '''A'''ki. The Japanese title is "AA愛", where the connection is more obvious.]]
** Most of the couples has some issue that [[spoiler:Yuna and Hina]] have faced or will have to face. Miki has to deal with how to respond to Maki's confession, just like how [[spoiler:Yuna responds to Hina's]]. The broadcasting trio has two of their members falling in love and trying to figure out how not to treat the third as a third wheel, a bit reminiscent of [[spoiler:Yuna and Hina falling in love, since both are friends with Ano]]. Kiri and Tsukuyo's arc has them come to terms with their lesbianism, just like how [[spoiler:Yuna]] comes to terms with hers. Youka and Aki end up drawing some flak after their public display of affection, something [[spoiler:Yuna and Hina]] will have to be careful of in the future. Lastly, Matsuri and Miyu face two important issues- how to keep a relationship going, and how to potentially deal with parental opposition- that [[spoiler:Yuna and Hina]] may face someday. Basically, the entire game can be thought about as [[spoiler:Yuna undergoing the necessary development to be ready to go out with Hina]], rather than the ghosts learning how to have TheirFirstTime.
** While it may seem rather silly for Sachi to be so worried about what Megumi thinks of her real self, consider that she had 50 years without anyone to talk to about her insecurities, and spent the next 30 with Megumi as her only companion, so she'd have ended up in an awkward position if her confession had soured things between them. In fact, the fact that Sachi makes a mountain out of a molehill and continues with her HeroicSelfDeprecation even after Megumi accepts her, can be chalked up to Sachi's vulnerability.
** Nena's surname, ''Mi''yama, has the "three" of the broadcast trio's NumericalThemeNaming. She's the "third wheel" [[spoiler:to Umi and Sasa's relationship.]] In fact, [[spoiler:Ano and Miyama serve the same role to Yuna and Hina, and Umi and Sasa, respectively.]]
** In the flashback to [[spoiler:Yuna overhearing her middle school clubmates badmouthing her]], it seems a bit strange that all of them refer to the person in question by her first name, rather than her surname, "[[UsefulNotes/JapaneseHonorifics Sempai]]," or her title as ClubPresident, even though they seem to dislike her (although the lack of honorifics indicates a lack of respect), but this makes the implication that [[spoiler:Yuna]] had thought of all of those people as her friends. Compare how the people who expect Miki to do their busywork for them call her by her surname.
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** When Sachi and Megumi are [[spoiler: possessing Yuna and Hina to have sex Megumi says that on some level she can't help but wish they could retain the bodies and live together. Thankfully the Kindred Spirits are far too nice to ever actually do this but if they had been less benevolent and more manipulative ghosts Yuna and Hina could have been left trapped in their own minds forever while their lives were stolen by those they'd tried to help. Yuna even acknowledges the possibility in-story before the sex scene.]]
** When you subtract the 30 years since Megumi's death from the 80 years since Sachi's death, that leaves Sachi with about half a century as the only ghost in the school and no other people besides Yuna [[spoiler:and to some extent, Ano and Hina]] who [[ISeeDeadPeople can see and hear ghosts]]. It's a wonder she didn't GoMadFromTheIsolation.
** It may seem strange that [[spoiler:the song title "A-A-Ai" was untranslated until you notice it was written for '''A'''riu '''A'''ki. The Japanese title is "AA愛", where the connection is more obvious.]]
** Most of the couples has some issue that [[spoiler:Yuna and Hina]] have faced or will have to face. Miki has to deal with how to respond to Maki's confession, just like how [[spoiler:Yuna responds to Hina's]]. The broadcasting trio has two of their members falling in love and trying to figure out how not to treat the third as a third wheel, a bit reminiscent of [[spoiler:Yuna and Hina falling in love, since both are friends with Ano]]. Kiri and Tsukuyo's arc has them come to terms with their lesbianism, just like how [[spoiler:Yuna]] comes to terms with hers. Youka and Aki end up drawing some flak after their public display of affection, something [[spoiler:Yuna and Hina]] will have to be careful of in the future. Lastly, Matsuri and Miyu face two important issues- how to keep a relationship going, and how to potentially deal with parental opposition- that [[spoiler:Yuna and Hina]] may face someday. Basically, the entire game can be thought about as [[spoiler:Yuna undergoing the necessary development to be ready to go out with Hina]], rather than the ghosts learning how to have TheirFirstTime.
** While it may seem rather silly for Sachi to be so worried about what Megumi thinks of her real self, consider that she had 50 years without anyone to talk to about her insecurities, and spent the next 30 with Megumi as her only companion, so she'd have ended up in an awkward position if her confession had soured things between them. In fact, the fact that Sachi makes a mountain out of a molehill and continues with her HeroicSelfDeprecation even after Megumi accepts her, can be chalked up to Sachi's vulnerability.
** Nena's surname, ''Mi''yama, has the "three" of the broadcast trio's NumericalThemeNaming. She's the "third wheel" [[spoiler:to Umi and Sasa's relationship.]] In fact, [[spoiler:Ano and Miyama serve the same role to Yuna and Hina, and Umi and Sasa, respectively.]]
** In the flashback to [[spoiler:Yuna overhearing her middle school clubmates badmouthing her]], it seems a bit strange that all of them refer to the person in question by her first name, rather than her surname, "[[UsefulNotes/JapaneseHonorifics Sempai]]," or her title as ClubPresident, even though they seem to dislike her (although the lack of honorifics indicates a lack of respect), but this makes the implication that [[spoiler:Yuna]] had thought of all of those people as her friends. Compare how the people who expect Miki to do their busywork for them call her by her surname.
* FridgeHorror:
** When Sachi and Megumi are [[spoiler: possessing Yuna and Hina to have sex Megumi says that on some level she can't help but wish they could retain the bodies and live together. Thankfully the Kindred Spirits are far too nice to ever actually do this but if they had been less benevolent and more manipulative ghosts Yuna and Hina could have been left trapped in their own minds forever while their lives were stolen by those they'd tried to help. Yuna even acknowledges the possibility in-story before the sex scene.]]
** When you subtract the 30 years since Megumi's death from the 80 years since Sachi's death, that leaves Sachi with about half a century as the only ghost in the school and no other people besides Yuna [[spoiler:and to some extent, Ano and Hina]] who [[ISeeDeadPeople can see and hear ghosts]]. It's a wonder she didn't GoMadFromTheIsolation.
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** In the flashback to [[spoiler:Yuna overhearing her middle school clubmates badmouthing her]], it seems a bit strange that all of them refer to the person in question by her first name, rather than her surname, "[[SenpaiKohai Sempai]]," or her title as ClubPresident, even though they seem to dislike her(although the lack of honorifics indicates a lack of respect), but this makes the implication that [[spoiler:Yuna]] had thought of all of those people as her friends. Compare how the people who expect Miki to do their busywork for them call her by her surname.
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** In the flashback to [[spoiler:Yuna overhearing her middle school clubmates badmouthing her]], it seems a bit strange that all of them refer to the person in question by her first name, rather than her surname, "[[SenpaiKohai "[[UsefulNotes/JapaneseHonorifics Sempai]]," or her title as ClubPresident, even though they seem to dislike her(although her (although the lack of honorifics indicates a lack of respect), but this makes the implication that [[spoiler:Yuna]] had thought of all of those people as her friends. Compare how the people who expect Miki to do their busywork for them call her by her surname.
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** In the flashback to [[spoiler:Yuna overhearing her middle school clubmates badmouthing her]], it seems a bit strange that all of them refer to the person in question by her first name, rather than her surname, "[[SempaiKohai Sempai]]," or her title as ClubPresident, even though they seem to dislike her(although the lack of honorifics indicates a lack of respect), but this makes the implication that [[spoiler:Yuna]] had thought of all of those people as her friends. Compare how the people who expect Miki to do their busywork for them call her by her surname.
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** In the flashback to [[spoiler:Yuna overhearing her middle school clubmates badmouthing her]], it seems a bit strange that all of them refer to the person in question by her first name, rather than her surname, "[[SempaiKohai "[[SenpaiKohai Sempai]]," or her title as ClubPresident, even though they seem to dislike her(although the lack of honorifics indicates a lack of respect), but this makes the implication that [[spoiler:Yuna]] had thought of all of those people as her friends. Compare how the people who expect Miki to do their busywork for them call her by her surname.
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** Nena's surname, ''Mi''yama, has the "three" of the broadcast trio's NumericalThemeNaming. She's the "third wheel" [[spoiler:to Umi and Sasa's relationship.]]
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** Nena's surname, ''Mi''yama, has the "three" of the broadcast trio's NumericalThemeNaming. She's the "third wheel" [[spoiler:to Umi and Sasa's relationship.]] In fact, [[spoiler:Ano and Miyama serve the same role to Yuna and Hina, and Umi and Sasa, respectively.]]
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** In the flashback to [[spoiler:Yuna overhearing her middle school clubmates badmouthing her]], it seems a bit strange that all of them refer to the person in question by her first name, rather than her surname, "[[SempaiKohai Sempai]]," or her title as ClubPresident, even though they seem to dislike her, but this makes the implication that [[spoiler:Yuna]] had thought of all of those people as her friends. Compare how the people who expect Miki to do their busywork for her call her by her surname.
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** In the flashback to [[spoiler:Yuna overhearing her middle school clubmates badmouthing her]], it seems a bit strange that all of them refer to the person in question by her first name, rather than her surname, "[[SempaiKohai Sempai]]," or her title as ClubPresident, even though they seem to dislike her, her(although the lack of honorifics indicates a lack of respect), but this makes the implication that [[spoiler:Yuna]] had thought of all of those people as her friends. Compare how the people who expect Miki to do their busywork for her them call her by her surname.
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** In the flashback to [[spoiler:Yuna overhearing her middle school clubmates badmouthing her]], it seems a bit strange that all of them refer to the person in question by her first name, rather than her surname, "[[SempaiKohai Sempai]]," or her title as ClubPresident, even though they seem to dislike her, but this makes the implication that [[spoiler:Yuna]] had thought of all of those people as her friends. Compare how the people who expect Miki to do their busywork for her call her by her surname.
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* HarsherInHindsight: Yuna flouts the rules by leaning against the railings on the roof, believing that if the school really wants to prevent accidents, they should make the railings higher. It later turns out that Sachi died when she fell from the roof.
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* HarsherInHindsight: Yuna flouts the rules by leaning against the railings on the roof, believing that if the school really wants to prevent accidents, they should make the railings higher. It later turns out that Sachi died when she fell from the roof.roof while saving a classmate who was about to fall herself.
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** Exemplified in the first drama CD, which involves Ano getting Yuna, Hina, and Nena to pretend to be her girlfriend so she can shake off stalkers.
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** Exemplified in the first drama CD, which involves Ano getting Yuna, Hina, and Nena to pretend to be her girlfriend so she can shake off stalkers. She perhaps has the most success with Nena, [[spoiler:the only other character who doesn't have a girlfriend as of the end of the game]].
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** In an extra scene, it's revealed that Kiri considers Ano second on her top three cutest people in Shirojo, behind Tsukuyo(her official LoveInterest) and ahead of Hina.
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** In an extra scene, it's revealed that Kiri considers Ano second on her list of the top three cutest people in Shirojo, behind Tsukuyo(her official LoveInterest) and ahead of Hina.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Miki and Seina apparently go on a few outings over vacation, but none of them are shown, likely because the game doesn't feature any locations besides the school, the road leading to the school, and Yuna and Hina's homes. It might have been nice to see some of those outings, even if it's only in an extra scene.
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** Kiri immediately is smitten with Hina, considering her "Hercutelean" after the latter chases her down when she's trying to get away from Tsukuyo.
** In an extra scene, it's revealed that Kiri considers Ano second on her top three cutest people in Shirojo, behind Tsukuyo(her official LoveInterest) and ahead of Hina.
** In an extra scene, it's revealed that Kiri considers Ano second on her top three cutest people in Shirojo, behind Tsukuyo(her official LoveInterest) and ahead of Hina.
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** Yuna's backstory. [[spoiler:Despite how much she valued her clubmates in the middle school cooking club, only to hear them talking about her behind her back and saying how much they resented her efforts to improve the cooking club.]] It's understandably traumatic for her, and goes a lot for explaining why she doesn't have many friends.
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** Yuna's backstory. [[spoiler:Despite how much she valued her clubmates in the middle school cooking club, only to hear them talking about her behind her back and saying how much they resented her efforts to improve the cooking club.]] It's understandably traumatic for her, and goes a lot for long way in explaining why she doesn't have many friends.
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** Aki gets along surprisingly well with Yuna, and has no hesitation with calling her by her first name. In "Toomi," Aki even wonders if she might have fallen for Yuna if she'd met her before Youka.
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* {{Woolseyism}}: In the scene in which [[spoiler:Seina attacks the upperclassmen for badmouthing Miki]], Seina starts to refer to [[spoiler:the girl she was attacking]] as "koitsu," an extremely rude third-person pronoun, but corrects herself to say "kono hito-tachi" ("these people"). In the English translation, the former is translated as Seina being about to call the subject a "[[CurseCutShort piece of...]] [[PrecisionFStrike (shit)]]."
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Tsukuyo's old friend confessed to her, claimed it was a misunderstanding and later got married to a man. Did she believe in the GayRomanticPhase, was she bisexual, or was she perhaps a closeted lesbian who only married her husband to fit in?
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* ScrappyMechanic: There's no option to erase your planner data, so you want to start the game from scratch, you'll have to disable cloud saves and then manually delete your save files.
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** Nena's surname, ''Mi''yama, has the "three" of the broadcast trio's NumericalThemeNaming. She's the "third wheel" [[spoiler:to Umi and Sasa's relationship.]]
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* FridgeHorror: When Sachi and Megumi are [[spoiler: possessing Yuna and Hina to have sex Megumi says that on some level she can't help but wish they could retain the bodies and live together. Thankfully the Kindred Spirits are far too nice to ever actually do this but if they had been less benevolent and more manipulative ghosts Yuna and Hina could have been left trapped in their own minds forever while their lives were stolen by those they'd tried to help. Yuna even acknowledges the possibility in-story before the sex scene.]]
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** While it may seem rather silly for Sachi to be so worried about what Megumi thinks of her real self, consider that she had 50 years without anyone to talk to about her insecurities, and spent the next 30 with Megumi as her only companion, so she'd have ended up in an awkward position if her confession had soured things between them. In fact, the fact that Sachi makes a mountain out of a molehill and continues with her HeroicSelfDeprecation even after Megumi accepts her, can be chalked up to Sachi's vulnerability.
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** When Sachi and Megumi are [[spoiler: possessing Yuna and Hina to have sex Megumi says that on some level she can't help but wish they could retain the bodies and live together. Thankfully the Kindred Spirits are far too nice to ever actually do this but if they had been less benevolent and more manipulative ghosts Yuna and Hina could have been left trapped in their own minds forever while their lives were stolen by those they'd tried to help. Yuna even acknowledges the possibility in-story before the sex scene.]]]]
** When you subtract the 30 years since Megumi's death from the 80 years since Sachi's death, that leaves Sachi with about half a century as the only ghost in the school and no other people besides Yuna [[spoiler:and to some extent, Ano and Hina]] who [[ISeeDeadPeople can see and hear ghosts]]. It's a wonder she didn't GoMadFromTheIsolation.
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** When Sachi and Megumi are [[spoiler: possessing Yuna and Hina to have sex Megumi says that on some level she can't help but wish they could retain the bodies and live together. Thankfully the Kindred Spirits are far too nice to ever actually do this but if they had been less benevolent and more manipulative ghosts Yuna and Hina could have been left trapped in their own minds forever while their lives were stolen by those they'd tried to help. Yuna even acknowledges the possibility in-story before the sex scene.
** When you subtract the 30 years since Megumi's death from the 80 years since Sachi's death, that leaves Sachi with about half a century as the only ghost in the school and no other people besides Yuna [[spoiler:and to some extent, Ano and Hina]] who [[ISeeDeadPeople can see and hear ghosts]]. It's a wonder she didn't GoMadFromTheIsolation.
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** Sachi: back when she was alive, [[spoiler: she actually used to be a shy person who couldn't tell the girl that she fell in love with her feelings]]. This became her regret and is the reason why she's been stuck as a ghost for 80 years. Then she met Megumi and was afraid to admit that her [[spoiler: outgoing personality was just her copying her first love in order to make Megumi not hate her for being a coward]].
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** Sachi: back when she was alive, [[spoiler: she actually used to be a shy person who couldn't tell the girl that she fell in love with her feelings]]. This became her regret and is the reason why she's been stuck as a ghost for 80 years. Then she met Megumi Megumi, who was the first person she could interact with normally in ''50 years'', and was afraid to admit that her [[spoiler: outgoing personality was just her copying her first love in order to make Megumi not hate her for being a coward]].
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** Matsuri and Miyu both suffer from this; Matsuri's complete disregard for the rules they decided on is not often lauded, and you'd be hard pressed to find somebody who doesn't agree with Miyu for getting mad at her. Matsuri admits she was out of line, while Miyu suspects that Matsuri is trying to push her buttons. At the same time, there are those who can see where she was coming from with wanting to get physical with Miyu every now and again(since she points out that she's been holding herself back for ''months''), and Miyu bringing Hina into an argument she had nothing to do with is not a decision oft praised. That said, the game points out that [[BothSidesHaveAPoint they both have valid points, but are both at fault for the state of their relationship]]; Megumi blames Miyu, while Sachi blames Matsuri.
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** Matsuri and Miyu both suffer from this; Matsuri's complete disregard for the rules they decided on is not often lauded, and you'd be hard pressed to find somebody who doesn't agree with Miyu for getting mad at her. Matsuri admits she was out of line, while Miyu suspects that Matsuri is trying to push her buttons. At the same time, there are those who can see where she was coming from with wanting to get physical with Miyu every now and again(since she points out that she's been holding herself back for ''months''), and Miyu bringing Hina into an argument she had nothing to do with is not a decision oft praised. That said, the game points out that [[BothSidesHaveAPoint they both have valid points, but are both at fault for the state of their relationship]]; Megumi blames Miyu, while Sachi blames Matsuri. In the end, they both apologize to each other, as well as to Yuna and Hina for getting the latter drawn into their feud.
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* LesYay: Some moments between Ano and her friends (Yuna, Nena, and Kiri) feel like this, even though Kiri is in love with Tsukuyo, [[spoiler:Yuna eventually gets together with Hina and Nena doesn't get together with anyone]].
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* LesYay: Some moments between Ano and her friends (Yuna, Nena, and Kiri) feel like this, even though Kiri is in love with Tsukuyo, [[spoiler:Yuna eventually gets together with Hina and Nena doesn't and Ano don't get together with anyone]].
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** Matsuri and Miyu both suffer from this; Matsuri's complete disregard for the rules they decided on is not often lauded, and you'd be hard pressed to find somebody who doesn't agree with Miyu for getting mad at her. At the same time, there are those who can see where she was coming from with wanting to get physical with Miyu every now and again(since she points out that she's been holding herself back for ''months''), and Miyu bringing Hina into an argument she had nothing to do with is not a decision oft praised. That said, the game points out that [[BothSidesHaveAPoint they both have valid points, but are both at fault for the state of their relationship]]; Megumi blames Miyu, while Sachi blames Matsuri.
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** Matsuri and Miyu both suffer from this; Matsuri's complete disregard for the rules they decided on is not often lauded, and you'd be hard pressed to find somebody who doesn't agree with Miyu for getting mad at her. Matsuri admits she was out of line, while Miyu suspects that Matsuri is trying to push her buttons. At the same time, there are those who can see where she was coming from with wanting to get physical with Miyu every now and again(since she points out that she's been holding herself back for ''months''), and Miyu bringing Hina into an argument she had nothing to do with is not a decision oft praised. That said, the game points out that [[BothSidesHaveAPoint they both have valid points, but are both at fault for the state of their relationship]]; Megumi blames Miyu, while Sachi blames Matsuri.
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* FridgeBrilliance: It may seem strange that [[spoiler:the song title "A-A-Ai" was untranslated until you notice it was written for '''A'''riu '''A'''ki. The Japanese title is "AA愛", where the connection is more obvious.]]
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* FridgeBrilliance: FridgeBrilliance:
** It may seem strange that [[spoiler:the song title "A-A-Ai" was untranslated until you notice it was written for '''A'''riu '''A'''ki. The Japanese title is "AA愛", where the connection is more obvious.]]]]
** Most of the couples has some issue that [[spoiler:Yuna and Hina]] have faced or will have to face. Miki has to deal with how to respond to Maki's confession, just like how [[spoiler:Yuna responds to Hina's]]. The broadcasting trio has two of their members falling in love and trying to figure out how not to treat the third as a third wheel, a bit reminiscent of [[spoiler:Yuna and Hina falling in love, since both are friends with Ano]]. Kiri and Tsukuyo's arc has them come to terms with their lesbianism, just like how [[spoiler:Yuna]] comes to terms with hers. Youka and Aki end up drawing some flak after their public display of affection, something [[spoiler:Yuna and Hina]] will have to be careful of in the future. Lastly, Matsuri and Miyu face two important issues- how to keep a relationship going, and how to potentially deal with parental opposition- that [[spoiler:Yuna and Hina]] may face someday. Basically, the entire game can be thought about as [[spoiler:Yuna undergoing the necessary development to be ready to go out with Hina]], rather than the ghosts learning how to have TheirFirstTime.
** It may seem strange that [[spoiler:the song title "A-A-Ai" was untranslated until you notice it was written for '''A'''riu '''A'''ki. The Japanese title is "AA愛", where the connection is more obvious.
** Most of the couples has some issue that [[spoiler:Yuna and Hina]] have faced or will have to face. Miki has to deal with how to respond to Maki's confession, just like how [[spoiler:Yuna responds to Hina's]]. The broadcasting trio has two of their members falling in love and trying to figure out how not to treat the third as a third wheel, a bit reminiscent of [[spoiler:Yuna and Hina falling in love, since both are friends with Ano]]. Kiri and Tsukuyo's arc has them come to terms with their lesbianism, just like how [[spoiler:Yuna]] comes to terms with hers. Youka and Aki end up drawing some flak after their public display of affection, something [[spoiler:Yuna and Hina]] will have to be careful of in the future. Lastly, Matsuri and Miyu face two important issues- how to keep a relationship going, and how to potentially deal with parental opposition- that [[spoiler:Yuna and Hina]] may face someday. Basically, the entire game can be thought about as [[spoiler:Yuna undergoing the necessary development to be ready to go out with Hina]], rather than the ghosts learning how to have TheirFirstTime.
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** Matsuri and Miyu both suffer from this; Matsuri's complete disregard for the rules they decided on is not often lauded, and you'd be hard pressed to find somebody who doesn't agree with Miyu for getting mad at her. At the same time, there are those who can see where she was coming from with wanting to get physical with Miyu every now and again(since she points out that she's been holding herself back for ''months''), and Miyu bringing Hina into an argument she had nothing to do with is not a decision oft praised.
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** Matsuri and Miyu both suffer from this; Matsuri's complete disregard for the rules they decided on is not often lauded, and you'd be hard pressed to find somebody who doesn't agree with Miyu for getting mad at her. At the same time, there are those who can see where she was coming from with wanting to get physical with Miyu every now and again(since she points out that she's been holding herself back for ''months''), and Miyu bringing Hina into an argument she had nothing to do with is not a decision oft praised. That said, the game points out that [[BothSidesHaveAPoint they both have valid points, but are both at fault for the state of their relationship]]; Megumi blames Miyu, while Sachi blames Matsuri.
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* FridgeHorror: When Sachi and Megumi are [[spoiler: possessing Yuna and Hina to have sex Megumi says that on some level she can't help but wish they could retain the bodies and live together. Thankfully the Kindred Spirits are far too nice to ever actually do this but if they had been less benevolent and more manipulative ghosts Yuna and Hina could have been left trapped in their own minds forever while their lives were stolen by those they'd tried to help.]]
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* FridgeHorror: When Sachi and Megumi are [[spoiler: possessing Yuna and Hina to have sex Megumi says that on some level she can't help but wish they could retain the bodies and live together. Thankfully the Kindred Spirits are far too nice to ever actually do this but if they had been less benevolent and more manipulative ghosts Yuna and Hina could have been left trapped in their own minds forever while their lives were stolen by those they'd tried to help. Yuna even acknowledges the possibility in-story before the sex scene.]]
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* LesYay: Some moments between Ano and her friends (Yuna, Nena, and Kiri) feel like this.
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* LesYay: Some moments between Ano and her friends (Yuna, Nena, and Kiri) feel like this. this, even though Kiri is in love with Tsukuyo, [[spoiler:Yuna eventually gets together with Hina and Nena doesn't get together with anyone]].
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* {{Wangst}}: One of the most common criticisms of the game is that the characters tend to spend ''a lot'' of time being overly melodramatic about things that aren't actually that bad. Notably, [[spoiler: Sachi's secret]] is built up to be something very dramatic, but can feel overly {{Narm}}-y due to how tame it is in comparison to how long the game spends building it up.
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* {{Wangst}}: One of the most common criticisms of the game is that the characters tend to spend ''a lot'' of time being overly melodramatic about things that aren't actually that bad. Notably, [[spoiler: Sachi's secret]] is built up to be something very dramatic, but can feel overly {{Narm}}-y due to how tame it is in comparison to how long the game spends building it up. That being said, [[spoiler:Sachi spent 50 years without anyone to talk to about this, and was too afraid of losing her only companion for the next 30 years, so it's unsurprising that she'd end up making a mountain out of a molehill when it comes to her personal issues.]]
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** Matsuri and Miyu both suffer from this; Matsuri's complete disregard for the rules they decided on is not often lauded, [[spoiler: and you'd be hard pressed to find somebody who doesn't agree with Miyu for getting mad at her. At the same time, there are those who can see where she was coming from with wanting to get physical with Miyu every now and again, and Miyu bringing Hina into an argument she had nothing to do with is not a decision oft praised.]]
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** Matsuri and Miyu both suffer from this; Matsuri's complete disregard for the rules they decided on is not often lauded, [[spoiler: and you'd be hard pressed to find somebody who doesn't agree with Miyu for getting mad at her. At the same time, there are those who can see where she was coming from with wanting to get physical with Miyu every now and again, again(since she points out that she's been holding herself back for ''months''), and Miyu bringing Hina into an argument she had nothing to do with is not a decision oft praised.]]
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* TearJerker: The last October chapter, or more accurately [[spoiler:Megumi and Sachi finally moving on. The entire plot has been building up to it and it's [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments a happy occasion]], but it's not hard to get caught up in it. Sachi's quiet farewell is bad enough, but when [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Megumi]] starts to cry because, despite all their bickering, she really ''has'' grown attached to Yuna... it's an incredibly touching scene. Afterward when Yuna realizes she's crying and that she will miss the two of them only accentuates it.]]
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** Yuna's backstory. [[spoiler:Despite how much she valued her clubmates in the middle school cooking club, only to hear them talking about her behind her back and saying how much they resented her efforts to improve the cooking club.]] It's understandably traumatic for her, and goes a lot for explaining why she doesn't have many friends.
** The last October chapter, or more accurately [[spoiler:Megumi and Sachi finally moving on. The entire plot has been building up to it and it's [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments a happy occasion]], but it's not hard to get caught up in it. Sachi's quiet farewell is bad enough, but when [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Megumi]] starts to cry because, despite all their bickering, she really ''has'' grown attached to Yuna... it's an incredibly touching scene. Afterward when Yuna realizes she's crying and that she will miss the two of them only accentuates it.]]
** Yuna's backstory. [[spoiler:Despite how much she valued her clubmates in the middle school cooking club, only to hear them talking about her behind her back and saying how much they resented her efforts to improve the cooking club.]] It's understandably traumatic for her, and goes a lot for explaining why she doesn't have many friends.
** The last October chapter, or more accurately [[spoiler:Megumi and Sachi finally moving on. The entire plot has been building up to it and it's [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments a happy occasion]], but it's not hard to get caught up in it. Sachi's quiet farewell is bad enough, but when [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Megumi]] starts to cry because, despite all their bickering, she really ''has'' grown attached to Yuna... it's an incredibly touching scene. Afterward when Yuna realizes she's crying and that she will miss the two of them only accentuates it.]]
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* BestKnownForTheFanservice: When the game was first announced to be releasing on Steam, the announcement happened to mention that it was not going to be censored. Somehow many blogs took this to mean that it was an explicit porn game and that Steam was lowering their standards for some reason. This lead to the game being briefly infamous. In reality, it was felt there was no need of censorship. The love scenes in question, apart from comprising a small proportion of the actual game's play time, contain nudity and some suggestive animation, but certainly far less explicit than can be found in several romance games on the platform.
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* BestKnownForTheFanservice: When the game was first announced to be releasing on Steam, the announcement happened to mention that it was not going to be censored. Somehow many blogs took this to mean that it was an explicit porn game and that Steam was lowering their standards for some reason. This lead to the game being briefly infamous. In reality, it was felt there was no need of censorship. The love scenes in question, apart from comprising a small proportion of the actual game's play time, playtime, contain nudity and some suggestive animation, but certainly far less explicit than can be found in several romance games on the platform.
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* DieForOurShip: Ano fans tend to hugely annoy Hina fans, and vice versa, to the point that the fans of each character, and pairing tend to dislike the actual character. [[spoiler: Doubly so for Ano fans, due to the fact the Hina X Yuna ship is the canon one. ]]
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* DieForOurShip: Ano fans tend to hugely annoy Hina fans, and vice versa, to the point that the fans of each character, character and pairing tend to dislike the actual character. [[spoiler: Doubly so for Ano fans, due to the fact the Hina X Yuna ship is the canon one. ]]
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* FridgeBrilliance: It may seem strange that [[spoiler:the song title "A-A-Ai" was untranslated, until you notice it was written for '''A'''riu '''A'''ki. The Japanese title is "AA愛", where the connection is more obvious.]]
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* FridgeBrilliance: It may seem strange that [[spoiler:the song title "A-A-Ai" was untranslated, untranslated until you notice it was written for '''A'''riu '''A'''ki. The Japanese title is "AA愛", where the connection is more obvious.]]
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* GermansLoveDavidHasselhoff: The game is ''extremely'' popular in the West, and is considered the ''premier'' Yuri title. In contrast, while well-received, its significantly less popular in Japan.
* LesYay: Some moments between Ano and her friends (Yuna, Nena and Kiri) feel like this.
* LesYay: Some moments between Ano and her friends (Yuna, Nena and Kiri) feel like this.
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* GermansLoveDavidHasselhoff: The game is ''extremely'' popular in the West, and is considered the ''premier'' Yuri title. In contrast, while well-received, its it's significantly less popular in Japan.
* LesYay: Some moments between Ano and her friends (Yuna,Nena Nena, and Kiri) feel like this.
* LesYay: Some moments between Ano and her friends (Yuna,
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* TearJerker: The last October chapter, or more accurately [[spoiler:Megumi and Sachi finally moving on. The entire plot has been building up to it and it's [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments a happy occasion]], but it's not hard to get caught up in it. Sachi's quiet farewell is bad enough, but when [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Megumi]] starts to cry because, despite all their bickering, she really ''has'' grown attached to Yuna... it's an incredibly touching scene. Afterwards when Yuna realizes she's crying and that she will miss the two of them only accentuates it.]]
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* TearJerker: The last October chapter, or more accurately [[spoiler:Megumi and Sachi finally moving on. The entire plot has been building up to it and it's [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments a happy occasion]], but it's not hard to get caught up in it. Sachi's quiet farewell is bad enough, but when [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Megumi]] starts to cry because, despite all their bickering, she really ''has'' grown attached to Yuna... it's an incredibly touching scene. Afterwards Afterward when Yuna realizes she's crying and that she will miss the two of them only accentuates it.]]
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* FridgeHorror: When Sachi and Megumi are [[spoiler: possessing Yuna and Hina to have sex Megumi says that on some level she can't help but wish they could retain the bodies and live together. Thankfully the Kindred Spirits are far too nice to ever actually do this but if they had been less benevolent and more manipulative ghosts Yuna and Hina could have been left trapped in their own minds forever while their lives were stolen by those they'd tried to help.]]
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* EarWorm: The game's soundtrack. While short, it's still incredibly catchy.
** "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H3EvSvn0_N4 Sweet Words, Sweet Hearts]]" is so infectious and peppy you may find yourself humming it later. 'Do-do, lah, dah, fuwa fuwa'...
** "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cmq8MPdwBTA Shirojo]]" is made more memorable when [[LeftTheBackgroundMusicOn Umi hums it at one point.]]
** The opening song, "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bV5xvo46_0E Otome no Kimochi]]" will be stuck in your head for a while.
** "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H3EvSvn0_N4 Sweet Words, Sweet Hearts]]" is so infectious and peppy you may find yourself humming it later. 'Do-do, lah, dah, fuwa fuwa'...
** "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cmq8MPdwBTA Shirojo]]" is made more memorable when [[LeftTheBackgroundMusicOn Umi hums it at one point.]]
** The opening song, "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bV5xvo46_0E Otome no Kimochi]]" will be stuck in your head for a while.
