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* JerkassWoobie: Hazel Rainart spends a good chunk of the rewrite being horrified at what he's doing and what he's a part of, as the full genocidal scope of Salem's campaign sinks in during the siege of Atlas and Mantle and Hazel realizes what he's truly signed up for. [[spoiler:And then he finds out the ''horrific'' truth about his sister's fate]].
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* CompleteMonster: [[MorallyAmbiguousDoctorate Dr. Arthur Watts]], in addition to his canon crimes, has proven himself to be a spiteful and sadistic individual who will cross any line to hurt those he felt have wronged him. When James Ironwood [[HeartfeltApology sincerely apologizes]] to Watts for making him feel like he overlooked his research and hard work, he offers a chance to fix their old friendship if he helps save Atlas by removing the virus and restoring Mantle's heating grid. [[RedemptionRejection Instead]], Watts manipulates Ironwood by secretly going though Pietro's files from the Penny project in order to [[HackYourEnemy hack into Penny]], planning to use her to get the Staff of Creation and kill everyone present. Once Watts controls Penny, he has her attack [[Characters/RWBYCinderFall Cinder Fall]] for going against [[Characters/RWBYSalem Salem]]'s orders, having her blast Cinder off Amity and to the mountains; hoping Penny will serve as a better replacement for Cinder as the vessel for the Maiden's power. When confronted by Winter and Ciel in the dust mines, Watts has Penny try to kill them by deactivating the Amity Tower's gravity system hoping to crash into them. Watts goes against Salem's orders in order to steal the Staff and kill Ironwood along with everyone else.
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* CompleteMonster: [[MorallyAmbiguousDoctorate Dr. Arthur Watts]], in addition to his canon crimes, has proven himself to be a spiteful and sadistic individual who will cross any line to hurt those he felt feels have wronged him. When James Ironwood [[HeartfeltApology sincerely apologizes]] to Watts for making him feel like he overlooked his research and hard work, he offers a chance to fix their old friendship if he helps save Atlas by removing the virus and restoring Mantle's heating grid. [[RedemptionRejection Instead]], Watts manipulates Ironwood by secretly going though Pietro's files from the Penny project in order to [[HackYourEnemy hack into Penny]], planning to use her to get the Staff of Creation and kill everyone present. Once Watts controls Penny, he has her attack [[Characters/RWBYCinderFall Cinder Fall]] for going against [[Characters/RWBYSalem Salem]]'s orders, having her blast Cinder off Amity and to the mountains; hoping Penny will serve as a better replacement for Cinder as the vessel for the Maiden's power. When confronted by Winter and Ciel in the dust mines, Watts has Penny try to kill them by deactivating the Amity Tower's gravity system system, hoping to crash into them. Watts goes against Salem's orders in order to steal the Staff and kill Ironwood along with everyone else.
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* CompleteMonster: [[MorallyAmbiguousDoctorate Dr. Arthur Watts]], in addition to his canon crimes, has proven himself to be a spiteful and sadistic individual who will cross any line to hurt those he felt have wronged him. When James Ironwood [[HeartfeltApology sincerely apologizes]] to Watts for making him feel like he overlooked his research and hard work, he offers a chance to fix their old friendship if he helps save Atlas by removing the virus and restoring Mantle's heating grid. [[RedemptionRejection Instead]], Watts manipulates Ironwood by secretly going though Pietro's files from the Penny project in order to [[HackYourEnemy hack into Penny]], planning to use her to get the Staff of Creation and kill everyone present. Once Watts controls Penny, he has her attack [[Characters/RWBYCinderFall Cinder Fall]] for going against [[Characters/RWBYSalem Salem]]'s orders, having her blast Cinder off Amity and to the mountains; hoping Penny will serves serve as a better replacement for Cinder as the vessel for the Maiden's power. When confronted by Winter and Ciel in the dust mines, Watts has Penny try to kill them by deactivating the Amity Tower's gravity system hoping to crash into them. Watts goes against Salem's orders in order to steal the Staff and kill Ironwood along with everyone else.
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* CompleteMonster: [[MorallyAmbiguousDoctorate Dr. Arthur Watts]], in addition to his canon crimes, has proven himself to be a spiteful and sadistic individual who will cross any line to hurt those he felt have wronged him. When James Ironwood [[HeartfeltApology sincerely apologizes]] to Watts for making him feel like he overlooked his research and hard work, he offers a chance to fix their old friendship if he helps save Atlas by removing the virus and restore restoring Mantle's heating grid. [[RedemptionRejection Instead]], Watts manipulates Ironwood by secretly going though Pietro's files from the Penny project in order to [[HackYourEnemy hack into Penny]], planning to use her to get the Staff of Creation and kill everyone present. Once Watts controls Penny, he has her attack [[Characters/RWBYCinderFall Cinder Fall]] for going against [[Characters/RWBYSalem Salem]]'s orders, having her blast Cinder off Amity and to the mountains mountains; hoping Penny will serves as a better replacement for Cinder as the vessel for the Maidens Maiden's power. When confronted by Winter and Ciel in the dust mines, Watts has Penny try to kill them by deactivating the Amity Towers Tower's gravity system hoping to crash into them. Watts goes against Salem's orders in order to steal the Staff and kill Ironwood along with everyone else.else.
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*CompleteMonster: [[MorallyAmbiguousDoctorate Dr. Arthur Watts]], in addition to his canon crimes, has proven himself to be a spiteful and sadistic individual who will cross any line to hurt those he felt have wronged him. When James Ironwood [[HeartfeltApology sincerely apologizes]] to Watts for making him feel like he overlooked his research and hard work, he offers a chance to fix their old friendship if he helps save Atlas by removing the virus and restore Mantle's heating grid. [[RedemptionRejection Instead]], Watts manipulates Ironwood by secretly going though Pietro's files from the Penny project in order to [[HackYourEnemy hack into Penny]], planning to use her to get the Staff of Creation and kill everyone present. Once Watts controls Penny, he has her attack [[Characters/RWBYCinderFall Cinder Fall]] for going against [[Characters/RWBYSalem Salem]]'s orders, having her blast Cinder off Amity and to the mountains hoping Penny will serves as a better replacement for Cinder as the vessel for the Maidens power. When confronted by Winter and Ciel in the dust mines, Watts has Penny try to kill them by deactivating the Amity Towers gravity system hoping to crash into them. Watts goes against Salem's orders in order to steal the Staff and kill Ironwood along with everyone else.
