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** In Chapter 55, Tsu'tey tells Jake that the scars of war does not make him any less beautiful.
--> '''Tsu'tey''': I loved you human and healthy, and I loved you human and broken. I love this skin, unblemished and new. I love this skin, damaged and scarred. I have loved you since before I knew what love was—since the first night I closed my eyes and found you.
--> '''Tsu'tey''': I loved you human and healthy, and I loved you human and broken. I love this skin, unblemished and new. I love this skin, damaged and scarred. I have loved you since before I knew what love was—since the first night I closed my eyes and found you.
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* HilariousInHindsight: Or rather, hilarious in ''fore''sight. This fanfic is a rewrite of the first movie, and in Chapter 55, released in April 30, 2023, [[spoiler:it is revealed that Grace had a son.]] The second movie, ''Film/AvatarTheWayOfWater'' stars Kiri, the daughter of Grace's avatar body.
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* HilariousInHindsight: Or rather, hilarious in ''fore''sight. This fanfic is a rewrite of the first movie, and in Chapter 55, released in April 30, 2023, [[spoiler:it is revealed that Grace had a son.]] The second movie, ''Film/AvatarTheWayOfWater'' ''Film/AvatarTheWayOfWater'', released roughly six months before, stars Kiri, the daughter of Grace's avatar body.
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* HilariousInHindsight: Or rather, hilarious in ''fore''sight. This fanfic is a rewrite of the first movie, and in Chapter 55, released in April 30, 2023, [[spoiler:revealed that Grace had a son.]] The second movie, ''Film/AvatarTheWayOfWater'' stars Kiri, the daughter of Grace's avatar body.
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* HilariousInHindsight: Or rather, hilarious in ''fore''sight. This fanfic is a rewrite of the first movie, and in Chapter 55, released in April 30, 2023, [[spoiler:revealed [[spoiler:it is revealed that Grace had a son.]] The second movie, ''Film/AvatarTheWayOfWater'' stars Kiri, the daughter of Grace's avatar body.
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** Eytukan eventually comes to like Jake as if he were his own child, even calling him "my son" in later chapters.
* HilariousInHindsight: Or rather, hilarious in ''fore''sight. This fanfic is a rewrite of the first movie, and in Chapter 55, released in April 30, 2023, [[spoiler:revealed that Grace had a son.]] The second movie, ''Film/AvatarTheWayOfWater'' stars Kiri, the daughter of Grace's avatar body.
* HilariousInHindsight: Or rather, hilarious in ''fore''sight. This fanfic is a rewrite of the first movie, and in Chapter 55, released in April 30, 2023, [[spoiler:revealed that Grace had a son.]] The second movie, ''Film/AvatarTheWayOfWater'' stars Kiri, the daughter of Grace's avatar body.
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* BetterThanCanon: Many readers have felt this way about the fic, due to the characters being fleshed out more, and of course, Jake and Tsu'tey's relationship being portrayed realistically, without all the cliches presented by Yaoi Fangirls.
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* StrangledByTheRedString: Neytiri and Trudy. They go from awkward acquaintances with barely hinted attractions, to happily bonded and madly in love with each other in the span of ''four chapters'' and a one-night stand that yielded unexpected results, and they are not given enough time to really get to know each other. Though, in their defense, most of their interactions before the aforementioned one-night stand most likely occurred [[OffscreenRomance offscreen.]]
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* StrangledByTheRedString: Neytiri and Trudy. They go from awkward acquaintances with barely hinted attractions, to happily bonded and madly in love with each other in the span of ''four chapters'' and a one-night stand that yielded unexpected results, and they are not given enough time to really get to know each other. Though, in their defense, most of their interactions before the aforementioned one-night stand relationship development most likely occurred [[OffscreenRomance offscreen.]]
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* StrangledByTheRedString: Neytiri and Trudy. They go from awkward acquaintances with barely hinted attractions, to happily bonded and madly in love with each other in the span of ''four chapters'' and a one-night stand that yielded unexpected results, and they are not given enough time to really get to know each other.
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* StrangledByTheRedString: Neytiri and Trudy. They go from awkward acquaintances with barely hinted attractions, to happily bonded and madly in love with each other in the span of ''four chapters'' and a one-night stand that yielded unexpected results, and they are not given enough time to really get to know each other. Though, in their defense, most of their interactions before the aforementioned one-night stand most likely occurred [[OffscreenRomance offscreen.]]
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* StrangledByTheRedString: Neytiri and Trudy. They go from an awkward maybe-platonic, maybe-romantic interactions to happily bonded and madly in love with each other in the span of ''four chapters'' and a one-night stand that yielded unexpected results.
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* StrangledByTheRedString: Neytiri and Trudy. They go from an awkward maybe-platonic, maybe-romantic interactions acquaintances with barely hinted attractions, to happily bonded and madly in love with each other in the span of ''four chapters'' and a one-night stand that yielded unexpected results.results, and they are not given enough time to really get to know each other.
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** In Chapter 40, the Kekunan warriors agree to assist Jake in taming the Toruk. Their leader, Yharu, even congratulates him after the act ends in success.
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** In Chapter 40, the Kekunan warriors agree to assist Jake in taming the Toruk. Their leader, Yharu, even congratulates him after the act ends in success.
* StrangledByTheRedString: Neytiri and Trudy. They go from an awkward maybe-platonic, maybe-romantic interactions to happily bonded and madly in love with each other in the span of ''four chapters'' and a one-night stand that yielded unexpected results.
* StrangledByTheRedString: Neytiri and Trudy. They go from an awkward maybe-platonic, maybe-romantic interactions to happily bonded and madly in love with each other in the span of ''four chapters'' and a one-night stand that yielded unexpected results.
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** Sänume, the Tipani leader, speaking with Jake and liking him afterwards, and agreeing to aid the Omaticaya in the up-and-coming war. She even speaks highly of Jake in the aftermath.
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*** Continuing on from this, in Chapter 31, Mo'at reveals that she had spent a lot of time at the Tree Of Souls, to find a way for Trudy to ditch the mask so she and Neytiri can be truly together.
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** Mo'at defending Neytiri's choice to mate with Trudy to her husband, and being genuinely happy for her daughter.
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** Mo'at defending Neytiri's choice to mate with Trudy to her husband, and being genuinely happy for her daughter.
** In Chapter 40, the Kekunan warriors agree to assist Jake in taming the Toruk. Their leader, Yharu, even congratulates him after the act ends in success.
** In Chapter 40, the Kekunan warriors agree to assist Jake in taming the Toruk. Their leader, Yharu, even congratulates him after the act ends in success.
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* BetterThanCanon: Many readers have felt this way about the fic, due to the characters being fleshed out more, and of course, Jake and Tsu'tey's relationship being portrayed realistically, without all the cliches presented by Yaoi Fangirls.
* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: Several.
** Hell, Jake and Tsu'tey's entire relationship is heartwarming in and unto itself, coupled with the fact that Jake crossed ''entire galaxies'' to find Tsu'tey and basically every damn time Tsu'tey gets to be [[ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend crazy protective]] of Jake.
** Eytukan acknowledging Tsu'tey and Jake's status as ''tì’i’avay krrä yawntu'' and allowing them to officially become a couple, despite his disdain towards Skypeople and Dreamwalkers. And it just gets better from there.
** Mo'at defending Neytiri's choice to mate with Trudy to her husband, and being genuinely happy for her daughter.
* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: Several.
** Hell, Jake and Tsu'tey's entire relationship is heartwarming in and unto itself, coupled with the fact that Jake crossed ''entire galaxies'' to find Tsu'tey and basically every damn time Tsu'tey gets to be [[ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend crazy protective]] of Jake.
** Eytukan acknowledging Tsu'tey and Jake's status as ''tì’i’avay krrä yawntu'' and allowing them to officially become a couple, despite his disdain towards Skypeople and Dreamwalkers. And it just gets better from there.
** Mo'at defending Neytiri's choice to mate with Trudy to her husband, and being genuinely happy for her daughter.
