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"Idiot Plot" is now Flame Bait.
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** Pretty much everything about Damara in the first four chapters was this after her actual introduction in the comic, especially catching Scratch doing a crime and trying to get him arrested for it. The crime in question? ''Marajuana use''.
* IdiotPlot: Most of chapter 19 revolves around very, very few members of the Crew actually knowing how the quadrants even work and going all the way to another country to figure it out, and flat-out ignoring the characters who ''do''. Then again, it was mostly a parody of fans who keep misusing or overly generalizing troll romance.
* IdiotPlot: Most of chapter 19 revolves around very, very few members of the Crew actually knowing how the quadrants even work and going all the way to another country to figure it out, and flat-out ignoring the characters who ''do''. Then again, it was mostly a parody of fans who keep misusing or overly generalizing troll romance.
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** Pretty much everything about Damara in the first four chapters was this after her actual introduction in the comic, especially catching Scratch doing a crime and trying to get him arrested for it. The crime in question? ''Marajuana use''.
* IdiotPlot: Most of chapter 19 revolves around very, very few members of the Crew actually knowing how the quadrants even work and going all the way to another country to figure it out, and flat-out ignoring the characters who ''do''. Then again, it was mostly a parody of fans who keep misusing or overly generalizing troll romance.use''.
* IdiotPlot: Most of chapter 19 revolves around very, very few members of the Crew actually knowing how the quadrants even work and going all the way to another country to figure it out, and flat-out ignoring the characters who ''do''. Then again, it was mostly a parody of fans who keep misusing or overly generalizing troll romance.
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** According to WordOfGod, any and all fourth-wall breaks. Within the story's continuity, Gamzee doesn't "actually" tell to the readers what to expect in the following chapters, and when someone says a line like "...from chapter __," that part wasn't really said.
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** According to WordOfGod, any and all fourth-wall breaks. Within the story's continuity, Gamzee doesn't "actually" tell to the readers what to expect in the following chapters, and when someone says a line like "...from chapter __," that part wasn't really said. These have greatly diminished as the story goes on.
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** Pretty much everything about Damara in the first four chapters was this after her actual introduction in the comic, especially catching Scratch doing a crime and trying to get him arrested for it. The crime in question? ''Marajuana use''.
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** Pretty much everything about Damara in the first four chapters was this after her actual introduction in the comic, especially catching Scratch doing a crime and trying to get him arrested for it. The crime in question? ''Marajuana use''.use''.
* IdiotPlot: Most of chapter 19 revolves around very, very few members of the Crew actually knowing how the quadrants even work and going all the way to another country to figure it out, and flat-out ignoring the characters who ''do''. Then again, it was mostly a parody of fans who keep misusing or overly generalizing troll romance.
* IdiotPlot: Most of chapter 19 revolves around very, very few members of the Crew actually knowing how the quadrants even work and going all the way to another country to figure it out, and flat-out ignoring the characters who ''do''. Then again, it was mostly a parody of fans who keep misusing or overly generalizing troll romance.
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** According to WordOfGod, any and all fourth-wall breaks. Within the story's continuity, Gamzee doesn't "actually" tell to the readers what to expect in the following chapters, and when someone says a line like "...from chapter __," that part wasn't really said.
** John's head morphing into Fred's from ''Scooby Doo'' in chapter 3. It's supposedly done in an attempt to make it more like ''WesternAnimation/FamilyGuy'', but it's just... odd. Lampshaded by the narrator. "This isn't canon by the way."
** Chapter 1 has Dirk randomly breaking character and talking without any errors (especially noticable here, as the first season is now considerably more typo-filled than the others by virtue of the Great Typo Cleanup deciding to live up to its name more in the later seasons) to make an advert for ''WesternAnimation/FamilyGuy''.
** According to WordOfGod, any and all fourth-wall breaks. Within the story's continuity, Gamzee doesn't "actually" tell to the readers what to expect in the following chapters, and when someone says a line like "...from chapter __," that part wasn't really said.
** John's head morphing into Fred's from ''Scooby Doo'' in chapter 3. It's supposedly done in an attempt to make it more like ''WesternAnimation/FamilyGuy'', but it's just... odd. Lampshaded by the narrator. "This isn't canon by the way."
** Chapter 1 has Dirk randomly breaking character and talking without any errors (especially noticable here, as the first season is now considerably more typo-filled than the others by virtue of the Great Typo Cleanup deciding to live up to its name more in the later seasons) to make an advert for ''WesternAnimation/FamilyGuy''.
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And now this gets a friend!
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* HarsherInHindsight: If you read chapter 14 ''last'', [[spoiler:John's messages turn from reassuring to StealthInsult[=s=] at Dave and Jade.]]
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It gets better.
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** Pretty much everything about Damara in the first four chapters was this after her actual introduction in the comic, especially catching Scratch doing a crime and trying to get him arrested for it. The crime in question? ''Drug use''.
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** Pretty much everything about Damara in the first four chapters was this after her actual introduction in the comic, especially catching Scratch doing a crime and trying to get him arrested for it. The crime in question? ''Drug ''Marajuana use''.
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Damara in chapters 1-4 was losley based on Handmaid. If she was revealed before I thought this up/started writting — among many other changes — she would not have had such similar ties to her post-scratch version since that\'s a little too similar to copying from canon and I did that enough with the first four chapters (and arguably the following three) of HUC.
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* HilariousInHindsight: Chapter 4 ends with John ranting about the series of updates where his canon self is... [[HypocriticalHumor also ranting]], instead of the comic showing the other pre-scratch trolls. ''The very next update in'' Homestuck ''after chapter 4 was published was the second part of the walkaround introducing more of said characters''.
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* HilariousInHindsight: HilariousInHindsight:
** Chapter 4 ends with John ranting about the series of updates where his canon self is... [[HypocriticalHumor also ranting]], instead of the comic showing the other pre-scratch trolls. ''The very next update in'' Homestuck ''after chapter 4 was published was the second part of the walkaround introducing more of saidcharacters''.characters''.
** Pretty much everything about Damara in the first four chapters was this after her actual introduction in the comic, especially catching Scratch doing a crime and trying to get him arrested for it. The crime in question? ''Drug use''.
** Chapter 4 ends with John ranting about the series of updates where his canon self is... [[HypocriticalHumor also ranting]], instead of the comic showing the other pre-scratch trolls. ''The very next update in'' Homestuck ''after chapter 4 was published was the second part of the walkaround introducing more of said
** Pretty much everything about Damara in the first four chapters was this after her actual introduction in the comic, especially catching Scratch doing a crime and trying to get him arrested for it. The crime in question? ''Drug use''.
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\"That\'s my boyfriend!\"
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* HilariousInHindsight: Chapter 4 ends with John ranting about the series of updates where his canon self is... [[HypocriticalHumor also ranting]], instead of the comic showing the other pre-scratch trolls. ''The very next update in'' Homestuck ''after chapter 4 was published was the second part of the walkaround introducing more of said characters''.
