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* FridgeHorror: The last chapter shows [[spoiler:Arisa apparently killing Naomi]], which potentially can kickstart the whole new loop with [[spoiler:Saunders]] at the center.
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* AssPull: [[spoiler:Yukari Akiyama]] being Miho's murderer. Not only is murdering a friend blatantly out of character for her, more so than practically anyone else in the cast, but it also flies in the face of the apparently genuine shock she shows [[spoiler:upon discovering Miho's body]].
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* RonTheDeathEater: Miho's murderer, [[spoiler:Yukari, of all people]], is obviously much more evil in this fic than in canon, [[spoiler:not to mention a {{Yandere}} for good measure.]]
* ShockingSwerve: [[spoiler:Yukari Akiyama]] being Miho's murderer. Not only is murdering a friend blatantly out of character for her, more so than practically anyone else in the cast, but it also flies in the face of the apparently genuine shock she shows [[spoiler:upon discovering Miho's body]].
* ShockingSwerve: [[spoiler:Yukari Akiyama]] being Miho's murderer. Not only is murdering a friend blatantly out of character for her, more so than practically anyone else in the cast, but it also flies in the face of the apparently genuine shock she shows [[spoiler:upon discovering Miho's body]].
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* RonTheDeathEater: Miho's murderer, [[spoiler:Yukari, of all people]], is obviously much more evil in this fic than in canon, [[spoiler:not to mention a {{Yandere}} for good measure.]]
* ShockingSwerve: [[spoiler:Yukari Akiyama]] being Miho's murderer. Not only is murdering a friend blatantly out of character for her, more so than practically anyone else in the cast, but it also flies in the face of the apparently genuine shock she shows [[spoiler:upon discovering Miho's body]].]]
* ShockingSwerve: [[spoiler:Yukari Akiyama]] being Miho's murderer. Not only is murdering a friend blatantly out of character for her, more so than practically anyone else in the cast, but it also flies in the face of the apparently genuine shock she shows [[spoiler:upon discovering Miho's body]].
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** While Anzu was never a completely nice person in canon, and she is responsible for [[spoiler:torturing Erika]] in this fic, it's heartbreaking to see her lose her sanity after Oarai's closure, leaving her a shell of her former self who doesn't know why [[spoiler:she's behind bars]].
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** While Anzu was never a completely nice person in canon, and she is responsible for [[spoiler:torturing Erika]] in this fic, it's heartbreaking to see her lose her sanity after Oarai's closure, leaving her a shell of her former self who doesn't even know why [[spoiler:she's behind bars]].
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* RonTheDeathEater: Miho's murderer, [[spoiler:Yukari, of all people]], is obviously much more evil in this fic than in canon, [[spoiler:not to mention a {{Yandere}} for good measure.]]
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* RonTheDeathEater: Miho's murderer, [[spoiler:Yukari, of all people]], is obviously much more evil in this fic than in canon, [[spoiler:not to mention a {{Yandere}} for good measure.]]]]
* ShockingSwerve: [[spoiler:Yukari Akiyama]] being Miho's murderer. Not only is murdering a friend blatantly out of character for her, more so than practically anyone else in the cast, but it also flies in the face of the apparently genuine shock she shows [[spoiler:upon discovering Miho's body]].
* ShockingSwerve: [[spoiler:Yukari Akiyama]] being Miho's murderer. Not only is murdering a friend blatantly out of character for her, more so than practically anyone else in the cast, but it also flies in the face of the apparently genuine shock she shows [[spoiler:upon discovering Miho's body]].
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*CrackPairing: Miho and [[spoiler:her secret girlfriend Erika]]. The two are practically polar opposites, so the fact that they were an item comes as quite a surprise, since it's revealed long after the former's death.
*JerkassWoobie:
**Erika. As unpleasant as she is in canon, it's hard not to feel sorry for her when she's tortured over something she didn't even do, and [[spoiler:loses her girlfriend]].
**While Anzu was never a completely nice person in canon, and she is responsible for [[spoiler:torturing Erika]] in this fic, it's heartbreaking to see her lose her sanity after Oarai's closure, leaving her a shell of her former self who doesn't know why [[spoiler:she's behind bars]].
*MoralEventHorizon: The murderer crosses it by killing Miho, thereby dooming Oarai to closure and causing all the other tragedy and heartbreak. What makes it worse is that it isn't even a crime of passion; the killer planned the murder in advance and killed in cold blood. The motive- [[spoiler:anger over being rejected by Miho]]- doesn't help, either.
*RonTheDeathEater: Miho's murderer, [[spoiler:Yukari, of all people]], is obviously much more evil in this fic than in canon, [[spoiler:not to mention a {{Yandere}} for good measure.]]
*JerkassWoobie:
**Erika. As unpleasant as she is in canon, it's hard not to feel sorry for her when she's tortured over something she didn't even do, and [[spoiler:loses her girlfriend]].
**While Anzu was never a completely nice person in canon, and she is responsible for [[spoiler:torturing Erika]] in this fic, it's heartbreaking to see her lose her sanity after Oarai's closure, leaving her a shell of her former self who doesn't know why [[spoiler:she's behind bars]].
*MoralEventHorizon: The murderer crosses it by killing Miho, thereby dooming Oarai to closure and causing all the other tragedy and heartbreak. What makes it worse is that it isn't even a crime of passion; the killer planned the murder in advance and killed in cold blood. The motive- [[spoiler:anger over being rejected by Miho]]- doesn't help, either.
*RonTheDeathEater: Miho's murderer, [[spoiler:Yukari, of all people]], is obviously much more evil in this fic than in canon, [[spoiler:not to mention a {{Yandere}} for good measure.]]
