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** [[WouldHurtAChild Kenta Ayatsuri]] is a jōnin of Konoha, as well as a [[VillainWithGoodPublicity philanthropist]] who founded an orphanage. However, Kenta turned the orphans into {{Tykebomb}}s and prostitutes to fund his activities. Training Kamui, the Wave-Verse's [[Characters/NarutoKakashiHatake Kakashi]], Kenta turned him into another tyke-bomb. When Minato added Kamui to his own team, taking him away from Kenta, the latter contacted the enemy in order to sabotage Team Minato's mission to destroy the Kannabi Bridge, and to get rid of them, barring Kamui, leading to Obito's death. Fleeing Konoha after his crimes were discovered, he sent brainwashed children to massacre Konoha families, and, in the Wave-Verse, kidnaps a pregnant Rin. Killing the baby, Kenta tortured Rin to death and greeted Kamui with her corpse when he tried to rescue her. He also tried to recreate Kamui with other children, killing or wounding them in the process. In ''The Past Enemy Arc'', Kenta is [[EstablishingCharacterMoment introduced]] horribly killing Kin, a little girl, because she cried when he gave her to a brothel. He attempted to kidnap Rin and Kakashi's child, succeeding with Rin. When his subordinate suggested to kill Kamui, Kenta [[BadBoss killed him]]. When confronted by Kamui, [[NeverMyFault he blamed everyone but himself for his crimes]] and revealed that he committed all of this to turn Kakashi into his "masterpiece", and so that [[FameThroughInfamy he will be remembered]]. When Kamui replies that he will do everything to forget him, a spiteful Kenta attempts to kill him and Rin.

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** [[WouldHurtAChild Kenta Ayatsuri]] is a jōnin of Konoha, as well as a [[VillainWithGoodPublicity philanthropist]] who founded an orphanage. However, Kenta turned the orphans into {{Tykebomb}}s and prostitutes to fund his activities. Training Kamui, the Wave-Verse's [[Characters/NarutoKakashiHatake [[Characters/NarutoTeamSevenMembers Kakashi]], Kenta turned him into another tyke-bomb. When Minato added Kamui to his own team, taking him away from Kenta, the latter contacted the enemy in order to sabotage Team Minato's mission to destroy the Kannabi Bridge, and to get rid of them, barring Kamui, leading to Obito's death. Fleeing Konoha after his crimes were discovered, he sent brainwashed children to massacre Konoha families, and, in the Wave-Verse, kidnaps a pregnant Rin. Killing the baby, Kenta tortured Rin to death and greeted Kamui with her corpse when he tried to rescue her. He also tried to recreate Kamui with other children, killing or wounding them in the process. In ''The Past Enemy Arc'', Kenta is [[EstablishingCharacterMoment introduced]] horribly killing Kin, a little girl, because she cried when he gave her to a brothel. He attempted to kidnap Rin and Kakashi's child, succeeding with Rin. When his subordinate suggested to kill Kamui, Kenta [[BadBoss killed him]]. When confronted by Kamui, [[NeverMyFault he blamed everyone but himself for his crimes]] and revealed that he committed all of this to turn Kakashi into his "masterpiece", and so that [[FameThroughInfamy he will be remembered]]. When Kamui replies that he will do everything to forget him, a spiteful Kenta attempts to kill him and Rin.
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%%* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: Some fans feel this way towards Kazama.

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%%* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: Some fans feel this way towards Kazama.
%%* WhatAnIdiot: Really Kushina, was it that great an idea to tell Kazama that Tsukiyomi is ''right about your actions in implanting the Kyuubi inside him'' when he's on the brink of a HeroicBSOD, having learned that most people he knew were manipulating him? You couldn't have waited until ''after'' to tell him you royally fucked up his life? As for what happens right after... well, sorry, but for the kind of stupidity you presented there, you ''kind of'' had it coming.

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%%* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: Some fans feel this way towards Kazama.
%%* WhatAnIdiot: Really Kushina, was it that great an idea to tell Kazama that Tsukiyomi is ''right about your actions in implanting the Kyuubi inside him'' when he's on the brink of a HeroicBSOD, having learned that most people he knew were manipulating him? You couldn't have waited until ''after'' to tell him you royally fucked up his life? As for what happens right after... well, sorry, but for the kind of stupidity you presented there, you ''kind of'' had it coming.
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* AngstWhatAngst: Karasu Uchiha. He doesn't seem to be bothered by his rather complicated birth.
* AssPull: Kushina's chakra being able to bring the dead back to life.
* AwesomeEgo: Manda! MANDA! '''MANDA!''' He dosn't ''think'' he's all that. He ''knows'' it.

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* %%* AngstWhatAngst: Karasu Uchiha. He doesn't seem to be bothered by his rather complicated birth.
* %%* AssPull: Kushina's chakra being able to bring the dead back to life.
* %%* AwesomeEgo: Manda! MANDA! '''MANDA!''' He dosn't ''think'' he's all that. He ''knows'' it.



** [[TokenEvilTeammate Sasori]], eclipsing his canon counterpart, is [[MarionetteMaster "The Puppet Master"]] in more ways than one. Promoted to chunin as a child after single-handedly killing 50 enemies by poisoning their water supplies, Sasori, in adulthood, joined the [[Characters/EchoesTheArashiClan Arashi clan]] with his student Chibaku (Puppeeter!Naruto) and his subordinate Kabuto. Sasori proved to be valuable: in Kitsune's world, he effortlessly blackmailed the Hokage into giving them Kitsune (Insane!Naruto). Through quick thinking, he forces Tsukiyomi to reveal more of his techniques even though he was losing, which proved to be useful when fighting Amaterasu (who has similar abilities) in the Wave-Verse, briefly crippling him. When most of the Arashi clan was imprisoned in a [[TheAlcatraz nigh-inescapable prison]] in the Cloud-Verse, he and Chibaku successfully broke out the entire group from the prison with their plan. He discovered most of the truth about the Dystopia-Verse by spying on an ANBU and had the perfect seal to defeat its dictator. When the Third Kazekage tries to use Sasori's body against Chibaku, Sasori self-destructed to save Chibaku. Called a [[TitleDrop Magnificent Bastard]] by Chibaku, Sasori has more than lived up to the name.
** [[BloodKnight Amaterasu]], AKA Kitsune's world's [[Characters/NarutoMadaraUchiha Madara Uchiha]], promised to his dying little brother he would remain a samurai and follow the Bushido code to his last breath. Desiring to get back at his clan for "betraying" their former virtues and becoming ninjas, to destroy Konoha for "betraying" him and to throw the world in a state of perpetual warfare to supposedly help mankind improve, Amaterasu orchestrated the Kyuubi's attack on Konoha. Despite the attack's failure, Amaterasu manipulated Fugaku and Mikoto, counting on their coup attempt in Konoha to fulfill his objectives throughout the ensuing chaos. When he discovers Shisui spying on them, Amaterasu gives him a BreakingLecture, leading Shisui to foil the coup by killing the clan, but still giving a victory to Amaterasu. Recruited by his counterparts Susanoo and Tsukiyomi, Amaterasu formed with them [[Characters/EchoesTheMadaraGuys the Madara Trio]]. In the trio's attempts to harness Kazama's power, Amaterasu shined through his sheer strength, honor, adaptability and contingency plans, [[DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu killing the Wave-Verse!Kyuubi]] and knowing which one of his 100 weapons he had to use to adapt to his enemies' techniques. When finally defeated, [[FaceDeathWithDignity he congratulated his killers, acknowledged his mistakes and peacefully passed on]].
** [[TheSocialExpert Tsukiyomi]], AKA Kazama's world's [[Characters/NarutoMadaraUchiha Madara Uchiha]], deserves his name of "The Deceiver". Wanting to harness Kazama's power and to destroy Konoha for "betraying" him, Tsukiyomi formed the Madara Trio and successfully destroyed Kazama's devotion to Konoha through {{Half Truth}}s, also implanting Amatsu-Mikaboshi inside Kazama to further corrupt him. When Kazama was separated from his friends and ended up in the Ame-Verse alongside Susanoo and Tsukiyomi, the latter pulled an EnemyMine with Kazama and both trained and manipulated him, resulting in both Kazama taking over Ame and finally snapping and destroying Konoha, [[TheBadGuyWins thus fulfilling Tsukiyomi's life-long objective]]. Having grown to sincerely care for Kazama, he followed him in the "Road to Ninja" world and sacrificed himself to help Kazama overcome Amatsu-Mikaboshi. Willing to negotiate, affable, polite and ruthless, Tsukiyomi was the most successful villain of the fanfiction.

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** [[TokenEvilTeammate Sasori]], eclipsing his canon counterpart, is [[MarionetteMaster "The Puppet Master"]] in more ways than one. Promoted to chunin as a child after single-handedly killing 50 enemies by poisoning their water supplies, Sasori, in adulthood, joined the [[Characters/EchoesTheArashiClan Arashi clan]] with his student Chibaku (Puppeeter!Naruto) and his subordinate Kabuto. Sasori proved to be valuable: valuable; in Kitsune's world, he effortlessly blackmailed the Hokage into giving them Kitsune (Insane!Naruto). handing the Kyuubi-possessed Naruto over to him. Through quick thinking, he forces Tsukiyomi to reveal more of his techniques even though he was losing, which proved to be useful when fighting Amaterasu (who Amaterasu, who has similar abilities) abilities, in the Wave-Verse, briefly crippling him. When most of the Arashi clan was imprisoned in a [[TheAlcatraz nigh-inescapable prison]] in the Cloud-Verse, he and Chibaku successfully broke out the entire group from the prison with their plan. He discovered most of the truth about the Dystopia-Verse by spying on an ANBU and had the perfect seal to defeat its dictator. When the Third Kazekage tries to use Sasori's body against Chibaku, Sasori self-destructed to save Chibaku. Called a [[TitleDrop Magnificent Bastard]] by Chibaku, Sasori has more than lived up to the name.
** [[BloodKnight Amaterasu]], AKA Kitsune's world's [[Characters/NarutoMadaraUchiha Madara Uchiha]], promised to his dying little brother he would remain a samurai and follow the Bushido code to his last breath. Desiring to get back at his clan for "betraying" their former virtues and becoming ninjas, to destroy Konoha for "betraying" him and to throw the world in a state of perpetual warfare to supposedly help mankind improve, Amaterasu orchestrated the Kyuubi's attack on Konoha. Despite the attack's failure, Amaterasu manipulated Fugaku and Mikoto, counting on their coup attempt in Konoha to fulfill his objectives throughout the ensuing chaos. When he discovers Shisui spying on them, Amaterasu gives him a BreakingLecture, leading Shisui to foil the coup by killing the clan, but still giving a victory to Amaterasu. Recruited by his counterparts Susanoo and Tsukiyomi, Amaterasu formed with them [[Characters/EchoesTheMadaraGuys the Madara Trio]]. In the trio's attempts to harness Kazama's power, Amaterasu shined through his sheer strength, honor, adaptability and contingency plans, [[DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu killing the Wave-Verse!Kyuubi]] Wave-Verse Kyuubi]] and knowing which one of his 100 weapons he had to use to adapt to his enemies' techniques. When finally defeated, [[FaceDeathWithDignity he congratulated his killers, acknowledged his mistakes and peacefully passed on]].
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** [[TheSocialExpert Tsukiyomi]], AKA Kazama's world's [[Characters/NarutoMadaraUchiha Madara Uchiha]], deserves his name of "The Deceiver". Wanting to harness Kazama's power and to destroy Konoha for "betraying" him, Tsukiyomi formed the Madara Trio and successfully destroyed Kazama's devotion to Konoha through {{Half Truth}}s, also implanting Amatsu-Mikaboshi inside Kazama to further corrupt him. When Kazama was separated from his friends and ended up in the Ame-Verse alongside Susanoo and Tsukiyomi, the latter pulled an EnemyMine with Kazama and both trained and manipulated him, resulting in both Kazama taking over Ame and finally snapping and destroying Konoha, [[TheBadGuyWins thus fulfilling Tsukiyomi's life-long objective]]. Having grown to sincerely care for Kazama, he followed him in the "Road to Ninja" world and sacrificed himself to help Kazama overcome Amatsu-Mikaboshi. Willing to negotiate, affable, polite and ruthless, Tsukiyomi was the most successful villain of in the entire fanfiction.



* TooCoolToLive: [[spoiler: Sasori.]]
* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: Some fans feel this way towards Kazama.
* WhatAnIdiot: Really Kushina, was it that great an idea to tell Kazama that Tsukiyomi is ''right about your actions in implanting the Kyuubi inside him'' when he's on the brink of a HeroicBSOD, having learned that most people he knew were manipulating him? You couldn't have waited until ''after'' to tell him you royally fucked up his life? As for what happens right after... well, sorry, but for the kind of stupidity you presented there, you ''kind of'' had it coming.

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* %%* TooCoolToLive: [[spoiler: Sasori.]]
* %%* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: Some fans feel this way towards Kazama.
* %%* WhatAnIdiot: Really Kushina, was it that great an idea to tell Kazama that Tsukiyomi is ''right about your actions in implanting the Kyuubi inside him'' when he's on the brink of a HeroicBSOD, having learned that most people he knew were manipulating him? You couldn't have waited until ''after'' to tell him you royally fucked up his life? As for what happens right after... well, sorry, but for the kind of stupidity you presented there, you ''kind of'' had it coming.
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** The aforementioned [[TheSocialExpert Tsukiyomi]], AKA Kazama's world's [[Characters/NarutoMadaraUchiha Madara Uchiha]], deserves his name of "The Deceiver". Wanting to harness Kazama's power and to destroy Konoha for "betraying" him, Tsukiyomi formed the Madara Trio and successfully destroyed Kazama's devotion to Konoha through {{Half Truth}}s, also implanting Amatsu-Mikaboshi inside Kazama to further corrupt him. When Kazama was separated from his friends and ended up in the Ame-Verse alongside Susanoo and Tsukiyomi, the latter pulled an EnemyMine with Kazama and both trained and manipulated him, resulting in both Kazama taking over Ame and finally snapping and destroying Konoha, [[TheBadGuyWins thus fulfilling Tsukiyomi's life-long objective]]. Having grown to sincerely care for Kazama, he followed him in the "Road to Ninja" world and sacrificed himself to help Kazama overcome Amatsu-Mikaboshi. Willing to negotiate, affable, polite and ruthless, Tsukiyomi was the most successful villain of the fanfiction.

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** The aforementioned [[TheSocialExpert Tsukiyomi]], AKA Kazama's world's [[Characters/NarutoMadaraUchiha Madara Uchiha]], deserves his name of "The Deceiver". Wanting to harness Kazama's power and to destroy Konoha for "betraying" him, Tsukiyomi formed the Madara Trio and successfully destroyed Kazama's devotion to Konoha through {{Half Truth}}s, also implanting Amatsu-Mikaboshi inside Kazama to further corrupt him. When Kazama was separated from his friends and ended up in the Ame-Verse alongside Susanoo and Tsukiyomi, the latter pulled an EnemyMine with Kazama and both trained and manipulated him, resulting in both Kazama taking over Ame and finally snapping and destroying Konoha, [[TheBadGuyWins thus fulfilling Tsukiyomi's life-long objective]]. Having grown to sincerely care for Kazama, he followed him in the "Road to Ninja" world and sacrificed himself to help Kazama overcome Amatsu-Mikaboshi. Willing to negotiate, affable, polite and ruthless, Tsukiyomi was the most successful villain of the fanfiction.
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** [[ControlFreak Alpha]] was a female Naruto clone created by a villainous Hashirama to serve as a weapon by stealing plans from the minds of enemies. Overthrowing Hashirama and becoming the world's ShadowDictator, Alpha, despite claiming that she was repairing the former's and Madara's atrocities, kept on committing them, continuing Hashirama's FinalSolution, exterminating 90% of the world's population. Not even the "MasterRace" was safe, as Alpha killed the Uchiha, the Uzumaki and the Senju families after taking power, all so that she could have an easier time controlling the remaining population. In her "utopia", Alpha brainwashed countless people. When Chibaku criticizes her views, she has him tortured and {{mind rape}}d to near-death, despite him being a preteen. A massive, delusional, selfish hypocrite blaming everyone else for her own atrocities and mistakes, Alpha worsened her world's situation despite claiming with a motherly tone that she was improving it.

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** [[BloodKnight The Warlord]], a villainous [[Characters/NarutoNarutoUzumaki Naruto Uzumaki]], came to be when Naruto, who became Hokage at age 16, kept abusing the Shadow Clones, turning into a HiveMind. After being overthrown by Sasuke, Naruto came back to power, killed him, his critics and all his friends but his wife Hinata, leaving her comatose. While successfully enforcing peace, Naruto let his subjects rebel out of boredom, so that he could crush them again. When they stopped fighting, he destroyed his world. Learning of the Multiverse, he created the [[Characters/EchoesTeikoku Teikoku]], in order to keep on [[MultiversalConqueror conquering worlds]], out of a love of destruction. Notable crimes include destroying an entire planet ForTheEvulz; starting a body parts contest in another world; and forcing a world's kids to kill each other so that he can see the society the broken survivors will create. Concluding that free will doesn't exist--each multiverse leads to a different reality because of a different choice--he chose to [[OmnicidalManiac destroy everything]]. A liar, he promised Kazama and Madara that they would rule together, while he planned to kill Kazama [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness when he was no longer useful]]. When his ally Red Zetsu was defeated by the Arashi Clan, the Warlord tried to kill them by [[ColonyDrop dropping another Earth]], uncaring about the billions of deaths. Not above hurting children, he attempted to kill Naruko in a rage. Upon his final defeat, he lost it and revealed that he killed billions of Narutos. [[TheDreaded Feared]] even by his own followers, the Warlord was by far the most heinous character of the entire work.

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** [[WouldHurtAChild Kenta Ayatsuri]] is a jōnin of Konoha, a [[VillainWithGoodPublicity philanthropist]], and founded an orphanage. However, Kenta turned the orphans into {{Tykebomb}}s and prostitutes to fund his activities. Training Kamui, the Wave-Verse's Kakashi), Kenta turned him into another tyke-bomb. When Minato added Kamui to his own team, taking him away from Kenta, the latter contacted the enemy in order to sabotage Team Minato's mission to destroy the Kannabi Bridge, and to get rid of them, barring Kamui, leading to Obito's death. Fleeing Konoha after his crimes were discovered, he sent brainwashed children to massacre Konoha families, and, in the Wave-Verse, kidnaps a pregnant Rin. Killing the baby, Kenta tortured Rin to death and greeted Kamui with her corpse when he tried to rescue her. He also tried to recreate Kamui with other children, killing or wounding them in the process. In the ''Past Enemy Arc'', Kenta is [[EstablishingCharacterMoment introduced]] by removing an Hyuuga's eyes. He attempted to kidnap Rin and Kakashi's child, succeeding with Rin. When his subordinate suggested to kill Kamui, Kenta [[BadBoss killed him]]. When confronted by Kamui, [[NeverMyFault he blamed everyone but himself for his crimes]] and revealed that he committed all of this to turn Kakashi into his "masterpiece", and so that [[FameThroughInfamy he will be remembered]]. When Kamui replies that he will do everything to forget him, a spiteful Kenta attempts to kill him and Rin. Based on real-life sociopaths, Kenta was a monster in a human's skin.

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** [[WouldHurtAChild Kenta Ayatsuri]] is a jōnin of Konoha, as well as a [[VillainWithGoodPublicity philanthropist]], and philanthropist]] who founded an orphanage. However, Kenta turned the orphans into {{Tykebomb}}s and prostitutes to fund his activities. Training Kamui, the Wave-Verse's Kakashi), [[Characters/NarutoKakashiHatake Kakashi]], Kenta turned him into another tyke-bomb. When Minato added Kamui to his own team, taking him away from Kenta, the latter contacted the enemy in order to sabotage Team Minato's mission to destroy the Kannabi Bridge, and to get rid of them, barring Kamui, leading to Obito's death. Fleeing Konoha after his crimes were discovered, he sent brainwashed children to massacre Konoha families, and, in the Wave-Verse, kidnaps a pregnant Rin. Killing the baby, Kenta tortured Rin to death and greeted Kamui with her corpse when he tried to rescue her. He also tried to recreate Kamui with other children, killing or wounding them in the process. In the ''Past ''The Past Enemy Arc'', Kenta is [[EstablishingCharacterMoment introduced]] by removing an Hyuuga's eyes.horribly killing Kin, a little girl, because she cried when he gave her to a brothel. He attempted to kidnap Rin and Kakashi's child, succeeding with Rin. When his subordinate suggested to kill Kamui, Kenta [[BadBoss killed him]]. When confronted by Kamui, [[NeverMyFault he blamed everyone but himself for his crimes]] and revealed that he committed all of this to turn Kakashi into his "masterpiece", and so that [[FameThroughInfamy he will be remembered]]. When Kamui replies that he will do everything to forget him, a spiteful Kenta attempts to kill him and Rin. Based on real-life sociopaths, Kenta was a monster in a human's skin.

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**[[EvilMentor Izanagi]], the [[Characters/NarutoMadaraUchiha Madara Uchiha]] from Izanami's world, [[AdaptationalVillainy lacks]] the redeeming qualities his canon counterpart and [[Characters/EchoesTheMadaraGuys the Madara Trio]] have. Planning to execute the Eye of the Moon plan to satisfy his god complex, Izanagi resurrected a dying Izanami and made her immortal to test his newfound immortality technique. Izanagi trained her but also horribly abused her to his content, forcing her into prostitution and torturing her when she rebelled. When she didn't fulfill his expectations, he planned to replace her with her baby son, Itachi, out of misogyny, leading to his death at Izanami's hands. When resurrected by Susanoo, Izanagi allied with him against the Arashi Clan only so that he could get back at Izanami and seal her alive forever. He revived 5 Kages with Edo Tensei to use as puppets against the Arashi clan. When curb-stomped by the Sage of the Six Paths, he had no problem dropping the moon on Earth to stall him, planning to go to another universe to start over his plan if it destroyed the planet. Thoroughly depraved beneath his soft-spoken character, Izanagi [[SmallRoleBigImpact left an impact despite his short appearance]].

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** [[TokenEvilTeammate Sasori]], eclipsing his canon counterpart, is [[MarionetteMaster "The Puppet Master"]] in more ways than one. Promoted to chunin as a child after single-handedly killing 50 enemies by poisoning their water supplies, Sasori, in adulthood, joined the [[Characters/EchoesTheArashiClan Arashi clan]] with his student Chibaku (Puppeeter!Naruto) and his subordinate Kabuto. Sasori proved to be valuable : in Kitsune's world, he effortlessly blackmailed the Hokage into giving them Kitsune (Insane!Naruto). Through quick thinking, he forces Tsukiyomi [[XanatosGambit to reveal more of his techniques]] even though he was losing, which proved to be useful when fighting Amaterasu (who has similar abilities) in the Wave-Verse, briefly crippling him. When most of the Arashi clan was imprisoned in a [[TheAlcatraz nigh-inescapable prison]] in the Cloud-Verse, he and Chibaku successfully broke out the entire group from the prison with their plan. He discovered most of the truth about the Dystopia-Verse by spying on an ANBU and had the perfect seal to defeat its dictator. When the Third Kazekage tries to use Sasori's body against Chibaku, Sasori self-destructed to save Chibaku. Called a [[TitleDrop Magnificent Bastard]] by Chibaku, Sasori has more than lived up to the name.
** The aforementioned Tsukiyomi, AKA Kazama's world's [[Characters/NarutoMadaraUchiha Madara Uchiha]], deserves his name of "The Deceiver". Wanting to harness Kazama's power and to destroy Konoha for "betraying" him, Tsukiyomi successfully destroyed Kazama's devotion to Konoha through {{Half Truth}}s, also implanting Amatsu-Mikaboshi inside Kazama to further corrupt him. When Kazama was separated from his friends and ended up in the Ame-Verse alongside Susanoo and Tsukiyomi, the latter pulled an EnemyMine with Kazama and trained him, resulting in both Kazama taking over Ame and finally snapping and destroying Konoha, [[TheBadGuyWins thus fulfilling Tsukiyomi's life-long objective]]. Having grown to sincerely care for Kazama, he followed him in the "Road to Ninja" world and sacrificed himself to help Kazama overcome Amatsu-Mikaboshi. Willing to negociate, [[AffablyEvil affable, polite and ruthless]], Tsukiyomi was the most successful villain of the fanfiction.

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** [[TokenEvilTeammate Sasori]], eclipsing his canon counterpart, is [[MarionetteMaster "The Puppet Master"]] in more ways than one. Promoted to chunin as a child after single-handedly killing 50 enemies by poisoning their water supplies, Sasori, in adulthood, joined the [[Characters/EchoesTheArashiClan Arashi clan]] with his student Chibaku (Puppeeter!Naruto) and his subordinate Kabuto. Sasori proved to be valuable : valuable: in Kitsune's world, he effortlessly blackmailed the Hokage into giving them Kitsune (Insane!Naruto). Through quick thinking, he forces Tsukiyomi [[XanatosGambit to reveal more of his techniques]] techniques even though he was losing, which proved to be useful when fighting Amaterasu (who has similar abilities) in the Wave-Verse, briefly crippling him. When most of the Arashi clan was imprisoned in a [[TheAlcatraz nigh-inescapable prison]] in the Cloud-Verse, he and Chibaku successfully broke out the entire group from the prison with their plan. He discovered most of the truth about the Dystopia-Verse by spying on an ANBU and had the perfect seal to defeat its dictator. When the Third Kazekage tries to use Sasori's body against Chibaku, Sasori self-destructed to save Chibaku. Called a [[TitleDrop Magnificent Bastard]] by Chibaku, Sasori has more than lived up to the name.
** [[BloodKnight Amaterasu]], AKA Kitsune's world's [[Characters/NarutoMadaraUchiha Madara Uchiha]], promised to his dying little brother he would remain a samurai and follow the Bushido code to his last breath. Desiring to get back at his clan for "betraying" their former virtues and becoming ninjas, to destroy Konoha for "betraying" him and to throw the world in a state of perpetual warfare to supposedly help mankind improve, Amaterasu orchestrated the Kyuubi's attack on Konoha. Despite the attack's failure, Amaterasu manipulated Fugaku and Mikoto, counting on their coup attempt in Konoha to fulfill his objectives throughout the ensuing chaos. When he discovers Shisui spying on them, Amaterasu gives him a BreakingLecture, leading Shisui to foil the coup by killing the clan, but still giving a victory to Amaterasu. Recruited by his counterparts Susanoo and Tsukiyomi, Amaterasu formed with them [[Characters/EchoesTheMadaraGuys the Madara Trio]]. In the trio's attempts to harness Kazama's power, Amaterasu shined through his sheer strength, honor, adaptability and contingency plans, [[DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu killing the Wave-Verse!Kyuubi]] and knowing which one of his 100 weapons he had to use to adapt to his enemies' techniques. When finally defeated, [[FaceDeathWithDignity he congratulated his killers, acknowledged his mistakes and peacefully passed on]].
** The aforementioned Tsukiyomi, [[TheSocialExpert Tsukiyomi]], AKA Kazama's world's [[Characters/NarutoMadaraUchiha Madara Uchiha]], deserves his name of "The Deceiver". Wanting to harness Kazama's power and to destroy Konoha for "betraying" him, Tsukiyomi formed the Madara Trio and successfully destroyed Kazama's devotion to Konoha through {{Half Truth}}s, also implanting Amatsu-Mikaboshi inside Kazama to further corrupt him. When Kazama was separated from his friends and ended up in the Ame-Verse alongside Susanoo and Tsukiyomi, the latter pulled an EnemyMine with Kazama and both trained and manipulated him, resulting in both Kazama taking over Ame and finally snapping and destroying Konoha, [[TheBadGuyWins thus fulfilling Tsukiyomi's life-long objective]]. Having grown to sincerely care for Kazama, he followed him in the "Road to Ninja" world and sacrificed himself to help Kazama overcome Amatsu-Mikaboshi. Willing to negociate, [[AffablyEvil negotiate, affable, polite and ruthless]], ruthless, Tsukiyomi was the most successful villain of the fanfiction.
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* OneSceneWonder: The Sanbi. It appeared for only a quarter of a chapter but established itself as a CompleteMonster in just a few sentences and proved itself to be rather disturbing with its DissonantSerenity SoftSpokenSadist personality while managing to act WickedCultured despite being a giant SeaMonster.

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* OneSceneWonder: The Sanbi. It Sanbi appeared for only a quarter of a chapter but established itself as a CompleteMonster in just a few sentences and proved itself to be rather disturbing with its DissonantSerenity SoftSpokenSadist personality while managing to act WickedCultured despite being a giant SeaMonster.
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** The aforementioned [[ManipulativeBastard Tsukiyomi]], AKA Kazama's world's [[Characters/NarutoMadaraUchiha Madara Uchiha]], deserves his name of "The Deceiver". Wanting to harness Kazama's power and to destroy Konoha for "betraying" him, Tsukiyomi successfully destroyed Kazama's devotion to Konoha through {{Half Truth}}s, also implanting Amatsu-Mikaboshi inside Kazama to further corrupt him. When Kazama was separated from his friends and ended up in the Ame-Verse alongside Susanoo and Tsukiyomi, the latter pulled an EnemyMine with Kazama and trained him, resulting in both Kazama taking over Ame and finally snapping and destroying Konoha, [[TheBadGuyWins thus fulfilling Tsukiyomi's life-long objective]]. Having grown to sincerely care for Kazama, he followed him in the "Road to Ninja" world and sacrificed himself to help Kazama overcome Amatsu-Mikaboshi. Willing to negociate, [[AffablyEvil affable, polite and ruthless]], Tsukiyomi was the most successful villain of the fanfiction.

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** The aforementioned [[ManipulativeBastard Tsukiyomi]], Tsukiyomi, AKA Kazama's world's [[Characters/NarutoMadaraUchiha Madara Uchiha]], deserves his name of "The Deceiver". Wanting to harness Kazama's power and to destroy Konoha for "betraying" him, Tsukiyomi successfully destroyed Kazama's devotion to Konoha through {{Half Truth}}s, also implanting Amatsu-Mikaboshi inside Kazama to further corrupt him. When Kazama was separated from his friends and ended up in the Ame-Verse alongside Susanoo and Tsukiyomi, the latter pulled an EnemyMine with Kazama and trained him, resulting in both Kazama taking over Ame and finally snapping and destroying Konoha, [[TheBadGuyWins thus fulfilling Tsukiyomi's life-long objective]]. Having grown to sincerely care for Kazama, he followed him in the "Road to Ninja" world and sacrificed himself to help Kazama overcome Amatsu-Mikaboshi. Willing to negociate, [[AffablyEvil affable, polite and ruthless]], Tsukiyomi was the most successful villain of the fanfiction.
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* WhatAnIdiot: Really Kushina, was it that great an idea to tell Kazama that Tsukiyomi is ''right about your actions in implanting the Kyuubi inside him'' when he's on the brink of a HeroicBSOD, having learned that most people he knew were manipulating him? You couldn't have waited until ''after'' to tell him you royally fucked up his life? As for what happens right after... well, sorry, but for the kind of stupidity you presented there, you ''kind of'' had it coming.
* TheWoobie: Loads of them, such as Jinchuuriki Sakura (from the Wave-verse), N (from the Cloud-verse), and Fem-Gaara (same as canon). For more emphasis:
** Kazama: His whole life has been a lie and has been manipulated by almost everyone he thought was his friend, & his parents turned him into a weapon at birth because a senile amphibian told them to BecauseDestinySaysSo (in a universe where ''destiny doesn't exist'')! He has been [[spoiler:corrupted by a GodOfEvil and is its [[TheChosenOne Chosen One]]]], WordOfGod has confirmed his status as a CosmicPlaything, the Shinigami wants to kill him, and the closest thing he has to a father is [[spoiler: the BigBad, Tsukiyomi.]]
** Chibaku: He probably has it the easiest, having spent a few years as a homeless bum... He's also dangerously pragmatic and ruthless
** Kitsune has had it the worst. His life was made a living Hell by all of the village [[spoiler: due to the side effect of Shisui's Genjutsu.]] His best friend Hinata died due to her father branding her with the Caged Bird Seal, leading to him making a deal with his [[spoiler: three]] Kyuubi, turning him into a monstrous SerialKiller werefox. Then he formed an OddFriendship bond with Kisame [[spoiler:which is cut short by Kisame dying at Amaterasu's hands.]]
** Kamui/Kakashi, moreso than either his canon counterpart ''or'' the other multiverse versions of him. After his father commited suicide, he was subsequently raised and mentored by Kenta. He got away from him and [[spoiler:married Rin and had a baby]], but then Kenta came back and [[spoiler:kidnapped Rin and his baby, killing them and mailing the baby's corpse back to him after having tortured Rin to death. Kakashi killed him, but he was set back further ''much'' later than this when his genin team was killed]]. On top of that, he was forced to [[spoiler:put down their reanimated corpses when Susanoo ruthlessly reincarnated them.]] Furthermore, in at least ''some'' versions of the multiverse, [[spoiler:his dead best friend who he has based his way of life around is a possible BigBad. Thankfully, the poor guy never had to find out the last part...]]
** Zabuza's parents were killed right in front of him as a child because they had bloodlines, and he was later forced to kill his entire graduating class to save his village. He lost half his friends in a failed coup. Then he lost [[spoiler:his best friend, Kisame, and apprentice Kimimaro]] - a pain he shares with Haku. In turn, [[GenderFlip she]] has the same horrible backstory from {{canon}} with the added bonus of [[spoiler:being unable to save her mentor and father figure after he dies in the process of defeating Amaterasu.]]
** Yugito: Was forced to fight and kill in a pointless war started by [[spoiler: Orochimaru.]]
** Naruko: She has deluded herself into thinking the multiverse works like a shonen manga, probably as a means of coping with all the crap thrown her way. Time will tell how long it lasts, too. [[spoiler: It seems to have vanished after her fight with Kitsune's Kyuubi.]]

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* WhatAnIdiot: Really Kushina, was it that great an idea to tell Kazama that Tsukiyomi is ''right about your actions in implanting the Kyuubi inside him'' when he's on the brink of a HeroicBSOD, having learned that most people he knew were manipulating him? You couldn't have waited until ''after'' to tell him you royally fucked up his life? As for what happens right after... well, sorry, but for the kind of stupidity you presented there, you ''kind of'' had it coming.
* TheWoobie: Loads of them, such as Jinchuuriki Sakura (from the Wave-verse), N (from the Cloud-verse), and Fem-Gaara (same as canon). For more emphasis:
** Kazama: His whole life has been a lie and has been manipulated by almost everyone he thought was his friend, & his parents turned him into a weapon at birth because a senile amphibian told them to BecauseDestinySaysSo (in a universe where ''destiny doesn't exist'')! He has been [[spoiler:corrupted by a GodOfEvil and is its [[TheChosenOne Chosen One]]]], WordOfGod has confirmed his status as a CosmicPlaything, the Shinigami wants to kill him, and the closest thing he has to a father is [[spoiler: the BigBad, Tsukiyomi.]]
** Chibaku: He probably has it the easiest, having spent a few years as a homeless bum... He's also dangerously pragmatic and ruthless
** Kitsune has had it the worst. His life was made a living Hell by all of the village [[spoiler: due to the side effect of Shisui's Genjutsu.]] His best friend Hinata died due to her father branding her with the Caged Bird Seal, leading to him making a deal with his [[spoiler: three]] Kyuubi, turning him into a monstrous SerialKiller werefox. Then he formed an OddFriendship bond with Kisame [[spoiler:which is cut short by Kisame dying at Amaterasu's hands.]]
** Kamui/Kakashi, moreso than either his canon counterpart ''or'' the other multiverse versions of him. After his father commited suicide, he was subsequently raised and mentored by Kenta. He got away from him and [[spoiler:married Rin and had a baby]], but then Kenta came back and [[spoiler:kidnapped Rin and his baby, killing them and mailing the baby's corpse back to him after having tortured Rin to death. Kakashi killed him, but he was set back further ''much'' later than this when his genin team was killed]]. On top of that, he was forced to [[spoiler:put down their reanimated corpses when Susanoo ruthlessly reincarnated them.]] Furthermore, in at least ''some'' versions of the multiverse, [[spoiler:his dead best friend who he has based his way of life around is a possible BigBad. Thankfully, the poor guy never had to find out the last part...]]
** Zabuza's parents were killed right in front of him as a child because they had bloodlines, and he was later forced to kill his entire graduating class to save his village. He lost half his friends in a failed coup. Then he lost [[spoiler:his best friend, Kisame, and apprentice Kimimaro]] - a pain he shares with Haku. In turn, [[GenderFlip she]] has the same horrible backstory from {{canon}} with the added bonus of [[spoiler:being unable to save her mentor and father figure after he dies in the process of defeating Amaterasu.]]
** Yugito: Was forced to fight and kill in a pointless war started by [[spoiler: Orochimaru.]]
** Naruko: She has deluded herself into thinking the multiverse works like a shonen manga, probably as a means of coping with all the crap thrown her way. Time will tell how long it lasts, too. [[spoiler: It seems to have vanished after her fight with Kitsune's Kyuubi.]]
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* MagnificentBastard: In a fanfiction full of characters and universes, these characters have distinguished themselves through their morally dubious, but brilliant feats:
** [[TokenEvilTeammate Sasori]], eclipsing his canon counterpart, is [[MarionetteMaster "The Puppet Master"]] in more ways than one. Promoted to chunin as a child after single-handedly killing 50 enemies by poisoning their water supplies, Sasori, in adulthood, joined the [[Characters/EchoesTheArashiClan Arashi clan]] with his student Chibaku (Puppeeter!Naruto) and his subordinate Kabuto. Sasori proved to be valuable : in Kitsune's world, he effortlessly blackmailed the Hokage into giving them Kitsune (Insane!Naruto). Through quick thinking, he forces Tsukiyomi [[XanatosGambit to reveal more of his techniques]] even though he was losing, which proved to be useful when fighting Amaterasu (who has similar abilities) in the Wave-Verse, briefly crippling him. When most of the Arashi clan was imprisoned in a [[TheAlcatraz nigh-inescapable prison]] in the Cloud-Verse, he and Chibaku successfully broke out the entire group from the prison with their plan. He discovered most of the truth about the Dystopia-Verse by spying on an ANBU and had the perfect seal to defeat its dictator. When the Third Kazekage tries to use Sasori's body against Chibaku, Sasori self-destructed to save Chibaku. Called a [[TitleDrop Magnificent Bastard]] by Chibaku, Sasori has more than lived up to the name.
** The aforementioned [[ManipulativeBastard Tsukiyomi]], AKA Kazama's world's [[Characters/NarutoMadaraUchiha Madara Uchiha]], deserves his name of "The Deceiver". Wanting to harness Kazama's power and to destroy Konoha for "betraying" him, Tsukiyomi successfully destroyed Kazama's devotion to Konoha through {{Half Truth}}s, also implanting Amatsu-Mikaboshi inside Kazama to further corrupt him. When Kazama was separated from his friends and ended up in the Ame-Verse alongside Susanoo and Tsukiyomi, the latter pulled an EnemyMine with Kazama and trained him, resulting in both Kazama taking over Ame and finally snapping and destroying Konoha, [[TheBadGuyWins thus fulfilling Tsukiyomi's life-long objective]]. Having grown to sincerely care for Kazama, he followed him in the "Road to Ninja" world and sacrificed himself to help Kazama overcome Amatsu-Mikaboshi. Willing to negociate, [[AffablyEvil affable, polite and ruthless]], Tsukiyomi was the most successful villain of the fanfiction.
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** [[WouldHurtAChild Kenta Ayatsuri]] is a jōnin of Konoha, a [[VillainWithGoodPublicity philanthropist]], and founded an orphanage. However, Kenta turned the orphans into {{Tykebomb}}s prostitutes to fund his activities. Training Kamui, the Wave-Verse's Kakashi), Kenta turned him into another tyke-bomb. When Minato added Kamui to his own team, taking him away from Kenta, the latter contacted the enemy in order to sabotage Team Minato's mission to destroy the Kannabi Bridge, and to get rid of them, barring Kamui, leading to Obito's death. Fleeing Konoha after his crimes were discovered, he sent brainwashed children to massacre Konoha families, and, in the Wave-Verse, kidnaps a pregnant Rin. Killing the baby, Kenta tortured Rin to death and greeted Kamui with her corpse when he tried to rescue her. He also tried to recreate Kamui with other children, killing or wounding them in the process. In the ''Past Enemy Arc'', Kenta is [[EstablishingCharacterMoment introduced]] by removing an Hyuuga's eyes. He attempted to kidnap Rin and Kakashi's child, succeeding with Rin. When his subordinate suggested to kill Kamui, Kenta [[BadBoss killed him]]. When confronted by Kamui, [[NeverMyFault he blamed everyone but himself for his crimes]] and revealed that he committed all of this to turn Kakashi into his "masterpiece", and so that [[FameThroughInfamy he will be remembered]]. When Kamui replies that he will do everything to forget him, a spiteful Kenta attempts to kill him and Rin. Based on real-life sociopaths, Kenta was a monster in a human's skin.

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** [[WouldHurtAChild Kenta Ayatsuri]] is a jōnin of Konoha, a [[VillainWithGoodPublicity philanthropist]], and founded an orphanage. However, Kenta turned the orphans into {{Tykebomb}}s and prostitutes to fund his activities. Training Kamui, the Wave-Verse's Kakashi), Kenta turned him into another tyke-bomb. When Minato added Kamui to his own team, taking him away from Kenta, the latter contacted the enemy in order to sabotage Team Minato's mission to destroy the Kannabi Bridge, and to get rid of them, barring Kamui, leading to Obito's death. Fleeing Konoha after his crimes were discovered, he sent brainwashed children to massacre Konoha families, and, in the Wave-Verse, kidnaps a pregnant Rin. Killing the baby, Kenta tortured Rin to death and greeted Kamui with her corpse when he tried to rescue her. He also tried to recreate Kamui with other children, killing or wounding them in the process. In the ''Past Enemy Arc'', Kenta is [[EstablishingCharacterMoment introduced]] by removing an Hyuuga's eyes. He attempted to kidnap Rin and Kakashi's child, succeeding with Rin. When his subordinate suggested to kill Kamui, Kenta [[BadBoss killed him]]. When confronted by Kamui, [[NeverMyFault he blamed everyone but himself for his crimes]] and revealed that he committed all of this to turn Kakashi into his "masterpiece", and so that [[FameThroughInfamy he will be remembered]]. When Kamui replies that he will do everything to forget him, a spiteful Kenta attempts to kill him and Rin. Based on real-life sociopaths, Kenta was a monster in a human's skin.
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** [[BloodKnight The Warlord]], a villainous [[Characters/NarutoNarutoUzumaki Naruto Uzumaki]], came to be when Naruto, who became Hokage at age 16, kept abusing the Shadow Clones, turning into a HiveMind. After being overthrown by Sasuke, Naruto came back to power, killed him, his critics and all of his friends but his wife Hinata, leaving her comatose. While successfully enforcing peace, Naruto let his subjects rebel out of boredom, so that he could crush them again. When they stopped fighting, he destroyed his world. Learning of the Multiverse, he created the [[Characters/EchoesTeikoku Teikoku]], in order to keep on [[MultiversalConqueror conquering worlds]], out of a love of destruction. Notable crimes include destroying an entire planet ForTheEvulz; starting a body parts contest in another world; and forcing a world's kids to kill each other so that he can see the society the broken survivors will create. Concluding that free will doesn't exist--each multiverse leads to a different reality because of a different choice--he chose to [[OmnicidalManiac destroy everything]]. A liar, he promised Kazama and Madara that they would rule together, while he planned to kill Kazama [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness when he was no longer useful]]. When his ally Red Zetsu was defeated by the Arashi Clan, the Warlord tried to kill them by [[ColonyDrop dropping another Earth]], uncaring about the billions of deaths. Not above hurting children, he attempted to kill Naruko in a rage. Upon his final defeat, he lost it and revealed that he killed billions of Narutos. [[TheDreaded Feared]] even by his own followers, the Warlord was by far the most heinous character of the entire work.

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** [[BloodKnight The Warlord]], a villainous [[Characters/NarutoNarutoUzumaki Naruto Uzumaki]], came to be when Naruto, who became Hokage at age 16, kept abusing the Shadow Clones, turning into a HiveMind. After being overthrown by Sasuke, Naruto came back to power, killed him, his critics and all of his friends but his wife Hinata, leaving her comatose. While successfully enforcing peace, Naruto let his subjects rebel out of boredom, so that he could crush them again. When they stopped fighting, he destroyed his world. Learning of the Multiverse, he created the [[Characters/EchoesTeikoku Teikoku]], in order to keep on [[MultiversalConqueror conquering worlds]], out of a love of destruction. Notable crimes include destroying an entire planet ForTheEvulz; starting a body parts contest in another world; and forcing a world's kids to kill each other so that he can see the society the broken survivors will create. Concluding that free will doesn't exist--each multiverse leads to a different reality because of a different choice--he chose to [[OmnicidalManiac destroy everything]]. A liar, he promised Kazama and Madara that they would rule together, while he planned to kill Kazama [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness when he was no longer useful]]. When his ally Red Zetsu was defeated by the Arashi Clan, the Warlord tried to kill them by [[ColonyDrop dropping another Earth]], uncaring about the billions of deaths. Not above hurting children, he attempted to kill Naruko in a rage. Upon his final defeat, he lost it and revealed that he killed billions of Narutos. [[TheDreaded Feared]] even by his own followers, the Warlord was by far the most heinous character of the entire work.

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** [[ControlFreak Alpha]] was a female Naruto clone created by a villainous Hashirama to serve as a weapon by stealing plans from the minds of enemies. Overthrowing Hashirama and becoming the world's ShadowDictator, Alpha, despite claiming that she was repairing the former's and Madara's atrocities, kept on committing them, continuing Hashirama's FinalSolution, exterminating 90% of the world's population. Not even the "MasterRace" was safe, as Alpha killed the Uchiha, the Uzumaki and the Senju families after taking power, all so that she could have an easier time controlling the remaining population. In her "utopia", Alpha brainwashed countless people. When Chibaku criticizes her views, she has him tortured and {{mind rape}}d to near-death, in spite of him being a preteen. A massive, delusional, selfish hypocrite blaming everyone else for her own atrocities and mistakes, Alpha worsened her world's situation despite claiming with a motherly tone that she was improving it.

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** [[ControlFreak Alpha]] was a female Naruto clone created by a villainous Hashirama to serve as a weapon by stealing plans from the minds of enemies. Overthrowing Hashirama and becoming the world's ShadowDictator, Alpha, despite claiming that she was repairing the former's and Madara's atrocities, kept on committing them, continuing Hashirama's FinalSolution, exterminating 90% of the world's population. Not even the "MasterRace" was safe, as Alpha killed the Uchiha, the Uzumaki and the Senju families after taking power, all so that she could have an easier time controlling the remaining population. In her "utopia", Alpha brainwashed countless people. When Chibaku criticizes her views, she has him tortured and {{mind rape}}d to near-death, in spite of despite him being a preteen. A massive, delusional, selfish hypocrite blaming everyone else for her own atrocities and mistakes, Alpha worsened her world's situation despite claiming with a motherly tone that she was improving it.



** In the "Road to Ninja" verse, [[Characters/NarutoObitoUchiha Obito Uchiha]] also lacked any qualities his canon counterpart had. After defeating the Shinobi Alliance, Obito launched the Infinite Izanagi, killing his entire world and creating his own personal paradise, in which he created everyone the way he wanted them, and joined the Teikoku. When Kazama and Tsukiyomi entered the "Road to Ninja" world, Obito, being a psychologist, kept an eye on the former during their sessions. In spite of having already gained his personal paradise, Obito plans to spread the Infinite Izanagi through the multiverse, at the risk of destroying countless worlds just so that he can live his fantasies. He doesn't even care about his own creations, abusing his "favorite son" Menma, and destroying his world's Konoha and several of his inhabitants, seeing them as ultimately replaceable, even his supposed LoveInterest, Rin. When defeated by Kazama, Obito released the [[EldritchAbomination Ten-Tails]] from his body out of spite. Believing himself to be [[AGodAmI a god]], Obito was nothing more than a PsychopathicManchild who wanted to fulfill his wishes no matter what.
** [[BloodKnight The Warlord]], a villainous [[Characters/NarutoNarutoUzumaki Naruto Uzumaki]], came to be when Naruto, who became Hokage at age 16, kept abusing the Shadow Clones, turning into a HiveMind. After being overthrown by Sasuke, Naruto came back to power, killed him, his critics and all of his friends but his wife Hinata, leaving her comatose. While successfully enforcing peace, Naruto let his subjects rebel out of boredom, so that he could crush them again. When they stopped fighting, he destroyed his world. Learning of the Multiverse, he created the [[Characters/EchoesTeikoku Teikoku]], in order to keep on [[MultiversalConqueror conquering worlds]], out of a love of destruction. Notable crimes includs destroying an entire planet ForTheEvulz; starting a body parts contest in another world; and forcing a world's kids to kill each other so that he can see the society the broken survivors will create. Concluding that free will doesn't exist--each multiverse leads to a different reality because of a different choice--he chose to [[OmnicidalManiac destroy everything]]. A liar, he promised Kazama and Madara that they would rule together, while he planned to kill Kazama [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness when he was no longer useful]]. When his ally Red Zetsu was defeated by the Arashi Clan, the Warlord tried to kill them by [[ColonyDrop dropping another Earth]], uncaring about the billions of deaths. Not above hurting children, he attempted to kill Naruko in a rage. Upon his final defeat, he lost it and revealed that he killed billions of Narutos. [[TheDreaded Feared]] even by his own followers, the Warlord was by far the most heinous character of the entire work.

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** In the "Road to Ninja" verse, [[Characters/NarutoObitoUchiha Obito Uchiha]] also lacked any qualities his canon counterpart had. After defeating the Shinobi Alliance, Obito launched the Infinite Izanagi, killing his entire world and creating his own personal paradise, in which he created everyone the way he wanted them, and joined the Teikoku. When Kazama and Tsukiyomi entered the "Road to Ninja" world, Obito, being a psychologist, kept an eye on the former during their sessions. In spite of Despite having already gained his personal paradise, Obito plans to spread the Infinite Izanagi through the multiverse, at the risk of destroying countless worlds just so that he can live his fantasies. He doesn't even care about his own creations, abusing his "favorite son" Menma, and destroying his world's Konoha and several of his inhabitants, seeing them as ultimately replaceable, even his supposed LoveInterest, Rin. When defeated by Kazama, Obito released the [[EldritchAbomination Ten-Tails]] from his body out of spite. Believing himself to be [[AGodAmI a god]], Obito was nothing more than a PsychopathicManchild who wanted to fulfill his wishes no matter what.
** [[BloodKnight The Warlord]], a villainous [[Characters/NarutoNarutoUzumaki Naruto Uzumaki]], came to be when Naruto, who became Hokage at age 16, kept abusing the Shadow Clones, turning into a HiveMind. After being overthrown by Sasuke, Naruto came back to power, killed him, his critics and all of his friends but his wife Hinata, leaving her comatose. While successfully enforcing peace, Naruto let his subjects rebel out of boredom, so that he could crush them again. When they stopped fighting, he destroyed his world. Learning of the Multiverse, he created the [[Characters/EchoesTeikoku Teikoku]], in order to keep on [[MultiversalConqueror conquering worlds]], out of a love of destruction. Notable crimes includs include destroying an entire planet ForTheEvulz; starting a body parts contest in another world; and forcing a world's kids to kill each other so that he can see the society the broken survivors will create. Concluding that free will doesn't exist--each multiverse leads to a different reality because of a different choice--he chose to [[OmnicidalManiac destroy everything]]. A liar, he promised Kazama and Madara that they would rule together, while he planned to kill Kazama [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness when he was no longer useful]]. When his ally Red Zetsu was defeated by the Arashi Clan, the Warlord tried to kill them by [[ColonyDrop dropping another Earth]], uncaring about the billions of deaths. Not above hurting children, he attempted to kill Naruko in a rage. Upon his final defeat, he lost it and revealed that he killed billions of Narutos. [[TheDreaded Feared]] even by his own followers, the Warlord was by far the most heinous character of the entire work.
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** [[ControlFreak Alpha]] was a female Naruto clone created by a villainous Hashirama to serve as a weapon by stealing plans from the minds of enemies. Overthrowing Hashirama and becoming the world's ShadowDictator, Alpha, despite claiming that she was repairing the former's and Madara's atrocities, kept on committing them, continuing Hashirama's FinalSolution, exterminating 90% of the world's population. Not even the "MasterRace" was safe, as Alpha killed the Uchiha, the Uzumaki and the Senju families after taking power, all so that she could have a easier time controlling the remaining population. In her "utopia", Alpha brainwashed countless people. When Chibaku criticizes her views, she has him tortured and {{mind rape}}d to near-death, in spite of him being a preteen. A massive, delusional, selfish hypocrite blaming everyone else for her own atrocities and mistakes, Alpha worsened her world's situation despite claiming with a motherly tone that she was improving it.
** In the "Ame-Verse", [[TheSocialDarwinist Yagura]], the Fourth Mizukage, [[AdaptationalVillainy sheds any redeeming qualities]] his canon counterpart had. Under the guise of "human progress", Yagura started in Kiri's Ninja Academy a graduation program consisting of students killing each other, in order to weed out the weak in favor of the strong. With his "Blood Police", Yagura kills any "weak" civilian, shinobi, clansman and started a FinalSolution to [[FantasticRacism the bloodline wielders]]' question. Allying with Ame's Hanzo, he chose to kill Nagato, Yahiko and Konan, not due to his alliance with Hanzo, but because he hated them, saying that he would have killed them even if he wasn't allied with Hanzo. After having killed Yahiko, he laughs [[KickTheDog at Konan while she cries over Yahiko's death, and mocks Hanzo when the latter regretted Yahiko.]] After being challenged with Hanzo in a fight by Kazama, the original Naruto, and Tsukiyom, Kazama's World's Madara Uchiha, he almost kills part of the audience during one of his attacks, attempted to [[ImAHumanitarian eat]] Kazama during the fight, and released the [[EldritchAbomination Sanbi]] from his body out of spite after his defeat, telling it to avenge him. Believing that Jinchuriki were the MasterRace, Yagura was accurately described as a "all-around monster".

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** [[ControlFreak Alpha]] was a female Naruto clone created by a villainous Hashirama to serve as a weapon by stealing plans from the minds of enemies. Overthrowing Hashirama and becoming the world's ShadowDictator, Alpha, despite claiming that she was repairing the former's and Madara's atrocities, kept on committing them, continuing Hashirama's FinalSolution, exterminating 90% of the world's population. Not even the "MasterRace" was safe, as Alpha killed the Uchiha, the Uzumaki and the Senju families after taking power, all so that she could have a an easier time controlling the remaining population. In her "utopia", Alpha brainwashed countless people. When Chibaku criticizes her views, she has him tortured and {{mind rape}}d to near-death, in spite of him being a preteen. A massive, delusional, selfish hypocrite blaming everyone else for her own atrocities and mistakes, Alpha worsened her world's situation despite claiming with a motherly tone that she was improving it.
** In the "Ame-Verse", [[TheSocialDarwinist Yagura]], the Fourth Mizukage, [[AdaptationalVillainy sheds any redeeming qualities]] his canon counterpart had. Under the guise of "human progress", Yagura started in Kiri's Ninja Academy a graduation program consisting of students killing each other, in order to weed out the weak in favor of the strong. With his "Blood Police", Yagura kills any "weak" civilian, shinobi, clansman and started a FinalSolution to [[FantasticRacism the bloodline wielders]]' question. Allying with Ame's Hanzo, he chose to kill Nagato, Yahiko and Konan, not due to his alliance with Hanzo, but because he hated them, saying that he would have killed them even if he wasn't allied with Hanzo. After having killed Yahiko, he laughs [[KickTheDog at Konan while she cries over Yahiko's death, and mocks Hanzo when the latter regretted Yahiko.]] After being challenged with Hanzo in a fight by Kazama, the original Naruto, and Tsukiyom, Kazama's World's Madara Uchiha, he almost kills part of the audience during one of his attacks, attempted to [[ImAHumanitarian eat]] Kazama during the fight, and released the [[EldritchAbomination Sanbi]] from his body out of spite after his defeat, telling it to avenge him. Believing that Jinchuriki were the MasterRace, Yagura was accurately described as a an "all-around monster".

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* CompleteMonster: [[ANaziByAnyOtherName Yagura]] far outdoes his canon counterpart in heinousness and is easily the fic's most depraved villain. Seeing himself as "[[TheSocialDarwinist the ultimate predator]]," he [[HuntingTheMostDangerousGame hunts down]] and kills people [[ForTheEvulz for fun]], engages in [[ImAHumanitarian cannibalism]], whimsically commits genocide to create a new MasterRace, makes a sport out of [[BadBoss murdering his minions]] for the most minor reasons, and ultimately wants to turn the world into a dog-eat-dog hellhole to rule over as a [[EvilOverlord tyrannical warlord]].

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* CompleteMonster: [[ANaziByAnyOtherName Yagura]] far outdoes In a fanfiction where the main characters were traveling through the multiverse, several characters stood out by their sheer monstrosity:
** [[WouldHurtAChild Kenta Ayatsuri]] is a jōnin of Konoha, a [[VillainWithGoodPublicity philanthropist]], and founded an orphanage. However, Kenta turned the orphans into {{Tykebomb}}s prostitutes to fund his activities. Training Kamui, the Wave-Verse's Kakashi), Kenta turned him into another tyke-bomb. When Minato added Kamui to his own team, taking him away from Kenta, the latter contacted the enemy in order to sabotage Team Minato's mission to destroy the Kannabi Bridge, and to get rid of them, barring Kamui, leading to Obito's death. Fleeing Konoha after his crimes were discovered, he sent brainwashed children to massacre Konoha families, and, in the Wave-Verse, kidnaps a pregnant Rin. Killing the baby, Kenta tortured Rin to death and greeted Kamui with her corpse when he tried to rescue her. He also tried to recreate Kamui with other children, killing or wounding them in the process. In the ''Past Enemy Arc'', Kenta is [[EstablishingCharacterMoment introduced]] by removing an Hyuuga's eyes. He attempted to kidnap Rin and Kakashi's child, succeeding with Rin. When his subordinate suggested to kill Kamui, Kenta [[BadBoss killed him]]. When confronted by Kamui, [[NeverMyFault he blamed everyone but himself for his crimes]] and revealed that he committed all of this to turn Kakashi into his "masterpiece", and so that [[FameThroughInfamy he will be remembered]]. When Kamui replies that he will do everything to forget him, a spiteful Kenta attempts to kill him and Rin. Based on real-life sociopaths, Kenta was a monster in a human's skin.
** [[ControlFreak Alpha]] was a female Naruto clone created by a villainous Hashirama to serve as a weapon by stealing plans from the minds of enemies. Overthrowing Hashirama and becoming the world's ShadowDictator, Alpha, despite claiming that she was repairing the former's and Madara's atrocities, kept on committing them, continuing Hashirama's FinalSolution, exterminating 90% of the world's population. Not even the "MasterRace" was safe, as Alpha killed the Uchiha, the Uzumaki and the Senju families after taking power, all so that she could have a easier time controlling the remaining population. In her "utopia", Alpha brainwashed countless people. When Chibaku criticizes her views, she has him tortured and {{mind rape}}d to near-death, in spite of him being a preteen. A massive, delusional, selfish hypocrite blaming everyone else for her own atrocities and mistakes, Alpha worsened her world's situation despite claiming with a motherly tone that she was improving it.
** In the "Ame-Verse", [[TheSocialDarwinist Yagura]], the Fourth Mizukage, [[AdaptationalVillainy sheds any redeeming qualities]]
his canon counterpart in heinousness and is easily had. Under the fic's most depraved villain. Seeing himself as "[[TheSocialDarwinist guise of "human progress", Yagura started in Kiri's Ninja Academy a graduation program consisting of students killing each other, in order to weed out the ultimate predator]]," he [[HuntingTheMostDangerousGame hunts down]] and weak in favor of the strong. With his "Blood Police", Yagura kills people [[ForTheEvulz for fun]], engages any "weak" civilian, shinobi, clansman and started a FinalSolution to [[FantasticRacism the bloodline wielders]]' question. Allying with Ame's Hanzo, he chose to kill Nagato, Yahiko and Konan, not due to his alliance with Hanzo, but because he hated them, saying that he would have killed them even if he wasn't allied with Hanzo. After having killed Yahiko, he laughs [[KickTheDog at Konan while she cries over Yahiko's death, and mocks Hanzo when the latter regretted Yahiko.]] After being challenged with Hanzo in a fight by Kazama, the original Naruto, and Tsukiyom, Kazama's World's Madara Uchiha, he almost kills part of the audience during one of his attacks, attempted to [[ImAHumanitarian cannibalism]], whimsically commits genocide eat]] Kazama during the fight, and released the [[EldritchAbomination Sanbi]] from his body out of spite after his defeat, telling it to create a new avenge him. Believing that Jinchuriki were the MasterRace, makes Yagura was accurately described as a sport out of [[BadBoss murdering "all-around monster".
** In the "Road to Ninja" verse, [[Characters/NarutoObitoUchiha Obito Uchiha]] also lacked any qualities
his minions]] for canon counterpart had. After defeating the most minor reasons, Shinobi Alliance, Obito launched the Infinite Izanagi, killing his entire world and creating his own personal paradise, in which he created everyone the way he wanted them, and joined the Teikoku. When Kazama and Tsukiyomi entered the "Road to Ninja" world, Obito, being a psychologist, kept an eye on the former during their sessions. In spite of having already gained his personal paradise, Obito plans to spread the Infinite Izanagi through the multiverse, at the risk of destroying countless worlds just so that he can live his fantasies. He doesn't even care about his own creations, abusing his "favorite son" Menma, and destroying his world's Konoha and several of his inhabitants, seeing them as ultimately wants to turn replaceable, even his supposed LoveInterest, Rin. When defeated by Kazama, Obito released the world [[EldritchAbomination Ten-Tails]] from his body out of spite. Believing himself to be [[AGodAmI a god]], Obito was nothing more than a PsychopathicManchild who wanted to fulfill his wishes no matter what.
** [[BloodKnight The Warlord]], a villainous [[Characters/NarutoNarutoUzumaki Naruto Uzumaki]], came to be when Naruto, who became Hokage at age 16, kept abusing the Shadow Clones, turning
into a dog-eat-dog hellhole HiveMind. After being overthrown by Sasuke, Naruto came back to power, killed him, his critics and all of his friends but his wife Hinata, leaving her comatose. While successfully enforcing peace, Naruto let his subjects rebel out of boredom, so that he could crush them again. When they stopped fighting, he destroyed his world. Learning of the Multiverse, he created the [[Characters/EchoesTeikoku Teikoku]], in order to keep on [[MultiversalConqueror conquering worlds]], out of a love of destruction. Notable crimes includs destroying an entire planet ForTheEvulz; starting a body parts contest in another world; and forcing a world's kids to kill each other so that he can see the society the broken survivors will create. Concluding that free will doesn't exist--each multiverse leads to a different reality because of a different choice--he chose to [[OmnicidalManiac destroy everything]]. A liar, he promised Kazama and Madara that they would rule over as together, while he planned to kill Kazama [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness when he was no longer useful]]. When his ally Red Zetsu was defeated by the Arashi Clan, the Warlord tried to kill them by [[ColonyDrop dropping another Earth]], uncaring about the billions of deaths. Not above hurting children, he attempted to kill Naruko in a [[EvilOverlord tyrannical warlord]].rage. Upon his final defeat, he lost it and revealed that he killed billions of Narutos. [[TheDreaded Feared]] even by his own followers, the Warlord was by far the most heinous character of the entire work.

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* EnsembleDarkhorse: Manda (with about 20 lines of dialogue) and Orochimaru.

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* EnsembleDarkhorse: EnsembleDarkhorse:
** From the ANBU Verse,
Manda (with about 20 lines of dialogue) and Orochimaru.Good!Orochimaru. The latter for his [[SmugSuper sheer ego]] and the latter due to the differences with most Orochimarus.
** While Sasori isn't as important as many Narutos, he was, by chapter 24, the second most popular character.

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* ChaoticGood: Inari aka Naruto Uzumaki. He loves pranking, doing crazy things, explosions, and being a decent guy.



* CrazyAwesome: Manda once more. And once again is fabulously aware of it.



* [[HoYay Les Yay]]: Mikoto and Kushina. [[AuthorAppeal Almost every version of Mikoto shows an attraction to/unhealthy obsession with Kushina]] despite them only having one visible conversation, ranging from falling in love with Minato, to going {{Yandere}} on Kushina for getting married, to viewing her as a saint, to dating [[spoiler:an alternate version of her son]].

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* [[HoYay Les Yay]]: HoYay: Mikoto and Kushina. [[AuthorAppeal Almost every version of Mikoto shows an attraction to/unhealthy obsession with Kushina]] despite them only having one visible conversation, ranging from falling in love with Minato, to going {{Yandere}} on Kushina for getting married, to viewing her as a saint, to dating [[spoiler:an alternate version of her son]].
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* AngstWhatAngst: Karasu Uchiha. He doesn't seem to be bothered by his rather...well, let's call it [[{{Understatement}} complicated]] birth.

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* AngstWhatAngst: Karasu Uchiha. He doesn't seem to be bothered by his rather...well, let's call it [[{{Understatement}} complicated]] rather complicated birth.
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* TheScrappy: Naruko is becoming one. Mainly because she plays every ''Franchise/{{Naruto}}'' cliche the author is trying to {{Deconstruct}} straight.

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* MagnificentBastard:
** Each version of Madara has shades of this. Tsukuyomi manages to [[spoiler: turn TheHero into his willing apprentice]]. Amaterasu [[spoiler:was posthumously revealed to have]] manipulated the Uchiha, without lying. Izanami OutGambitted her world's Madara and [[GambitSpeedChess cons the ones from alternate dimensions]].
** Sasori, [[CrazyPrepared having seals and puppets for almost everything]], being a MadScientist with Kabuto as his lab assistant, [[BunnyEarsLawyer creating seals that block intangibility and organizing the Arashi clan and even threatening the Hokage]] at one point while still new to interdimensional travel.
* [[spoiler: MoralEventHorizon: Obito/Moon using the Infinite Izanagi.]]

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* MagnificentBastard:
** Each version of Madara has shades of this. Tsukuyomi manages to [[spoiler: turn TheHero into his willing apprentice]]. Amaterasu [[spoiler:was posthumously revealed to have]] manipulated the Uchiha, without lying. Izanami OutGambitted her world's Madara and [[GambitSpeedChess cons the ones from alternate dimensions]].
** Sasori, [[CrazyPrepared having seals and puppets for almost everything]], being a MadScientist with Kabuto as his lab assistant, [[BunnyEarsLawyer creating seals that block intangibility and organizing the Arashi clan and even threatening the Hokage]] at one point while still new to interdimensional travel.
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MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler: Obito/Moon using the Infinite Izanagi.]]
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* FridgeHorror: The Warlord's origins: [[spoiler: He's a Naruto that abused the shadow clones from day one, eventually becoming nothing more then a hive of clones due to memory overload.]] Meaning that [[spoiler: it is possible for any Naruto to become him should they abuse the shadow clone technique, and there might well be dozens of Naruto's if not more just waiting to become the [[CompleteMonster absolute]] [[OmnicidalManiac monster]] that we saw.]]
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* FridgeHorror: The Warlord's origins: [[spoiler: He's a Naruto that abused the shadow clones from day one, eventually becoming nothing more then a hive of clones due to memory overload.]] Meaning that [[spoiler: it is possible for any Naruto to become him should they abuse the shadow clone technique, meaning that there might well be dozens of Naruto's if not more just waiting to become the [[CompleteMonster absolute]] [[OmnicidalManiac monster]] that we saw.]]

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* FridgeHorror: The Warlord's origins: [[spoiler: He's a Naruto that abused the shadow clones from day one, eventually becoming nothing more then a hive of clones due to memory overload.]] Meaning that [[spoiler: it is possible for any Naruto to become him should they abuse the shadow clone technique, meaning that and there might well be dozens of Naruto's if not more just waiting to become the [[CompleteMonster absolute]] [[OmnicidalManiac monster]] that we saw.]]

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