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* BetterThanCanon:
** Given the huge positive reception it has received, almost every reader/reviewer agrees that ''Chronicles of the Siren War'' is a better adaptation of ''VideoGame/AzurLane'' compared to [[Anime/AzurLane the anime]].
** Many fans react positively towards Siren War's Ark Royal for being a genuine maternal figure rather than be like her ComedicLolicon counterpart in the game.
** Given the huge positive reception it has received, almost every reader/reviewer agrees that ''Chronicles of the Siren War'' is a better adaptation of ''VideoGame/AzurLane'' compared to [[Anime/AzurLane the anime]].
** Many fans react positively towards Siren War's Ark Royal for being a genuine maternal figure rather than be like her ComedicLolicon counterpart in the game.
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** Many fans reacts positively towards Siren War's Ark Royal for being a genuine maternal figure rather than be like her ComedicLolicon counterpart in the game.
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** Many fans reacts react positively towards Siren War's Ark Royal for being a genuine maternal figure rather than be like her ComedicLolicon counterpart in the game.
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* BetterThanCanon: Given the huge positive reception it has received, almost every reader/reviewer agrees that ''Chronicles of the Siren War'' is a better adaptation of ''VideoGame/AzurLane'' compared to [[Anime/AzurLane the anime]].
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* BetterThanCanon: BetterThanCanon:
** Given the huge positive reception it has received, almost every reader/reviewer agrees that ''Chronicles of the Siren War'' is a better adaptation of ''VideoGame/AzurLane'' compared to [[Anime/AzurLane theanime]].anime]].
** Many fans reacts positively towards Siren War's Ark Royal for being a genuine maternal figure rather than be like her ComedicLolicon counterpart in the game.
** Given the huge positive reception it has received, almost every reader/reviewer agrees that ''Chronicles of the Siren War'' is a better adaptation of ''VideoGame/AzurLane'' compared to [[Anime/AzurLane the
** Many fans reacts positively towards Siren War's Ark Royal for being a genuine maternal figure rather than be like her ComedicLolicon counterpart in the game.
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** The Iron Blood shipgirls got the worst treatment compared to their equals in the other factions. It would be amazing to see them stay sane.
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** The Iron Blood shipgirls got the worst treatment compared to their equals in the other factions. It would be amazing to see them stay sane.sane.
** Enterprise. She was meant to be the best of Eagle Union's carriers but that position make her a target of scorn and envy by her comrades. Then the Battle of Midway came and things went downhill from there, losing both her sisters and so many of her men and she was completely powerless to stop it.
** Same to Hammann as well, having witness the death of her older sister and later, her sister figure, Yorktown. It's no wonder why she left Eagle Union.
** Enterprise. She was meant to be the best of Eagle Union's carriers but that position make her a target of scorn and envy by her comrades. Then the Battle of Midway came and things went downhill from there, losing both her sisters and so many of her men and she was completely powerless to stop it.
** Same to Hammann as well, having witness the death of her older sister and later, her sister figure, Yorktown. It's no wonder why she left Eagle Union.
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* BetterThanCanon: Given the huge positive reception it has received, almost every reader/reviewer agrees that ''Chronicles of the Siren War'' is the ''superior adaptation'' of ''VideoGame/AzurLane'' compared to [[Anime/AzurLane the anime]].
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* BetterThanCanon: Given the huge positive reception it has received, almost every reader/reviewer agrees that ''Chronicles of the Siren War'' is the ''superior adaptation'' a better adaptation of ''VideoGame/AzurLane'' compared to [[Anime/AzurLane the anime]].
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* BetterThanCanon: Given the huge positive reception it has received, almost every reader/reviewer agrees that ''Chronicles of the Siren War'' is the "''superior adaptation''" ''superior adaptation'' of ''VideoGame/AzurLane'' compared to [[Anime/AzurLane the anime]].
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* BetterThanCanon: Given the huge positive reception it has received, almost every reader/reviewer agrees that ''Chronicles of the Siren War'' is the ''superior adaptation'' of ''VideoGame/AzurLane'' compared to [[Anime/AzurLane the anime]].
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* BetterThanCanon: Given the huge positive reception it has received, almost every reader/reviewer agrees that ''Chronicles of the Siren War'' is the ''superior adaptation'' "''superior adaptation''" of ''VideoGame/AzurLane'' compared to [[Anime/AzurLane the anime]].
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** Laffey's life before Thorson was horrible. Being mistreated, living in a cold room, and being devoid of companionship led her to drink to forget all this.
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** Laffey's life before she meets Thorson was horrible. Being mistreated, living in a cold room, and being devoid of companionship led her to drink to forget all this.
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* HilariousInHindsight: Akashi defects to Azur Lane in opposition against Akagi and Kaga. In [[Anime/AzurLane the anime]] (which was made later than the original posting of that chapter), her counterpart does the same action as well.
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* HilariousInHindsight: Akashi defects to Azur Lane in opposition against Akagi and Kaga. In [[Anime/AzurLane the anime]] (which was made later than the began airing on October, just six months after this chapter's original posting of that chapter), upload in late March), her counterpart does the same action as well.action.
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** Laffey's life is horrible. Being mistreated, living in a cold room, and being devoid of companionship led her to drink to forget all this.
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** Laffey's life is before Thorson was horrible. Being mistreated, living in a cold room, and being devoid of companionship led her to drink to forget all this.
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* BetterThanCanon: Given the huge positive reception it has received, almost every reader/reviewer agrees that ''Chronicles of the Siren War'' is the ''superior adaptation'' of VideoGame/AzurLane compared to [[Anime/AzurLane the anime]].
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* BetterThanCanon: Given the huge positive reception it has received, almost every reader/reviewer agrees that ''Chronicles of the Siren War'' is the ''superior adaptation'' of VideoGame/AzurLane ''VideoGame/AzurLane'' compared to [[Anime/AzurLane the anime]].
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** The Ironblood shipgirls got the worst treatment compared to their equals in the other factions. It would be amazing to see them stay sane.
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** The Ironblood Iron Blood shipgirls got the worst treatment compared to their equals in the other factions. It would be amazing to see them stay sane.
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* HilariousInHindsight: Akashi defects to Azur Lane in opposition against Akagi and Kaga. In the [[Anime/AzurLane anime]], which was made later than the original posting of that chapter, her counterpart does the same action as well.
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* HilariousInHindsight: Akashi defects to Azur Lane in opposition against Akagi and Kaga. In the [[Anime/AzurLane anime]], which the anime]] (which was made later than the original posting of that chapter, chapter), her counterpart does the same action as well.
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* BetterThanCanon: Given the huge positive reception it has received, almost every reader/reviewer agrees that "Chronicles of the Siren War" is the "''superior adaptation''" of Azur Lane compared to the anime.
* HilariousInHindsight: In "Chronicles of the Siren War", Akashi defects to Azur Lane in opposition against Akagi and Kaga. Later in the [[Anime/AzurLane anime]], her counterpart does the same action as well.
* ShipToShipCombat: Commander Thorson and his Shipgirls.
* HilariousInHindsight: In "Chronicles of the Siren War", Akashi defects to Azur Lane in opposition against Akagi and Kaga. Later in the [[Anime/AzurLane anime]], her counterpart does the same action as well.
* ShipToShipCombat: Commander Thorson and his Shipgirls.
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* BetterThanCanon: Given the huge positive reception it has received, almost every reader/reviewer agrees that "Chronicles ''Chronicles of the Siren War" War'' is the "''superior adaptation''" ''superior adaptation'' of Azur Lane VideoGame/AzurLane compared to [[Anime/AzurLane the anime.
anime]].
* HilariousInHindsight:In "Chronicles of the Siren War", Akashi defects to Azur Lane in opposition against Akagi and Kaga. Later in In the [[Anime/AzurLane anime]], which was made later than the original posting of that chapter, her counterpart does the same action as well.
* ShipToShipCombat: Commander Thorson and hisShipgirls.shipgirls.
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** Laffey's life is horrible. Being mistreated, living in a cold room and devoid of companionship and had to drink to forget all this.
** The Iron Blood Shipgirls got it the worse compared to their equals in the other factions. It would be amazing to see them stay sane.
** The Iron Blood Shipgirls got it the worse compared to their equals in the other factions. It would be amazing to see them stay sane.
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** Laffey's life is horrible. Being mistreated, living in a cold room room, and being devoid of companionship and had led her to drink to forget all this.
** TheIron Blood Shipgirls Ironblood shipgirls got it the worse worst treatment compared to their equals in the other factions. It would be amazing to see them stay sane.
** The
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* HilariousInHindsight: In "Chronicles of the Siren War", Akashi defects to Azur Lane in opposition against Akagi and Kaga. Later in the anime, [[Anime/AzurLane anime]], her counterpart does the same action as well.
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** The Shipgirls that didn't survive.
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** The Iron Blood Shipgirls that didn't survive.got it the worse compared to their equals in the other factions. It would be amazing to see them stay sane.
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** Laffey's life is horrible. Being mistreated, living in a cold room and devoid of companionship and had to drink to forget all this.
** The Shipgirls that didn't survive.
* TheWoobie:
** Laffey's life is horrible. Being mistreated, living in a cold room and devoid of companionship and had to drink to forget all this.
** The Shipgirls that didn't survive.
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* BetterThanCanon: Almost every reader/reviewer agrees that "Chronicles of the Siren War" is a superior adaptation of Azur Lane compared to the anime.
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* BetterThanCanon: Almost Given the huge positive reception it has received, almost every reader/reviewer agrees that "Chronicles of the Siren War" is a superior adaptation the "''superior adaptation''" of Azur Lane compared to the anime.
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* BetterThanCanon: Almost every reader/reviewer agrees that "Chronicles of the Siren War" is a superior adaptation of Azur Lane compared to the anime.
* ShipToShipCombat: Commander Thorson and his Shipgirls.
* ShipToShipCombat: Commander Thorson and his Shipgirls.
