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* CompleteMonster: ''The Land: Predators'': [[FauxAffablyEvil Heman]] is a seemingly-friendly man with a history in the "information-gathering business". [[ColdBloodedTorture Torturing]] main character Richter after using his mind powers to gain his trust, Heman reveals in the past he ordered the deaths of countless people and angrily murdered his own superior for denying his request to have a victim be put to death via crucifixion. Later gaining power over an army of monsters, Heman takes many prisoners; [[SexualExtortion forcing women to sleep with him for their lives]]; repeatedly killed one until her life force was completely drained; and threatens to kill all the men and women in Richter's village and sell the [[WouldHurtAChild children]] into slavery.
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* CompleteMonster: ''The Land: Predators'': [[FauxAffablyEvil Heman]] is a seemingly-friendly man with a history in the "information-gathering business". [[ColdBloodedTorture Torturing]] main character Richter after using his mind powers to gain his trust, Heman reveals in the past he ordered the deaths of countless people and angrily murdered his own superior for denying his request to have a victim be put to death via crucifixion.[[CruelAndUnusualDeath crucifixion]]. Later gaining power over an army of monsters, Heman takes many prisoners; [[SexualExtortion forcing women to sleep with him for their lives]]; repeatedly killed one until her life force was completely drained; and threatens to kill all the men and women in Richter's village and sell the [[WouldHurtAChild children]] into slavery.
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* CompleteMonster: ''The Land: Predators'': [[FauxAffablyEvil Heman]] is a seemingly-friendly man with a history in the "information-gathering business". [[ColdBloodedTorture Torturing]] main character Richter after using his mind powers to gain his trust, Heman reveals in the past he ordered the deaths of countless people and angrily murdered his own superior for denying his request to have a victim be put to death via crucifixion. Later gaining power over an army of monsters, Heman takes many prisoners; [[SexualExtortion forcing women to sleep with him for their lives]; repeatedly killed one until her life force was completely drained; and threatens to kill all the men and women in Richter's village and sell the [[WouldHurtAChild children]] into slavery.
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* CompleteMonster: ''The Land: Predators'': [[FauxAffablyEvil Heman]] is a seemingly-friendly man with a history in the "information-gathering business". [[ColdBloodedTorture Torturing]] main character Richter after using his mind powers to gain his trust, Heman reveals in the past he ordered the deaths of countless people and angrily murdered his own superior for denying his request to have a victim be put to death via crucifixion. Later gaining power over an army of monsters, Heman takes many prisoners; [[SexualExtortion forcing women to sleep with him for their lives]; lives]]; repeatedly killed one until her life force was completely drained; and threatens to kill all the men and women in Richter's village and sell the [[WouldHurtAChild children]] into slavery.
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* CompleteMonster: ''The Land: Predators'': [[FauxAffablyEvil Heman]] is a seemingly-friendly man with a history in the "information-gathering business". [[ColdBloodedTorture Torturing]] main character Richter after using his mind powers to gain his trust, Heman reveals in the past he ordered the deaths of countless people and angrily murdered his own superior for denying his request to have a victim be put to death via crucifixion. Later gaining power over an army of monsters, Heman takes many prisoners; [[SexualExtortion forcing women to sleep with him for their lives]; repeatedly killed one until her life force was completely drained; and threatens to kill all the men and women in Richter's village and sell the [[WouldHurtAChild children]] into slavery.
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* CompleteMonster: Heman in book 7. [[spoiler:A fellow human from Earth, in his old life he was in what he referred to as the "information-gathering business", and even back then he was obsessed with the idea of torture and mentions that he ordered the deaths of wives and children. Now in The Land, he lives out his sadistic fantasies, raping and torturing others and killing as many other chaos seeds as he can.]]
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: Book 8 takes a break from Richter's battles, struggles to survive, and character progression to.... spend an ''entire chapter'' describing his diarrhea in detail. It's as pointless and tedious as it sounds.
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* MoralEventHorizon: Richter considers his to be his treatment of [[spoiler:Heman]] after defeating him, healing and torturing him instead of just killing him; it is this that makes him realize that he may be a monster.
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* MoralEventHorizon: Richter considers his EngagingChevrons: Many of the sections dedicated to be his treatment of [[spoiler:Heman]] after defeating him, healing stats and torturing him instead progression, especially in the first book when a lot of just killing him; it is this that makes him realize that he may be a monster.was the same thing repeated with only minor changes.
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* CompleteMonster: Heman in book 7. [[spoiler:A fellow human from Earth, in his old life he was in what he referred to as the "information-gathering business", and even back then he was obsessed with the idea of torture and mentions that he ordered the deaths of wives and children. Now in The Land, he lives out his sadistic fantasies, raping and torturing others and killing as many other chaos seeds as he can.]]
* MoralEventHorizon: Richter considers his to be his treatment of [[spoiler:Heman]] after defeating him, healing and torturing him instead of just killing him; it is this that makes him realize that he may be a monster.
* MoralEventHorizon: Richter considers his to be his treatment of [[spoiler:Heman]] after defeating him, healing and torturing him instead of just killing him; it is this that makes him realize that he may be a monster.
