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* NoCommunitiesWereHarmed: The Holy Christian Kingdom Of North America's territory consists of the ex-Confederate States of America.
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* EscapistCharacter: Neal Foster.
* JumpingTheShark: Ever since Doove became a hardcore brony fan, the canon has now obsessed over pairings with chakats and ponies. While this may please MLP fans, the flow of content centered around purely Chakona space canon has slowed to a trickle, and it hurts the site's reputation.
* JumpingTheShark: Ever since Doove became a hardcore brony fan, the canon has now obsessed over pairings with chakats and ponies. While this may please MLP fans, the flow of content centered around purely Chakona space canon has slowed to a trickle, and it hurts the site's reputation.
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* JumpingTheShark: Ever since Doove became a hardcore brony fan, the canon has now obsessed over pairings with chakats and ponies. While this may please MLP fans, the flow of content centered around purely Chakona space canon has slowed to a trickle, and it hurts the site's reputation.
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* NoCommunitiesWereHarmed: The Holy Christian Kingdom Of North America's territory consists of the ex-Confederate States of America.
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* JumpingTheShark: Ever since Doove became a hardcore brony fan, the canon has now obsessed over pairings with chakats and ponies. While this may please MLP fans, the flow of content centered around purely Chakona space canon has slowed to a trickle, and it hurts the site's reputation.
* NoCommunitiesWereHarmed: The Holy Christian Kingdom Of North America's territory consists of the ex-Confederate States of America.
* NoCommunitiesWereHarmed: The Holy Christian Kingdom Of North America's territory consists of the ex-Confederate States of America.
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* NoCommunitiesWereHarmed: The Holy Christian Kingdom Of North America's territory consists of the ex-Confederate States of America.
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: Leanna, Trina, Forestwalker, and Kris dressed as Sailor Moon, Sailor Mars, Sailor Jupiter, and Tuxedo Mask respectively.
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%%* SugarWiki/FunnyMoments: Leanna, Trina, Forestwalker, and Kris dressed as Sailor Moon, Sailor Mars, Sailor Jupiter, and Tuxedo Mask respectively.
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* TearJerker: [[spoiler: Keith Walker and Dawnfire's deaths]].
* VillainDecay: Over time, members of the "Humans First" movement have become either incredibly stupid with their actions and plans or rely on [[GambitRoulette convoluted plots]]. One wonders why they don't just place a few car bombs, like normal terrorists.
** [[ComicallyMissingThePoint Because they have PTVs instead of cars.]]
** They do ''occasionally'' commit acts of terrorism; cf. the stories ''Near Enough is Never Good Enough'' (roadside bomb used in backstory), ''Transformations'' (Airport-bomb [[RecycledInSPACE in a Teleporter]]), and ''Retribution'' (in which how do we know they didn't literally use carbombs).
* VillainDecay: Over time, members of the "Humans First" movement have become either incredibly stupid with their actions and plans or rely on [[GambitRoulette convoluted plots]]. One wonders why they don't just place a few car bombs, like normal terrorists.
** [[ComicallyMissingThePoint Because they have PTVs instead of cars.]]
** They do ''occasionally'' commit acts of terrorism; cf. the stories ''Near Enough is Never Good Enough'' (roadside bomb used in backstory), ''Transformations'' (Airport-bomb [[RecycledInSPACE in a Teleporter]]), and ''Retribution'' (in which how do we know they didn't literally use carbombs).
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* TearJerker: [[spoiler: Keith Walker and Dawnfire's deaths]]. \n* VillainDecay: Over time, members of the "Humans First" movement have become either incredibly stupid with their actions and plans or rely on [[GambitRoulette convoluted plots]]. One wonders why they don't just place a few car bombs, like normal terrorists. \n** [[ComicallyMissingThePoint Because they have PTVs instead of cars.]]\n** They do ''occasionally'' commit acts of terrorism; cf. the stories ''Near Enough is Never Good Enough'' (roadside bomb used in backstory), ''Transformations'' (Airport-bomb [[RecycledInSPACE in a Teleporter]]), and ''Retribution'' (in which how do we know they didn't literally use carbombs).
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* {{Squick}}: Expect godly amounts of this. Other then the fact that the chakats are hermaphrodites, expect to run into incest ([[spoiler: Forestwalker and Goldfur, Forestwalker and Quickpaw]]), sexual slavery ([[spoiler:Leanna, various sex slaves in one story, capture, Garrek's Aunt]], and some questionable parenting practices (thankfully off screen).
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* {{Squick}}: Expect godly amounts of this. Other then than the fact that the chakats are hermaphrodites, expect to run into incest ([[spoiler: Forestwalker and Goldfur, Forestwalker and Quickpaw]]), sexual slavery ([[spoiler:Leanna, various sex slaves in one story, capture, Garrek's Aunt]], and some questionable parenting practices (thankfully off screen).
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** They do ''occasionally'' commit acts of terrorism; cf. the stories ''Near Enough is Never Good Enough'' (Roadside Bomb used in backstory), ''Transformations'' (Airport-bomb [[RecycledInSPACE in a Teleporter]]), and ''Retribution'' (in which how do we know they didn't literally use carbombs).
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** They do ''occasionally'' commit acts of terrorism; cf. the stories ''Near Enough is Never Good Enough'' (Roadside Bomb (roadside bomb used in backstory), ''Transformations'' (Airport-bomb [[RecycledInSPACE in a Teleporter]]), and ''Retribution'' (in which how do we know they didn't literally use carbombs).
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* MarySue / MartyStu:
** Given that Doove's Internet handle is "Goldfur," the same name as one of the characters in "Forest Tales", well?
** That particular character is an AuthorAvatar, but not particularly Suetiful. However, there ''are'' some {{Canon Sue}}s in the series (and ''especially'' in contributor stories).
** Allen Fessler's character, Neal Foster leans toward this.
** Given that Doove's Internet handle is "Goldfur," the same name as one of the characters in "Forest Tales", well?
** That particular character is an AuthorAvatar, but not particularly Suetiful. However, there ''are'' some {{Canon Sue}}s in the series (and ''especially'' in contributor stories).
** Allen Fessler's character, Neal Foster leans toward this.
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the link must cite the implications.
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* UnfortunateImplications: [[http://www.chakatsden.com/chakat/Icons/UNTWG-World-Map.jpg According to the official map]] The southeastern United States has turned into the "Holy Christian Kingdom of North America" and the MiddleEast has been nuked off the map. Any takers on how the author views religion?
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* CompleteMonster: Leanna Fennec's creator/master, actually described as "possibly one of the worst monsters the human race has ever produced|", though we aren't told exactly what the "sick additions" were that prompted that comment, still what we do know definitely qualifies him as a monster.
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* EscapistCharacter: Neal Foster ''is'' this.
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* EscapistCharacter: Neal Foster ''is'' this.Foster.
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** A) Because they have [=PTVs=] instead of cars,
** B) They probably do not think of themselves as villains, and,
** C) [[FailedASpotCheck In case you had not noticed]], some of them do in fact commit acts of terrorism; cf. the stories ''Near Enough is Never Good Enough'' (Roadside Bomb used in backstory), ''Transformations'' (Airport-bomb [[RecycledInSPACE in a Teleporter]]), and ''Retribution'' (in which how do we know they didn't literally use carbombs).
** B) They probably do not think of themselves as villains, and,
** C) [[FailedASpotCheck In case you had not noticed]], some of them do in fact commit acts of terrorism; cf. the stories ''Near Enough is Never Good Enough'' (Roadside Bomb used in backstory), ''Transformations'' (Airport-bomb [[RecycledInSPACE in a Teleporter]]), and ''Retribution'' (in which how do we know they didn't literally use carbombs).
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** A) [[ComicallyMissingThePoint Because they have [=PTVs=] PTVs instead of cars,
cars.]]
**B) They probably do not think of themselves as villains, and,
** C) [[FailedASpotCheck In case you had not noticed]], some of them do in fact''occasionally'' commit acts of terrorism; cf. the stories ''Near Enough is Never Good Enough'' (Roadside Bomb used in backstory), ''Transformations'' (Airport-bomb [[RecycledInSPACE in a Teleporter]]), and ''Retribution'' (in which how do we know they didn't literally use carbombs).
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** C) [[FailedASpotCheck In case you had not noticed]], some of them do in fact
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* EscapistCharacter: Neal Foster ''is'' this.
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* VillainDecay: Over time, members of the "Humans First" movement have become either incredibly stupid with their actions and plans or rely on convoluted [[XanatosGambit plots]]. One wonders why they don't just place a few car bombs, like normal terrorists.
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* VillainDecay: Over time, members of the "Humans First" movement have become either incredibly stupid with their actions and plans or rely on [[GambitRoulette convoluted [[XanatosGambit plots]]. One wonders why they don't just place a few car bombs, like normal terrorists.
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* CompleteMonster: Leanna Fennec's creator/master, actually described as "possibly one of the worst monsters the human race has ever produced|", though we aren't told exactly what the "sick additions" were that prompted that comment, still what we do know definitely qualifies him as a monster.
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: Leanna, Trina, Forestwalker, and Kris dressed as Sailor Moon, Sailor Mars, Sailor Jupiter, and Tuxedo Mask respectively.
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* UnfortunateImplications: [[http://www.chakatsden.com/chakat/Icons/UNTWG-World-Map.jpg According to the official map]] The United States South has turned into the "Holy Christian Kingdom of North America" and the MiddleEast had been nuked off the map. Any takers on how the author views religion?
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* UnfortunateImplications: [[http://www.chakatsden.com/chakat/Icons/UNTWG-World-Map.jpg According to the official map]] The southeastern United States South has turned into the "Holy Christian Kingdom of North America" and the MiddleEast had has been nuked off the map. Any takers on how the author views religion?
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* EasySexChange: Skunktaurs. They are described as being [[{{Hermaphrodite}} hermaphrodites]], but they are only one sex at a time, so... Also at least one other herm character.
* JediMindTrick: Several have been seen, but they are very subtly written, and none of them are {{lampshaded}} in the slightest.
* MarySue / MartyStu: Given that Doove's Internet handle is "Goldfur," the same name as one of the characters in "Forest Tales", well?
* JediMindTrick: Several have been seen, but they are very subtly written, and none of them are {{lampshaded}} in the slightest.
* MarySue / MartyStu: Given that Doove's Internet handle is "Goldfur," the same name as one of the characters in "Forest Tales", well?
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* JediMindTrick: Several have been seen, but they are very subtly written, and none of them are {{lampshaded}} in
* MarySue /
** Given that Doove's Internet handle is "Goldfur," the same name as one of the characters in "Forest Tales", well?
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* MarySue: Given that Doove's Internet handle is "Goldfur," the same name as one of the characters in "Forest Tales", well?
** That particular character is an AuthorAvatar, but not particularly Suetiful. However, there ''are'' some {{Canon Sue}}s in the series (and ''especially'' in contributor stories).
** That particular character is an AuthorAvatar, but not particularly Suetiful. However, there ''are'' some {{Canon Sue}}s in the series (and ''especially'' in contributor stories).
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* MarySue: MarySue / MartyStu: Given that Doove's Internet handle is "Goldfur," the same name as one of the characters in "Forest Tales", well?
** That particular character is an AuthorAvatar, but not particularly Suetiful. However, there ''are'' some {{Canon Sue}}s in the series (and ''especially'' in contributor stories).
** Allen Fessler's character, Neal Foster leans toward this.
** That particular character is an AuthorAvatar, but not particularly Suetiful. However, there ''are'' some {{Canon Sue}}s in the series (and ''especially'' in contributor stories).
** Allen Fessler's character, Neal Foster leans toward this.
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jedi mind trick?
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* JediMindTrick: Several have been seen, but they are very subtly written, and none of them are {{lampshaded}} in the slightest.
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* YourMileageMayVary: Exceptionally. Primarily, the level of {{Squick}} will make your mileage vary, but secondly, because the story universe is made up of different authors writing, and each with a varying degree of skill and ability, one story may be very, very good, and the next one will be crap.