History YMMV / BreakingTheDeal

* HilariousInHindsight: In this fanfic, Mephisto stole the marriage between Peter and MJ because Spider-Man's future daughter will be the one who finally beat him. In 2021, we discover in ComicBook/TheAmazingSpiderManNickSpencer [[spoiler:the real reason of ''One More Day'': Mephisto is trying to ensure that Peter and Mary Jane's daughter, who is Spider-Girl in alternate timelines and is crucial to his defeat, is never born]].

* BetterThanCanon: Hard to be ''worse'', really.

* HilariousInHindsight: In this fanfic, mephiso stole the marriage between peter and MJ because Spider-Man's future daughter will be the one who finally beat him. In 2021, we discover in ComicBook/TheAmazingSpiderManNickSpencer [[spoiler:the real reason of One More Day: mephisto is trying to ensure that peter and mary jane's daughter, who is Spider-Girl in alternate timelines and is crucial to his defeat, is never born]]

* HilariousInHindsight: In this fanfic, mephiso stole the marriage between peter and MJ because Spider-Man's future daughter will be the one who finally beat him. In 2021, we discover in ComicBook/TheAmazingSpiderManNickSpencer [[ spoiler:the real reason of One More Day: mephisto is trying to ensure that peter and mary jane's daughter, who is Spider-Girl in alternate timelines and is crucial to his defeat, is never born]]

* CompleteMonster: [[{{Mephistopheles}} Mephisto]], having manipulated Peter Parker and Mary Jane Watson into sacrificing their marriage in order to save Aunt May's life, uses it to kickstart his plans for multiversal domination. Using the marriage's sacrifice to receive a power boost--with the added benefit of wiping Spider-Man's future daughter from existence--Mephisto begins laying waste to various dimensions and either slaughtering their inhabitants, or enslaving them with painful magical growths. When he makes his move on the Earth, he unleashes his demonic minions on New York City, where they waste no time in killing civilians while he has Mary Jane whisked away to his lair, where he keeps her as a slave bound by barbed ropes. Not just one for merely deceiving others into making [[DealWithTheDevil deals that will ruin their lives and those of others]], Mephisto actively [[CardCarryingVillain revels in his manipulative behavior]], fondly reminiscing about tricking ComicBook/GhostRider into making a deal that would kill his father figure, and [[KickTheDog gleefully crushing Mary Jane's spirit]] with the knowledge of what their disastrous bargain led to.

* CompleteMonster: [[BigBad Mephisto]], having manipulated Peter Parker and Mary Jane Watson into sacrificing their marriage in order to save Aunt May's life, uses it to kickstart his plans for multiversal domination. Using the marriage's sacrifice to receive a power boost--with the added benefit of wiping Spider-Man's future daughter from existence--Mephisto begins laying waste to various dimensions and either slaughtering their inhabitants, or enslaving them with painful magical growths. When he makes his move on the Earth, he unleashes his demonic minions on New York City, where they waste no time in killing civilians while he has Mary Jane whisked away to his lair, where he keeps her as a slave bound by barbed ropes. Not just one for merely deceiving others into making [[DealWithTheDevil deals that will ruin their lives and those of others]], Mephisto actively [[CardCarryingVillain revels in his manipulative behavior]], fondly reminiscing about tricking ComicBook/GhostRider into making a deal that would kill his father figure, and [[KickTheDog gleefully crushing Mary Jane's spirit]] with the knowledge of what their disastrous bargain led to.

* CompleteMonster: ComicBook/{{Mephisto}}, having manipulated Peter Parker and Mary Jane Watson into sacrificing their marriage in order to save Aunt May's life, uses it to kickstart his plans for multiversal domination. Using the marriage's sacrifice to receive a power boost--with the added benefit of wiping Spider-Man's future daughter from existence--Mephisto begins laying waste to various dimensions and either slaughtering their inhabitants, or enslaving them with painful magical growths. When he makes his move on the Earth, he unleashes his demonic minions on New York City, where they waste no time in killing civilians while he has Mary Jane whisked away to his lair, where he keeps her as a slave bound by barbed ropes. Not just one for merely deceiving others into making [[DealWithTheDevil deals that will ruin their lives and those of others]], Mephisto actively [[CardCarryingVillain revels in his manipulative behavior]], fondly reminiscing about tricking ComicBook/GhostRider into making a deal that would kill his father figure, and [[KickTheDog gleefully crushing Mary Jane's spirit]] with the knowledge of what their disastrous bargain led to.

* CompleteMonster: ComicBook/{{Mephisto}}, having manipulated Peter Parker and Mary Jane Watson into sacrificing their marriage in order to save Aunt May's life, uses it to kickstart his plans for multiversal domination. Using the marriage's sacrifice to receive a power boost--with the added benefit of wiping Spider-Man's future daughter from existence--Mephisto begins laying waste to various dimensions and either slaughtering their inhabitants, or enslaving them with painful magical growths. When he makes his move on the Earth, he unleashes his demonic minions on New York City, where they waste no time in killing civilians while he has Mary Jane whisked away to his lair, where he keeps her as a slave bound by barbed ropes. Not just one for merely deceiving others into making [[DealWithTheDevil deals that will ruin their lives and those of others]], Mephisto actively [[CardCarryingVillain revels in his manipulative behavior]], fondly reminiscing about tricking ComcBook/GhostRider into making a deal that would kill his father figure, and [[KickTheDog gleefully crushing Mary Jane's spirit]] with the knowledge of what their disastrous bargain led to.

* MostWonderfulSound: Spidey is about to die to the hands of the Cancerverse versions of ComicBook/IronMan, ComicBook/{{Cyclops}} and others, and has fully accepted this... [[BigDamnHeroes and then,]] [[ComicBook/{{Wolverine}} ''snikt''!]]

* MostWonderfulSound: Spidey is about to die to the hands of the Cancerverse versions of Iron Man, Cyclops and others, and has fully accepted this... [[BigDamnHeroes and then,]] [[{{Wolverine}} ''snikt''!]]

* BetterThanCanon

* ContinuityPorn: One of the [[WordOfGod author's]] specialties. For example: N'astirh, Rom, and even Dr. Bong get thrown into the mix.

* TakeThat: This story is a complete TakeThat against OneMoreDay. There is also a subtle one towards SupermanII, when Spiderman comments that super-ventriloquism would be a stupid power to have.

-->'''Peter''': "I said, 'SHUT THE HELL UP, YOU USELESS IDIOT'"

* MoralEventHorizon: Peter considers the deal that MJ and he made with Mephisto to be this, even though [[spoiler:he finds out that Mephisto had directly intervened to warp their minds and prevent their allies and enemies from giving them a chance to save Aunt May, despite their being many ways that she could have still lived.]]