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* CompleteMonster: [[spoiler: Beldam.]] Not only does she pick on and abuse Vivian for ''every'' little thing that goes wrong and give Vivian mental damage in the form of low confidence and self-esteem, but ''then'' she [[spoiler: plans to take over the world and kill Vivian and her friends. She makes Vivian believe that her friends were just using her! When confronted about it, she just says, "You say that as if it's a ''bad'' thing." Yeesh...]]
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* CompleteMonster: [[spoiler: Beldam.]] Not only does she pick on and abuse Vivian for ''every'' little thing that goes wrong and give Vivian mental damage in the form of low confidence and self-esteem, but ''then'' she [[spoiler: plans to take over the world and kill Vivian and her friends. She makes Vivian believe that her friends were just using her! When confronted about it, she just says, "You say that as if it's a ''bad'' thing." Yikes!]]
* NightmareFuel: Koops' nightmare at the beginning if chapter 8. [[spoiler: Later becomes a plot point.]]
* NightmareFuel: Koops' nightmare at the beginning if chapter 8. [[spoiler: Later becomes a plot point.]]
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* CompleteMonster: [[spoiler: Beldam.]] Not only does she pick on and abuse Vivian for ''every'' little thing that goes wrong and give Vivian mental damage in the form of low confidence and self-esteem, but ''then'' she [[spoiler: plans to take over the world and kill Vivian and her friends. She makes Vivian believe that her friends were just using her! When confronted about it, she just says, "You say that as if it's a ''bad'' thing." Yikes!]]
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* NightmareFuel: Koops' nightmare at the beginningif of chapter 8. [[spoiler: Later becomes a plot point.]]
* NightmareFuel: Koops' nightmare at the beginning
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* CompleteMonster: [[spoiler: Beldam.]]]] Not only does she pick on and abuse Vivian for ''every'' little thing that goes wrong and give Vivian mental damage in the form of low confidence and self-esteem, but ''then'' she [[spoiler: plans to take over the world and kill Vivian and her friends. She makes Vivian believe that her friends were just using her! When confronted about it, she just says, "You say that as if it's a ''bad'' thing." Yikes!]]
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* TearJerker: If it involves Vivian, then nine times out of ten, it will count as this. Prime examples: Bedlam's abuse of her; Waffles' distrust of her; her getting poisoned; [[spoiler: her sister Lillian being murdered by Bedlam; her being trapped in the desert; Bedlam tricking her into thinking Koops didn't love her; and, the crowner: Koops being forced to ''kill her'' to stop Bedlam]]. [[PrecisionFStrike Jesus fucking christ.]]
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* TearJerker: If it involves Vivian, then nine times out of ten, it will count as this. Prime examples: Bedlam's abuse of her; Waffles' distrust of her; her getting poisoned; [[spoiler: her sister Lillian being murdered killed by Bedlam; her being trapped in the desert; Bedlam tricking her into thinking Koops didn't love her; and, the crowner: Koops being forced to ''kill her'' to stop Bedlam]]. [[PrecisionFStrike Jesus fucking christ.]]
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* BrokenBase: Some readers think Vivian's status as TheWoobie helps them sympathise with her better and makes for a deeper plot. Other readers think it just makes her seem helpless.
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* TearJerker: If it involves Vivian, then nine times out of ten, it will count as this. Prime examples: Bedlam's abuse of her; Waffles' distrust of her; her getting poisoned; [[spoiler: her sister Lillian being murdered by Bedlam; her being trapped in the desert; Bedlam tricking her into thinking Koops didn't love her; and, the crowner: Koops being forced to ''kill her'' to stop Bedlam]]. [[PrecisionFStrike Jesus fucking christ.]]
* {{Wangst}}: Some readers find the story chock full of this.
* {{Wangst}}: Some readers find the story chock full of this.
