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* JerkassWoobie: Madame Nightshade. [[spoiler: And eventually, Shell.]]
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: "Passing Word", in Eljunbyro. Luna brings in Scootaloo for a chat over her connection with Rainbow.
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: "Passing Word", in Eljunbyro. Luna brings in Scootaloo for a chat over her connection with Rainbow. Scootaloo has gotten her cutie mark in the meantime and her voice has changed so much that Rainbow doesn't recognize her at first, but they're both overjoyed to hear each other, and Rainbow tells Scootaloo that she loves her.
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-->'''Belle''': She's adorable!
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After they meet properly, Belle starts acting ''very'' towards Rainbow Dash, treating her almost the same as she does her own husband. Reading it without context, it'd be easy to see it as Belle being in a polyamorous relationship with both Pilate and Rainbow.
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-->'''Belle''':around?\\
'''Belle''': She's adorable!
-->'''Zenith''': Why do you even follow this bonehead
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'''Belle''': She's adorable!
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* EvilIsCool: Enforcer Shell, ''so much...'' giving the badass Rainbow Dash a tough fight every time only helps matters.
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* EvilIsCool: Enforcer Shell, ''so much...'' Shell... giving the badass Rainbow Dash a tough fight every time only helps matters.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Fact: Griffons exist in the actual show. Fact: They know about Equestria and thus know about pegasi and thus know about Rainbow Dash and likely how to deal with them and her. Fact: Griffons ''barely'' get mentioned in this story. Yes, even ''[[http://mlp.wikia.com/wiki/Gilda that]]'' griffon.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Fact: Griffons exist in the actual show. Fact: They know about Equestria and thus know about pegasi and thus know about Rainbow Dash and likely how to deal with them and her. Fact: Griffons ''barely'' get mentioned in this story. Yes, even ''[[http://mlp.wikia.com/wiki/Gilda that]]'' griffon.
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* SceneryPorn: The "In-between" chapters, especially the first few chapters of ''Austraeoh'', are filled with absolutely beautiful landscape descriptions as Rainbow simply flies eastward. Some might even consider them the best part of the story
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* EvilIsCool: Enforcer Shell, ''so much...'' Giving the badass Rainbow Dash a tough fight every time only helps matters.
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* EvilIsCool: Enforcer Shell, ''so much...'' Giving giving the badass Rainbow Dash a tough fight every time only helps matters.
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* PromotedFanboy: Just about every main character, besides Rainbow Dash, is drawn from regular commentor's names on the story's FIMFiction page. Examples are Pilate, Roarke, Zaid, Axan, etc.
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* PromotedFanboy: Just about every main character, besides Rainbow Dash, is drawn from regular commentor's names on the story's FIMFiction [=FIMFiction=] page. Examples are Pilate, Roarke, Zaid, Axan, etc.
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* EvilIsCool: Enforcer Shell, ''so much...'' Giving the {{Badass}} badass Rainbow Dash a tough fight every time only helps matters.
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* HilariousInHindsight: Look no further than [[https://gyazo.com/1728fdbeafc7a1db28a4c510416f62b8 the very first comment on the story's first installment]]. "A certain lack of plot" you say...
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* HilariousInHindsight: Look no further than [[https://gyazo.com/1728fdbeafc7a1db28a4c510416f62b8 [[https://i.gyazo.com/1728fdbeafc7a1db28a4c510416f62b8.png the very first comment on the story's first installment]]. "A certain lack of plot" you say...
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* HarsherInHindsight: Floydien's eccentric personality and manner of speaking are played for laughs initially. Also, there's a humorous scene in ''Innavedr'' where we learn his [[spoiler: antlers are detachable]]. Much later, in ''Yaerfaerda'', we learn that [[spoiler: he used to speak normally before being tortured by Nightshade, which also apparently caused him to lose most of his memories. And there is a disturbing flashback to Nightshade's ponies beginning to saw his antlers off.]]
* JerkassWoobie: Madame Nightshade. [[spoiler: And eventually, Shell.]]
* JerkassWoobie: Madame Nightshade. [[spoiler: And eventually, Shell.]]
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Fact: Griffons exist in the actual show. Fact: They know about Equestria and thus know about pegasi and thus know about Rainbow Dash and likely how to deal with them and her. Fact: Griffons ''barely'' get mentioned in this story. Yes, even ''[[http://mlp.wikia.com/wiki/Gilda that]]'' griffon.
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Fact: Griffons exist in the actual show. Fact: They know about Equestria and thus know about pegasi and thus know about Rainbow Dash and likely how to deal with them and her. Fact: Griffons ''barely'' get mentioned in this story. Yes, even ''[[http://mlp.wikia.com/wiki/Gilda that]]'' griffon.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Fact: Griffons exist in the actual show. Fact: They know about Equestria and thus know about pegasi and thus know about Rainbow Dash and likely how to deal with them and her. Fact: Griffons ''barely'' get mentioned in this story. Yes, even ''[[http://mlp.wikia.com/wiki/Gilda that]]'' griffon.
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* MoarlEventHorizon: [[spoiler: Shell killing the ponies of Kera's home town. It's what makes Rainbow Dash finally kill him.]]
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* MoarlEventHorizon: MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler: Shell killing the ponies of Kera's home town. It's what makes Rainbow Dash finally kill him.]]
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* MoarlEventHorizion: [[spoiler: Shell killing the ponies of Kera's home town. It's what makes Rainbow Dash finally kill him.]]
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* MoarlEventHorizion: MoarlEventHorizon: [[spoiler: Shell killing the ponies of Kera's home town. It's what makes Rainbow Dash finally kill him.]]
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* AlasPoorVillain: [[spoiler: It's pretty easy to feel sorry for Shell in his final moments. Even Rainbow Dash seems to regret killing him to some extent. The same goes for Nightshade.]]
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Fact: Griffons exist in the actual show. Fact: They know about Equestria and thus know about pegasi and thus know about Rainbow Dash and likely how to deal with them and her. Fact: Griffons only ''barely'' get mentioned ''once'' in this story.
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* TheyWastedAPerfictlyGoodPlot: Fact: Griffons exist in the actual show. Fact: They know about Equestria and thus know about pegasi and thus know about Rainbow Dash and likely how to deal with them and her. Fact: Griffons don't even get ''mentioned'' in this story.
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* MissedMomentOfAwesome: Fact: Griffons exist in the actual show. Fact: They know about Equestria and thus know about pegasi and thus know about Rainbow Dash and likely how to deal with them and her. Fact: Griffons don't even get ''mentioned'' in this story.
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* MissedMomentOfAwesome: TheyWastedAPerfictlyGoodPlot: Fact: Griffons exist in the actual show. Fact: They know about Equestria and thus know about pegasi and thus know about Rainbow Dash and likely how to deal with them and her. Fact: Griffons don't even get ''mentioned'' in this story.
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* MissedMomentOfAwesome: Fact: Griffons exist in the actual show. Fact: They know about Equestria and thus know about pegasi and thus know about Rainbow Dash and likely how to deal with them.them and her. Fact: Griffons don't even get ''mentioned'' in this story.
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* JerkassWoobie: Madame Nightshade. [[spoiler: And eventually, Shell.]]
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* CompleteMonster: Prime Enforcer Shell. He literally has ZERO redeeming qualities.
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* CompleteMonster: Prime Enforcer Shell. He literally has ZERO redeeming qualities.
* EvilIsCool: Enforcer Shell, ''so much...'' Giving the {{Badass}} Rainbow Dash a tough fight every time only helps matters.
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