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** The heartwarming [[spoiler: reunion between the Murry parents is unusually punctuated with dad taking time to say something about mom's calculations]]. The Narm comes in when this isn't treated like a MomentKiller.
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** The heartwarming [[spoiler: reunion [[spoiler:reunion between the Murry parents is unusually punctuated with dad Dad taking time to say something about mom's Mom's calculations]]. The Narm comes in when this isn't treated like a MomentKiller.
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** Mrs Murry too. She acts as though Meg hurting Veronica was 100% unjustified and not acknowledging that while Meg probably shouldn't have gotten violent, she was still being harassed in ways that crossed a line. Mrs Murry acts as though Veronica was not in the wrong at all or tries to comfort her daughter for getting such abuse. She also snaps at Meg for "using dad" when Meg highlights [[NeverMyFault how unfair she's being.]]
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** Mrs Murry too. She acts as though Meg hurting Veronica was 100% unjustified and not acknowledging that while Meg probably shouldn't have gotten violent, she was still being harassed in ways that crossed a line. Mrs Murry acts as though Veronica was not in the wrong at all or tries and doesn't try to comfort her daughter for getting such abuse. She also snaps at Meg for "using dad" when Meg highlights [[NeverMyFault how unfair she's being.]]
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* EndingFatigue: [[spoiler: After beating the IT, Meg gets a brief DisneyDeath before reuniting with Charles Wallace. Then a speech from the three Ms Ws summing things up. Then a moment with her father, which is essentially a repeat of the scene where they reunited with him earlier. Then the reunion between her parents. Then a little wrap-up between Meg and Calvin, followed by the actual ending with Meg hugging Charles Wallace]]. All story beats that should be there, the film seems to take longer than necessary to wrap it all up.
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* EndingFatigue: [[spoiler: After beating the IT, Meg gets a brief DisneyDeath before reuniting with Charles Wallace. Then a speech from the three Ms Mrs Ws summing things up. Then a moment with her father, which is essentially a repeat of the scene where they reunited with him earlier. Then the reunion between her parents. Then a little wrap-up between Meg and Calvin, followed by the actual ending with Meg hugging Charles Wallace]]. All story beats that should be there, the film seems to take longer than necessary to wrap it all up.
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** The scene where the upbeat hip hop song "Magic" by Sia suddenly starts playing in the background, especially since creates a ridiculous instance of MoodWhiplash in what follows.
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** The scene where the upbeat hip hop pop song "Magic" by Sia Music/{{Sia}} suddenly starts playing in the background, especially since creates a ridiculous instance of MoodWhiplash in what follows.
