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* The institute teaching Summer A knew Unami is one of the most openly sadistic teachers, verbally and physically abusive to candidates, especially harassing the female candidates, to the point said candidates made ''and attempted to carry out'' death-threats against him.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' The teachers would choose someone else to be the team leader, preferably somebody the candidates wouldn't try to kill on sight, and who wouldn't arrogantly provoke them to try the moment they woke up.\\
'''Instead:''' Unami is chosen to be the leader and put into cryo-stasis, shortly after one of the candidates he abused lashed out at him.\\
'''The Result:''' Look at Unami's entry below.
'''You'd Expect:''' The teachers would choose someone else to be the team leader, preferably somebody the candidates wouldn't try to kill on sight, and who wouldn't arrogantly provoke them to try the moment they woke up.\\
'''Instead:''' Unami is chosen to be the leader and put into cryo-stasis, shortly after one of the candidates he abused lashed out at him.\\
'''The Result:''' Look at Unami's entry below.
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He would've done it anyway.
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* When Hana's parentage is revealed to Team Summer A, Ango in particular is disgusted that [[SinkOrSwimMentor Takashi-sensei's]] daughter was made part of the project and he decides that Hana needs to work extra hard, since she 'cheated' her way her.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Hana to try to ''not'' glare at Ango every time their eyes meet and (subconsciously) goading him.\\
'''Instead:''' Hana ''does'' glare at Ango every time and keeps up a very stubborn and infuriating stance to him.\\
'''The Result:''' She pisses him off so much that he tries to [[AttemptedRape rape]] her.
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'''Instead:''' [[TooDumbToLive She meets them, on her own, behind the school to talk things out]].\\
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'''Instead:''' [[TooDumbToLive [[IdiotBall She meets them, on her own, behind the school to talk things out]].\\
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'''The Result:''' He cuts the rope and Hana falls. [[spoiler: She fortunately managed to save herself before the rope was cut, but it ends with Hana, shortly after, falling into a raging river and being sucked into a whirlpool and presumeds to be dead.]] And Ryo is then exiled from the settlement, along with Ango.
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'''The Result:''' He cuts the rope and Hana falls. [[spoiler: She fortunately managed to save herself before the rope was cut, but it ends with Hana, shortly after, falling into a raging river and being sucked into a whirlpool and presumeds presumed to be dead.]] And Ryo is then exiled from the settlement, along with Ango.Ango.
* A flashback of Arashi's tells us how Hana had gotten in trouble with a group of students once, who were abusing their supposed club activities to take and/or sell drugs and that she had collected a lot of evidence of this, ready to present it to the authorities if they didn't knock it off.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Hana to stay the hell away from those guys and go to the authorities, the principal and police, as soon as possible, with other people around her in case of needing protection. Not go and meet those guys, on her own, behind the school to talk things out.\\
'''Instead:''' [[TooDumbToLive She meets them, on her own, behind the school to talk things out]].\\
'''The Result:''' Hana almost gets gang-raped, but Arashi charges in to rescue her, almost ''kills'' one of the guys and gets into major trouble with school, including getting his potential participation in a swimming competition revoked. He only didn't get into any actual trouble because Hana's father used his influence to be in charge of Arashi's punishment and then gave him none.
* A flashback of Arashi's tells us how Hana had gotten in trouble with a group of students once, who were abusing their supposed club activities to take and/or sell drugs and that she had collected a lot of evidence of this, ready to present it to the authorities if they didn't knock it off.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Hana to stay the hell away from those guys and go to the authorities, the principal and police, as soon as possible, with other people around her in case of needing protection. Not go and meet those guys, on her own, behind the school to talk things out.\\
'''Instead:''' [[TooDumbToLive She meets them, on her own, behind the school to talk things out]].\\
'''The Result:''' Hana almost gets gang-raped, but Arashi charges in to rescue her, almost ''kills'' one of the guys and gets into major trouble with school, including getting his potential participation in a swimming competition revoked. He only didn't get into any actual trouble because Hana's father used his influence to be in charge of Arashi's punishment and then gave him none.
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'''You'd Expect:''' These candidates, who were all particularly raised to be ''ready'' for survival and to take care of themselves, to do just that and take Ango's words, who was always [[TheAce a good student]] and not one to lie, so they have no reason to not believe him.\\
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'''You'd Expect:''' These candidates, who were all particularly raised to be ''ready'' for survival and to take care of themselves, to do just that and take Ango's words, who was always [[TheAce a good student]] and not one to lie, so they have no reason to not believe him.words for it.\\
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'''The Result:''' Several candidates fail and die early on, because of said stupid risks.
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'''The Result:''' Several A good chunk of candidates fail and die early on, in groups because of said not taking this seriously or for taking stupid risks.
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'''You'd Expect:''' Unami to at least attempt to be a bit nicer to these kids, as they have clearly been severely emotionally affected by the events of the Final Test.\\
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'''You'd Expect:''' Unami to at least attempt to be a bit nicer to these kids, as they have clearly been severely emotionally affected by the events of the Final Test.\\
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* The majority of the Summer A candidates. Ango reveals to several of them that the Final Test is upon them and that there will be '''no''' help from the teachers, they all need to survive on their own, not just in order to be chosen into the Team, but also for their own sake.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' These candidates, who were all particularly raised to be ''ready'' for survival and to take care of themselves, to do just that and take Ango's words, who was always [[TheAce a good student]] and not one to lie, so they have no reason to not believe him.\\
'''Instead:''' They all think that the teachers couldn't possibly be serious with the not-helping and either do nothing, thinking that help will eventually arrive, or go take stupid risks because, after all, it's not like the test could be ''dangerous'' or ''deadly''.\\
'''The Result:''' Several candidates fail and die early on, because of said stupid risks.
* Unami is one of the more openly sadistic teachers in the institute for the Summer A candidates and is repeatedly shown to always be abrasive, downright rude and is verbally and physically abusive to the various candidates, as well as being sexually harassing towards the girls, in particular to Ayu and especially Koruri. He's eventually chosen to be Summer A's guide in the future.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Unami to at least attempt to be a bit nicer to these kids, as they have clearly been severely emotionally affected by the events of the Final Test.\\
'''Especially:''' Given that Koruri tried to kill Unami during the Final Test ''and'' swore to kill him just before she was sent to be frozen, he would take particular care with her.\\
'''Instead:''' He ''bursts'' into the room where Team Summer A have just awoken in the future, shocking them all that he's actually still alive, and begins to shout commands at them. And Summer A has guns, which they are perfectly willing to use.\\
'''The Result:''' They shoot him non-fatally several times and [[DyingAlone leave him to die alone]].
* When Hana's parentage is revealed to Team Summer A, Ango in particular is disgusted that [[SinkOrSwimMentor Takashi-sensei's]] daughter was made part of the project and he decides that Hana needs to work extra hard, since she 'cheated' her way her.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Hana to try to ''not'' glare at Ango every time their eyes meet and (subconsciously) goading him.\\
'''Instead:''' Hana ''does'' glare at Ango every time and keeps up a very stubborn and infuriating stance to him.\\
'''The Result:''' She pisses him off so much that he tries to [[AttemptedRape rape]] her.
* Shortly after the above event, Hana is planning on leaving the settlement the next morning/that very night to get away from Ango. Shortly before she can leave, Ryo makes her go look for a potential water source and, when she's at his mercy while climbing down a cliff, tries to kill her by cutting the rope suspending her.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Ryo to just ignore her, since Hana was gonna leave in a few hours, ''anyway'', and he knew this.\\
'''Instead:''' He starts making her feel uncomfortable by talking about the horrible things her father did to them, makes her climb down a dangerous cliff and gives a short [[MotiveRant explanation]] on why he needs her out of the way: her presence angers Ango.\\
'''The Result:''' He cuts the rope and Hana falls. [[spoiler: She fortunately managed to save herself before the rope was cut, but it ends with Hana, shortly after, falling into a raging river and being sucked into a whirlpool and presumeds to be dead.]] And Ryo is then exiled from the settlement, along with Ango.
'''You'd Expect:''' These candidates, who were all particularly raised to be ''ready'' for survival and to take care of themselves, to do just that and take Ango's words, who was always [[TheAce a good student]] and not one to lie, so they have no reason to not believe him.\\
'''Instead:''' They all think that the teachers couldn't possibly be serious with the not-helping and either do nothing, thinking that help will eventually arrive, or go take stupid risks because, after all, it's not like the test could be ''dangerous'' or ''deadly''.\\
'''The Result:''' Several candidates fail and die early on, because of said stupid risks.
* Unami is one of the more openly sadistic teachers in the institute for the Summer A candidates and is repeatedly shown to always be abrasive, downright rude and is verbally and physically abusive to the various candidates, as well as being sexually harassing towards the girls, in particular to Ayu and especially Koruri. He's eventually chosen to be Summer A's guide in the future.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Unami to at least attempt to be a bit nicer to these kids, as they have clearly been severely emotionally affected by the events of the Final Test.\\
'''Especially:''' Given that Koruri tried to kill Unami during the Final Test ''and'' swore to kill him just before she was sent to be frozen, he would take particular care with her.\\
'''Instead:''' He ''bursts'' into the room where Team Summer A have just awoken in the future, shocking them all that he's actually still alive, and begins to shout commands at them. And Summer A has guns, which they are perfectly willing to use.\\
'''The Result:''' They shoot him non-fatally several times and [[DyingAlone leave him to die alone]].
* When Hana's parentage is revealed to Team Summer A, Ango in particular is disgusted that [[SinkOrSwimMentor Takashi-sensei's]] daughter was made part of the project and he decides that Hana needs to work extra hard, since she 'cheated' her way her.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Hana to try to ''not'' glare at Ango every time their eyes meet and (subconsciously) goading him.\\
'''Instead:''' Hana ''does'' glare at Ango every time and keeps up a very stubborn and infuriating stance to him.\\
'''The Result:''' She pisses him off so much that he tries to [[AttemptedRape rape]] her.
* Shortly after the above event, Hana is planning on leaving the settlement the next morning/that very night to get away from Ango. Shortly before she can leave, Ryo makes her go look for a potential water source and, when she's at his mercy while climbing down a cliff, tries to kill her by cutting the rope suspending her.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Ryo to just ignore her, since Hana was gonna leave in a few hours, ''anyway'', and he knew this.\\
'''Instead:''' He starts making her feel uncomfortable by talking about the horrible things her father did to them, makes her climb down a dangerous cliff and gives a short [[MotiveRant explanation]] on why he needs her out of the way: her presence angers Ango.\\
'''The Result:''' He cuts the rope and Hana falls. [[spoiler: She fortunately managed to save herself before the rope was cut, but it ends with Hana, shortly after, falling into a raging river and being sucked into a whirlpool and presumeds to be dead.]] And Ryo is then exiled from the settlement, along with Ango.
