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'''Or''': Just don't eat the ants, there are times where Sniffles could've easily eaten something else (he once dropped an entire picnic for ''four'' ants).\\
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** Similarly, despite The Mole's blindness, he'll jobs that he, like Lumpy, will inevitably screw up.\\
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** Similarly, despite The Mole's blindness, he'll get jobs that he, like Lumpy, will inevitably screw up.\\
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'''You'd Expect''': With his blindness, that ''no one'' would hire him, as well.\\
'''Instead''': He gets a few jobs that no blind person should get: this causes them to get killed, as well as himself.
'''Instead''': He gets a few jobs that no blind person should get: this causes them to get killed, as well as himself.
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'''You'd Expect''': With his blindness, that ''no one'' would That people should ''not'' hire him, as well.well, and to give the jobs to someone else.\\
'''Instead''': He gets a few jobs that no blind person should get: this causes them to get killed, as well ashimself.himself on a few occasions.
'''Instead''': He gets a few jobs that no blind person should get: this causes them to get killed, as well as
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** Similarly, despite The Mole's blindness, he'll jobs that he, like Lumpy, will inevitably screw up.\\
'''You'd Expect''': With his blindness, that ''no one'' would hire him, as well.\\
'''Instead''': He gets a few jobs that no blind person should get: this causes them to get killed, as well as himself.
'''You'd Expect''': With his blindness, that ''no one'' would hire him, as well.\\
'''Instead''': He gets a few jobs that no blind person should get: this causes them to get killed, as well as himself.
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'''You'd expect:''' Petunia to keep her attention to the stove while talking on the phone, or at least turn it off.\\
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'''You'd expect:''' Expect:''' Petunia to keep her attention to the stove while talking on the phone, or at least turn it off.\\
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* In the Music Video "Carpal Tunnel Of Love", Music/FallOutBoy [[TheCameo enter the cafe as tree friends.]] Not long after, they witness Lumpy unwittingly break down a wall and kill The Mole while escaping in a tow truck. Said truck threatens to pull the building.\\
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* In the Music Video music video "Carpal Tunnel Of Love", Music/FallOutBoy [[TheCameo enter the cafe as tree friends.]] Not long after, they witness Lumpy unwittingly break down a wall and kill The Mole while escaping in a tow truck. Said truck threatens to pull the building.\\
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'''Result:''' The scrambled blueprints essentially turn the house into a labyrinth of [[MalevolentArchitecture Malevolent]] {{Bizarrchitecture}}. [[spoiler: No one lives to the end of the episode]].
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'''Result:''' The scrambled blueprints essentially turn the house into a labyrinth of [[MalevolentArchitecture Malevolent]] {{Bizarrchitecture}}. [[spoiler: [[EverybodyDiesEnding No one lives to the end of the episode]].episode]]]].
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'''Instead:''' She has '''''[[TheDitz LUMPY]]''''' screw the pipes for her.
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'''Instead:''' She has '''''[[TheDitz LUMPY]]''''' screw the pipes for her.her, and Lumpy accidentally screws the water and electrical pipes together. Later, when Petunia tries to take a shower to clean herself, she is electrocuted to death.
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** Petunia's at fault for [[IdiotPlot causing the fire in the first place]]. While she was making breakfast she gets a phone call.\\
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** Petunia's at fault for [[IdiotPlot causing the fire in the first place]].place. While she was making breakfast she gets a phone call.\\
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* In the Music Video "Carpal Tunnel Of Love", Music/FallOutBoy [[TheCameo enter the cafe as tree friends.]] Not long after, they witness Lumpy unwittingly break down a wall and kill The Mole while escaping in a tow truck. Said truck threatens to pull the building.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Fall Out Boy to make their way out through the door or the hole in the wall. Or, at the very least, run, which is what Cuddles and Giggles did.\\
'''Instead:''' [[BystanderSyndrome They just stand still during the chaos Lumpy is causing.]]\\
'''Result:''' Fall Out Boy gets crushed by the dragged building, with only their rolling heads remaining.
'''You'd Expect:''' Fall Out Boy to make their way out through the door or the hole in the wall. Or, at the very least, run, which is what Cuddles and Giggles did.\\
'''Instead:''' [[BystanderSyndrome They just stand still during the chaos Lumpy is causing.]]\\
'''Result:''' Fall Out Boy gets crushed by the dragged building, with only their rolling heads remaining.
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* There are several in "Concrete Solution". First off, Nutty brings home a bag of cement thinking it was a bag of sugar. And Lumpy, oblivious to the accidental mix-up, takes the sugar for a bridge that is supposed to be made with concrete.\\
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* There are several in "Concrete Solution". Solution".
** First off, Nutty brings home a bag of cement thinking it was a bag of sugar. And Lumpy, oblivious to the accidental mix-up, takes the sugar for a bridge that is supposed to be made with concrete.\\
** First off, Nutty brings home a bag of cement thinking it was a bag of sugar. And Lumpy, oblivious to the accidental mix-up, takes the sugar for a bridge that is supposed to be made with concrete.\\
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'''Instead''': Nutty pours the cement into a bowl, eats it, and has it harden ''in his stomach''. And Lumpy creates a sugar bridge which later melts in the rain.\\
'''Later''': Sniffles carries Nutty to the hospital via ambulance.\\
'''Later''': Sniffles carries Nutty to the hospital via ambulance.\\
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'''Instead''': Nutty pours the cement into a bowl, eats it, and has it harden ''in his stomach''. And Lumpy creates a sugar bridge which later melts in the rain.\\
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** Later, Sniffles carries Nutty to the hospital via ambulance.\\
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** Later, Sniffles carries Nutty to the hospital via ambulance.\\
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'''Afterwards''': Nutty clings to the edge of the bridge for dear life.\\
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* In "Hear Today, Gone Tomorrow", Lumpy causes Flippy to flip out into [[SuperpoweredEvilSide Fliqpy]] with his loud noise. Angry, Fliqpy attempts to kill Lumpy and arrives at the trailer's door with an [[AnAxeToGrind axe]].\\
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* In "Hear Today, Gone Tomorrow", Lumpy causes Flippy to flip out into [[SuperpoweredEvilSide Fliqpy]] with his loud noise. Angry, Fliqpy attempts to kill Lumpy and arrives at the trailer's door with an [[AnAxeToGrind axe]].axe.\\
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'''Result:''' Sniffles crashes into Cuddles' car and his head gets lodged into the wheel, launching Nutty out the window.
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'''And worse:''' He thinks a first-aid kit will help after [[CruelAndUnusualDeath losing his lower torso and getting his organs pulled out]].\\
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'''And worse:''' He thinks a first-aid kit will help after [[CruelAndUnusualDeath [[HalfTheManHeUsedToBe losing his lower torso and and]] [[LudicrousGibs getting his organs pulled out]].\\
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* In "Double Whammy", Flippy goes to a carnival and repeatedly flips out due to the activities triggering his PTSD.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' That Flippy would just go home after killing the people on the plane ride. He is clearly too dangerous to be at the carnival, and he doesn't want to pose a risk to the others.\\
'''Or:''' That the carnival managers would kick him out. As far as they know, he is too unpredictable and psychopathic, so the best thing to do is to keep him away from there.\\
'''Instead:''' Flippy only goes home near the end of the first part, having already killed 6 people in 3 separate incidents.
'''You'd Expect:''' That Flippy would just go home after killing the people on the plane ride. He is clearly too dangerous to be at the carnival, and he doesn't want to pose a risk to the others.\\
'''Or:''' That the carnival managers would kick him out. As far as they know, he is too unpredictable and psychopathic, so the best thing to do is to keep him away from there.\\
'''Instead:''' Flippy only goes home near the end of the first part, having already killed 6 people in 3 separate incidents.
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* In "Hello Dolly", Petunia finds a cursed idol and decides to use it as a doll. When she passes by Disco Bear, the idol's curse affects Disco Bear's headphones, causing them to become super loud.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' That Disco Bear would take off the headphones immediately.\\
'''Instead:''' He merely holds his hands to his head in discomfort, and his neglect to actually take off the headphones leads to his head exploding.
'''You'd Expect:''' That Disco Bear would take off the headphones immediately.\\
'''Instead:''' He merely holds his hands to his head in discomfort, and his neglect to actually take off the headphones leads to his head exploding.
