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'''As A Result:''' She gets hit by an enemy.
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'''As A Result:''' She gets hit by an enemy.enemy and loses one of her three lives.
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'''Or:''' For it to at least try and defend itself, such as putting its rocket to good use or hiding inside of its shell. Anything to ensure survival.\\
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* In "A Treasured Welcome", Party Hat warns Slurpy to not jinx their team will win.\\
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* In "A Treasured Welcome", Party Hat warns Slurpy to not jinx about the fact that their team will win.\\
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'''You'd Expect:''' For Rook to simply run.\\
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'''You'd Expect:''' For Rook to simply run.run or to find a shortcut that wouldn't put his life at risk.\\
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'''You'd Expect:'''Slurpy to keep her mouth shut.\\
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'''You'd Expect:'''Slurpy Expect:''' Slurpy to keep her mouth shut.\\
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'''As a result:''' Team Vanilla loses.
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'''As a result:''' A Result:''' Team Vanilla loses.
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'''Instead:''' He decides to start a snowball fight and Slurpy decides to participate.
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'''Instead:''' He decides to start a snowball fight and Slurpy decides to participate.\\
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'''Instead:''' He decides to start a snowball fight and Slurpy decides to participate.
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Expect, not exepect.
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'''You'd Exepect:'''Slurpy Expect:'''Slurpy to keep her mouth shut.\\
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* In "A Treasured Welcome", Party Hat warns Slurpy to not jinx their team will win.
win.\\
'''You'd Exepect:'''Slurpy to keep her mouth shut. \\
'''You'd Exepect:'''Slurpy to keep her mouth shut.
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Be them object or other, this series can act pretty... [[WhatAnIdiot brainless]].
* In "B.O.T.O. The Videogame", Pizza warns Pear to watch out for enemies.
** '''You'd Expect:''' For Pear to listen to Pizza and step aside.
** '''Instead:''' Due to not understanding what Pizza said, she ignores him.
** '''As A Result:''' She gets hit by an enemy.
* In "Go, Battle Monster", Rocket Snail encounters a dinosaur belonging to Chocolatey.
** '''You'd Expect:''' For Rocket Snail to move away from the dinosaur when it attacks.
** '''Instead:''' It doesn't do anything.
** '''As A Result:''' The dinosaur burns the pink snail to death.
* In "B.O.T.O. The Videogame", Pizza warns Pear to watch out for enemies.
** '''You'd Expect:''' For Pear to listen to Pizza and step aside.
** '''Instead:''' Due to not understanding what Pizza said, she ignores him.
** '''As A Result:''' She gets hit by an enemy.
* In "Go, Battle Monster", Rocket Snail encounters a dinosaur belonging to Chocolatey.
** '''You'd Expect:''' For Rocket Snail to move away from the dinosaur when it attacks.
** '''Instead:''' It doesn't do anything.
** '''As A Result:''' The dinosaur burns the pink snail to death.
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Be them object or other, this series can act pretty... [[WhatAnIdiot brainless]].
[[DarthWiki/WhatAnIdiot brainless]].
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* In "B.O.T.O. The Videogame", Pizza warns Pear to watch out forenemies.
**enemies.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' For Pear to listen to Pizza and stepaside.
**aside.\\
'''Instead:''' Due to not understanding what Pizza said, she ignoreshim.
**him.\\
'''As A Result:''' She gets hit by an enemy.
* In "Go, Battle Monster", Rocket Snail encounters a dinosaur belonging toChocolatey.
**Chocolatey.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' For Rocket Snail to move away from the dinosaur when itattacks.
**attacks.\\
'''Instead:''' It doesn't doanything.
**anything.\\
'''As A Result:''' The dinosaur burns the pink snail to death.
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* In "B.O.T.O. The Videogame", Pizza warns Pear to watch out for
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'''You'd Expect:''' For Pear to listen to Pizza and step
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'''Instead:''' Due to not understanding what Pizza said, she ignores
**
'''As A Result:''' She gets hit by an enemy.
* In "Go, Battle Monster", Rocket Snail encounters a dinosaur belonging to
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'''You'd Expect:''' For Rocket Snail to move away from the dinosaur when it
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'''Instead:''' It doesn't do
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'''As A Result:''' The dinosaur burns the pink snail to death.
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** '''You'd Exepect:'''Slurpy to keep her mouth shut.
** '''Instead:''' She jinxes the fact she didn't jinx it.
** '''As a result:''' Team Vanilla loses.
* The snow in "Downhill Disasters" has hidden explosives.
** '''You'd Expect:''' Party Hat to notice this and not start a snowball fight, and for Slurpy to not participate.
** '''As A Result''': Slurpy is hit by a snowball with an explosive.
* In the finale of the medieval version of the show, taking place before the events of the modern show, Rook is one of the two contestants that made it to the racing challenge.
** '''You'd Expect:''' For Rook to simply run.
** '''Instead:''' He breaks the thick ice sheet of the lake and swims underwater.
** '''As A Result:''' He becomes trapped since he can't penetrate the ice when he tries to swim back up, drowns, and his dead body freezes at the bottom of the lake.
** '''In All Fairness:''' Before Rook attempted to cross the lake, his rival gains an unfair advantage during the race.
** '''Fortunately:''' To prevent a similar event from happening to [[spoiler:Shieldy]] in the modern finale, Controlly decides to host the race during the summer rather than the winter.
** '''Instead:''' She jinxes the fact she didn't jinx it.
** '''As a result:''' Team Vanilla loses.
* The snow in "Downhill Disasters" has hidden explosives.
** '''You'd Expect:''' Party Hat to notice this and not start a snowball fight, and for Slurpy to not participate.
** '''As A Result''': Slurpy is hit by a snowball with an explosive.
* In the finale of the medieval version of the show, taking place before the events of the modern show, Rook is one of the two contestants that made it to the racing challenge.
** '''You'd Expect:''' For Rook to simply run.
** '''Instead:''' He breaks the thick ice sheet of the lake and swims underwater.
** '''As A Result:''' He becomes trapped since he can't penetrate the ice when he tries to swim back up, drowns, and his dead body freezes at the bottom of the lake.
** '''In All Fairness:''' Before Rook attempted to cross the lake, his rival gains an unfair advantage during the race.
** '''Fortunately:''' To prevent a similar event from happening to [[spoiler:Shieldy]] in the modern finale, Controlly decides to host the race during the summer rather than the winter.
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'''Instead:''' She jinxes the fact she didn't jinx
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'''As a result:''' Team Vanilla loses.
* The snow in "Downhill Disasters" has hidden
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'''You'd Expect:''' Party Hat to notice this and not start a snowball fight, and for Slurpy to not
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'''As A Result''': Slurpy is hit by a snowball with an
* In the finale of the medieval version of the show, taking place before the events of the modern show, Rook is one of the two contestants that made it to the racing
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'''You'd Expect:''' For Rook to simply
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'''Instead:''' He breaks the thick ice sheet of the lake and swims
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'''As A Result:''' He becomes trapped since he can't penetrate the ice when he tries to swim back up, drowns, and his dead body freezes at the bottom of the
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'''In All Fairness:''' Before Rook attempted to cross the lake, his rival gains an unfair advantage during the
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'''Fortunately:''' To prevent a similar event from happening to [[spoiler:Shieldy]] in the modern finale, Controlly decides to host the race during the summer rather than the winter.
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* The show has a list of side effects from competing.
** '''You'd Expect:''' For Shelly to notice these side-effects and compete in a different show.
** '''Instead:''' She competes in the show, not knowing the side-effects.
** '''As A Result''': She suffers the symptoms, and is killed by a [[YourHeadASplode brain implosion]].
** '''You'd Expect:''' For Shelly to notice these side-effects and compete in a different show.
** '''Instead:''' She competes in the show, not knowing the side-effects.
** '''As A Result''': She suffers the symptoms, and is killed by a [[YourHeadASplode brain implosion]].
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** '''As A Result:''' He becomes trapped since he can't penetrate the ice when he tries to swim back up, drowns, and his dead body freezes at the bottom of the lake.
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** '''As A Result:''' He becomes trapped since he can't penetrate the ice when he tries to swim back up, drowns, and his dead body freezes at the bottom of the lake.lake.
** '''In All Fairness:''' Before Rook attempted to cross the lake, his rival gains an unfair advantage during the race.
** '''Fortunately:''' To prevent a similar event from happening to [[spoiler:Shieldy]] in the modern finale, Controlly decides to host the race during the summer rather than the winter.
** '''In All Fairness:''' Before Rook attempted to cross the lake, his rival gains an unfair advantage during the race.
** '''Fortunately:''' To prevent a similar event from happening to [[spoiler:Shieldy]] in the modern finale, Controlly decides to host the race during the summer rather than the winter.
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Party Hat is kind of an idiot for starting a snowball fight, even though he knows it's hidden with explosives (Slurpy's one too for participating, despite encountering an explosive herself)
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** '''You'd Exepect:''' For Slurpy Exepect:'''Slurpy to keep her mouth shut.
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*The snow in "Downhill Disasters" has hidden explosives.
**'''You'd Expect:''' Party Hat to notice this and not start a snowball fight, and for Slurpy to not participate.
**'''As A Result''': Slurpy is hit by a snowball with an explosive.
**'''You'd Expect:''' Party Hat to notice this and not start a snowball fight, and for Slurpy to not participate.
**'''As A Result''': Slurpy is hit by a snowball with an explosive.
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* In "A Treasured Welcome", Party Hat warns Slurpy not jinx their team will win.
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* In "A Treasured Welcome", Party Hat warns Slurpy to not jinx their team will win.
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** '''You'd Exepect:''' For Slurpy to keep her mouth shut.
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* In "A Treasured Welcome", Party Hat warns Slurpy to not jinx about their team winning.
will win.
** '''You'd Exepect:''' For Slurpy to keep her mouth shut.
** '''You'd Exepect:''' For Slurpy to keep her mouth shut.
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** '''Instead:''' She competes in the show, not realizing the side-effects.
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** '''Instead:''' She competes in the show, not realizing knowing the side-effects.
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** '''You'd Expect:''' For Rocket Snail to speed around the dinosaur.
** '''Instead:''' He doesn't do anything.
** '''Instead:''' He doesn't do anything.
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** '''You'd Expect:''' For Rocket Snail to speed around move away from the dinosaur.
dinosaur when it attacks.
** '''Instead:'''He It doesn't do anything.
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** '''You'd Exepect:''' For Slurpy to keep her mouth shut.
** '''Instead:''' She jinxes the fact she didn't jinx it.
** '''As a result:''' Team Vanilla loses.
** '''You'd Exepect:''' For Slurpy to keep her mouth shut.
** '''Instead:''' She jinxes the fact she didn't jinx it.
** '''As a result:''' Team Vanilla loses.
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* The show has a list of side effects from competing.
** '''You'd Expect:''' For Shelly to notice these side-effects and compete in a different show.
** '''Instead:''' She competes in the show, not realizing the side-effects.
** '''As A Result''': She suffers the symptoms, and is killed by a [[YourHeadASplode brain implosion]].
** '''You'd Expect:''' For Shelly to notice these side-effects and compete in a different show.
** '''Instead:''' She competes in the show, not realizing the side-effects.
** '''As A Result''': She suffers the symptoms, and is killed by a [[YourHeadASplode brain implosion]].
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** In "B.O.T.O. The Videogame", Pizza warns Pear to watch out for enemies.
*** '''You'd Expect:''' For Pear to listen to Pizza and step aside.
*** '''Instead:''' Due to not understanding what Pizza said, she ignores him.
*** '''As A Result:''' She gets hit by an enemy.
** In "Go, Battle Monster", Rocket Snail encounters a dinosaur belonging to Chocolatey.
*** '''You'd Expect:''' For Rocket Snail to speed around the dinosaur.
*** '''Instead:''' He doesn't do anything.
*** '''As A Result:''' The dinosaur burns the pink snail to death.
** In the finale of the medieval version of the show, taking place before the events of the modern show, Rook is one of the two contestants that made it to the racing challenge.
*** '''You'd Expect:''' For Rook to simply run.
*** '''Instead:''' He breaks the thick ice sheet of the lake and swims underwater.
*** '''As A Result:''' He becomes trapped since he can't penetrate the ice when he tries to swim back up, drowns, and his dead body freezes at the bottom of the lake.
*** '''You'd Expect:''' For Pear to listen to Pizza and step aside.
*** '''Instead:''' Due to not understanding what Pizza said, she ignores him.
*** '''As A Result:''' She gets hit by an enemy.
** In "Go, Battle Monster", Rocket Snail encounters a dinosaur belonging to Chocolatey.
*** '''You'd Expect:''' For Rocket Snail to speed around the dinosaur.
*** '''Instead:''' He doesn't do anything.
*** '''As A Result:''' The dinosaur burns the pink snail to death.
** In the finale of the medieval version of the show, taking place before the events of the modern show, Rook is one of the two contestants that made it to the racing challenge.
*** '''You'd Expect:''' For Rook to simply run.
*** '''Instead:''' He breaks the thick ice sheet of the lake and swims underwater.
*** '''As A Result:''' He becomes trapped since he can't penetrate the ice when he tries to swim back up, drowns, and his dead body freezes at the bottom of the lake.
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* In "B.O.T.O. The Videogame", Pizza warns Pear to watch out for enemies.
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Be them object or other, this series can act pretty... [[WhatAnIdiot brainless]].
** In "B.O.T.O. The Videogame", Pizza warns Pear to watch out for enemies.
*** '''You'd Expect:''' For Pear to listen to Pizza and step aside.
*** '''Instead:''' Due to not understanding what Pizza said, she ignores him.
*** '''As A Result:''' She gets hit by an enemy.
** In "Go, Battle Monster", Rocket Snail encounters a dinosaur belonging to Chocolatey.
*** '''You'd Expect:''' For Rocket Snail to speed around the dinosaur.
*** '''Instead:''' He doesn't do anything.
*** '''As A Result:''' The dinosaur burns the pink snail to death.
** In the finale of the medieval version of the show, taking place before the events of the modern show, Rook is one of the two contestants that made it to the racing challenge.
*** '''You'd Expect:''' For Rook to simply run.
*** '''Instead:''' He breaks the thick ice sheet of the lake and swims underwater.
*** '''As A Result:''' He becomes trapped since he can't penetrate the ice when he tries to swim back up, drowns, and his dead body freezes at the bottom of the lake.
** In "B.O.T.O. The Videogame", Pizza warns Pear to watch out for enemies.
*** '''You'd Expect:''' For Pear to listen to Pizza and step aside.
*** '''Instead:''' Due to not understanding what Pizza said, she ignores him.
*** '''As A Result:''' She gets hit by an enemy.
** In "Go, Battle Monster", Rocket Snail encounters a dinosaur belonging to Chocolatey.
*** '''You'd Expect:''' For Rocket Snail to speed around the dinosaur.
*** '''Instead:''' He doesn't do anything.
*** '''As A Result:''' The dinosaur burns the pink snail to death.
** In the finale of the medieval version of the show, taking place before the events of the modern show, Rook is one of the two contestants that made it to the racing challenge.
*** '''You'd Expect:''' For Rook to simply run.
*** '''Instead:''' He breaks the thick ice sheet of the lake and swims underwater.
*** '''As A Result:''' He becomes trapped since he can't penetrate the ice when he tries to swim back up, drowns, and his dead body freezes at the bottom of the lake.
