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--> "You're dishonest and ungrateful, and greedy; it's a shame that the children of the city should grow up to be the same."
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--> "You're dishonest and ungrateful, and greedy; it's it really is a shame that the children of the this city should grow up to be the same."same!"
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* NeverMyFault: The citizens easily blame their mayor for causing the Piper to take away their children. They simply ignore how they also participated in mocking the Piper while proving themselves ungrateful f that he solved their rat problem.
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* NeverMyFault: The citizens easily blame their mayor for causing the Piper to take away their children. They simply ignore how they also participated in mocking the Piper while proving themselves ungrateful f that he solved their rat problem.
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* LaserGuidedKarma: The Piper rightfully rewards the Mayor and the citizens for their betrayal and mockery. He takes away their children as punishment. The mayor gets it the worst facing the wrath of his people.
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* NeverMyFault: The citizens easily blame their mayor for causing the Piper to take away their children. They simply ignore how they also participated in mocking the Piper while proving themselves ungrateful f that he solved their rat problem.
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* StepServant: The children of Hamelin have to do all the housework that the adults were supposed to be doing. The Pied Piper lures them away, taking the kids to a magic place inside a mountain where they are free to play.
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* AbusiveParents: The children of Hamelin are shown doing all the work, so it's no wonder they prefer following the Piper than staying at home.
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* AbusiveParents: The children of Hamelin are shown doing all the work, housework while their parents were out, so it's no wonder they prefer following the Piper rather than staying at home.
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* BullyingADragon: After getting their rat problem solved, the town of Hamelin decides to mock the piper and give him a single coin instead of the full bag of coins the mayor promised, resulting immediately in the piper taking revenge by luring away all the children in the town.
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* OhCrap: The Mayor gets this reaction when the citizens become angry at him for being responsible for making the piper take away their children by underpaying him.
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* BlowingARaspberry: The rats razz the Mayor during his speech.
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** “You’re dishonest and ungrateful, and it’s ashame the children have to grow up to be the same.”
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* UngratefulBeing: The mayor and townsfolk prove themselves thankless to the Piper dismissing his heroic deed of luring the rats away as a silly feat for playing a tune. To top it off, the mayor rewards the Piper with only one gold coin instead of the bag of gold he promised.
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* UngratefulBeing: UngratefulBastard: The mayor and townsfolk prove themselves thankless to the Piper Piper, dismissing his heroic deed of luring the rats away as a silly feat for playing a tune. To top it off, the mayor rewards the Piper with only one gold coin instead of the bag of gold he promised.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: The Piper rightfully calls out the mayor and the townsfolk as they prove themselves thankless for his effort to rid the town of rats.
** “You’re dishonest and ungrateful, and it’s ashame the children have to grow up to be the same.”
** “You’re dishonest and ungrateful, and it’s ashame the children have to grow up to be the same.”
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* UngratefulBeing: The mayor and townsfolk prove themselves thankless to the Piper dismissing his heroic deed of luring the rats away as a silly feat for playing a tune. To top it off, the mayor rewards the Piper with only one gold coin instead of the bag of gold he promised.
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“The Pied Piper” is a 1933 Classic Disney Short directed by Wilfred Jackson.
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“The Pied Piper” is a 1933 Classic WesternAnimation/{{Classic Disney Short Short|s}} directed by Wilfred Jackson.Jackson, part of the ''WesternAnimation/SillySymphonies'' series.
It is, of course, an adaptation of ''Literature/ThePiedPiperOfHamelin''. The town of Hamelin is overrun by rats, and the Mayor offers a bag of gold to whoever will rid the town of the vermin. The PiedPiper
Piper offers his services, and leads the rats away. However, when the time comes to collect his payment, the Mayor reneges and gives him only one gold coin. As punishment, the Piper lures away all their children -- but since this is a Disney short, there's actually a HappyEnding.
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* AbusiveParents: The children of Hamelin are shown doing all the work, so it's no wonder they prefer following the Piper than staying at home.
It is, of course, an adaptation of ''Literature/ThePiedPiperOfHamelin''. The town of Hamelin is overrun by rats, and the Mayor offers a bag of gold to whoever will rid the town of the vermin. The Pied
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* AbusiveParents: The children of Hamelin are shown doing all the work, so it's no wonder they prefer following the Piper than staying at home.
* CartoonCheese: The rats eat a whole wheel of Swiss cheese, except for the holes! Later, the Piper conjures up a giant wheel of cheese, complete with holes. Once all the rats are eating it, the Piper makes it, along with the rats, disappear.
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* Jerk: The mayor and the townsfolk! They are desperate to rid their town of the rats. Yet, they take the Piper’s effort in luring the rats out of town for granted. The mayor rewards the Piper with only one gold coin instead of the full bag of gold he promised.
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* Jerk: DeliveryStork: A stork is about to deliver two babies down a chimney when he sees the Piper leading the children out of town and follows them.
* HappyEnding: For the children, who are taken to a beautiful garden where they can play all day and not have to work.
* {{Jerkass}}: The mayor and the townsfolk! They are desperate to rid their town of the rats. Yet, they take the Piper’s effort in luring the rats out of town for granted. The mayor rewards the Piper with only one gold coin instead of the full bag of gold hepromised.promised.
* MagicalFlutist: Along with luring rats and children, the Piper's music can also make a giant wheel of cheese appear out of thin air, and open a portal to a paradise inside a mountain.
* TheRuntAtTheEnd. As in the original story, a boy in crutches is struggling to keep up. Instead of being left behind, however, the Piper lets him inside the magical garden.
* ThrowingOffTheDisability: At the end, the lame child casts off his crutches and runs into the garden to play with the other kids.
* YouDirtyRat: As the short begins, rats are swarming all over Hamelin stealing all their food.
* HappyEnding: For the children, who are taken to a beautiful garden where they can play all day and not have to work.
* {{Jerkass}}: The mayor and the townsfolk! They are desperate to rid their town of the rats. Yet, they take the Piper’s effort in luring the rats out of town for granted. The mayor rewards the Piper with only one gold coin instead of the full bag of gold he
* MagicalFlutist: Along with luring rats and children, the Piper's music can also make a giant wheel of cheese appear out of thin air, and open a portal to a paradise inside a mountain.
* TheRuntAtTheEnd. As in the original story, a boy in crutches is struggling to keep up. Instead of being left behind, however, the Piper lets him inside the magical garden.
* ThrowingOffTheDisability: At the end, the lame child casts off his crutches and runs into the garden to play with the other kids.
* YouDirtyRat: As the short begins, rats are swarming all over Hamelin stealing all their food.
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“The Pied Piper” is a 1933 Classic Disney Short directed by Wilfred Jackson.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Unlike the original character, the Pied Piper doesn’t lure the rats into a river where they drown. Nor does he leave out a crippled boy. Saving the children from the corruption of the adults in Hamelin is one of his motivations.
* DeathGlare:
** The Piper when he realizes how dishonest and ungrateful the mayor and his people are.
** The mayor receives a collective one by the townsfolk as the Piper leads the children out of town.
* Jerk: The mayor and the townsfolk! They are desperate to rid their town of the rats. Yet, they take the Piper’s effort in luring the rats out of town for granted. The mayor rewards the Piper with only one gold coin instead of the full bag of gold he promised.
Pied Piper
* AdaptationalHeroism: Unlike the original character, the Pied Piper doesn’t lure the rats into a river where they drown. Nor does he leave out a crippled boy. Saving the children from the corruption of the adults in Hamelin is one of his motivations.
* DeathGlare:
** The Piper when he realizes how dishonest and ungrateful the mayor and his people are.
** The mayor receives a collective one by the townsfolk as the Piper leads the children out of town.
* Jerk: The mayor and the townsfolk! They are desperate to rid their town of the rats. Yet, they take the Piper’s effort in luring the rats out of town for granted. The mayor rewards the Piper with only one gold coin instead of the full bag of gold he promised.
