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** Let's face it, everyone with the exception of the swimsuit hobo is a few crayons short of a whole box.
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** Let's face it, everyone with the possible exception of the swimsuit hobo is a few crayons short of a whole box.box. And given how he's wandering around in random places with just a swimsuit on...
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* DelayedRaction: Dan Backslide doesn't realize he's taken both Dora and the tree she's clutching until he's loaded her into the runabout and driven a couple dozen feet.
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* DelayedRaction: DelayedReaction: Dan Backslide doesn't realize he's taken both Dora and the tree she's clutching until he's loaded her into the runabout and driven a couple dozen feet.
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* DelayedRaction: Dan Backslide doesn't realize he's taken both Dora and the tree she's clutching until he's loaded her into the runabout and driven a couple dozen feet.
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* EyesAlwaysShut: Dora's eyes remain closed for most of the short, which gives her an oddly serene look even while she screams for the boys to save her (or while she's kicking Dan Backslide's ass).
* LemonyNarrator: The narrator's prose is whimsically theatrical, he has a tendency to get caught off guard by some of the events in the story, and almost lets slip his own opinions (such as nearly calling the boys jerks near the beginning).
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* RunningGag: The old man with the bathing suit and sailor hat. He gets Dora in the end.
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* RunningGag: The old man with the bathing suit and sailor hat. hat, who periodically appears at random, makes everything come to a screeching halt, and hops in the air before walking offscreen to the tune of "Fountain in the Park." He gets Dora in the end.end.
* SilkHidingSteel: Dora is a prim and proper lady who will effortlessly ''school your ass'' without breaking a sweat or a fingernail.
* SilkHidingSteel: Dora is a prim and proper lady who will effortlessly ''school your ass'' without breaking a sweat or a fingernail.
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* UselessProtagonist: The Dover Boys. They inadvertently reveal that Dora has been left unprotected to Dan Backslide, freeze immediately when she gets kidnapped, have to be spurred into action by a telegram, and by the time they do come to her rescue, the vile villain has already been beaten to within half an inch of his life by her. And then they end up knocking ''[[EpicFail themselves]]'' out.
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* EpicFail: The Dover Boys knock themselves out trying to beat up an already limp and unconscious man who can't even stand up. In fact, they knock themselves out ''precisely'' because he can't stand up!
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* GreenAndGreen: Dan Backslide has a greenish complexion.
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* GreenAndGreen: GreenAndMean: Dan Backslide has a greenish complexion.
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* MeanAndGreen: Dan Backslide has a greenish complexion.
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* BigManOnCampus: The Dover Boys are the most popular students at P.U.
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* MeanAndGreen: Dan Backslide has a greenish complexion.
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* SinisterSchnoz: Dan Backslide has a large nose, which he uses to play pool in the 2017 remake.
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** Where else in modern times will you hear the term "runabout" outside of ''Series/StarTrekDeepSpaceNine''? (The runabout was an early car body style, popular around the turn of the 20th century. By 1942, they were long obsolete and presumably viewed with a certain amount of nostalgia.)
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** Where else in modern times will you hear the term "runabout" outside of ''Series/StarTrekDeepSpaceNine''? (The runabout was an early car body style, popular around the turn of the 20th century. By 1942, they were long obsolete and presumably viewed associated with a certain amount of nostalgia.the 1890s nostalgia that the short is parodying.)
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** Where else in modern times will you hear the term 'Runabout' outside of Star Trek: Deep Space Nine?
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** Where else in modern times will you hear the term 'Runabout' "runabout" outside of Star Trek: Deep Space Nine?''Series/StarTrekDeepSpaceNine''? (The runabout was an early car body style, popular around the turn of the 20th century. By 1942, they were long obsolete and presumably viewed with a certain amount of nostalgia.)
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''A pox on Yale; poo-poo, Perdue''\\
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''A pox on Yale; poo-poo, Perdue''\\Purdue''\\
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** And just outside, he follows up with "A runabout![[labelnote*]]This line is appropriately whispered.[[/labelnote]] '''I'LL STEAL IT! ''NO ONE WILL EVER KNOW!'''''"[[labelnote:*]]This line, on the other hand, Backslide ''screams'' at the top of his lungs ''in the middle of a city.'' (yet no one seems to hear or try to stop him.)[[/labelnote]]
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** And just outside, he follows up with "A runabout![[labelnote*]]This runabout![[labelnote:*]]This line is appropriately whispered.[[/labelnote]] '''I'LL STEAL IT! ''NO ONE WILL EVER KNOW!'''''"[[labelnote:*]]This line, on the other hand, Backslide ''screams'' at the top of his lungs ''in the middle of a city.'' (yet no one seems to hear or try to stop him.)[[/labelnote]]
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** And just outside, he follows up with "A runabout! '''I'LL STEAL IT! ''NO ONE WILL EVER KNOW!'''''"
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** And just outside, he follows up with "A runabout! runabout![[labelnote*]]This line is appropriately whispered.[[/labelnote]] '''I'LL STEAL IT! ''NO ONE WILL EVER KNOW!'''''"KNOW!'''''"[[labelnote:*]]This line, on the other hand, Backslide ''screams'' at the top of his lungs ''in the middle of a city.'' (yet no one seems to hear or try to stop him.)[[/labelnote]]
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* UnInstallment: TheNarrator implies that other stories featuring the Dover Boys exist, such as ''The Dover Boys in the Everglades''.
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** Also, their names are a pretty clever StealthPun. Say them out loud. Tom Dover… Larry Dover…
** And Dora was ''their'' fiancee - apparently the censors weren't entirely clear on the topic of polyamory.
** And Dora was ''their'' fiancee - apparently the censors weren't entirely clear on the topic of polyamory.
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** Also, their names are a pretty clever StealthPun. Say them out loud. Tom Dover… Dover... Larry Dover…
Dover...
** And Dora was ''their'' fiancee- -- apparently the censors weren't entirely clear on the topic of polyamory.
** And Dora was ''their'' fiancee
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* TwoFacedAside: "...Dora Standpipe! Dear, Rich DORA STANDPIPE! HOW I LOVE HER… [-[[AsideGlance *aside glance*]]-] [-father's money-]."
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* TwoFacedAside: "...Dora Standpipe! Dear, Rich DORA STANDPIPE! HOW I LOVE HER… [-[[AsideGlance *aside glance*]]-] HER... ''(AsideGlance)'' [-father's money-]."
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* UnPaused: As Dan Backslide curses out the Dover Boys, he is interrupted by the swimsuit guy passing by, getting only up to "Con-". After the man leaves, Dan finishes with "-found them!"
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* UnPaused: As Dan Backslide curses out the Dover Boys, he is interrupted by the swimsuit guy passing by, getting only up to "Con-". "Con--". After the man leaves, Dan finishes with "-found "--found them!"
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-->'''Dan''': "THEY DRIVE ME TO DRINK!" ''(Cue rapid shot-taking)''
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-->'''Narrator:''' "Pimento University. Pimento U. Good ol' [[{{Pun}} P. U.]]"\\
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-->'''Narrator:''' "Pimento Pimento University. Pimento U. Good ol' [[{{Pun}} P. U.]]"\\]]\\
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* WithCatlikeTread:
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* WithCatlikeTread:WithCatlikeTread: Dan Backslide's idea of stealth includes ''screaming his intentions at the top of his lungs.''
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** "Telegram for the Dover Boys! Msrs Tom, Dick, and Larry; Care of Wayward Tavern, Upper Bottleneck, New York. Says, quote: '''''HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLP!''''' unquote. Signed, Dora. Thirty-five cents collect."
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** "Telegram for the Dover Boys! Msrs Messrs Tom, Dick, and Larry; Care Larry, care of Wayward Tavern, Upper Bottleneck, New York. Says, quote: Sirs, Quote: '''''HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLP!''''' unquote. Signed, Dora. Thirty-five cents collect."
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The Dover Boys were also used in an ''WesternAnimation/{{Animaniacs}}'' Slappy Squirrel Short (acting as musical narrators to Daniel Boone), in ''WesternAnimation/WakkosWish'', and made a cameo as crowd members in ''Film/SpaceJam''.
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The Dover Boys were also used in an ''WesternAnimation/{{Animaniacs}}'' Slappy Squirrel Short (acting as musical narrators to Daniel Boone), in ''WesternAnimation/WakkosWish'', and made a cameo as crowd members in ''Film/SpaceJam''. \n A [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j0U8iL38xfM remake]], featuring ninety-plus animators each animating a few seconds of the short, was released in 2018.
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** And Dan gets thrown across the room three times (on-screen) by Dora.
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** And Dora was ''their'' fiancee - apparently the censors weren't entirely clear on the topic of polyamory.
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** Where else in modern times will you hear the term 'Runabout' outside of Star Trek: Deep Space Nine?
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* AlcoholHic: Dan, shortly after downing thirteen shots in five seconds.
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* AlcoholHic: Dan, shortly after downing thirteen fifteen shots in five four seconds.
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* LoveMakesYouDumb: EVERYBODY. Dan [[BullyingADragon kidnaps and attempts to take advantage of a woman who can rip an oak tree clean out of the ground]]. Dora pounds on the door screaming for help instead of ''unlocking'' it or, you know, breaking one of the windows, all while obliviously ''kicking Dan's green ass black-and-blue''. And the Dover Boys? The first thing they do when they reach the lodge is plow through the door that Dora was right behind, potentially killing her depending on their levels of strength. No wonder she [[TakeAThirdOption ditches them all for the swimsuit hobo]].
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* LoveMakesYouDumb: EVERYBODY. EVERYBODY.
** Dan [[BullyingADragon kidnaps and attempts to take advantage of a woman who can rip an oak tree clean out of theground]]. ground]].
** Dora pounds on the door screaming for help instead of ''unlocking'' it or, you know, breaking one of the windows, all while obliviously ''kicking Dan's green assblack-and-blue''. black-and-blue''.
** And the Dover Boys? The first thing they do when they reach the lodge is plow through the door that Dora was right behind, potentially killing her depending on their levels of strength. No wonder she [[TakeAThirdOption ditches them all for the swimsuit hobo]].
** Dan [[BullyingADragon kidnaps and attempts to take advantage of a woman who can rip an oak tree clean out of the
** Dora pounds on the door screaming for help instead of ''unlocking'' it or, you know, breaking one of the windows, all while obliviously ''kicking Dan's green ass
** And the Dover Boys? The first thing they do when they reach the lodge is plow through the door that Dora was right behind, potentially killing her depending on their levels of strength. No wonder she [[TakeAThirdOption ditches them all for the swimsuit hobo]].
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** An even more ridiculous occurrence happens when Backslide kidnaps Dora in his stolen runabout. When Dora calls out to each Dover Boy for help, he doesn't just stop the car during, he ''pulls it back'' half a block.
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** An even more ridiculous occurrence happens when Backslide kidnaps Dora in his stolen runabout. When Dora calls out to each Dover Boy for help, he doesn't just stop the car during, during; he ''pulls it back'' half a block.
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** When Dan Backslide sees the Dover Boys hiding under his pool table, he shouts his dastardly plans at the top of his lungs. [[FailedASpotCheck The boys, some two-and-a-half feet away, don't seem to notice:]]
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** When Dan Backslide sees the Dover Boys hiding under his pool table, he shouts his dastardly plans at the top of his lungs. [[FailedASpotCheck The boys, some two-and-a-half feet away, don't seem to notice:]]notice]].
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A [[UsefulNotes/TheGoldenAgeOfAnimation 1942]] [[WesternAnimation/LooneyTunes Merrie Melodies]] short subject directed by Creator/ChuckJones, "The Dover Boys at Pimento University" or "The Rivals of Roquefort Hall" (or just "The Dover Boys" for short) is an animated parody of a series of early 20th Century juvenile fiction novels called ''The Rover Boys''. This was also Chuck's first attempt at making a cartoon that would later be reflective of his (and by extension, the studio's) trademark style -- unlike the [[TastesLikeDiabetes cloying cuteness]] and Disney-like nature of his [[Characters/LooneyTunes Sniffles the Mouse]] cartoons. It was also an early experiment with stylized, LimitedAnimation, as well as [[MotionBlur motion blurring]], but because of this, it ''almost'' got Chuck fired -- he just barely managed to avoid the pink slip from his boss.
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A [[UsefulNotes/TheGoldenAgeOfAnimation 1942]] [[WesternAnimation/LooneyTunes Merrie Melodies]] short subject directed by Creator/ChuckJones, "The ''"The Dover Boys at Pimento University" or "The Rivals of Roquefort Hall" (or just Hall"'' (just "The Dover Boys" for short) is an animated parody of a series of early 20th Century juvenile fiction novels called ''The Rover Boys''. Boys''.
This wasalso Chuck's first attempt at making a cartoon that would later be reflective of his (and by extension, the studio's) trademark style -- – unlike the [[TastesLikeDiabetes cloying cuteness]] and Disney-like nature of his [[Characters/LooneyTunes Sniffles the Mouse]] cartoons. It was also an early experiment with stylized, stylized LimitedAnimation, as well as [[MotionBlur motion blurring]], but because of this, it blurring]]. It ''almost'' got Chuck fired -- for its unorthodox nature – he just barely managed to avoid the pink slip from his boss.
This was
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* AlcoholHic: Dan, shortly after downing a dozen or so shots.
* AllForNothing: Dora is the sole reason Dan and the Dover Boys have conflict. In the aftermath when all four of them are knocked unconscious, Dora shows up, being courted by somebody else.
* AllForNothing: Dora is the sole reason Dan and the Dover Boys have conflict. In the aftermath when all four of them are knocked unconscious, Dora shows up, being courted by somebody else.
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* AlcoholHic: Dan, shortly after downing a dozen or so shots.
thirteen shots in five seconds.
* AllForNothing: Dora is the sole reason Dan and the Dover Boys have conflict. In the aftermath when all four of them are knocked unconscious, Dorashows up, leaves the scene being courted by somebody else.
* AllForNothing: Dora is the sole reason Dan and the Dover Boys have conflict. In the aftermath when all four of them are knocked unconscious, Dora
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* DeconstructiveParody: For its time, this was the nature of the parody of the Rover Boys books. Today, it's more well known for its WeirdAlEffect.
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* DeconstructiveParody: For its time, this was the nature of the parody of the Rover Boys ''Rover Boys'' books. Today, it's more well known for its WeirdAlEffect.
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-->'''Narrator:''' Pimento University. Pimento U. Good ol' [[{{Pun}} P. U.]]
-->''Pimento U, oh, sweet P. U.''
-->''Thy fragrant odor scents the air''
-->''A pox on Yale, poo, poo, Perdue''
-->''Pimento U, my college fair''
* EitherOrTitle: "The Dover Boys at Pimento University" or "The Rivals of Roquefort Hall".[[note]]The name of the short is a parody of the name of the first book, "The Rover Boys at School" or "The Cadets at Putnam Hall".[[/note]]
-->''Pimento U, oh, sweet P. U.''
-->''Thy fragrant odor scents the air''
-->''A pox on Yale, poo, poo, Perdue''
-->''Pimento U, my college fair''
* EitherOrTitle: "The Dover Boys at Pimento University" or "The Rivals of Roquefort Hall".[[note]]The name of the short is a parody of the name of the first book, "The Rover Boys at School" or "The Cadets at Putnam Hall".[[/note]]
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-->'''Narrator:''' Pimento "Pimento University. Pimento U. Good ol' [[{{Pun}} P. U.]]
-->''Pimento]]"\\
[-{barbershop quartet singing}-] ''Pimento U, oh, sweetP. P.U.''
-->''Thy''\\
''Thy fragrant odor scents theair''
-->''Aair'' \\
''A pox onYale, poo, poo, Perdue''
-->''PimentoYale; poo-poo, Perdue''\\
''Pimento U, my college fair''
* EitherOrTitle: "The Dover Boys at Pimento University" or "The Rivals of Roquefort Hall".[[note]]The [[note]] The name of the short is a parody of the name title of the first book, "The ''"The Rover Boys at School" or "The Cadets at Putnam Hall".Hall"''.[[/note]]
-->''Pimento
[-{barbershop quartet singing}-] ''Pimento U, oh, sweet
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''Thy fragrant odor scents the
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''A pox on
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''Pimento U, my college fair''
* EitherOrTitle: "The Dover Boys at Pimento University" or "The Rivals of Roquefort Hall".
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* EvilIsHammy: Dan Backslide is always screaming and it's hilarious.
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* EvilIsHammy: Save for his very first line, Dan Backslide is always screaming and it's hilarious.
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** The Dover Boys (Tom, Dick, and Larry) are, of course, expies of [[Creator/StratemeyerSyndicate Edward Stratemeyer's]] "Rover Boys," Dick, Tom, and Sam (and their schoolfellows, Larry, Fred, and Frank).[[note]]Their names are also a pun on the phrase "every Tom, Dick, and Harry".[[/note]]
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** The Dover Boys (Tom, Dick, and Larry) are, of course, expies of [[Creator/StratemeyerSyndicate Edward Stratemeyer's]] "Rover Boys," Boys" Dick, Tom, and Sam (and their schoolfellows, schoolfellows Larry, Fred, and Frank).[[note]]Their [[note]] Their names are also a pun {{pun}} on the phrase "every Tom, Dick, and Harry".[[/note]]
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* TheGayNineties: The setting of this short.[[note]]The original book was published in 1899.[[/note]]
* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: To an impressive degree for the time. Two immediate examples spring to mind. First, while we never hear anything about their parents, look at the Boys themselves. Even allowing for recessive genetics, they're all college age and look nothing alike, implying either that one or more were adopted, or their mother ReallyGetsAround. Also, their names are a pretty clever StealthPun. Say them out loud. Tom Dover... Larry Dover...
* GoldDigger: Dan Backslide, who really loves Dora Standpipe......[[TwoFacedAside 's father's money]].
* GoodSmokingEvilSmoking: Dan Backslide uses a cigarette holder -- of course he must be a coward-bully-cad-and-thief.
* GreatBigBookOfEverything: The ''Handbook of Useful Information'' which informs Dan Backslide "How Best to Remove Young Lady from Tree (Fig. 1)."
* HamToHamCombat: [[SubvertedTrope Subverted.]] By the time the Dover Boys confront Dan Backslide, he's already been beaten senseless by Dora to the point that he doesn't even say anything.
* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: To an impressive degree for the time. Two immediate examples spring to mind. First, while we never hear anything about their parents, look at the Boys themselves. Even allowing for recessive genetics, they're all college age and look nothing alike, implying either that one or more were adopted, or their mother ReallyGetsAround. Also, their names are a pretty clever StealthPun. Say them out loud. Tom Dover... Larry Dover...
* GoldDigger: Dan Backslide, who really loves Dora Standpipe......[[TwoFacedAside 's father's money]].
* GoodSmokingEvilSmoking: Dan Backslide uses a cigarette holder -- of course he must be a coward-bully-cad-and-thief.
* GreatBigBookOfEverything: The ''Handbook of Useful Information'' which informs Dan Backslide "How Best to Remove Young Lady from Tree (Fig. 1)."
* HamToHamCombat: [[SubvertedTrope Subverted.]] By the time the Dover Boys confront Dan Backslide, he's already been beaten senseless by Dora to the point that he doesn't even say anything.
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* TheGayNineties: The setting of this short.[[note]]The [[note]] The original book was published in 1899.[[/note]]
* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: To an impressive degree for the time. Two immediate examples spring tomind. mind.
** First, while we never hear anything about their parents, look at the Boys themselves. Even allowing for recessive genetics, they're all college age and look nothing alike, implying either that one or more were adopted, or their motherReallyGetsAround. ReallyGetsAround.
** Also, their names are a pretty clever StealthPun. Say them out loud. TomDover... Dover… Larry Dover...
Dover…
* GoldDigger: Dan Backslide, who really loves DoraStandpipe......[[TwoFacedAside Standpipe……[[TwoFacedAside 's father's money]].
* GoodSmokingEvilSmoking: Dan Backslide uses a cigarette holder-- – of course he must be a coward-bully-cad-and-thief.
* GreatBigBookOfEverything: The ''Handbook of Useful Information'' which informs Dan Backslide "How Best to Remove Young Lady from Tree (Fig.1)."
1)".
* HamToHamCombat: [[SubvertedTropeSubverted.]] Subverted]]. By the time the Dover Boys confront Dan Backslide, he's already been beaten senseless by Dora to the point that he doesn't even say anything.
* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: To an impressive degree for the time. Two immediate examples spring to
** First, while we never hear anything about their parents, look at the Boys themselves. Even allowing for recessive genetics, they're all college age and look nothing alike, implying either that one or more were adopted, or their mother
** Also, their names are a pretty clever StealthPun. Say them out loud. Tom
* GoldDigger: Dan Backslide, who really loves Dora
* GoodSmokingEvilSmoking: Dan Backslide uses a cigarette holder
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** "A gay outing at the park has been planned by the merry trio".
** "I HATE TOM! I HATE DICK! I HATE LARRY!"
** "I HATE TOM! I HATE DICK! I HATE LARRY!"
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** "A gay outing at the park has been planned by the merry trio".
trio."
** "I HATE TOM! I HATEDICK! ''DICK!'' AND I HATE LARRY!"
** "I HATE TOM! I HATE
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* INeedAFreakingDrink: The Dover Boys drive Dan Backslide to drink. To drive the point home, he then goes over to the bar and does a baker's dozen shots in the span of about four seconds (with the barkeep knocking one back in the process).
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* INeedAFreakingDrink: The Dover Boys drive Dan Backslide to drink. To drive the point home, he then goes over to the bar and does downs a baker's dozen baker's-dozen worth of shots in the span of about four seconds (with the barkeep knocking one back in the process).
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* {{Leitmotif}}: Every time the old man in the swimsuit appears and walks across the screen, a instrumental version of an old tune called "While Strolling Through The Park One Day" plays.
* LimitedAnimation: Or, at least, extreme stylization.
* LimitedAnimation: Or, at least, extreme stylization.
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* {{Leitmotif}}: Every time the old man in the swimsuit appears and walks across the screen, a instrumental version of an old tune called [[https://youtu.be/iUOBF9nMdLg "Fountain in the Park"]] [-(better known as "While Strolling Through The through the Park One Day" Day")-] plays.
* LimitedAnimation:Or, Or at least, least extreme stylization.stylization.
** As mentioned in the introduction, this short was one of the first to use the "smear" technique now nearly ubiquitous throughout Western animation (including '''''many''''' of Chuck's own later works).
* LimitedAnimation:
** As mentioned in the introduction, this short was one of the first to use the "smear" technique now nearly ubiquitous throughout Western animation (including '''''many''''' of Chuck's own later works).
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* LoveMakesYouDumb: EVERYBODY. Dan [[BullyingADragon kidnaps and attempts to take advantage of a woman who can rip an oak tree clean out of the ground.]] Dora pounds on the door screaming for help instead of UNLOCKING it or, you know, breaking one of the windows, all while obliviously KICKING DAN'S GREEN ASS BLACK-AND-BLUE. And the Dover Boys? The first thing they do when they reach the lodge is plow through the door that Dora was right behind, potentially killing her depending on their levels of strength. No wonder she [[TakeAThirdOption ditches them all for the swimsuit hobo.]]
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* LoveMakesYouDumb: EVERYBODY. Dan [[BullyingADragon kidnaps and attempts to take advantage of a woman who can rip an oak tree clean out of the ground.]] ground]]. Dora pounds on the door screaming for help instead of UNLOCKING ''unlocking'' it or, you know, breaking one of the windows, all while obliviously KICKING DAN'S GREEN ASS BLACK-AND-BLUE.''kicking Dan's green ass black-and-blue''. And the Dover Boys? The first thing they do when they reach the lodge is plow through the door that Dora was right behind, potentially killing her depending on their levels of strength. No wonder she [[TakeAThirdOption ditches them all for the swimsuit hobo.]]hobo]].
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* MuggingTheMonster: If Dan Backslide had realized just ''how'' strong Dora was, he might have picked a different girl...
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* MuggingTheMonster: If Dan Backslide had realized just ''how'' strong Dora was, he might have picked a different girl...girl.
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* {{Polyamory}}: Wait... so Dora is the fiancee of all three of the Dover Boys?
* PurpleProse: The narration parodies what some see as the frothy, cliché-ridden[[note]]Apparently, even for the time.[[/note]] prose of the Edwardian boys' novel.
* PurpleProse: The narration parodies what some see as the frothy, cliché-ridden[[note]]Apparently, even for the time.[[/note]] prose of the Edwardian boys' novel.
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* {{Polyamory}}: Wait... Hang on… so Dora is the fiancee fiancée of all three ''all three'' of the Dover Boys?
* PurpleProse: The narration parodies what some see as the frothy,cliché-ridden[[note]]Apparently, cliché-ridden (apparently even for the time.[[/note]] time) prose of the Edwardian boys' novel.
* PurpleProse: The narration parodies what some see as the frothy,
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* StandardSnippet: As might be expected from Carl Stalling -- the score is punctuated by a number of college and popular turn-of-the-century songs, (''e.g.'', "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4tDVABEmi_k Far Above Cayuga's Waters]]", "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MH5iKNSBLr0 Sweet Genevieve]]," "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7jTdgM66mWg In the Shade of the Old Apple Tree]]", and of course; "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aGSCQtHs0dk While Strolling Through the Park One Day]]"). Another scene-setter, for the "tavern of unsavory repute", is the 19th century MurderBallad "Frankie and Johnny". The William Tell Overture is heard in the climax as well.
* SuddenlyShouting: "Telegram for the Dover Boys! Msrs. Tom, Dick, and Larry, care of Wayward Tavern, Upper Bottleneck, New York, says, quote, " '''''HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELP!''''' " unquote. Signed, Dora. Thirty-five cents collect."
* SuddenlyShouting: "Telegram for the Dover Boys! Msrs. Tom, Dick, and Larry, care of Wayward Tavern, Upper Bottleneck, New York, says, quote, " '''''HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELP!''''' " unquote. Signed, Dora. Thirty-five cents collect."
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* StandardSnippet: As might would be expected from Carl Stalling -- the Stalling.
** The score is punctuated bya number of many college and popular turn-of-the-century songs, (''e.g.'', "[[https://www.songs – [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4tDVABEmi_k Far "Far Above Cayuga's Waters]]", "[[https://www.Waters",]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MH5iKNSBLr0 Sweet Genevieve]]," "[[https://www."Sweet Genevieve",]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7jTdgM66mWg In "In the Shade of the Old Apple Tree]]", Tree",]] and of course; "[[https://www.course [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aGSCQtHs0dk While "Fountain in the Park"]] [-(a.k.a. "While Strolling Through through the Park One Day]]"). Day")-].
** Another scene-setter, for the "tavern of unsavory repute", is the 19th century MurderBallad "Frankie and Johnny". The William Tell Overture is heard in the climax as well.
* SuddenlyShouting: Dan Backslide (coward-bully-cad-and-thief) after his first two lines.
** "Telegram for the Dover Boys!Msrs. Msrs Tom, Dick, and Larry, care Larry; Care of Wayward Tavern, Upper Bottleneck, New York, says, quote, " '''''HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELP!''''' " York. Says, quote: '''''HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLP!''''' unquote. Signed, Dora. Thirty-five cents collect."
** The score is punctuated by
** Another scene-setter, for the "tavern of unsavory repute", is the 19th century MurderBallad "Frankie and Johnny". The William Tell Overture is heard in the climax as well.
* SuddenlyShouting: Dan Backslide (coward-bully-cad-and-thief) after his first two lines.
** "Telegram for the Dover Boys!
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* TwoFacedAside: "...Dora Standpipe! Dear, Rich DORA STANDPIPE! HOW I LOVE HER ... [-[[AsideGlance *aside glance*]]-] [-father's money-]."
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* TwoFacedAside: "...Dora Standpipe! Dear, Rich DORA STANDPIPE! HOW I LOVE HER ... HER… [-[[AsideGlance *aside glance*]]-] [-father's money-]."
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-->"Now is the time to say 'goodbye.' [[TheStinger Goodbye.]]"
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-->"Now is the time to say 'goodbye.' 'goodbye'. [[TheStinger Goodbye.]]"
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Perdue is also a college, so it fixes the joke.
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-->''A pox on Yale, poo, poo, pooh-doo''
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-->''A pox on Yale, poo, poo, pooh-doo''Perdue''
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removed an inaccurate description that I had mis-remembered.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Dan Backslide may be a coward, bully, cad and thief, but he ''does'' remember to signal his turns when driving a (stolen) runabout.
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-->'''Narrator:''' Pimento University. Pimento U. Good ol' [[{{Pun}} P.U.]]
-->''Pimento U, oh, sweet P.U.''
-->''Thy fragrant odor scents the air...''
-->''Pimento U, oh, sweet P.U.''
-->''Thy fragrant odor scents the air...''
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-->'''Narrator:''' Pimento University. Pimento U. Good ol' [[{{Pun}} P. U.]]
-->''Pimento U, oh, sweet P. U.''
-->''Thy fragrant odor scents theair...'' air''
-->''A pox on Yale, poo, poo, pooh-doo''
-->''Pimento U, my college fair''
-->''Pimento U, oh, sweet P. U.''
-->''Thy fragrant odor scents the
-->''A pox on Yale, poo, poo, pooh-doo''
-->''Pimento U, my college fair''
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-->'''Narrator:''' Pimento University. Pimento U. Good ol' [[{{Pun}} P.U.]]
-->''Pimento U, oh, sweet P.U.''
-->''Thy fragrant odor scents the air...''
-->'''Narrator:''' Pimento University. Pimento U. Good ol' [[{{Pun}} P.U.]]
-->''Pimento U, oh, sweet P.U.''
-->''Thy fragrant odor scents the air...''