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* LongLostRelative: Captain [[spoiler:Kilika Azura]][[note]]A very old character of co-author Skidd's[[/note]] drops a major revelation when Mason gets entangled in their pirate gang, and [[spoiler]]discovers a member who strongly resembles him[[/spoiler]]!
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* LongLostRelative: Captain [[spoiler:Kilika Azura]][[note]]A very old character of co-author Skidd's[[/note]] drops a major revelation when Mason gets entangled in their pirate gang, and [[spoiler]]discovers [[spoiler:discovers a member who strongly resembles him[[/spoiler]]!him]]!
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* LongLostRelative: Captain [[spoiler:Kilika Azura]][[note]]A very old character of co-author Skidd's[[/note]] drops a major revelation when Mason gets entangled in their pirate gang, and [[spoiler]]discovers a member who strongly resembles him[[/spoiler]]!
--> '''Captain [[spoiler:Kilika Azura]]:''' So, how goes the [[spoiler:father-son reunion]], Liam?\\
'''Mason:''''''''WHAT?!?'''''\\
'''Liam:'''''Um... about that!!''\\
'''[[spoiler:Kilika]]:''' ''[with a sly smile]'' You haven't told him yet?
--> '''Captain [[spoiler:Kilika Azura]]:''' So, how goes the [[spoiler:father-son reunion]], Liam?\\
'''Mason:''''''''WHAT?!?'''''\\
'''Liam:'''''Um... about that!!''\\
'''[[spoiler:Kilika]]:''' ''[with a sly smile]'' You haven't told him yet?
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--> Captain [[spoiler:Kilika Azura]]: So, how goes the [[spoiler:father-son reunion, Liam]]?
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--> Captain '''Captain [[spoiler:Kilika Azura]]: Azura]]:''' So, how goes the [[spoiler:father-son reunion, Liam]]?reunion,]] Liam?
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-->'''[[spoiler:Liam, Mason's father]]:''' '''''Oh''''', oh by the gods... It '''''can't''''' be. Can it? You're... I mean... I never thought I'd... we'd find '''''you'''''. Wow. My '''boss''' is gonna wanna meet you.
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-->'''Unknown Character:''' '''''Oh''''', oh by the gods... It '''''can't''''' be. Can it? You're... I mean... I never thought I'd... we'd find '''''you'''''. Wow. My '''boss''' is gonna wanna meet you.
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* WhamLine: When Kylar finds Kibbles safe and sound after their battle with Zeldane:
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* WhamLine: WhamLine:
** When Kylar finds Kibbles safe and sound after their battle with Zeldane:
** When Kylar finds Kibbles safe and sound after their battle with Zeldane:
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** When Mason meets up with [[spoiler:someone who strongly resembles him, continued in the "Wham Shot" trope]]:
--> Captain [[spoiler:Kilika Azura]]: So, how goes the [[spoiler:father-son reunion, Liam]]?
--> Captain [[spoiler:Kilika Azura]]: So, how goes the [[spoiler:father-son reunion, Liam]]?
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* WhamShot: When Mason follows Kylar, in-turn following Dante after Kylar suspects her of removing the bodies after battling with Zeldane, Mason is captured by Dante's mercenary group and thrown in prison. Someone comes to determine who he is, and to Mason's shock, it's [[spoiler: someone who '''''strongly''''' resembles him]]!
-->'''Unknown Character:''' '''''Oh''''', oh by the gods... It '''''can't''''' be. Can it? You're... I mean... I never thought I'd... we'd find '''''you'''''. Wow. My '''boss''' is gonna wanna meet you.
-->'''Mason:''' ''[clearly confused]'' '''''EH!?'''''
-->'''Unknown Character:''' '''''Oh''''', oh by the gods... It '''''can't''''' be. Can it? You're... I mean... I never thought I'd... we'd find '''''you'''''. Wow. My '''boss''' is gonna wanna meet you.
-->'''Mason:''' ''[clearly confused]'' '''''EH!?'''''
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* GagBoobs: Kibbles.
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* MarshmallowHell: Sesame tosses Claire through the air into the back of a carriage, where she [[FunbagAirbag smacks face first]] between Kibbles' above mentioned GagBoobs.
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* MarshmallowHell: Sesame tosses Claire through the air into the back of a carriage, where she [[FunbagAirbag smacks face first]] between Kibbles' above mentioned GagBoobs.boobs.
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* ObsessivelyOrganized: Kylar, in his first appearance he gets agitated by his boyfriend placing his breakfast tray out of alignment with the fruit bowl.
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* SuperOCD: Kylar, in his first appearance he gets agitated by his boyfriend placing his breakfast tray out of alignment with the fruit bowl.
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* DirtyCoward: Sam Jeston, one of Kylar's subordinates. He believes that he is entitled to the same level of honor and prestige that Kylar has attained, but as soon as their squad is ambushed he runs off to save his own skin. Even when he considers going back, it's out of a craven desire to kill Kylar out of petty spite. As a result, it feels a lot like karma when he runs into [[BloodKnight Zeldane]].
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* BecomeARealBoy: Proto is hoping that one day Claire will one day give him "[[http://uberquest.katbox.net/comic/145-a-real-boy/ the ultimate upgrade.]]"
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* PinocchioSyndrome: Proto is hoping that one day Claire will one day give him "[[http://uberquest.katbox.net/comic/145-a-real-boy/ the ultimate upgrade.]]"
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%%* BigFreakingSword: Sesame's
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