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*KilledOffScreen: Terry was killed by Trevor after the medical team split up, but they don’t find out until it’s [[ParasiteZombie too late]].
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*TransformationHorror: Trevor can transform parts of his body very fast, but the skin, bones, and muscles don’t transform at the same pace, resulting in broken bones, exposed/bleeding muscles, and ''lots'' of torn skin.
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*UpCloseWithTheMonster: When Trevor breaks into the security terminal room, he lands crouched over Colin, who is absolutely ''terrified''.
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*SceneryCensor: The security guard appears to have gotten bored during his watch, and opened a tab to a porn site on his computer. Most of it is covered by another window he has open for more security cam footage.
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* LovesTheSoundOfScreaming: Dr. Smithe comments that he got used to having a patient that could talk after initially having chosen a profession where he would work with dead bodies to avoid chit-chat, and misses Trevor’s screams.
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* LovesTheSoundOfScreaming: Dr. Smithe comments that he got used to having a patient that could talk after initially having chosen a profession where he would work with dead bodies to avoid chit-chat, and misses Trevor’s screams.
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* ReminiscingAboutYourVictims: Dr. Smithe wistfully notes that he got used to having a patient that could talk after initially having chosen a profession where he would work with dead bodies to avoid chatting with people - and that he misses Trevor’s screams.
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* LovesTheSoundOfScreaming: Dr. Smithe comments that he got used to having a patient that could talk after initially having chosen a profession where he would work with dead bodies to avoid chit-chat, and would miss Trevor’s screams.
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* LovesTheSoundOfScreaming: Dr. Smithe comments that he got used to having a patient that could talk after initially having chosen a profession where he would work with dead bodies to avoid chit-chat, and would miss misses Trevor’s screams.
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*LovesTheSoundOfScreaming: Dr. Smithe comments that he got used to having a patient that could talk after initially having chosen a profession where he would work with dead bodies to avoid chit-chat, and would miss Trevor’s screams.
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*SecurityCling: After being let into the safe room by Dr. Stern, Purdy clings to him as Stern gently leads the terrified man to the operating theatre where he and Dr. Binns have been hiding from Trevor.
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*MoreTeethThanTheOsmondFamily: Trevor kills Private Young with a large, elongated, toothy maw.
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*EyesDoNotBelongThere: Enid blasts a hole through Trevors torso. It heals up with a brand new eye where the bullet tore through.
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* DeusAxMachina: The room with the security terminal just happens to have a fire axe & extinguisher in it. Dr. Maddison uses the axe to hack down said terminal.
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*AnAxeToGrind:
** Dr. Maddison hacks down the security terminal with a fire axe.
** Purdy picks up the axe, and uses it to save himself when Trevor grabs him by the ankle.
** Dr. Maddison hacks down the security terminal with a fire axe.
** Purdy picks up the axe, and uses it to save himself when Trevor grabs him by the ankle.
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*BladeBelowTheShoulder: Trevor can form bone-bladed appendages.
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*LetsSplitUpGang: After Trevor kills Dr. Clay and Private Young, Enid yells at the medical team to split up, since Trevor can’t follow all of them separately.
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* YourHeadAsplode: Private Young‘s grey matter goes flying from the force of Trevor biting into his skull.
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* YourHeadAsplode: Private Young‘s grey matter goes flying from the sheer force of Trevor biting into his skull.
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*YourHeadAsplode: Private Young‘s grey matter goes flying from the force of Trevor biting into his skull.
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: When the new members of the medical team were brought onto the project, they were not told what the true scope of it was, or what they were really doing. Dr. Maddison tried to tell them with secret messages, but Enid caught wind of his plan, and intercepted them, so the others were none the wiser.
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: When the new members of the medical team were brought onto the project, they were not told what the true scope of it was, or what they were really doing. Dr. Maddison tried to tell them with secret messages, but Enid caught wind of his plan, and intercepted them, so the others were none the wiser.stayed none-the-wiser.
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*LockedOutOfTheLoop: When the new members of the medical team were brought onto the project, they were not told what the true scope of it was, or what they were really doing. Dr. Maddison tried to tell them with secret messages, but Enid caught wind of his plan, and intercepted them, so the others were none the wiser.
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* SurveillanceStationSlacker: Downplayed: The security guard was getting ''just'' bored enough to open a porn tab on his computer, and thoughtlessly put his coffee cup in front of the feed for the footage from the autopsy room. He gets the shock of his life when he moves it to take a sip.
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* SurveillanceStationSlacker: Downplayed: The security guard was getting ''just'' bored enough to open a porn tab on his computer, and thoughtlessly put his coffee cup in front of the feed footage for the footage live feed from the autopsy room. He gets the shock of his life when he moves it to take a sip.
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*SurveillanceStationSlacker: Downplayed: The security guard was getting ''just'' bored enough to open a porn tab on his computer, and thoughtlessly put his coffee cup in front of the feed for the footage from the autopsy room. He gets the shock of his life when he moves it to take a sip.
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* SpitTake: The security guard spits out his coffee in shock when he looks at the live security footage sees Trevor’s corpse sit up.
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* SpitTake: The security guard spits out his coffee in shock when he looks at the live security footage and sees Trevor’s corpse sit up.'''sit up'''.
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* ShadowDiscretionShot: Trevor gutting Colin is shown in silhouette.
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* TrappedWithMonsterPlot: The staff at the facility are effectively trapped there by Trevor, as he knows where they may go, and they know he knows.
* SlasherSmile: Not Trevor, but ''Enid'', when she explains to Purdy what they were really doing to Trevor.
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* ShadowDiscretionShot: Trevor gutting Colin is shown in silhouette.
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* TrappedWithMonsterPlot: The staff at the facility are effectively trapped there by Trevor, as he knows where they may go, and they know he knows.
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* SpitTake: The security guard spits out his coffee in shock when he looks at the live security footage sees Trevor’s corpse sit up.
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* GunsAreWorthless: It’s not that there’s anything wrong with the guns themselves, it’s just that Trevor is ImmuneToBullets.
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*GunsAreWorthless: It’s not that there’s anything wrong with the guns themselves, it’s just that Trevor is ImmuneToBullets.
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*WeHardlyKnewYe: Dr. Jim Clay is the first of the rest of the medical team to be offed by Trevor.
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*XDaysSince: One whiteboard in the room with the security terminal is designated to how many days have gone by without an accident. By the time the story starts, the count is at 4, and it’s already outdated.
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* DramaticallyMissingThePoint: Dr. Maddison thinks that Colin and Purdy being dumbfounded are maliciously mocking him by pretending to not know what was happening to Trevor, despite him sending them multiple messages explaining it. Enid explains to Purdy that she had the messages (that they could catch) altered without Dr. Maddison’s knowledge, and fed rumors about Dr. Maddison being crazy to the rest of the staff, so they truly do ''not'' know what he is ranting and raving about, despite his insistence that he’s already told them.
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* DramaticallyMissingThePoint: Dr. Maddison thinks that Colin and Purdy being dumbfounded are them maliciously mocking him by pretending to not know what was happening to Trevor, despite him sending them multiple messages explaining it. Enid explains to Purdy that she had the messages (that they could catch) altered without Dr. Maddison’s knowledge, and fed rumors about Dr. Maddison being crazy to the rest of the staff, so they truly do ''not'' know what he is ranting and raving about, despite his insistence that he’s already told them.
