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* KnifeNut: Hell Kitchen supplies Ren with lots of large knives to use.
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* RapunzelHair: Lord Devil's hair reaches his stomach.
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* RightForTheWrongReasons: Sorian thinks Ren is here because he was kidnapped, considering Lower Hell's history of human abduction for food. [[spoiler:Sorian is right, but he's been brought here for Lord Devil's entertainment and Hell's Kitchen's request.]]
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* RightForTheWrongReasons: Sorian thinks Ren is here because he was kidnapped, considering Lower Hell's history of human abduction for food. [[spoiler:Sorian is right, but he's actually been brought here for Lord Devil's entertainment and Hell's Kitchen's request.]]
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* ShyFingerTwiddling: Saffron pulls one of these in his Chapter 27 debut when talking about his hobby of collecting blood samples to Sorian. It helps establish his innocent shyness... [[MoodWhiplash Until]] he starts talking about human blood with a PsychoticSmirk.
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* OurDemonsAreDifferent: Demons come in two flavours, first class and second class. First class are born directly from Hell and are usually characterized by [[HornedHumanoid horns]] and PointyEars. Second class demons are born from events, like wars and disasters, in the Human Fold, and therefore look more human. The greater the event's damage, the stronger the demon.
* PassThePopcorn: Lord Devil is shown to be munching on actual popcorn whilst watching the Puanttaca "mini contest" (specifically Ren's progress) through his SinisterSurveillance.
* PointyEars: Some demons have these.
* PassThePopcorn: Lord Devil is shown to be munching on actual popcorn whilst watching the Puanttaca "mini contest" (specifically Ren's progress) through his SinisterSurveillance.
* PointyEars: Some demons have these.
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* OurDemonsAreDifferent: Demons come in two flavours, first First class and second Second class. First class are born directly from Hell and are usually characterized by [[HornedHumanoid horns]] and PointyEars. Second class demons are born from events, like wars and disasters, in the Human Fold, and therefore look more human. The greater the event's damage, the stronger the demon.
* PassThePopcorn: Lord Devil is shown to be munching on actual popcorn whilst watching the Puanttaca "mini contest" (specifically Ren's progress) through hisSinisterSurveillance.SinisterSurveillance during Chapter 40.
* PointyEars:Some Both First and Second class demons have these.these. There also a few Nondemon's who have these such as beasts.
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* CatharticCrying: In Chapter 58, Ren goes to confess to Quartz and Saffron's parents that he killed Quartz and Lord Devil had replaced him with a copy to negotiate with Saff. However, as he confesses, the rock demons reveal they knew already knew and explain they forgive Ren, as they were aware of the nature of the tournament and had accepted that their sons might not return. They then point out Ren is just as much a victim of Lord Devil's schemes and Saff's mom gives the boy a hug, causing him to burst into tears.
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* [[spoiler: RightForTheWrongReasons:]] Sorian thinks Ren is here because he was kidnapped, considering Lower Hell's history of human abduction. [[spoiler: It seems that Sorian might be right, but not for the reason she thinks.]]
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* [[spoiler: RightForTheWrongReasons:]] RightForTheWrongReasons: Sorian thinks Ren is here because he was kidnapped, considering Lower Hell's history of human abduction. [[spoiler: It seems that Sorian might be abduction for food. [[spoiler:Sorian is right, but not he's been brought here for the reason she thinks.Lord Devil's entertainment and Hell's Kitchen's request.]]
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** Ren is pulled into Hell from his school's roof by one that wraps around his neck.
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* DisappearedDad: Stated by the creator on tumblr that Ren's dad is dead.
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* DisappearedDad: Stated Implied by Ren in the first chapter, and stated by the creator on tumblr Tumblr, that Ren's dad is dead.
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* EasilyForgiven: When Ren finally meets [[spoiler:Saffron and Quartz's parents]] and apologizes for [[spoiler:killing the real Quartz (and lying to the world about him not being dead)]], it turns out [[EverybodyKnewAlready they already knew]], and not only do they instantly forgive him, they actually feel sorry for him and try to ease his guilt, pointing out that he is merely a victim of [[spoiler:Lord Devil's machinations]], and that [[spoiler:Quartz]] willingly entered the tournament knowing the risks (and they let him). [[spoiler:Feldspar]] even gives him a hug and lets him cry into her chest over his pent-up guilt.
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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: Ibias is often made to look like either a bumbling fool or an ineffectual BeleagueredBureaucrat. He's also unfailingly polite and amiable. When a tram gets attacked by merfolk, and their mermatron shows up (a giant merfolk that could gobble up one of their trams whole), Ibias calmly takes off his helmet and [[https://www.boywhofell.com/comic/ch5609 eviscerates the creature]] with one enormous {{Eye Beam|s}}, leaving everyone else speechless and slightly terrified.
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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: Ibias is often made to look like either a bumbling fool or an ineffectual BeleagueredBureaucrat. He's also unfailingly polite and amiable. When a tram gets attacked by merfolk, and their mermatron shows up (a giant merfolk that could gobble up one of their trams whole), Ibias calmly takes off his helmet and [[https://www.boywhofell.com/comic/ch5609 eviscerates obliterates the creature]] with one enormous {{Eye Beam|s}}, leaving everyone else speechless and slightly terrified.
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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: Ibias is often made to look like either a bumbling fool or an ineffectual BeleagueredBureaucrat. He's also unfailingly polite and amiable. When a tram gets attacked by merfolk, and their mermatron shows up (a giant merfolk that could gobble up one of their trams whole), Ibias calmly takes off his helmet and [[https://www.boywhofell.com/comic/ch5609 eviscerates the creature]] with one enormous {{Eye Beam|s}}, leaving everyone else speechless and slightly terrified.
** Later, when he confronts [[spoiler:Spinne]] about being a rogue, he starts out being as civil and non-threatening as he can be given the circumstances (certainly far more so than anyone else would have been), but when the other party [[https://www.boywhofell.com/comic/ch5926 responds by]] [[spoiler:killing the nearby guards even though they posed no threat]], Ibias starts ''crackling'' with rage, marches right up to him — effortlessly dodging all of [[spoiler:his threads]] along the way — {{Neck Lift}}s him, and makes the following BadassBoast:
--->'''Ibias:''' Surrender. Don't underestimate me, [[spoiler:contestant Spinne]]. You're not the first rogue I've hunted down.
** Later, when he confronts [[spoiler:Spinne]] about being a rogue, he starts out being as civil and non-threatening as he can be given the circumstances (certainly far more so than anyone else would have been), but when the other party [[https://www.boywhofell.com/comic/ch5926 responds by]] [[spoiler:killing the nearby guards even though they posed no threat]], Ibias starts ''crackling'' with rage, marches right up to him — effortlessly dodging all of [[spoiler:his threads]] along the way — {{Neck Lift}}s him, and makes the following BadassBoast:
--->'''Ibias:''' Surrender. Don't underestimate me, [[spoiler:contestant Spinne]]. You're not the first rogue I've hunted down.
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* RealityEnsues: Ren has never been in a fight in his life before entering Hell, and doesn't really have access to the magical abilities available to most demons. As such, in contrast to Sorian, who's able to OneHitKill most of her opponents, Ren spends his first match running around the arena and avoiding his opponent's attacks, and wins by the skin of his teeth.
** As it turns out, the last human that was stuck in Hell became a famed warrior in his struggles as he was constantly hunted by many demons. Unlike Ren though, he didn't have aid from the Hell's Kitchen, and never really mastered [[KiManipulation Seel]] according to Sorian. [[spoiler: And according to Sorian, he ultimately died in a fight against a blood demon hunting him, because swords and skills just couldn't measure up to blood magic.]]
** As it turns out, the last human that was stuck in Hell became a famed warrior in his struggles as he was constantly hunted by many demons. Unlike Ren though, he didn't have aid from the Hell's Kitchen, and never really mastered [[KiManipulation Seel]] according to Sorian. [[spoiler: And according to Sorian, he ultimately died in a fight against a blood demon hunting him, because swords and skills just couldn't measure up to blood magic.]]
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* RealityEnsues: RunOrDie: Ren has never been in a fight in his life before entering Hell, and doesn't really have access to the magical abilities available to most demons. As such, in contrast to Sorian, who's able to OneHitKill most of her opponents, Ren spends his first match running around the arena and avoiding his opponent's attacks, and wins by the skin of his teeth.
** As it turns out, the last human that was stuck in Hell became a famed warrior in his struggles as he was constantly hunted by many demons. Unlike Ren though, he didn't have aid from the Hell's Kitchen, and never really mastered [[KiManipulation Seel]] according to Sorian. [[spoiler: And according to Sorian, he ultimately died in a fight against a blood demon hunting him, because swords and skills just couldn't measure up to blood magic.]]teeth.
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* SurprisinglySuddenDeath: As it turns out, the last human that was stuck in Hell became a famed warrior in his struggles as he was constantly hunted by many demons. Unlike Ren though, he didn't have aid from the Hell's Kitchen, and never really mastered [[KiManipulation Seel]] according to Sorian. [[spoiler: And according to Sorian, he ultimately died in a fight against a blood demon hunting him, because swords and skills just couldn't measure up to blood magic.]]
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* KiAttacks: Seel is what allows people to function and generate thought, and it can be manipulated to form attacks. Sorian's clan, the Pafhelo Clan, pride themselves in mastering this technique.
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* {{Sarashi}}: Sorian, from her midriff up to her chest. She also wraps her arms, legs and neck.
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* SiblingTeam: Sorian and Ren pretend to be this when they sign up for a monster fight, and continue this into the Hell Tournament as Pafhelo Team. Several characters have comment on their "sibling quarrel" during one of their arguments.
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* SiblingTeam: Sorian and Ren pretend to be this when they sign up for a monster fight, and continue this into the Hell Tournament as Pafhelo Team. Several characters have comment on their "sibling quarrel" during one of their arguments.
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* BadassFamily: If Sorian and her sister (who easily defeats an opponent Sorian was struggling against, [[spoiler: albeit with a broken arm and no Seel]]) are anything to go by, it's more than likely that the Pafhelo Clan live up to their reputation as this.
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** Saffron and Quartz count as this too, as although Saffron is adopted they consider each other brothers.
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** Saffron and Quartz count as this too, as although Saffron is adopted they consider each other brothers.
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* ImAHumanitarian: It's implied that, before human abduction was outlawed, the people of Lower Hell ate humans like a sort of delicacy.
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* ImAHumanitarian: It's implied that, before human abduction was outlawed, the people of Lower Hell ate humans like a sort of delicacy.
** The assassin threatensdelicacy. [[spoiler: In chapter 38 the contestants are given human meat as a special meal on the way to eat Ren.Puantacca. Ren, understandably, spends the rest of the chapter puking it back up when he eats it before realising what it is.]]
** The assassin threatens
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The series also sports a spinoff webcomic: ''[[https://tapas.io/series/Springtime-of-Yuuth Springtime of Yuuth!]]'', a slice of life romcom about an AU where Ren lives out his middle school days bloodlessly and Endou Yuu having [[QueerRomance a crush on him]].
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The series also sports a spinoff webcomic: ''Springtime ''[[https://tapas.io/series/Springtime-of-Yuuth Springtime of Yuuth!'', Yuuth!]]'', a slice of life romcom about Endou Yuu and [[BoysLove his crush on Ren]].
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* AffectionateParody: 2018's AprilFoolsDay prank "The Boy Who Fell in Love" is one towards ShojoDemographic romances.
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* BarbarianHero: The last human abducted before Ren, a century before Ren's arrival, became something like this, a warrior in a wasteland inhabited by demons who survived by steel alone. [[spoiler: Ends up being a DeconstructedTrope as Sorian reveals he ultimately perished against a blood demon, steel being not enough against demon magic. Sorian invokes him as a cautionary tale to Ren on what happens to humans in Lower Hell.]]
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** As it turns out, the last human that was stuck in Hell became a famed warrior in his struggles as he was constantly hunted bu many demons. Unlike Ren though, he didn't have aid from the Hell's Kitchen, and never really mastered [[KiAttacks Seel]] according to Sorian. [[spoiler: And according to Sorian, he ultimately died in a fight against a blood demon hunting him, because swords and skills just couldn't measure up to blood magic.]]
** As it turns out, the last human that was stuck in Hell became a famed warrior in his struggles as he was constantly hunted bu many demons. Unlike Ren though, he didn't have aid from the Hell's Kitchen, and never really mastered [[KiAttacks Seel]] according to Sorian. [[spoiler: And according to Sorian, he ultimately died in a fight against a blood demon hunting him, because swords and skills just couldn't measure up to blood magic.]]
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** Ren is the soft-hearted NiceGuy who before entering Hell, had never been in any fights, let alone killed people, and aside from a few martial arts classes, never really knew how to fight. Contrast with his partner, Sorian, a BloodKnight and ProudWarriorRaceGirl who's lived her entire life in Hell, and is quickly famed for how quickly she can kill tournament monsters in a matter of minutes.
** Lord Devil is a polite and cheerful demon, who nevertheless acknowledges he has no conscience to speak of, and manipulates Ren and sends challenges on his way for, aside from fulfilling the Hell's Kitchen's requests, little more than for entertainment. Compare to his servant, Ramia, a strict, harsh demon, who's much more responsible and concerned about her precarious situation than her master is, and is legitimately concerned for Ren's well being even if she'll never admit to it.
** Ren is the soft-hearted NiceGuy who before entering Hell, had never been in any fights, let alone killed people, and aside from a few martial arts classes, never really knew how to fight. Contrast with his partner, Sorian, a BloodKnight and ProudWarriorRaceGirl who's lived her entire life in Hell, and is quickly famed for how quickly she can kill tournament monsters in a matter of minutes.
** Lord Devil is a polite and cheerful demon, who nevertheless acknowledges he has no conscience to speak of, and manipulates Ren and sends challenges on his way for, aside from fulfilling the Hell's Kitchen's requests, little more than for entertainment. Compare to his servant, Ramia, a strict, harsh demon, who's much more responsible and concerned about her precarious situation than her master is, and is legitimately concerned for Ren's well being even if she'll never admit to it.
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* AllThereInTheManual: The creator's [[www.starfleetrambo.tumblr.com tumblr]] provides additional information about the characters and other things.
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* TheBeastmaster: Gato, one of the tournament fighters.
