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* ClothingDamage: The escape from Don Caronja and the subsequent chase has had a serious impact on both women's wardrobe. Landa lost her shoes and then her skirt (good thing [[ProperTightsWithSkirt she was wearing tights]]), while "Monster" has lost her body armor.
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* NiceShoes: Landa was originally seen wearing some very stylish (but highly impractical) platform heels.
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** CoolHelmet: " Monster" was first introduced wearing a stylized helmet[=/=]mask combo, which was locked on her head.
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** OnlyInItForTheMoney: Alright, technically Durt and Luther are only there because Ander is paying them, but still...
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** OnlyInItForTheMoney: Alright, technically Durt and Luther Luthar are only there because Ander is paying them, but still...
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: A cursed noblewoman (Landa), a notorious gladiator (Joy), a disgraced cleric (Ander), a fighter with a weird prosthetic nose (Durt), and a big brawler (Luther). Oh, and somehow they are connected by prophecy.
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: A cursed noblewoman (Landa), a notorious gladiator (Joy), a disgraced cleric (Ander), a fighter with a weird prosthetic nose (Durt), and a big brawler (Luther).(Luthar). Oh, and somehow they are connected by prophecy.
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** [[spoiler: Alright, technically Durt and Luther are OnlyInItForTheMoney, but still...]]
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** [[spoiler: OnlyInItForTheMoney: Alright, technically Durt and Luther are OnlyInItForTheMoney, only there because Ander is paying them, but still...]]
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* CoolMask: Landa usually wears a mask to prevent "lowborn" people from seeing her uncovered face (A common practice among Venezian nobles). [[spoiler:Oddly enough, Joy is also looking for a masked man. She describes him as wearing "the mask that eats itself". She hasn't explained exactly what that means.]]
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* CoolMask: Landa usually wears a mask to prevent "lowborn" people from seeing her uncovered face (A (a common practice among Venezian nobles). [[spoiler:Oddly enough, Joy is also looking for a masked man. She describes him as wearing "the mask that eats itself". She hasn't explained exactly what that means.]]
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* CoolMask: Landa usually wears a mask to prevent "lowborn" people from seeing her uncovered face.face (A common practice among Venezian nobles). [[spoiler:Oddly enough, Joy is also looking for a masked man. She describes him as wearing "the mask that eats itself". She hasn't explained exactly what that means.]]
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: A cursed noblewoman (Landa), a notorious gladiator (Joy), a disgraced cleric (Ander), a fighter with a weird prosthetic nose (Durt), and a big brawler (Luther). Oh, and somehow they are connected by prophecy. prophecy.
** [[spoiler: Alright, technically Durt and Luther are OnlyInItForTheMoney, but still...]]
** [[spoiler: Alright, technically Durt and Luther are OnlyInItForTheMoney, but still...]]
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: A cursed noblewoman (Landa), a notorious gladiator (Joy), a disgraced cleric (Ander), a fighter with a weird prosthetic nose (Durt), and a big brawler (Luther). Oh, and somehow they are connected by prophecy. [[spoiler: Alright, technically Durt and Luther are OnlyInItForTheMoney, but still...]]
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* EveryoneChasingYou: When "Monster" and Landa escape from Don Caronja (doing considerable damage in the process), the Don decides to pursue them...with everything he's got.
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** MeaningfulName: "Monster" was once known as "Joy of Destruction", which is interesting, since [[spoiler:her real name is Joy.]]
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** MeaningfulName: "Monster" was once known as "Joy of Destruction", which is interesting, since [[spoiler:her real name is Joy.]]]]
* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: A cursed noblewoman (Landa), a notorious gladiator (Joy), a disgraced cleric (Ander), a fighter with a weird prosthetic nose (Durt), and a big brawler (Luther). Oh, and somehow they are connected by prophecy.
* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: A cursed noblewoman (Landa), a notorious gladiator (Joy), a disgraced cleric (Ander), a fighter with a weird prosthetic nose (Durt), and a big brawler (Luther). Oh, and somehow they are connected by prophecy.
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** MeaningfulName: "Monster" was once known as "Joy of Battle", which is interesting, since [[spoiler:her real name is Joy.]]
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** MeaningfulName: "Monster" was once known as "Joy of Battle", Destruction", which is interesting, since [[spoiler:her real name is Joy.]]
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-->'''Orc''': Joy of Destruction...give me ten...yesss...give me ten EARTH-SHATTERING BLOWS!
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-->'''Orc''': Joy of Destruction...give me ten...yesss...give me ten me...TEN EARTH-SHATTERING BLOWS!
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* FatBastard: Don Caronja, The Lord of the Well. He's the head of an alliance af bandits and slavers of the desert.
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* FatBastard: Don Caronja, The Lord of the Well. He's the head of an alliance af of bandits and slavers of the desert.
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** TitleDrop: [[spoiler:When the orc emerged in Chapter Two, it looked right at Joy and spoke these words.
-->'''Orc''': Joy of Destruction...give me ten...yesss...give me ten EARTH-SHATTERING BLOWS!]]
-->'''Orc''': Joy of Destruction...give me ten...yesss...give me ten EARTH-SHATTERING BLOWS!]]
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-->'''Orc''': Joy of Destruction...give me ten...yesss...give me ten EARTH-SHATTERINGBLOWS!]]BLOWS!
-->'''Orc''': Joy of Destruction...give me ten...yesss...give me ten EARTH-SHATTERING
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* {{Curse}}: Landa has been cursed with something unique. [[spoiler:In times of great stress, a being known as an "orc" will emerge from her face. Exactly what it's supposed to do is unclear.]]
** TitleDrop: [[spoiler:When the orc emerged in Chapter Two, it looked right at Joy and spoke these words.
-->'''Orc''': Joy of Destruction...give me ten...yesss...give me ten EARTH-SHATTERING BLOWS!]]
** TitleDrop: [[spoiler:When the orc emerged in Chapter Two, it looked right at Joy and spoke these words.
-->'''Orc''': Joy of Destruction...give me ten...yesss...give me ten EARTH-SHATTERING BLOWS!]]
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* CoolMask: Landa usually wears a mask to prevent "lowborn" people from seeing her uncovered face. [[spoiler:Oddly enough, Joy is also looking for a masked man. She describes his mask as "the mask that eats itself". She hasn't explained exactly what that means.]]
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* CoolMask: Landa usually wears a mask to prevent "lowborn" people from seeing her uncovered face. [[spoiler:Oddly enough, Joy is also looking for a masked man. She describes his mask him as wearing "the mask that eats itself". She hasn't explained exactly what that means.]]]]
* DamselInDistress: Landa, oh so much.
* DamselInDistress: Landa, oh so much.
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* BrawnHilda: Joy, who uses her strength to great effect.
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* BrawnHilda: Joy, "Monster" ([[spoiler:Joy]]), who uses her strength to great effect.
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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: "Monster", the masked gladiator. [[spoiler:Later on, we learn that her real name is "Joy".]]
** MeaningfulName: "Monster" was once known as "Joy of Battle", which is interesting, since [[spoiler:her real name is Joy.]]
** MeaningfulName: "Monster" was once known as "Joy of Battle", which is interesting, since [[spoiler:her real name is Joy.]]
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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: "Monster", the masked gladiator. [[spoiler]]Later on, we learn that her real name is "Joy".[[/spoiler]]
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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: "Monster", the masked gladiator. [[spoiler]]Later [[spoiler:Later on, we learn that her real name is "Joy".[[/spoiler]]]]
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* CoolMask: Landa usually wears a mask to prevent "lowborn" people from seeing her uncovered face. [[spoiler]]Oddly [[spoiler:Oddly enough, Joy is also looking for a masked man. She describes it as "the mask that eats itself". She hasn't explained exactly what that means.[[/spoiler]]]]
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* CoolMask: Landa usually wears a mask to prevent "lowborn" people from seeing her uncovered face. Oddly [[spoiler]]Oddly enough, Joy is also looking for a masked man. She describes it as "the mask that eats itself". She hasn't explained exactly what that means.[[/spoiler]]
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* HorseOfADifferentColor: Vezenians ride giant boars, while the people of the desert ride giant lizards.
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* HorseOfADifferentColor: Vezenians ride giant boars, while the people of the desert ride giant lizards.lizards.
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: "Monster", the masked gladiator. Later on, we learn that her real name is "Joy".
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: "Monster", the masked gladiator. Later on, we learn that her real name is "Joy".
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* BrawnHilda: Joy, who uses her strength to great effect.
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Lady Landabella Trastan, a noblewoman from the rich city of Vezenia, travels across the desert with a skimpy escort. Her quest: to kill the "evil witch" that resides in the fortress of Saltfall. Her motives: unknown. What is certain is that she hugely underestimates the task. Caught between ruthless slavers and lizard-riding riders, marauders, she soon discovers that the authority of her noble status is worth nothing in a lawless, unforgiving land.
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Lady Landabella Trastan, a noblewoman from the rich city of Vezenia, travels across the desert with a skimpy escort.
Her quest: to kill the "evil witch" that resides in the fortress of Saltfall. Her motives: unknown.
What is certain is that she hugely underestimates the task. Caught between ruthless slavers and lizard-riding riders, she soon discovers that the authority of her noble status is worth nothing in a lawless, unforgiving land.
Her quest: to kill the "evil witch" that resides in the fortress of Saltfall. Her motives: unknown.
What is certain is that she hugely underestimates the task. Caught between ruthless slavers and lizard-riding riders, she soon discovers that the authority of her noble status is worth nothing in a lawless, unforgiving land.
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Lady Landabella Trastan, a noblewoman from the rich city of Vezenia, travels across the desert with a skimpy escort.
escort. Her quest: to kill the "evil witch" that resides in the fortress of Saltfall. Her motives: unknown.
unknown. What is certain is that she hugely underestimates the task. Caught between ruthless slavers and lizard-riding riders, she soon discovers that the authority of her noble status is worth nothing in a lawless, unforgiving land.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Landa and "Monster"]]
''[[http://www.tenearthshatteringblows.com Ten Earth Shattering Blows]]'' is a fantasy webcomic created in 2017 by Tommaso Devito, under the nickname of Nuclearpasta.
Lady Landabella Trastan, a noblewoman from the rich city of Vezenia, travels across the desert with a skimpy escort.
Her quest: to kill the "evil witch" that resides in the fortress of Saltfall. Her motives: unknown.
What is certain is that she hugely underestimates the task. Caught between ruthless slavers and lizard-riding riders, she soon discovers that the authority of her noble status is worth nothing in a lawless, unforgiving land.
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!!This Webcomic provides examples of:
* FatBastard: Don Caronja, The Lord of the Well. He's the head of an alliance af bandits and slavers of the desert.
*FantasticDrug: A special kind of bug, [[http://tenearthshatteringblows.com/archives/comic/1x10 crushed and snorted]]. We can assume it has an effect akin to cocaine.
*HorseOfADifferentColor: Vezenians rides giant boars, while the people of the desert ride giant lizards.
[[caption-width-right:350:Landa and "Monster"]]
''[[http://www.tenearthshatteringblows.com Ten Earth Shattering Blows]]'' is a fantasy webcomic created in 2017 by Tommaso Devito, under the nickname of Nuclearpasta.
Lady Landabella Trastan, a noblewoman from the rich city of Vezenia, travels across the desert with a skimpy escort.
Her quest: to kill the "evil witch" that resides in the fortress of Saltfall. Her motives: unknown.
What is certain is that she hugely underestimates the task. Caught between ruthless slavers and lizard-riding riders, she soon discovers that the authority of her noble status is worth nothing in a lawless, unforgiving land.
----
!!This Webcomic provides examples of:
* FatBastard: Don Caronja, The Lord of the Well. He's the head of an alliance af bandits and slavers of the desert.
*FantasticDrug: A special kind of bug, [[http://tenearthshatteringblows.com/archives/comic/1x10 crushed and snorted]]. We can assume it has an effect akin to cocaine.
*HorseOfADifferentColor: Vezenians rides giant boars, while the people of the desert ride giant lizards.