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* EternalSexualFreedom: During a recount of the Negacubes history, we see that {{WW2}} heroines dressed [[RuleOfFun just as skimpy as modern heroines]], more akin to pin-up's you'd see on the side of a plane then what would be considered permissible female attire at the time.
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* EternalSexualFreedom: During a recount of the Negacubes history, we see that {{WW2}} [=WW2=] heroines dressed [[RuleOfFun just as skimpy as modern heroines]], more akin to pin-up's you'd see on the side of a plane then than what would be considered permissible female attire at the time.
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* InferioritySuperiorityComplex: After having sex with Astonishing Man, Awesome Girl in a rare moment of vulnerability, asks if she was better then [[TheRival Scarlett Sorceress]], and becomes dour when he reminds her that he "doesn't play favorites", implying Awesome Girl isn't as self-assured as she presents herself to be.
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* InferioritySuperiorityComplex: After having sex with Astonishing Man, Awesome Girl in a rare moment of vulnerability, asks if she was better then [[TheRival Scarlett Sorceress]], and becomes dour when he reminds her that he "doesn't play favorites", implying Awesome Girl isn't entirely as self-assured as she presents herself to be.
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* DepravedDwarf: Iron Mangler is revealed to be a little person piloting a suit of power armor named Zebediah Smudge, who like his [[Characters/IronManCentralRoguesGallery inspiration]], was a former business partner of Terry Stork's who was secretly selling weaponry and tech to villains.
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* DepravedDwarf: Iron Mangler is revealed to be a little person piloting a suit of power armor named Zebediah Smudge, who like his [[Characters/IronManCentralRoguesGallery inspiration]], was a former business partner of Terry Stork's who was secretly selling weaponry and tech to villains. Thunder Bunny's Dominatrix roommate even recognizes him as a former client of hers who hired her to engage in infantilism role play.
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*NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Thunder Bunny delivers a [[https://superrivals.com/comic/super-rivals-7-page-29/ pretty brutal one against Madam Mischief]] for her deceptions and crimes, and just generally being a bad person. Awesome Girl manages to talk her down before she accidentally kills her.
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*BewareTheNiceOnes: Thunder Bunny is usually one of the nicest, bubbly, if somewhat ditzy, superheroines you'll ever meet, but after she managed to get her hands on Madam Mischief, she almost beat the villain to death in anger for tricking her into helping to steal the Negacube.
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* CostumeEvolution: Latex Scorpion starts off wearing a red outfit but as of Issue 7 she's began to wear a [[DarkIsNotEvil black one.]]
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* CostumeEvolution: Latex Scorpion starts off wearing a red outfit outfit, but as of Issue 7 she's began to wear a [[DarkIsNotEvil black one.]]
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* DepravedDwarf: Iron Mangler is revealed to be a little person piloting a suit of power armor named Zebidiah Smudge, who like his [[Characters/IronManCentralRoguesGallery inspiration]], was a former business partner of Terry Stork's who was secretly selling weaponry and tech to villains.
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* DepravedDwarf: Iron Mangler is revealed to be a little person piloting a suit of power armor named Zebidiah Zebediah Smudge, who like his [[Characters/IronManCentralRoguesGallery inspiration]], was a former business partner of Terry Stork's who was secretly selling weaponry and tech to villains.
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* DepravedDwarf: Iron Mangler is revealed to be a little person piloting a suit of power armor named Zebidiah Smudge, who like his inspiration, [[Characters/IronManCentralRoguesGallery Iron Monger]], was a former business partner of Terry Stork'sr who was secretly selling weaponry and tech to villains.
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*DepravedDwarf: Iron Mangler is revealed to be a little person piloting a suit of power armor named Zebidiah Smudge, who like his inspiration, [[Characters/IronManCentralRoguesGallery Iron Monger]], was a former business partner of Terry Stork'sr who was secretly selling weaponry and tech to villains.
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* MotiveRant: Unaware that Terry Stork and Industrial Man are one in the same, [[https://superrivals.com/comic/super-rivals-7-page-34/ Iron Mangeler rants to the armoured superhero during their fight]] that he blames Terry for ruining his reputation [[UnreliableNarrator claiming]] was jealous of his genius and will thus ruin Stork in return.
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* MotiveRant: Unaware that Terry Stork and Industrial Man are one in the same, [[https://superrivals.com/comic/super-rivals-7-page-34/ Iron Mangeler rants to the armoured superhero during their fight]] that he blames Terry for ruining his reputation [[UnreliableNarrator claiming]] he was jealous of his genius and will thus ruin Stork in return.
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*MotiveRant: Unaware that Terry Stork and Industrial Man are one in the same, [[https://superrivals.com/comic/super-rivals-7-page-34/ Iron Mangeler rants to the armoured superhero during their fight]] that he blames Terry for ruining his reputation [[UnreliableNarrator claiming]] was jealous of his genius and will thus ruin Stork in return.
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** A computer tech guy named Bryon is oblivious to suggestions of an attractive female client in a loose dressing gown when she offers to "repay" him for his help in her bedroom, leaving her to grumble how he "[[LampshadeHanging couldn't take a hint]] if it hit him" before Awesome Girl and Thunder Bunny crash through her apartment.
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** A computer tech guy named Bryon is oblivious [[CluelessChickMagnet oblivious]] to the suggestions of an attractive female client in a loose dressing gown when she offers to "repay" him for his help in her bedroom, leaving her to grumble how he "[[LampshadeHanging couldn't take a hint]] if it hit him" before Awesome Girl and Thunder Bunny crash through her apartment.
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* InferioritySuperiorityComplex: After having sex with Astonishing Man, Awesome Girl in a rare moment of vulnerability, asks if she was better then [[TheRival Scarlett Sorceress]], and becomes dour when he reminds her that he "doesn't play favourites", implying Awesome Girl isn't as self-assured as she presents herself to be.
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* InferioritySuperiorityComplex: After having sex with Astonishing Man, Awesome Girl in a rare moment of vulnerability, asks if she was better then [[TheRival Scarlett Sorceress]], and becomes dour when he reminds her that he "doesn't play favourites", favorites", implying Awesome Girl isn't as self-assured as she presents herself to be.
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*ExtremeLibido: The main heroine [[MsFanservice Awesome Girl]] is described having a "super libido" so between (and sometimes during) crimefighting, she's usually looking for someone to bang, [[MostCommonSuperpower with great success.]]
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** Thunder Bunny wears a outfit similar to ''[[Characters/MarvelComicsCarolDanvers Carol Danvers']]'' second Ms Marvel costume, and has ComicBook/GwenPool's fangirl energy and pink highlights.
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** Thunder Bunny wears a outfit similar to ''[[Characters/MarvelComicsCarolDanvers Carol Danvers']]'' second Ms Marvel costume, and has ComicBook/GwenPool's [[ComicBook/TheUnbelievableGwenpool Gwenpool]]'s fangirl energy and pink highlights.
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* TakeThatKiss: While in the middle of their grapple, Madam Mischief takes the opportunity to kiss Awesome Girl, [[ScrewYourself still transformed as her]], taunting Awesome Girl that she could just take her form permanently.
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* TakeThatKiss: While in the middle of their grapple, Madam Mischief takes the opportunity to kiss Awesome Girl, [[ScrewYourself still transformed as her]], taunting Awesome Girl that she could just pull a KillAndReplace, and take her form permanently.
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*TakeThatKiss: While in the middle of their grapple, Madam Mischief takes the opportunity to kiss Awesome Girl, [[ScrewYourself still transformed as her]], taunting Awesome Girl that she could just take her form permanently.
-->'''Madam Mischief''': I love this body. [[LustObject I can see why everyone wants to screw you.]]
-->'''Madam Mischief''': I love this body. [[LustObject I can see why everyone wants to screw you.]]
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** When Cindi is introduced, she's telling a client how she was a Junior Justice Buddy who was put in reserve after a blunder whilst their having sex. He indifferently comments she's told him all this before.
** Astonishing Man, Awesome Girl and Thunder Bunny, go over Madam Mischief's supposed demise and share theory's on how she might of survived as well as what she might currently be up to all while they're having a threesome.
** Astonishing Man, Awesome Girl and Thunder Bunny, go over Madam Mischief's supposed demise and share theory's on how she might of survived as well as what she might currently be up to all while they're having a threesome.
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** When Cindi is introduced, she's telling a client how she was a Junior Justice Buddy who was put in reserve after a blunder whilst their they're having sex. He indifferently comments she's told him all this before.
** Astonishing Man, Awesome Girl and Thunder Bunny, go over Madam Mischief's supposed demise and share theory's on how she might ofsurvived survived, as well as what she might currently be up to to, all while they're having a threesome.
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* {{Sexposition}}: Astonishing Man, Awesome Girl and Thunder Bunny, go over Madam Mischief's supposed demise and share theory's on how she might of survived as well as what she might currently be up to all while they're having a threesome.
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**When Cindi is introduced, she's telling a client how she was a Junior Justice Buddy who was put in reserve after a blunder whilst their having sex. He indifferently comments she's told him all this before.
**Astonishing Man, Awesome Girl and Thunder Bunny, go over Madam Mischief's supposed demise and share theory's on how she might of survived as well as what she might currently be up to all while they're having a threesome.
**When Cindi is introduced, she's telling a client how she was a Junior Justice Buddy who was put in reserve after a blunder whilst their having sex. He indifferently comments she's told him all this before.
**Astonishing Man, Awesome Girl and Thunder Bunny, go over Madam Mischief's supposed demise and share theory's on how she might of survived as well as what she might currently be up to all while they're having a threesome.
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*FullFrontalAssault: Awesome Girl's MirrorBoss fight with Madam Mischief results in the two tearing their clothes off in the tusslel.
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** A computer tech guy named Bryon is oblivious to suggestions of an attractive female client in a loose dressing gown she she offers to repay him for his help in her bedroom, leaving her to grumble how he "[[LampshadeHanging couldn't take a hint]] if it hit him" before Awesome Girl and Thunder Bunny crash through her apartment.
** A computer tech guy named Bryon is oblivious to suggestions of an attractive female client in a loose dressing gown she she offers to repay him for his help in her bedroom, leaving her to grumble how he "[[LampshadeHanging couldn't take a hint]] if it hit him" before Awesome Girl and Thunder Bunny crash through her apartment.
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** Cindi becomes so distraught when she thinks Awesome Girl tricked her she mopes in her room barley paying unable to pay attention to the porno's porno she has playing on her laptop.
** A computer tech guy named Bryon is oblivious to suggestions of an attractive female client in a loose dressing gownshe when she offers to repay "repay" him for his help in her bedroom, leaving her to grumble how he "[[LampshadeHanging couldn't take a hint]] if it hit him" before Awesome Girl and Thunder Bunny crash through her apartment.
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* TinTyrant: Terry Stork's nemesis [[https://superrivals.com/comic/super-rivals-6-page-31/ Iron Mangeler]] is covered black spiky PowerArmor.
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* TinTyrant: Terry Stork's nemesis [[https://superrivals.com/comic/super-rivals-6-page-31/ Iron Mangeler]] is covered black spiky RedAndBlackAndEvilAllOver, PowerArmor.
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** A computer tech guy named Bryon is oblivious to suggestions of an attractive female client in a loose dressing gown she she offers to repay him for his help in her bedroom, leaving her to sulk about how he "[[LampeshadeHanging couldn't take a hint]]" before Awesome Girl and Thunder Bunny crash through her apartment.
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** A computer tech guy named Bryon is oblivious to suggestions of an attractive female client in a loose dressing gown she she offers to repay him for his help in her bedroom, leaving her to sulk about grumble how he "[[LampeshadeHanging "[[LampshadeHanging couldn't take a hint]]" hint]] if it hit him" before Awesome Girl and Thunder Bunny crash through her apartment.
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**Cindi becomes so distraught when she thinks Awesome Girl tricked her she mopes in her room barley paying attention to the porno's she has playing on her laptop.
**A computer tech guy named Bryon is oblivious to suggestions of an attractive female client in a loose dressing gown she she offers to repay him for his help in her bedroom, leaving her to sulk about how he "[[LampeshadeHanging couldn't take a hint]]" before Awesome Girl and Thunder Bunny crash through her apartment.
**Cindi becomes so distraught when she thinks Awesome Girl tricked her she mopes in her room barley paying attention to the porno's she has playing on her laptop.
**A computer tech guy named Bryon is oblivious to suggestions of an attractive female client in a loose dressing gown she she offers to repay him for his help in her bedroom, leaving her to sulk about how he "[[LampeshadeHanging couldn't take a hint]]" before Awesome Girl and Thunder Bunny crash through her apartment.
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* ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated: Madam Mischief's appearance is a shock to heroes and villlians alike, as she was assumed to have died two years prior.
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* ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated: Madam Mischief's appearance is a shock to heroes and villlians alike, as she was assumed to have died two years prior. Later while fighting Awesome Girl she reveals that she was hired by S.I.T.E. to steal Ms Universals powers but instead [[SexForServices duped]] another shapeshifter, a rookie villain named Morph-Boy, into committing the crime instead, with the promise he could reveal himself afterwards. Instead Morph-Boy was overwhelmed and destroyed by the power while she made off with the payment, and has only returned because she's since burned through it and needs cash again.
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*CostumeEvolution: Latex Scorpion starts off wearing a red outfit but as of Issue 7 she's began to wear a [[DarkIsNotEvil black one.]]
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*SceneryCensor: Much of the nudity was covered up by the word balloons until near the end of Issue 6 when the artist announced that, apart from explicit content, the comic would would be uncensored from then on.
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*TinTyrant: Terry Stork's nemesis [[https://superrivals.com/comic/super-rivals-6-page-31/ Iron Mangeler]] is covered black spiky PowerArmor.
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** S.I.T.E is a clear send-up of [[Characters/MarvelComicsAIM A.I.M]], being an organized group of [[MadScientist rogue scientists]] in yellow suits.
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** S.I.T.E is a clear send-up of [[Characters/MarvelComicsAIM A.I.M]], being an organized group of [[MadScientist rogue scientists]] in yellow chemical suits.
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** S.I.T.E is a clear send-up of [[Characters/MarvelComicsAIM A.I.M]], being an organized group of [[MadScientist rogue scientists]] in yellow suits.
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** Throwdown's powers allow her to get stronger with every impact she takes, but if she's struck too much without being able to discharge the raw energy it's converted into: Boom.
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** Throwdown's powers allow her to get stronger with every impact she takes, but if she's struck too much many times in quick succession without being able to discharge the raw energy it's converted into: she's absorbed: Boom.
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*{{Sexposition}}: Astonishing Man, Awesome Girl and Thunder Bunny, go over Madam Mischief's supposed demise and share theory's on how she might of survived as well as what she might currently be up to all while they're having a threesome.
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* MostCommonSuperpower: Pretty much every superhero and villain in Wonderburg is gorgeous and stacked, with Awesome Girl, the main heroine, having a very [[BuxomBeautyStandard large bust]] to match her might.
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* BoobsOfSteel: Awesome Girl is a very tough FlyingBrick with a very large bust to match.
* MostCommonSuperpower: Pretty much every superhero and villain in Wonderburg is gorgeous and stacked, with Awesome Girl, the main heroine, having a very [[BuxomBeautyStandard large bust]] to match her might.
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** Velocity Vixen, due to being a [[SuperSpeed speedster]] she has to remind herself to slow down to be understood.
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* [[https://superrivals.com/comic/super-rivals-7-cover/ Issue 7]]
* BuxomBeautyStandard: Rest assured the MostCommonSuperpower is in full effect in Wonderberg.
* InferioritySuperiorityComplex: After having sex with Astonishing Man, Awesome Girl in a rare moment of vulnerability, asks if she was better then [[TheRival Scarlett Sorceress]], and becomes dour when he reminds her that he "doesn't play favourites", implying Awesome Girl isn't as self-assured as she presents herself to be.
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* MsFanservice: From the muscular [[AmazonianBeauty Barbarianne]] to the voluptuous Awesome Girl, there are all kinds of ladies to love in Wonderburgh.
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*AnimalEaredHeadband: Cindi wears a pair of rabbit ears as part of her Thunder Bunny costume, which combined with her LeotardOfPower makes her look like a superpowered PlayboyBunny.