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''[[https://sunbirdcomic.com Sunbird]]'' is a {{webcomic}} drawn by the creator of the webcomic ''Webcomic/BeneathTheClouds'' and part of the ''Website/SpiderForest'' webcomic collective.
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''[[https://sunbirdcomic.com Sunbird]]'' is a {{webcomic}} drawn by the creator of the webcomic ''Webcomic/BeneathTheClouds'' and part of the ''Website/SpiderForest'' ''Platform/SpiderForest'' webcomic collective.
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* ThePhoenix: Apia
* ThePollyanna: Esne.
* ThePollyanna: Esne.
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* ThePhoenix: Apia
Apia. Phoenixes are implied to be a species, if rare, and a variant of sunbird. The original colonists likely named the species after the legend.
* ThePollyanna:Esne.
Esne is a cheerful, hardworking Ghibli heroine.
* ThePollyanna:
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* PunchClockVillain: The two main characters are henchmen for the Serenthine government.
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* PunchClockVillain: The two Two of the main characters are henchmen for the Serenthine government.
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* GreyAndGrayMorality: The main characters are evenly spread across two sides of a war between continents.
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* GreyAndGrayMorality: The main characters are evenly spread across two both sides of a war between continents.
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Sunbird updates on Wednesdays. The first page can be found [[https://sunbirdcomic.com/sunbird/cover-chapter-one/ here]] and the author's website [[http://carolineparkinson.co.uk here]].
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Sunbird updates on Wednesdays. The first page can be found [[https://sunbirdcomic.com/sunbird/cover-chapter-one/ here]] and the author's artist's website [[http://carolineparkinson.co.uk here]].
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* PsychicLink: Icaros and their sunbirds.
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* HegemonicEmpire: The Serenthian Hierarchy is somewhat this.
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* KillItWithWater: Serenthia executes people by drowning.
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* KillItWithWater: Serenthia executes people traitors by drowning.
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* HugeGuyTinyGirl: Andraz is well over 6 feet tall, Salva is [[PintSizedPowerhouse five foot nothing]]. They're married.
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* HugeGuyTinyGirl: Andraz is well over 6 six feet tall, tall. Salva is [[PintSizedPowerhouse five foot nothing]]. They're married.
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* AncientGrome: Serenthia looks likes this.
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* AncientGrome: Serenthia looks likes this.very like this. Subverted in practice: it's politically similar to Renaissance Venice.
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''[[https://sunbirdcomic.com Sunbird]]'' is a {{webcomic}} and part of the Webcomic/SpiderForest webcomic collective.
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''[[https://sunbirdcomic.com Sunbird]]'' is a {{webcomic}} drawn by the creator of the webcomic ''Webcomic/BeneathTheClouds'' and part of the Webcomic/SpiderForest ''Website/SpiderForest'' webcomic collective.
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When war breaks out between the continents, two Serenthine agents make a discovery that could change the course of history. Unfortunately, it changes their lives instead.
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When war breaks out between the continents, two a team of Serenthine agents make a discovery that could change the course of history. Unfortunately, it changes their lives instead.
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* AntiMagic: Vask is a "nullhawk" a sunbird variant that extinguishes fire and magic rather than creating it.
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* AntiMagic: Vask is a "nullhawk" "nullhawk"- a sunbird variant that extinguishes fire and magic rather than creating it.
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* GuysSmashGirlsShoot: Subverted. Andraz is a large man who shoots a crossbow, Salva is a tiny woman who prefers ''axe fighting''. Played straight in that Salva can throw her axes.
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* GuysSmashGirlsShoot: Subverted. Andraz is a large man who shoots a crossbow, Salva is a tiny woman who prefers ''axe fighting''. Played straight in that Salva can throw her axes.
* GreyAndGrayMorality
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* HugeGuyTinyGirl: Andraz is well over 6 feet tall, Salva is five foot nothing. They're married.
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* HugeGuyTinyGirl: Andraz is well over 6 feet tall, Salva is [[PintSizedPowerhouse five foot nothing.nothing]]. They're married.
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* RedOniBlueOni: Salva and Andraz. Also a case of OppositesAttract.
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* RedOniBlueOni: Salva and Andraz. Also a case of OppositesAttract.
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* ThePollyanna: Esne, at least at the start.
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* ThePollyanna: Esne, at least at the start.
Esne.
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* Hegemonic Empire: The Serenthian Hierarchy is somewhat this.
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* Hegemonic Empire: HegemonicEmpire: The Serenthian Hierarchy is somewhat this.
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Southern Pallas imprisons phoenixes in power stations to fuel their fledgling industrial revolution. Northern Serenthia protects its cities using telepathic sunbirds. sunbirds.
When war breaks out between the continents, two Serenthine agents make a discovery that could change the course of history. Unfortunately, it changes their lives instead. \n\n
When war breaks out between the continents, two Serenthine agents make a discovery that could change the course of history. Unfortunately, it changes their lives instead.
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* GuysSmashGirlsShoot: Subverted. Andraz is a large man who shoots a crossbow, Salva is a tiny woman who prefers axe fighting.Played straight in that Salva can throw her axes.
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* GuysSmashGirlsShoot: Subverted. Andraz is a large man who shoots a crossbow, Salva is a tiny woman who prefers axe fighting.''axe fighting''. Played straight in that Salva can throw her axes.
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* FieryRedhead: Salva has reddish hair, an affinity for fire and quite a temper.
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* FieryRedhead: Salva has reddish hair, an affinity for fire fire, and quite a temper.
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* Hegemonic Empire: The Serenthian Hierarchy is somewhat this
this.
* HugeGuyTinyGirl: Andraz is well over 6 feet tall, Salva is five foot nothing. They're married.
* HugeGuyTinyGirl: Andraz is well over 6 feet tall, Salva is five foot nothing. They're married.
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* KillItWithFire: What sunbirds do.
* KillItWithWater: The Hierarchy is rumoured to drown people it doesn't like.
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* KillItWithFire: What sunbirds do.
Sunbirds.
* KillItWithWater:The Hierarchy is rumoured to drown Serenthia executes people it doesn't like.by drowning.
* KillItWithWater:
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* NobleBirdOfPrey/BrutalBirdOfPrey: Depending which side of the war you're on
* PhlebotinumInducedSteampunk: Pallas's fledgling Industrial Revolution is this.
* PowerSource: Phoenixes fuel power stations for Pallas, sunbirds feed on pyrite in Serenthia. Unfortunately pyrite is much more common in Pallas, which is why the two countries are at war.
* PhlebotinumInducedSteampunk: Pallas's fledgling Industrial Revolution is this.
* PowerSource: Phoenixes fuel power stations for Pallas, sunbirds feed on pyrite in Serenthia. Unfortunately pyrite is much more common in Pallas, which is why the two countries are at war.
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* NobleBirdOfPrey/BrutalBirdOfPrey: NobleBirdOfPrey: Depending which side of the war you're on
on.
* NoodleIncident: Whatever happened to [[https://sunbirdcomic.com/sunbird/page-19/ that mill in Kandia]].
* PhlebotinumInducedSteampunk: Pallas's fledgling IndustrialRevolution is this.
Revolution.
* PowerSource: Phoenixes fuel power stations for Pallas, sunbirds feed on pyrite in Serenthia. Unfortunately pyrite is much more common in Pallas,which is why so the two countries are at war.
* NoodleIncident: Whatever happened to [[https://sunbirdcomic.com/sunbird/page-19/ that mill in Kandia]].
* PhlebotinumInducedSteampunk: Pallas's fledgling Industrial
* PowerSource: Phoenixes fuel power stations for Pallas, sunbirds feed on pyrite in Serenthia. Unfortunately pyrite is much more common in Pallas,
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* PropagandaPiece: How Pallas promotes the war effort. Salva and Andraz are amused.
* PunchClockVillain: The two main characters are henchmen for the Serenthine government.
* PunchClockVillain: The two main characters are henchmen for the Serenthine government.
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* PropagandaPiece: How Pallas promotes the war effort. [[https://sunbirdcomic.com/sunbird/page-17/ Salva and Andraz are amused.
amused]].
* PunchClockVillain: The two main characters are henchmen for the Serenthine government.
* PunchClockVillain: The two main characters are henchmen for the Serenthine government.
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Human colonists struggle to survive in a new world of giant predatory birds.
Pallas, the southern continent, imprisons phoenixes in power stations to fuel their fledgling industrial revolution. Serenthia, the northern continent, protects its cities using telepathic sunbirds. When war breaks out between the continents, two Serenthine agents make a discovery that could change everything…
Pallas, the southern continent, imprisons phoenixes in power stations to fuel their fledgling industrial revolution. Serenthia, the northern continent, protects its cities using telepathic sunbirds. When war breaks out between the continents, two Serenthine agents make a discovery that could change everything…
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Pallas, the southern continent,
Southern Pallas imprisons phoenixes in power stations to fuel their fledgling industrial revolution.
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* AncientGrome: Serenthia is visually similar to this, though it has a lot in common with Renaissance Florence as well.
* AntiMagic: Vask is a "nullhawk" a sunbird variant that extinguishes fire rather than creating it.
* BondCreatures: The two main characters are icaros - humans bonded to telepathic birds of prey.
* GuysSmashGirlsShoot: Subverted. Andraz is a large man who shoots a crossbow, Salva is a tiny woman who fights with hatchets.Played straight in that Salva can throw her axes.
* AntiMagic: Vask is a "nullhawk" a sunbird variant that extinguishes fire rather than creating it.
* BondCreatures: The two main characters are icaros - humans bonded to telepathic birds of prey.
* GuysSmashGirlsShoot: Subverted. Andraz is a large man who shoots a crossbow, Salva is a tiny woman who fights with hatchets.Played straight in that Salva can throw her axes.
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* AncientGrome: Serenthia is visually similar to this, though it has a lot in common with Renaissance Florence as well.
looks likes this.
* AntiMagic: Vask is a "nullhawk" a sunbird variant that extinguishes fire and magic rather than creating it.
* BondCreatures:The two main characters Icaros are icaros - humans bonded to telepathic birds of prey.
* GuysSmashGirlsShoot: Subverted. Andraz is a large man who shoots a crossbow, Salva is a tiny woman whofights with hatchets.prefers axe fighting.Played straight in that Salva can throw her axes.
* AntiMagic: Vask is a "nullhawk" a sunbird variant that extinguishes fire and magic rather than creating it.
* BondCreatures:
* GuysSmashGirlsShoot: Subverted. Andraz is a large man who shoots a crossbow, Salva is a tiny woman who
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* KillItWithWater: The Hierarchy is rumoured to execute icaros who step out drown people it doesn't like.
* LivingBattery: Pallas uses phoenixes as energy sources.
* NobleBirdOfPrey/BrutalBirdOfPrey: Depending which side ofline by drowning.
the war you're on
* PhlebotinumInducedSteampunk: Pallas's fledgling Industrial Revolution is this.
* PowerSource: Phoenixes fuel power stations for Pallas, sunbirds feed on pyrite in Serenthia. Unfortunately pyrite is much more common in Pallas, which is why the two countries are at war.
* PsychicLink: Icaros and their sunbirds.
* PropagandaPiece: How Pallas promotes the war effort. Salva and Andraz are amused.
* PunchClockVillain: The two main characters are henchmen for the Serenthine government.
* RedOniBlueOni: Salva and Andraz. Also a case of OppositesAttract.
* ThePhoenix: Apia
* ThePollyanna: Esne, at least at the start.
* LivingBattery: Pallas uses phoenixes as energy sources.
* NobleBirdOfPrey/BrutalBirdOfPrey: Depending which side of
* PhlebotinumInducedSteampunk: Pallas's fledgling Industrial Revolution is this.
* PowerSource: Phoenixes fuel power stations for Pallas, sunbirds feed on pyrite in Serenthia. Unfortunately pyrite is much more common in Pallas, which is why the two countries are at war.
* PsychicLink: Icaros and their sunbirds.
* PropagandaPiece: How Pallas promotes the war effort. Salva and Andraz are amused.
* PunchClockVillain: The two main characters are henchmen for the Serenthine government.
* RedOniBlueOni: Salva and Andraz. Also a case of OppositesAttract.
* ThePhoenix: Apia
* ThePollyanna: Esne, at least at the start.
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* BondCreatures: The two main characters are bonded to telepathic birds.
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* BondCreatures: The two main characters are icaros - humans bonded to telepathic birds.
birds of prey.
* GuysSmashGirlsShoot: Subverted. Andraz is a large man who shoots a crossbow, Salva is a tiny woman who fights with hatchets.Played straight in that Salva can throw her axes.
* GuysSmashGirlsShoot: Subverted. Andraz is a large man who shoots a crossbow, Salva is a tiny woman who fights with hatchets.Played straight in that Salva can throw her axes.
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* HugeGuyTinyGirl: Andraz is well over 6 feet tall, Salva is five foot nothing.
* ImmuneToFire: Sunbirds and the people bonded to them can't burn.
* KillItWithFire: What sunbirds do.
* KillItWithWater: The Hierarchy is rumoured to execute icaros who step out of line by drowning.
* HugeGuyTinyGirl: Andraz is well over 6 feet tall, Salva is five foot nothing.
* ImmuneToFire: Sunbirds and the people bonded to them can't burn.
* KillItWithFire: What sunbirds do.
* KillItWithWater: The Hierarchy is rumoured to execute icaros who step out of line by drowning.
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* BondCreatures: The two main characters are bonded to telepathic birds
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* DeadpanSnarker: Vask
* FieryRedhead: Salva has reddish hair, an affinity for fire and quite a temper
* BondCreatures: The two main characters are bonded to telepathic birds
* GuysSmashGirlsShoot: Subverted. Andraz shoots a crossbow, Salva fights with hatchets
* DeadpanSnarker: Vask
* FieryRedhead: Salva has reddish hair, an affinity for fire and quite a temper
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* AncientGrome: Serenthia is visually similar to this, though it has a lot in common with Renaissance Florence as well.
* AntiMagic: Vask is a "nullhawk" a sunbird variant that extinguishes fire rather than creatingit
it.
* BondCreatures: The two main characters are bonded to telepathicbirds
birds.
* GuysSmashGirlsShoot: Subverted. Andraz shoots a crossbow, Salva fights withhatchets
hatchets.
* DeadpanSnarker:Vask
Vask.
* FieryRedhead: Salva has reddish hair, an affinity for fire and quite atemper
temper.
* GeniusBruiser: Andraz is reserved, bookish and loves the theatre- when he's not punching people through walls.
* HotBlooded: Salva throws herself headfirst into situations and often comes out on top through sheer force of will.
* HugeGuyTinyGirl:
* AntiMagic: Vask is a "nullhawk" a sunbird variant that extinguishes fire rather than creating
* BondCreatures: The two main characters are bonded to telepathic
* GuysSmashGirlsShoot: Subverted. Andraz shoots a crossbow, Salva fights with
* DeadpanSnarker:
* FieryRedhead: Salva has reddish hair, an affinity for fire and quite a
* GeniusBruiser: Andraz is reserved, bookish and loves the theatre- when he's not punching people through walls.
* HotBlooded: Salva throws herself headfirst into situations and often comes out on top through sheer force of will.
* HugeGuyTinyGirl:
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* GuysSmashGirlsShoot: Subverted partially. Subverted. Andraz shoots a crossbow, Salva fights with hatchets, she can throw them but prefers hand -to-hand fighting
hatchets
* DeadpanSnarker: Vask
* FieryRedhead: Salva has reddish hair, an affinity for fire and quite a temper
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* FieryRedhead: Salva has reddish hair, an affinity for fire and quite a temper
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Sunbird updates on Wednesdays. The first page can be found [[https://sunbirdcomic.com/sunbird/cover-chapter-one/ here]] and the author's website [[http://carolineparkinson.co.uk here]].
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Sunbird updates on Wednesdays. The first page can be found [[https://sunbirdcomic.com/sunbird/cover-chapter-one/ here]] and the author's website [[http://carolineparkinson.co.uk here]].here]].
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* AntiMagic: Vask is a "nullhawk" a sunbird variant that extinguishes fire rather than creating it
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* GuysSmashGirlsShoot: Subverted partially. Salva fights with hatchets, she can throw them but prefers hand -to-hand fighting
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Adventure!Sacrifice! Road trips! Birds!
''[[https://sunbirdcomic.com Sunbird]]'' is a {{webcomic}}and part of the Webcomic/SpiderForest webcomic collective
Human colonists struggle to survive in a new world of giant predatory birds.
Pallas, the southern continent, imprisons phoenixes in power stations to fuel their fledgling industrial revolution. Serenthia, the northern continent, protects its cities using telepathic sunbirds. When war breaks out between the continents, two Serenthine agents make a discovery that could change everything…
Sunbird updates on Wednesdays. The first page can be found [[https://sunbirdcomic.com/sunbird/cover-chapter-one/ here]] and the author's website [[http://carolineparkinson.co.uk here]].
''[[https://sunbirdcomic.com Sunbird]]'' is a {{webcomic}}and part of the Webcomic/SpiderForest webcomic collective
Human colonists struggle to survive in a new world of giant predatory birds.
Pallas, the southern continent, imprisons phoenixes in power stations to fuel their fledgling industrial revolution. Serenthia, the northern continent, protects its cities using telepathic sunbirds. When war breaks out between the continents, two Serenthine agents make a discovery that could change everything…
Sunbird updates on Wednesdays. The first page can be found [[https://sunbirdcomic.com/sunbird/cover-chapter-one/ here]] and the author's website [[http://carolineparkinson.co.uk here]].
