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It can be read both on Website/ComicFury and [[https://www.deviantart.com/teamstormbow/art/Silhouettes-626193551 DeviantArt]].
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It can be read both on Website/ComicFury Platform/ComicFury and [[https://www.deviantart.com/teamstormbow/art/Silhouettes-626193551 DeviantArt]].
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* SilentSceneryPanel: Quite often used for [[EstablishingShot Establishing Shots]], sometimes overlapping with SplashPanel (as seen [[http://stormbow.webcomic.ws/comics/88/#comicimage here]].
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* SilentSceneryPanel: Quite often used for [[EstablishingShot Establishing Shots]], sometimes overlapping with SplashPanel (as seen [[http://stormbow.webcomic.ws/comics/88/#comicimage here]].here]]).
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* SilentSceneryPanel: Quite often used for EstablishingShots, sometimes overlapping with SplashPanel (as seen [[http://stormbow.webcomic.ws/comics/88/#comicimage here]].
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* SilentSceneryPanel: Quite often used for EstablishingShots, [[EstablishingShot Establishing Shots]], sometimes overlapping with SplashPanel (as seen [[http://stormbow.webcomic.ws/comics/88/#comicimage here]].
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Maia Nyamayi, the [[ApronMatron head]] of the Institute.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Maia Nyamayi, the [[ApronMatron head]] Maia Nyamayi]], the head of the Institute.
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->''"Stormbow, a tale populated by angels and devils, gods, cats, philosophers and historians, is a story of several people, of different races, who through adventures and misadventures in the world change and, sometimes, reach a happier equilibrium.."''
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->''"Stormbow, a tale populated by angels and devils, gods, cats, philosophers and historians, is a story of several people, of different races, who through adventures and misadventures in the world change and, sometimes, reach a happier equilibrium..equilibrium."''
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* OldDarkHouse: The House on the Edge of a Cliff is a [[SubvertedTrope subversion]], being, well, [[WhatItSaysOnTheTin on the edge of a cliff]] and hard to reach, but also modern and well-kept.
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* OldDarkHouse: The House on the Edge of a the Cliff is a [[SubvertedTrope subversion]], being, well, [[WhatItSaysOnTheTin on the edge of a cliff]] and hard to reach, but also modern and well-kept.
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* GraveClouds: It's cold and overcast when Neppiu leads Argenta to the [[CreepyCathedral Abbey]].
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* GraveClouds: It's cold and overcast when Neppiu leads Argenta to the [[CreepyCathedral Abbey]].Abbey]], which is on a hill of crosses.
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* PretentiousLatinMotto: The entrance to [[CreepyCathedral the Abbey]] has "Nulla Poena Sine Culpa" [[note]]which roughly translates to "no punishment without a crime"[[/note]] written on the archway, which sets the ominous atmosphere.
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* PretentiousLatinMotto: The entrance to the [[CreepyCathedral the Abbey]] has "Nulla Poena Sine Culpa" [[note]]which roughly translates to "no punishment without a crime"[[/note]] written on the archway, which sets the ominous atmosphere.
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* SensualSpandex: Aurea and Argenta wear form-fitting bodysuits under their cloaks.
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* PretentiousLatinMotto: The entrance to [[CreepyCathedral the Abbey]] has "Nulla Poena Sine Culpa" [[note]]which translates to "no punishment without a crime"[[/note]] written on the archway, which sets the ominous atmosphere.
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* PretentiousLatinMotto: The entrance to [[CreepyCathedral the Abbey]] has "Nulla Poena Sine Culpa" [[note]]which roughly translates to "no punishment without a crime"[[/note]] written on the archway, which sets the ominous atmosphere.
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** [[spoiler:Argenta is also referred to as 'Argenta the White' at the end of chapter one, since she symbolizes the colour white and is the first of the nine main characters.]]
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** [[spoiler:Argenta is also referred to as 'Argenta the White' at the end of chapter one, since she symbolizes the colour white and is the first of the nine main characters.]]
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* BilingualBonus: Maia's last name, Nyamayi, other than sounding like a sound a cat would make also means "feline" in Chichewa.
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* BilingualBonus: Maia's last name, Nyamayi, other than sounding like a sound noise a cat would make also means "feline" in Chichewa.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Chapter One Cover Page]]
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* SinisterSilhouettes: The nine main characters are seen as silhouettes in the very first page; this page updates at the start of each chapter with the headshots of the characters introduced previously.
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* SinisterSilhouettes: The nine main characters are seen as silhouettes in the very first page; this page updates at the start of each chapter with the headshots of the characters introduced previously.thus far.
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It can be read both on ComicFury and on DeviantArt [[https://www.deviantart.com/teamstormbow/art/Silhouettes-626193551 here]].
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It can be read both on ComicFury and on DeviantArt [[https://www.deviantart.com/teamstormbow/art/Silhouettes-626193551 here]].
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* DeathFromAbove: Aurea is killed in a mountainslide.
