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InAWorld where boxing is the world's most popular sport, [[PowersViaWeapon the fighters wear super-powered gloves]] that [[EveryoneHasASpecialMove give them unique abilities]] in the ring. [[TheHero Aster]] hopes to begin her journey into this world, but she never [[LoyalPhlebotinum meshed well]] with any pair of gloves brought before her. Until one night, when she happened upon a chance encounter with [[LegendaryWeapon the gloves of a long-gone boxing legend]], who was her personal idol to boot.
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InAWorld where boxing is the world's most popular sport, [[PowersViaWeapon the fighters wear super-powered gloves]] that [[EveryoneHasASpecialMove give them unique abilities]] in the ring. [[TheHero Aster]] hopes to begin her journey into this world, but she never [[LoyalPhlebotinum meshed well]] with any pair of gloves brought before her. Until one night, when she happened upon a chance encounter with [[LegendaryWeapon the gloves of a long-gone boxing legend]], who was her personal idol to boot.
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''[[https://www.starimpactcomic.com/comic/prologue-page-1 Star Impact]]'' is a webcomic written and drawn by American artist Jack [=McGee=] and published by Platform/{{Hiveworks}}, which he has described as "a [[{{Homage}} love]] [[{{Animesque}} letter]] to {{sho|nenDemographic}}unen [[FightingSeries action]] and [[GamingAndSportsAnimeAndManga sports]] anime". and has been ongoing since October 9th, 2018.
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''[[https://www.starimpactcomic.com/comic/prologue-page-1 Star Impact]]'' is a webcomic written and drawn by American artist Jack [=McGee=] and published by Platform/{{Hiveworks}}, which he has described as "a [[{{Homage}} love]] [[{{Animesque}} letter]] to {{sho|nenDemographic}}unen [[FightingSeries action]] and [[GamingAndSportsAnimeAndManga sports]] anime". and has been ongoing since It began on October 9th, 2018.
2018, and updates on Tuesdays and Fridays.
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* ExplosivePunch: Before recieving Shooting Star, Aster [[https://www.starimpactcomic.com/comic/chapter-1-page-6 tried on]] an [[LoyalPhlebotinum ill-fitting]] pair of Leather called Firework Parade, which Buzz says "can produce small explosions at the end of heavy punches".
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* BattleAura: [=McGee=] makes liberal use of visual metaphors at certain points in ''Star Impact'''s superpowered slugfests.
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* LiterallyLaughableQuestion: [[https://www.starimpactcomic.com/comic/chapter-1-page-57 During Chapter 1's spar]], after Aster tells Urchin she's having a good time, he angrily asks who the hell she thinks she is for enjoying herself in the fight, then pauses, laughs, and realizes that he never ''did'' ask for her name.
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* LiterallyLaughableQuestion: [[https://www.starimpactcomic.com/comic/chapter-1-page-57 During Chapter 1's spar]], fight]], after Aster tells Urchin she's having a good time, he angrily asks who the hell she thinks she is for enjoying herself in the fight, then pauses, laughs, and realizes that he never ''did'' ask for her name.
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--> '''Aster:''' Really! Why'd you quit?\\
'''Urchin:''' Hmm. (''{{beat}}'') Would you believe I got kicked out for fighting dirty?!\\
'''Urchin:''' Hmm. (''{{beat}}'') Would you believe I got kicked out for fighting dirty?!\\
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--> '''Aster:''' Really! Really? Why'd you quit?\\
'''Urchin:''' Hmm.(''{{beat}}'') ''({{beat}})'' Would you believe I got kicked out for fighting dirty?!\\
'''Urchin:''' Hmm.
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* BigEntrance: [[https://www.starimpactcomic.com/comic/chapter-3-page-16 Etna's entrance to the ring in her Chapter 3 fight]] is incredibly over-the-top, where she appears standing atop a gigantic fire-breathing mechanical dragon, heralded by cheerleaders.
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* BigEntrance: [[https://www.starimpactcomic.com/comic/chapter-3-page-16 Etna's entrance to the ring in her Chapter 3 fight]] is incredibly over-the-top, where she appears standing atop a gigantic fire-breathing TechnicolorFire-breathing mechanical dragon, heralded by cheerleaders.
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* CollateralAngst: After Puck was brutalized by Urchin early in Chapter 1, the story came to focus on Aster, and her feeling horrible about not meshing with any pair of gloves with which she could've gotten back at Urchin for beating the stuffing out of her friend.
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* EveryoneChasingYou: A gaggle of reporters chase after Aster in the beginning of Chapter 2, stopping her from registering that day.
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* LiterallyLaughableQuestion: [[https://www.starimpactcomic.com/comic/chapter-1-page-57 During Chapter 1's spar]], after Aster tells Urchin she's having a good time, he angrily asks who the hell she thinks she is for enjoying herself in the fight, then pauses, laughs, and realizes that he never ''did'' ask for her name.
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''[[https://www.starimpactcomic.com/comic/prologue-page-1 Star Impact]]'' is a Platform/{{Hiveworks}}[==]-affiliated webcomic written and drawn by American artist Jack [=McGee=], which he has described as "a [[{{Homage}} love]] [[{{Animesque}} letter]] to {{sho|nenDemographic}}unen [[FightingSeries action]] and [[GamingAndSportsAnimeAndManga sports]] anime". and has been ongoing since October 9th, 2018.
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''[[https://www.starimpactcomic.com/comic/prologue-page-1 Star Impact]]'' is a Platform/{{Hiveworks}}[==]-affiliated webcomic written and drawn by American artist Jack [=McGee=], [=McGee=] and published by Platform/{{Hiveworks}}, which he has described as "a [[{{Homage}} love]] [[{{Animesque}} letter]] to {{sho|nenDemographic}}unen [[FightingSeries action]] and [[GamingAndSportsAnimeAndManga sports]] anime". and has been ongoing since October 9th, 2018.
