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* ObfuscatingInsanity: The Witches seem to have a {{Literature/DonQuixote}} complex when it comes to Wix and appear to help him as part of their madness. [[spoiler:They prove far more cunning when they target and kill the raven flock leader before he can get back and warn Erebus of the mice's survival, aligning themselves firmly against Erebus and his pack.]]
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* ObfuscatingInsanity: The Witches seem to have a {{Literature/DonQuixote}} {{Literature/Don Quixote}} complex when it comes to Wix and appear to help him as part of their madness. [[spoiler:They prove far more cunning when they target and kill the raven flock leader before he can get back and warn Erebus of the mice's survival, aligning themselves firmly against Erebus and his pack.]]
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* BlackAndWhiteMorality: As straight up heroic Low Fantasy, there isn't a whole lot of grey.
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* BlackAndWhiteMorality: As straight up heroic Low Fantasy, LowFantasy, there isn't a whole lot of grey.
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* LargeHam: The opossum, especially when he launches into [[spoler:the story of the Guardian and the Witches.]]
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* LargeHam: The opossum, especially when he launches into [[spoler:the [[spoiler:the story of the Guardian and the Witches.]]
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* LargeHam: The opossum, especially when he launches into [[spoler:the story of the Guardian and the Witches.]]
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* BigDamnHeroes: Just as the raven cult attack Wix and Pict to kill, [[spoiler:The beavers - and Snag - attack them ''en-masse'', resulting in another CurbStompBattle and the ravens fleeing for their lives.]]
* BigGood: The mysterious Guardian of the forest, whose absence prompts Erebus and his pack to move in.
* BigGood: The mysterious Guardian of the forest, whose absence prompts Erebus and his pack to move in.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Just as the raven cult attack Wix and Pict to kill, [[spoiler:The beavers - and Snag - attack counterattack them ''en-masse'', resulting in another CurbStompBattle and the ravens fleeing for their lives.]]
* BigGood: The mysterious Guardian of the forest, whose absence prompts Erebus and his pack to move in. The opossum and the Witches seem to know the Guardian personally.
* BigGood: The mysterious Guardian of the forest, whose absence prompts Erebus and his pack to move in. The opossum and the Witches seem to know the Guardian personally.
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* BigGood: Atlas the moose. When Wix asks if the monstrous cervine intended to eat him, he laughs and says there are far better things to eat -- then offers him a ride to find Pict. Even '''''Erebus''''' won't mess with him - and one overeager RedShirt from his pack demonstrates why.
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* BigGood: The mysterious Guardian of the forest, whose absence prompts Erebus and his pack to move in.
** As well, Atlas the moose. When Wix asks if the monstrous cervine intended to eat him, he laughs and says there are far better things to eat -- then offers him a ride to find Pict. Even '''''Erebus''''' won't mess with him - and one overeager RedShirt from his pack demonstrateswhy.why.
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** As well, Atlas the moose. When Wix asks if the monstrous cervine intended to eat him, he laughs and says there are far better things to eat -- then offers him a ride to find Pict. Even '''''Erebus''''' won't mess with him - and one overeager RedShirt from his pack demonstrates
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* MrExposition: The opossum that Wix and Pict find back in the suburb. [[spoiler:When last we saw him, he was about to finally reveal the nature of the Witches, and the mysterious guardian of the forest.]]
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* PutOnABus:[[spoiler:Atlas. When the beaver dam breaks, the flood carries him off. Later pages report that he's alive but injured...and Erebus' pack is closing in on him.]]
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** The wild mice also qualify. [[spoiler:They attack Atlas thinking he's a wolf, putting him in the silly position of having to fight off a pack of mice while trying not to hurt him.]]
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** The wild mice also qualify. [[spoiler:They attack Atlas thinking he's a wolf, putting him in the silly position of having to fight off a pack of mice while trying not to hurt him.any of them.]]
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* CloudCuckoolander: The Witches. They see Wix as a noble knight and Atlas his steed [[spoiler:and are instrumental in getting Wix to Pict after the flood, armed and ready to fight.]]
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* CloudCuckoolander: The Witches. They see Wix as a noble knight and Atlas his steed [[spoiler:and are instrumental in getting Wix to Pict after the flood, armed and ready to fight. They also show CunningLikeAFox when they target and kill the raven leader before he can report the mice's survival to Erebus.]]
** The wild mice also qualify. [[spoiler:They attack Atlas thinking he's a wolf, putting him in the silly position of having to fight off a pack of mice while trying not to hurt him.]]
** The wild mice also qualify. [[spoiler:They attack Atlas thinking he's a wolf, putting him in the silly position of having to fight off a pack of mice while trying not to hurt him.]]
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* AnimalEyes: Most of the characters have eyes that look like their real-world counterpart [[spoiler:save for Erebus' GlowingEyesOfDoom.]]
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* AnimalEyes: Most of the characters have eyes that look like their real-world counterpart [[spoiler:save save for Erebus' GlowingEyesOfDoom.]]
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* AnimalStereotypes: Pretty much everywhere; the animals all follow classic stereotypes: SavageWolves, CunningLikeAFox, PredatorsAreMean, etc.
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* ObfuscatingStupidity: ObfuscatingInsanity: The Witches seem to have a {{Literature/DonQuixote}} complex when it comes to Wix and appear to help him as part of their madness. [[spoiler:They prove far more cunning when they target and kill the raven flock leader before he can get back and warn Erebus of the mice's survival, aligning themselves firmly against Erebus and his pack.]]
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* ObfuscatingStupidity: The Witches seem to have a DonQuixote {{Literature/DonQuixote}} complex when it comes to Wix and appear to help him as part of their madness. [[spoiler:They prove far more cunning when they target and kill the raven flock leader before he can get back and warn Erebus of the mice's survival, aligning themselves firmly against Erebus and his pack.]]
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* ObfusticatingStupidity: The Witches seem to have a DonQuixote complex when it comes to Wix and appear to help him as part of their madness. [[spoiler:They prove far more cunning when they target and kill the raven flock leader before he can get back and warn Erebus of the mice's survival, aligning themselves firmly against Erebus and his pack.]]
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* ObfusticatingStupidity: ObfuscatingStupidity: The Witches seem to have a DonQuixote complex when it comes to Wix and appear to help him as part of their madness. [[spoiler:They prove far more cunning when they target and kill the raven flock leader before he can get back and warn Erebus of the mice's survival, aligning themselves firmly against Erebus and his pack.]]
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* BigDamnHeroes: Just as the raven cult attack Wix and Pict to kill, [[spoiler:The beavers - and Snag - attack them ''en-masse'', resulting in another CurbStompBattle and the ravens fleeing for their lives.]]
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* AlwaysChaoticEvil: The predators, with the notable exception of the Witches, a trio of vixens with a mysterious agenda. [[spoiler: They actually kill a raven and save Pict at one point, and go out of their way to help arm and direct Wix to Pict so he can defend her from Gorgon.]]
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* AlwaysChaoticEvil: The predators, with the notable exception of the Witches, a trio of vixens with a mysterious agenda. [[spoiler: They actually kill a raven and save Pict at one point, Wix, and go out of their way to help arm and direct Wix to Pict so he can defend her from Gorgon.Gorgon. Then they kill the boss raven before he can warn Erebus.]]
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* CloudCuckoolander: The Witches. They see Wix as a noble knight and Atlas his steed [[spoiler:and are instrumental in getting him to Pict after the flood, armed and ready to fight.]]
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* CruelMercy: InUniverse, Erebus believes himself granting this to Wix. He makes no attempt to eat him. Instead, he gives Wix a VillainousMonologue about who and what he is and bids him leave before his pack returns. His final words, delivered with yet another SlasherSmile, are [[spoiler:"See you soon."]]
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* CruelMercy: InUniverse, Erebus believes himself granting this to Wix. He makes no attempt to eat him. Instead, he gives Wix a VillainousMonologue EvilGloating about who and what he is and bids him leave before his pack returns. His final words, delivered with yet another SlasherSmile, are [[spoiler:"See you soon."]]
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* CruelMercy: [[spoiler:InUniverse, Erebus believes him granting this to Wix. He makes no attempt to eat him. Instead, he gives Wix a VillainousMonologue about who and what he is and bids him leave before his pack returns. His final words, delivered with a SlasherSmile, are "See you soon."]]
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* CruelMercy: [[spoiler:InUniverse, InUniverse, Erebus believes him himself granting this to Wix. He makes no attempt to eat him. Instead, he gives Wix a VillainousMonologue about who and what he is and bids him leave before his pack returns. His final words, delivered with a yet another SlasherSmile, are "See [[spoiler:"See you soon."]]
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* AlwaysChaoticEvil: The predators, with the notable exception of the Witches, a trio of vixens with a mysterious agenda. [[spoiler: They actually kill a raven and save Pict at one point, and go out of their way to help arm and direct Wix to Pict so he can defender her from Gorgon.]]
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* AlwaysChaoticEvil: The predators, with the notable exception of the Witches, a trio of vixens with a mysterious agenda. [[spoiler: They actually kill a raven and save Pict at one point, and go out of their way to help arm and direct Wix to Pict so he can defender defend her from Gorgon.]]
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* CreepyTwins: Creepy ''triplets'' in the case of the vulpine [[TheWeirdSisters Witches]].
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* CreepyTwins: Creepy ''triplets'' in the case of the vulpine [[TheWeirdSisters Witches]]. [[spoiler:Ultimately subverted, as they are very helpful to both Wix and Pict, and seem opposed to Erebus and his pack.]]
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* AlwaysChaoticEvil: The predators, with the notable exception of the Witches, a trio of vixens with a mysterious agenda. [[spoiler: They actually kill a raven and save Pict at one point, but they are not precisely ''friendly''... and go out of their way to help arm and direct Wix to Pict so he can defender her from Gorgon.]]
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* GodOfEvil: Erebus pulls this off effortlessly. [[spoiler:He even has a raven death cult worshipping him, and his more normal packmates do not dare go against him - even to the point of devouring one of their own.]]
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* CruelMercy: [[spoiler:Erebus, upon meeting Wix, makes no attempt to eat him. Instead, he gives him a VillainousMonologue about who and what he is and bids him leave before his pack returns. His final words, delivered with a SlasherSmile, are "See you soon."]]
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* CruelMercy: [[spoiler:Erebus, upon meeting Wix, [[spoiler:InUniverse, Erebus believes him granting this to Wix. He makes no attempt to eat him. Instead, he gives him Wix a VillainousMonologue about who and what he is and bids him leave before his pack returns. His final words, delivered with a SlasherSmile, are "See you soon."]]
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* SlasherSmile: [[spoiler:Erebus, right after killing Titan, gives Wix an absolutely ''bloodcurdling'' one as he sees him.]]
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* SlasherSmile: [[spoiler:Erebus, right after killing Titan, gives Wix an absolutely ''bloodcurdling'' one as he sees him. As if that isn't enough, when he sees Wix off, he's wearing one that [[{{Literature/It}} Pennywise]] would have been proud of.]]
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* FaceDeathWithDignity: Wix, cornered by Titan and his QuirkyMinibossSquad, refuses to run and tells them to just get it over with. [[spoiler:He's saved at the last second.]]
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* QuirkyMinibossSquad: The cats, as scary as they are, qualify as this. By the end of the first book, we meet the ''real'' BigBad, Erebus the Mad Alpha wolf and his cannibalistic wolfpack.
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* QuirkyMinibossSquad: The cats, as scary as they are, qualify as this. By the end of the first book, we meet the ''real'' BigBad, Erebus the Mad Alpha wolf wolf, and his cannibalistic wolfpack.
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* FearIsTheAppropriateResponse: ''Everyone'' knows that the woods are off limits, the domain of The Beast. [[spoiler:Titan, utterly intent on revenge, ignores this and charges straight into the woods - and straight into Erebus' jaws.]]
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* FauxAffiblyEvil: Erebus in spades. He makes stabs at this from time to time, but the small matter of his bloodcurdling insanity gets in the way.
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* BadBoss: Erebus, ''and how.'' [[spoiler:''Any'' incidence of YouHaveFailedMe, or even perceived weakness, is rewarded by being mauled to death by your own packmates and EatenAlive.]]
