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* LosingAShoeInTheStruggle: Red accidentally leaves a shoe behind when the cop car she's in is beamed up to space, taking her with it.
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* LosingAShoeInTheStruggle: Red accidentally leaves a shoe behind when the cop car she's in is beamed up to space, taking her with it. She loses the other one to a Jerkass alien when she briefly knocked unconscious during a struggle for food. Leaving her stuck in her socks.
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Not An Example, since she actually does like them just fine.
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* DoesNotLikeShoes: Not exactly with Red, she had shoes when she left the orphanage. But lost one of her shoes when she was abducted. And had the other stolen by one of the aliens, leaving her stuck in her socks.
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* LosingAShoeInTheStruggle: Red accidentally leaves a shoe behind when the cop car she's in is beamed up to space, taking her with it.
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* DayHurtsDarkAdjustedEyes: when she escaped the downed ship.
* DoesNotLikeShoes: Not exactly with Red, she had shoes when she left theorphange.orphanage. But lost one of her shoes when she was abducted. And had the other stolen by one of the aliens, leaving her stuck in her socks.
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* MeaningfulName: Mrs. Foster, a foster parent
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* TranslatorMicrobes: Gibbervox, administered by a robot.
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* CaptainObvious: A robot comments when she blathers on the translation
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* {{Chiaroscuro}}: How Red escapes the crashed spaceship
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* HollywoodDarkness: the crashed spaceship's interior
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* TranslationConvention: The aliens talk about "extraterrestials" meaning people not from ''their'' planet.
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* DoesNotLikeShoes: Not exactly with Red, she had shoes when she left the orphange. But lost one of her shoes when she was abducted. And had the other stolen by one of the aliens, leaving her stuck in her socks.
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Foot Focus was turned into a redirect to These Tropes Are Made For Walking, and is no longer a trope. Performing wick cleanup.
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* FootFocus: Red due to one of her shoes getting left behind when she was abducted and the other getting stolen by one of the aliens. As such she's stuck in her socks.
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* AFriendInNeed: A blue lion who tells Red what she did and helps her and Tawee flee.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: The blue lion
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* InevitableWaterfall: When Red falls in the river
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* WrittenSoundEffect: SPLOOOSHH!!!
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* HeroesGoneFishing: A character is introduced setting up to relax, fishing.
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* TheChase: Red and her companion, chased by a stampede of little blue aliens
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* PartyScattering: Red loses her companion because they are pursued into rocks, and then she falls down a hole into a river.
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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: Feed one alien, face a stampede of them.
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* PetTheDog: Red does, after a bit, act in a friendly manner toward some aliens.
* TastesLikeFriendship: She offers food.
* TastesLikeFriendship: She offers food.
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* HumansThroughAlienEyes: Despite alot of the aliens having some odd features and quirks, they isolate themselves from Red upon talking to her.
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"Red" is a 10-year-old FosterKid who begins the comic in the care of a Mrs. Foster. She insists that she is not an orphan, and therefore not in need of adoption. During a bout of childish runaway, Red is picks up by the local cops and set to be returned. However a spaceship suddenly flies overhead and beams up the police car with Red still in it. The ship takes off into space but crash lands on a supposedly desert planet. Red finds herself among other alien abductees plunked from there homes and, though off to a rough start, starts to befriend them in the hopes of surviving the planet and find out who abducted them and for what reason.
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"Red" is a 10-year-old FosterKid who begins the comic in the care of a Mrs. Foster. She insists that she is not an orphan, and therefore not in need of adoption. During a bout of childish runaway, Red is picks picked up by the local cops and set to be returned. However a spaceship suddenly flies overhead and beams up the police car with Red still in it. The ship takes off into space but crash lands on a supposedly desert planet. Red finds herself among other alien abductees plunked from there homes and, though off to a rough start, starts to befriend them in the hopes of surviving the planet and find out who abducted them and for what reason.
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"Red" is a 10-year-old FosterKid who begins the comic in the care of a Mrs. Foster. She insists that she is not an orphan, and therefore not in need of adoption. During a bout of childish runaway, Red is picks up by the local cops and set to be returned. However a spaceship suddenly flies overhead and beams up the police car with Red still in it. The ship takes off into space but crash lands on a supposedly desert planet. Rrd finds herself among other alien abductees plunked from there homes and, though off to a rough start, starts to befriend them in the hopes of surviving the planet and find out who abducted them and for what reason.
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"Red" is a 10-year-old FosterKid who begins the comic in the care of a Mrs. Foster. She insists that she is not an orphan, and therefore not in need of adoption. During a bout of childish runaway, Red is picks up by the local cops and set to be returned. However a spaceship suddenly flies overhead and beams up the police car with Red still in it. The ship takes off into space but crash lands on a supposedly desert planet. Rrd Red finds herself among other alien abductees plunked from there homes and, though off to a rough start, starts to befriend them in the hopes of surviving the planet and find out who abducted them and for what reason.
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* CoincidentalBroadcast: Opens with a talk show about alien abductions and UFOs.
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* CoincidentalBroadcast: Opens with a talk show about alien abductions and UFOs.[=UFOs=].
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''[[http://www.redsplanet.com/comic/ Red's Planet]]'' is a ScienceFiction webcomic by Eddie Pittman. In the format of a GraphicNovel, it is divided into chapters. As of April, 2012, the Prologue and first two chapters have been completed and posted. The third is slated to begin on April 30.
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''[[http://www.redsplanet.com/comic/ Red's Planet]]'' is a ScienceFiction webcomic by Eddie Pittman. In the format of a GraphicNovel, it is divided into chapters. As of April, 2012, the Prologue and first two chapters have been completed and posted. The third is slated to begin on April 30.\n
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* TheyHaveTheScent: a dog first notes the alien ship.
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* CoincidentalBroadcast: Opens with a talk show about alien abductions and UFOs.
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* AlienAbduction: The inciting incidents.
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* ConscienceMakesYouGoBack: How Red acquires a companion.
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* BlatantLies: Red telling her companion that they're resting for him.
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"Red" is a 10-year-old FosterKid who begins the comic in the care of a Mrs. Foster. She insists that she is not an orphan, and therefore not in need of adoption. During a bout of childish runaway, Red is picks up by the local cops and set to be returned. However a spaceship suddenly flies overhead and beams up the police car with Red still in it. The ship takes off into space but crash lands on a supposedly desert planet along with other alien abdutees.
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"Red" is a 10-year-old FosterKid who begins the comic in the care of a Mrs. Foster. She insists that she is not an orphan, and therefore not in need of adoption. During a bout of childish runaway, Red is picks up by the local cops and set to be returned. However a spaceship suddenly flies overhead and beams up the police car with Red still in it. The ship takes off into space but crash lands on a supposedly desert planet along with planet. Rrd finds herself among other alien abdutees.abductees plunked from there homes and, though off to a rough start, starts to befriend them in the hopes of surviving the planet and find out who abducted them and for what reason.
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* FoodFoucs: Red due to one of her shoes getting left behind when she was abducted and the other getting stolen by one of the aliens.
* {{Jerksass}}: A good number of the aliens Red meets
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* FoodFoucs: FootFoucs: Red due to one of her shoes getting left behind when she was abducted and the other getting stolen by one of the aliens.
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"Red" is a 10-year-old FosterKid who begins the comic in the care of a Mrs. Foster. She insists that she is not an orphan, and therefore not in need of adoption. During a bout of childish runaway, Red is picks up by the local cops and set to be returned. However a spaceship suddenly flies overhead and beams up the police car with Red still in it. The ship takes off into space but crash lands on a supposedly desert planet along with other alien abdutees.
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* BerserkButton: Being called "Red"
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"Red" is a 10-year-old FosterKid who begins the comic in the care of a Mrs. Foster. She insists that she is not an orphan, and therefore not in need of adoption.
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"Red" is a 10-year-old FosterKid who begins the comic in the care of a Mrs. Foster. She insists that she is not an orphan, and therefore not in need of adoption.adoption.
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* MistakenForAfterlife: the alien planet.
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* MistakenForAfterlife: the alien planet.
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''[[http://www.redsplanet.com/comic/ Red's Planet]]'' is a ScienceFiction webcomic by Eddie Pittman. In the format of a GraphicNovel, it is divided into chapters. As of April, 2012, the Prologue and first two chapters have been completed and posted. The third
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''[[http://www.redsplanet.com/comic/ Red's Planet]]'' is a ScienceFiction webcomic by Eddie Pittman. In the format of a GraphicNovel, it is divided into chapters. As of April, 2012, the Prologue and first two chapters have been completed and posted. The thirdthird is slated to begin on April 30.
"Red" is a 10-year-old FosterKid who begins the comic in the care of a Mrs. Foster. She insists that she is not an orphan, and therefore not in need of adoption.
"Red" is a 10-year-old FosterKid who begins the comic in the care of a Mrs. Foster. She insists that she is not an orphan, and therefore not in need of adoption.
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''[[http://www.redsplanet.com/comic/ Red's Planet]]'' is a ScienceFiction webcomic by Eddie Pittman. In the format of a GraphicNovel, it is divided into chapters. As of April, 2012, the Prologue and first two chapters have been completed and posted. The third