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* CoolBigSis: Lucy towards the beggar kids, since they always offer them food and read to them stories.
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* MeltingPotNomenclature: In the same fantasy city, you have characters with Russian, Japanese, French and English names.
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* MeltingPotNomenclature: In the same fantasy city, you have characters with Russian, Greek, Japanese, French and English names.
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* SymbolMotifClothing: all the apprentices have unique geometrical motifs which appear on their clothing: circles for Broom Girl, triangles for Tetsu, etc. Lucy's motif is lozengues.
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* SymbolMotifClothing: all the apprentices have unique geometrical motifs which appear on their clothing: circles for Broom Girl, triangles for Tetsu, etc. Lucy's motif is lozengues.lozenges.
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* MeltingPotNomenclature: In a the same fantasy setting, there are city, you have characters with Russian, Japanese, French and English names.
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* SmugSnake: Sylas, who has an actual, two-headed snake as a familiar, ''tries'' to be this, but he comes across as adorkable at best, insufferably annoying at worst.
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* TheSilentBob: Broom Girl, who communicates mostly through physical gestures, like a thumbs up or a pat on the head.
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* TheSilentBob: Broom Girl, who communicates mostly through physical gestures, like a thumbs up or a pat on the head.head.
* SymbolMotifClothing: all the apprentices have unique geometrical motifs which appear on their clothing: circles for Broom Girl, triangles for Tetsu, etc. Lucy's motif is lozengues.
* SymbolMotifClothing: all the apprentices have unique geometrical motifs which appear on their clothing: circles for Broom Girl, triangles for Tetsu, etc. Lucy's motif is lozengues.
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* TheVoiceless: "Broom Girl" never speaks. This is played for comedic effect.
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* TheSilentBob: Broom Girl, who communicates through physical gestures, like a thumbs up or a pat on the head.
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* AmbiguousGender: Lucy, Senju and one of the beggar kids never had their gender specified. [[http://www.neversatisfiedcomic.com/cast The cast page]] says that they're non binary and thus, are referred to as "they".
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* GreenThumb: Philomena has an affinity for gardening (fitting, considering the color of her magic is also green).
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* SpoiledSweet: Philomena comes from a very high-ranking aristocratic family, but that doesn't stop her from being one of the nicest characters in the comic.
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* IncrediblyLamePun: [[http://www.neversatisfiedcomic.com/comic/chapter-4-page-4 Stylas.]]
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* TheVoiceless: "Broom Girl" never speaks. This is played for comical effect.
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* TheVoiceless: "Broom Girl" never speaks. This is played for comical comedic effect.
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* ColorCodedCharacters: Most of the apprentices have their own color theme: Lucy is Pink, Philomena is Green, January is Blue, Tetsu is violet, Sylas is Purple, ana is red, Cedric is orange, and Broom Girl is yellow.
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!!''Never Satisfied'' contains examples of:
!!''Never Satisfied'' contains examples of:
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* BigBeautifulWoman: Phil is broad and well rounded and has at least two of the main characters crushing on her.
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* BigBeautifulWoman: Phil is broad and well rounded and has at least two of the main characters other apprentices crushing on her.
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* BondCreatures: every wizard has a familiar, and lots of people in crowd scenes are seen with one, implying that a sizeable part of the population has magic powers. Muggles seem to be confined to the lower end of the social ladder, and at least one character has been shown to keep an animal pet as a fake familiar.
* ColorCodedCharacters: Most of the apprentices have their own color theme: Lucy is Pink, Philomena is Green, January is Blue,testu Tetsu is violet, Sylas is Purple, ana is red, Cedric is orange, and Broom Girl is yellow.
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* NiceToTheWaiter: Philomena.
* ColorCodedCharacters: Most of the apprentices have their own color theme: Lucy is Pink, Philomena is Green, January is Blue,
** The color motif extends to [[ColorCodedWizardry the characters' magic.]]
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*TheStoic: Broom Girl's face never changes, no matter the situation.
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*TheStoic: Broom Girl's face never changes, no matter the situation.
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* TheVoiceless: "Broom Girl" never speaks. This is played for comical effect.
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Never Satisfied is the story of apprentices competing for the position of magician representative for their city, serving directly under the king. There's no greater job for a magician, so who could want more? A webcomic by Taylor Robin, better known as Corny. It can be read [[http://www.neversatisfiedcomic.com/comic/never-satisfied/ here.]]
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Never Satisfied is the story of apprentices competing for the position of magician representative for their city, serving directly under the king. There's no greater job for a magician, so who could want more? A webcomic by Taylor Robin, better known as Corny. It can be read [[http://www.neversatisfiedcomic.com/comic/never-satisfied/ here.]]]]
* NoNameGiven: Even on the cast page, one of the apprentices is just called "Broom Girl". (Her familiar has a name, though.)
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Never Satisfied is the story of apprentices competing for the position of magician representative for their city, serving directly under the king. There's no greater job for a magician, so who could want more? A webcomic by Taylor Robin, better known as Corny. It can be read [[http://www.neversatisfiedcomic.com/comic/never-satisfied/ here.]][[quoteright:350:http://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/tumblr_nm8e9sjui51qf968wo1_1280_1_8.png]]
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Never Satisfied is the story of apprentices competing for the position of magician representative for their city, serving directly under the king. There's no greater job for a magician, so who could want more? A webcomic by Taylor Robin, better known as Corny. It can be read [[http://www.neversatisfiedcomic.com/comic/never-satisfied/ here.]][[quoteright:350:http://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/tumblr_nm8e9sjui51qf968wo1_1280_1_8.png]]]]
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Never Satisfied is the story of apprentices competing for the position of magician representative for their city, serving directly under the king. There's no greater job for a magician, so who could want more? A webcomic by Taylor Robin, better known as Corny. It can be read [[http://www.neversatisfiedcomic.com/comic/never-satisfied/ here.]]
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Never Satisfied is the story of apprentices competing for the position of magician representative for their city, serving directly under the king. There's no greater job for a magician, so who could want more? A webcomic by Taylor Robin, better known as Corny. It can be read [[http://www.neversatisfiedcomic.com/comic/never-satisfied/ here.]]]][[quoteright:350:http://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/tumblr_nm8e9sjui51qf968wo1_1280_1_8.png]]
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Never Satisfied is the story of apprentices competing for the position of magician representative for their city, serving directly under the king. There's no greater job for a magician, so who could want more? A webcomic by Taylor Robin, better known as Corny (http://ohcorny.tumblr.com/).
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Never Satisfied is the story of apprentices competing for the position of magician representative for their city, serving directly under the king. There's no greater job for a magician, so who could want more? A webcomic by Taylor Robin, better known as Corny (http://ohcorny.tumblr.com/).Corny. It can be read [[http://www.neversatisfiedcomic.com/comic/never-satisfied/ here.]]
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Never Satisfied is the story of apprentices competing for the position of magician representative for their city, serving directly under the king. There's no greater job for a magician, so who could want more? A webcomic by Taylor Robin, better known as Corny (http://ohcorny.tumblr.com/).