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* {{Bookends}}: The first comic both begins and ends with Earth saying "huh" thoughtfully while looking at a rock.
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* AllThereInTheManual: Details about the larger relations between and characteristics of stars, planets, and dwarf planets are on the official Tumblr, but haven't come up in the actual comics yet. (Beware of being SpoiledByTheManual- it's unwise to start looking through [[http://ghostfruits.com/archive/filter-by/answer those answers]] before being caught up, since some directly relate to large plot twists.)
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* AllThereInTheManual: Details about the larger relations between and characteristics of stars, planets, and dwarf planets are on the official Tumblr, but haven't come up in the actual comics yet. (Beware of being SpoiledByTheManual- spoilers- it's unwise to start looking through [[http://ghostfruits.com/archive/filter-by/answer those answers]] before being caught up, since some directly relate to large plot twists.)
* ContinuityCreep: The comic was more self-contained and humorous antic early on, though by #7 the different comics were interconnected enough that the authors started including links to prior installments in TheRant.
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* FourPhilosophyEnsemble: For the inner solar system, Earth is the Optimist, Mars the Cynic, Venus the Realist, and Sun the Apathetic.
** And arguably the outer planets: Jupiter is the Optimist, Saturn the Cynic, Neptune the Realist, and Uranus the Apathetic.
** And arguably the outer planets: Jupiter is the Optimist, Saturn the Cynic, Neptune the Realist, and Uranus the Apathetic.
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* FourPhilosophyEnsemble: FourPhilosophyEnsemble:
** For the inner solar system, Earth is theOptimist, Optimist (has faith in and believes the best of people, eager to make friends, pursues her curiosity without much concern for consequences), Mars is the Cynic, Cynic (pessimistic about the chances of his own survival, withdrawn and sullen in response to Earth's friendliness but is nonetheless correct in most of his assertions), Venus is the Realist, Realist (focuses on getting the best results, keeps a level head) and Sun is the Apathetic.
Apathetic (too aloof to be involved in most conflicts between the planets, has enigmatic motivations and goals, and is a different species entirely from the rest of the characters).
** And arguably the outer planets: Jupiter is theOptimist, Optimist (believes completely that he'll be able to kill Sun one day despite no actual plan, stubborn and utterly self-confident in personality), Saturn the Cynic, Cynic (keeps their distance from the rest of the planets, thinks that if their moons were alive they would hate them), Neptune the Realist, Realist (acts as a mediator between Uranus, Jupiter, and Venus, remains quietly in the background most of the time), and Uranus the Apathetic.Apathetic (unconcerned with everyone else's problems, has far different priorities than the people they interact with and screws with people for no reason but ItAmusedMe).
** For the inner solar system, Earth is the
** And arguably the outer planets: Jupiter is the
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There is also a fan translation of the comic to Korean currently in progress; it can be read [[http://ghostfruits.com/nebulakorean here]].
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Basically, it's a drama/dark comedy comic about UsefulNotes/TheSolarSystem/space objects in general, which are all sentient and humanoid (apart from the fact that they have [[NonHumanHead representations of what they actually are for heads]]). It takes various characteristics of various celestial bodies and turns them into character traits and social situations - Earth is seen by her neighbors as overly interested in what everyone else is doing, [[PlutoIsExpendable Pluto is something of an outcast]], Jupiter keeping a comet in orbit around him is regarded about the way as trying to keep a wild animal you found on the street would be, etc.
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Basically, it's a drama/dark comedy drama comic (with no few moments of humor) about UsefulNotes/TheSolarSystem/space objects in general, which are all sentient and humanoid (apart from the fact that they have [[NonHumanHead representations of what they actually are for heads]]). It takes various characteristics of various celestial bodies and turns them into character traits and social situations - Earth is seen by her neighbors as overly interested in what everyone else is doing, [[PlutoIsExpendable Pluto is something of an outcast]], Jupiter keeping a comet in orbit around him is regarded about the way as trying to keep a wild animal you found on the street would be, etc.
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* BastardlySpeech: Black Hole's speech to Pluto condemning the rest of the solar system as violent killers instead of victims of ColdBloodedTorture; he swallows it hook, line, and sinker.
* OurGiantsAreBigger: The stars, who are far, far bigger than planets, and who are also permanently on fire. They're just as intelligent and humanlike as planets, though it's obvious to everyone involved that they're a completely different species.
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* UsedToBeMoreSocial: Mars mentions that Sun's suddenly become a lot more withdrawn, never seeming to interact with the others anymore and not being distant when he does. While Mars himself admits he doesn't know why, the readers can surmise that it ties into what Sun admitted at the end of #3 about being [[HorrorHunger 'hungry']].
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* UsedToBeMoreSocial: Mars mentions that Sun's suddenly become a lot more withdrawn, never seeming to interact with the others anymore and not being distant when he does. While Mars himself admits he doesn't know why, the readers can surmise that it ties into what Sun admitted at the end of #3 about being [[HorrorHunger 'hungry']].
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* TheBlank:
** All of the characters, combined with NonHumanHead. Though weirdly enough, the cast ([[StylisticSuck kinda]]) gain expressions when we see Jupiter daydreaming.
** All of the characters, combined with NonHumanHead. Though weirdly enough, the cast ([[StylisticSuck kinda]]) gain expressions when we see Jupiter daydreaming.
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* TheBlank:
**TheBlank: All of the characters, characters have no facial features, combined with NonHumanHead. Though weirdly enough, the cast ([[StylisticSuck kinda]]) gain expressions when we see Jupiter daydreaming.
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* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness: In the first few comics, there was a noticeable 'glow' effect around the character's heads and Sun's fire. There was also a different method of coloring, with shading used instead of the flat colors seen in the rest of the comic.
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Poor Pluto... and Earth.
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Poor Pluto... and Earth. Both are outcasts from the rest of the solar system and are implied to be lowly-regarded by most.
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* AllThereInTheScript: Ceres' name is revealed in TheRant for #14 and #15, not in the comics themselves. Black Hole's name is mentioned by Pluto in ''Nix'', a canonical short story.
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* AllThereInTheScript: AllThereInTheScript:
** Ceres' name is revealed in TheRant for #14 and #15, not in the comicsthemselves. themselves.
** Black Hole's name is mentioned by Pluto in''Nix'', "Nix", a canonical short story.
** Ceres' name is revealed in TheRant for #14 and #15, not in the comics
** Black Hole's name is mentioned by Pluto in
* ArtShift: #16 has a noticeably different coloring style than the other pages (heavy use of shadows, limited color shading on things like fire and burns instead of a single flat color, a background of shades of dark blue instead of black scattered with stars) and a different font for the opening.
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* BeQuietNudge: Venus and Neptune give Jupiter two different versions of it, since [[LaResistance what he's talking about]] ''probably'' isn't going to get a great reaction from Sun if he hears him talking about it.
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* BeQuietNudge: Venus and Neptune give Jupiter two different verbal versions of it, since [[LaResistance what he's talking about]] ''probably'' isn't going to get a great reaction from Sun if he hears him talking about it.
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* TheBlank: All of the characters, combined with NonHumanHead.
** EyelessFace: Comets, though they veer onto UglyCute.
** But weirdly enough, the cast ([[StylisticSuck kinda]]) gain expressions when we see Jupiter daydreaming.
** EyelessFace: Comets, though they veer onto UglyCute.
** But weirdly enough, the cast ([[StylisticSuck kinda]]) gain expressions when we see Jupiter daydreaming.
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* TheBlank: TheBlank:
** All of the characters, combined withNonHumanHead.
** EyelessFace: Comets, though they veer onto UglyCute.
** ButNonHumanHead. Though weirdly enough, the cast ([[StylisticSuck kinda]]) gain expressions when we see Jupiter daydreaming.
** All of the characters, combined with
** EyelessFace: Comets, though they veer onto UglyCute.
** But
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* DownerEnding: Comics #15 and #16.
** 15: [[spoiler:Black Hole successfully convinces Pluto that the others are nothing but monsters and convinces him to join her in [[ForbiddenZone the void]], quite possibly to his doom. The planets are still possibly injured and definitely traumatized from Ceres' attack, and Sun has to live with the fact that he had to kill someone with his bare hands who didn't fight back or even necessarily know what was going on in order to save them.]]
** 16: [[spoiler:Virginis severely burns B's face and shoulder for asking him a question with no repercussions or any indications that something will stop him from doing it again in the future. The comic ends with B curled up in pain as smoke wafts off her skin and Virginis warning her not to move.]]
** 15: [[spoiler:Black Hole successfully convinces Pluto that the others are nothing but monsters and convinces him to join her in [[ForbiddenZone the void]], quite possibly to his doom. The planets are still possibly injured and definitely traumatized from Ceres' attack, and Sun has to live with the fact that he had to kill someone with his bare hands who didn't fight back or even necessarily know what was going on in order to save them.]]
** 16: [[spoiler:Virginis severely burns B's face and shoulder for asking him a question with no repercussions or any indications that something will stop him from doing it again in the future. The comic ends with B curled up in pain as smoke wafts off her skin and Virginis warning her not to move.]]
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* DownerEnding: Comics #15 and #16.
DeerInTheHeadlights: In the very first comic, Earth freezes in place while a meteor hurtles straight towards her instead of trying to duck out of the way.
* DownerEnding:
**15: #15: [[spoiler:Black Hole successfully convinces Pluto that the others are nothing but monsters and convinces him to join her in [[ForbiddenZone the void]], quite possibly to his doom. The planets are still possibly injured and definitely traumatized from Ceres' attack, and Sun has to live with the fact that he had to kill someone with his bare hands who didn't fight back or even necessarily know what was going on in order to save them.]]
**16: #16: [[spoiler:Virginis severely burns B's face and shoulder for asking him a question with no repercussions or any indications that something will stop him from doing it again in the future. The comic ends with B curled up in pain as smoke wafts off her skin and Virginis warning her not to move.]]
* DownerEnding:
**
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* EyelessFace: Comets have mouths and noses but no eyes, though they veer onto UglyCute instead of being creepy.
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* FriendshipDenial: Jupiter flatly refuses Uranus' claims of friendship, though this doesn't really do much to deter them.
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* FriendshipDenial: FriendshipDenial:
** Jupiter flatly refuses Uranus' claims of friendship, though this doesn't really do much to deter them.
** Jupiter flatly refuses Uranus' claims of friendship, though this doesn't really do much to deter them.
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* HearingVoices: Both Earth and Pluto can hear Black Hole, though only Pluto seems to be listening to her.
* HorrorHunger: Sun has it, but thankfully he hasn't acted on it. ''Yet''.
* AHouseDivided: The fact that there's something out there waiting to kill them if they leave the solar system only exacerbates the problems between the members of the solar system (several of whom disliked each other already).
* HorrorHunger: Sun has it, but thankfully he hasn't acted on it. ''Yet''.
* AHouseDivided: The fact that there's something out there waiting to kill them if they leave the solar system only exacerbates the problems between the members of the solar system (several of whom disliked each other already).
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* HearingVoices: Both Earth and Pluto can hear Black Hole, Hole's voice in their heads, though only Pluto seems to be listening to her.
what she says.
* HorrorHunger: It's heavily implied Sun hasit, a desire to eat the planets, but thankfully he hasn't acted on it. ''Yet''.
*AHouseDivided: AHouseDivided:
** The fact that there's something out there waiting to kill them if they leave thesolar system saaefty of the area close to Sun only exacerbates the problems between the members of the solar system (several of whom disliked each other already).
* HorrorHunger: It's heavily implied Sun has
*
** The fact that there's something out there waiting to kill them if they leave the
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* ItsProbablyNothing: Earth's response to Mars getting worried about how Sun has been acting. Unusual in that Mars does actually get her to take his concerns at least a little bit more seriously.
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* ItsProbablyNothing: ItsProbablyNothing:
** Earth's response to Mars getting worried about how Sun has been acting. Unusual in that Mars does actually get her to take his concerns at least a little bit more seriously.
** Earth's response to Mars getting worried about how Sun has been acting. Unusual in that Mars does actually get her to take his concerns at least a little bit more seriously.
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* KlingonPromotion: Jupiter wants to get one very, very badly.
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* KlingonPromotion: Jupiter wants to get one very, very badly.kill Sun, which in his mind automatically would mean that he would take Sun's place as leader.
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* LivingForeverIsNoBigDeal: They're ''planets'' (or stars)-- ''all'' of them are eons old and it's regarded as a matter of course.
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* LivingForeverIsNoBigDeal: They're ''planets'' (or stars)-- stars, or dwarf planets)-- ''all'' of them are eons old and it's regarded as a matter of course.
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* MoodWhiplash: #8 is a lighthearted comic about Uranus' attempts to befriend Jupiter... followed by #9: Sun's confrontation with Mars and the introduction of Black Hole.
** And #13 is Jupiter and Sun completely failing at having a non-awkward conversation with each other about dinner... and is followed by [[MultiPartEpisode #14 and #15]], which are Black Hole trying to convince Pluto to join her.
** And #13 is Jupiter and Sun completely failing at having a non-awkward conversation with each other about dinner... and is followed by [[MultiPartEpisode #14 and #15]], which are Black Hole trying to convince Pluto to join her.
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* MoodWhiplash: MoodWhiplash:
** #8 is a lighthearted comic about Uranus' attempts to befriend Jupiter... followed by #9: Sun's confrontation with Mars and the introduction of Black Hole.
**And #13 is humor about Jupiter and Sun completely failing at having a non-awkward conversation with each other about dinner... and is followed by [[MultiPartEpisode #14 and #15]], which are Black Hole trying to convince Pluto to join her.her and the planets nearly being painfully murdered.
** #8 is a lighthearted comic about Uranus' attempts to befriend Jupiter... followed by #9: Sun's confrontation with Mars and the introduction of Black Hole.
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* NeverSplitTheParty: Mars and Earth agree they should try to enact this among the planets in case something happens with Sun. Earth seems to take it somewhat less seriously.
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* NeverSplitTheParty: Mars and Earth agree they should try to enact play this among straight with the rest of the planets in case something happens with Sun. Earth seems to take it somewhat less seriously.Sun.
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* NonIndicativeFirstEpisode: In the first comic, everyone is far more openly dismissive of Earth and her (justified) panic over the meteor, and are just generally reluctant to interact with each other when in later installments they actively seek each other out. Only Mars really remained that way, and he's turned into more of a JerkWithAHeartOfGold.
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* NonIndicativeFirstEpisode: In the first comic, everyone is far more openly dismissive of Earth and her (justified) panic over the meteor, and are just generally reluctant to interact with each other when at all while in later installments they actively seek each other out. Only Mars really remained that way, and he's turned into more of a JerkWithAHeartOfGold.
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** UsedToBeMoreSocial
--> '''Mars:''' Do you ever think something is... strange? About Sun?\\
'''Earth:''' Yeah! Yeah, most things actually. He's weird.\\
'''Mars:''' No, I mean... Something ''wrong'' about him, lately. '''''Really''''' wrong.\\
...\\
'''Mars:''' It's undeniable, Earth. He's different than he used to be. He's never around, and when he is he seems... distracted.
* NotSoDifferent: Uranus attempts to invoke it with Jupiter, but he really doesn't care and just wants them to leave him alone.
--> '''Mars:''' Do you ever think something is... strange? About Sun?\\
'''Earth:''' Yeah! Yeah, most things actually. He's weird.\\
'''Mars:''' No, I mean... Something ''wrong'' about him, lately. '''''Really''''' wrong.\\
...\\
'''Mars:''' It's undeniable, Earth. He's different than he used to be. He's never around, and when he is he seems... distracted.
* NotSoDifferent: Uranus attempts to invoke it with Jupiter, but he really doesn't care and just wants them to leave him alone.
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--> '''Mars:''' Do you ever think something is... strange? About Sun?\\
'''Earth:''' Yeah! Yeah, most things actually. He's weird.\\
'''Mars:''' No, I mean... Something ''wrong'' about him, lately. '''''Really''''' wrong.\\
...\\
'''Mars:''' It's undeniable, Earth. He's different than he used to be. He's never around, and when he is he seems... distracted.
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** #16 is [[SomethingCompletelyDifferent "Even further away than normal"]].
* PaintingTheMedium: Black Hole's dialogue appears directly onto the page with no word bubbles around it, is very large, is shown in a pixelated font, and usually has some kind of glitch effect around it.
** Ceres' dialogue/thoughts appear the way Pluto's do, but are a garbled jumble of letters overlaying each other so thick that they're impossible to read.
* PaintingTheMedium: Black Hole's dialogue appears directly onto the page with no word bubbles around it, is very large, is shown in a pixelated font, and usually has some kind of glitch effect around it.
** Ceres' dialogue/thoughts appear the way Pluto's do, but are a garbled jumble of letters overlaying each other so thick that they're impossible to read.
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** #16 is [[SomethingCompletelyDifferent "Even further away than normal"]].
normal"]]
*PaintingTheMedium: PaintingTheMedium:
** Black Hole's dialogue appears directly onto the page with no word bubbles around it, is very large, is shown in a pixelated font, and usually has some kind of glitch effect around it.
** Ceres' dialogue/thoughts appear the same way Pluto's do, but are a garbled jumble of letters overlaying each other so thick that they're impossible to read.
*
** Black Hole's dialogue appears directly onto the page with no word bubbles around it, is very large, is shown in a pixelated font, and usually has some kind of glitch effect around it.
** Ceres' dialogue/thoughts appear the same way Pluto's do, but are a garbled jumble of letters overlaying each other so thick that they're impossible to read.
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* PowerFantasy: Jupiter's daydream about how things will be different once he's in charge, featuring him as king of the planets and everyone bowing and scraping to him. [[IJustWantToBeYou Also, he's inexplicably on fire]].
** Crosses over with DreamSue, with how the rest of the dream characters act like he's the single greatest thing to ever grace the world with his presence.
** Crosses over with DreamSue, with how the rest of the dream characters act like he's the single greatest thing to ever grace the world with his presence.
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* PowerFantasy: Jupiter's daydream about how things will be different once he's in charge, featuring him as king of the planets and everyone bowing and scraping to him. [[IJustWantToBeYou Also, he's inexplicably on fire]].
** Crossesfire]]. It crosses over with DreamSue, with how the rest of the dream characters act like he's the single greatest thing to ever grace the world with his presence.
** Crosses
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Mars delivers one to Earth when she tries to find out more about him, with him accusing her of not really caring about what he's like, and that she's just trying to befriend people to satisfy her own curiosity. Earth doesn't really have a reply to it.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Mars delivers one to Earth when she tries to find out more about him, with him accusing her of not really caring about what he's like, and that she's just trying to befriend people to satisfy her own curiosity. Earth doesn't really have a reply or rebuttal to it.
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* RightBehindMe: Sun interrupts in the middle of Jupiter's rant about how he needs to do more to try to surpass him. Since Sun's not exactly inconspicuous, it might double as FailedASpotCheck.
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* RightBehindMe: Sun interrupts in the middle of Jupiter's rant about how he needs to do more to try to surpass him. Since Sun's not exactly inconspicuous, it might double as FailedASpotCheck.FailedASpotCheck on Jupiter's part.
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* SmallSecludedWorld: The solar system (and star systems in general); no one new comes in, no one who was born there has ever been outside of it, and no one really knows what's beyond it, if anything.
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* SmallSecludedWorld: The solar system (and star systems in general); no one new comes in, no one who was born there has ever been outside of it, and no one really knows what's beyond it, it or if anything.there's anything at all.
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* SomethingCompletelyDifferent: #16; unlike all the other comics, it's about space characters who aren't affiliated with or who interact with the solar system at all.
** ArtShift: Has a noticeably different coloring style than the other pages.[[note]]And a different font for the opening![[/note]]
* SpellMyNameWithAThe: Averted completely with Earth, and mostly averted with Sun- weirdly enough, only Jupiter calls him "the Sun". AKA, the one person who completely ''despises'' him.
** ArtShift: Has a noticeably different coloring style than the other pages.[[note]]And a different font for the opening![[/note]]
* SpellMyNameWithAThe: Averted completely with Earth, and mostly averted with Sun- weirdly enough, only Jupiter calls him "the Sun". AKA, the one person who completely ''despises'' him.
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* SomethingCompletelyDifferent: #16; unlike all the other comics, it's about space characters who aren't affiliated with or who interact with the solar system or Black Hole at all.
** ArtShift: Has a noticeably different coloring style than the other pages.[[note]]And a different font for the opening![[/note]]
* SpellMyNameWithAThe: Averted completely with Earth, and mostly averted played with in regards to Sun- weirdly enough, only Jupiter calls him "the Sun". AKA, the one person who completely ''despises'' him.
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* StylisticSuck: The daydream sequence that Jupiter has, complete with scribble art and really clumsy out-of-character dialog.
* SurroundedByIdiots: Mercury is less than impressed by the rest of the planets.
* TheyWereHoldingYouBack: One of Black Hole's justifications for Pluto to join her.
* SurroundedByIdiots: Mercury is less than impressed by the rest of the planets.
* TheyWereHoldingYouBack: One of Black Hole's justifications for Pluto to join her.
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* StylisticSuck: The daydream sequence that Jupiter has, has is notably lower quality than the regular comic, complete with scribble art and really clumsy out-of-character dialog.
* SurroundedByIdiots: Mercury is less than impressed by the rest of theplanets.
planets and initially assumes that Sun takes this view of them too. It's ambiguous if Sun's dismissal ("No. It's not that.") is a subversion, or if he agrees with Mercury and that it's just not what he was talking about.
* TheyWereHoldingYouBack: One of Black Hole's justifications for Pluto to joinher.her and leave the solar system.
* SurroundedByIdiots: Mercury is less than impressed by the rest of the
* TheyWereHoldingYouBack: One of Black Hole's justifications for Pluto to join
* UsedToBeMoreSocial: Mars mentions that Sun's suddenly become a lot more withdrawn, never seeming to interact with the others anymore and not being distant when he does. While Mars himself admits he doesn't know why, the readers can surmise that it ties into what Sun admitted at the end of #3 about being [[HorrorHunger 'hungry']].
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** "I'm hungry." (#3)[[labelnote:explanation]]Up until that line there was no way of knowing what exactly Sun meant about being sick, as he himself admitted he didn't really how to explain what was wrong with him; that line revealed it was HorrorHunger. That single line changes how all his subsequent interactions with the planets are viewed.[[/labelnote]]
** "It's like it's coming from... inside of me?" (#9)[[labelnote:explanation]]Earth reveals that not only does Black Hole have an active interest in the planets, she has outright supernatural powers.[[/labelnote]]
** "...Yeah." (#15)[[labelnote:explanation]]Pluto agrees to leave the solar system behind and join Black Hole, giving up his idealistic dreams of becoming friends and cementing Ceres' death as his CynicismCatalyst.[[/labelnote]]
** "It's like it's coming from... inside of me?" (#9)[[labelnote:explanation]]Earth reveals that not only does Black Hole have an active interest in the planets, she has outright supernatural powers.[[/labelnote]]
** "...Yeah." (#15)[[labelnote:explanation]]Pluto agrees to leave the solar system behind and join Black Hole, giving up his idealistic dreams of becoming friends and cementing Ceres' death as his CynicismCatalyst.[[/labelnote]]
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** "I'm hungry." (#3)[[labelnote:explanation]]Up (#3) Up until that line there was no way of knowing what exactly Sun meant about being sick, as he himself admitted he didn't really how to explain what was wrong with him; that line revealed it was HorrorHunger. That single line changes how all his subsequent interactions with the planets are viewed.[[/labelnote]]
viewed.
** "It's like it's coming from... inside of me?"(#9)[[labelnote:explanation]]Earth (#9) Earth reveals that not only does Black Hole have an active interest in the planets, she has outright supernatural powers.[[/labelnote]]
powers.
** "...Yeah."(#15)[[labelnote:explanation]]Pluto (#15) Pluto agrees to leave the solar system behind and join Black Hole, giving up his idealistic dreams of becoming friends and cementing Ceres' death as his CynicismCatalyst.[[/labelnote]]
** "It's like it's coming from... inside of me?"
** "...Yeah."
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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: [[spoiler:Poor [[AmbiguouslyEvil (?)]] Ceres: they are sent to die by their own commander in order to prove a point to Pluto.]]
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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: [[spoiler:Poor [[AmbiguouslyEvil (?)]] [[spoiler:Poor(?) Ceres: they are get sent to die by their own commander in order to prove a point to Pluto.]]
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'''''Nebula''''' is an ongoing Sci-fi/Slice of Life webcomic about the DysfunctionJunction that is the solar system.
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** #9: [[OutsideContextVillain Black Hole]] makes her first appearance.
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** #9: [[OutsideContextVillain [[OutsideContextProblem Black Hole]] makes her first appearance.
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* HearingVoices: Both Earth and Pluto can hear Black Hole, though only Pluto seems to be listening to her]].
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* HearingVoices: Both Earth and Pluto can hear Black Hole, though only Pluto seems to be listening to her]].her.
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-->--'''Intro to ''Nebula Ultra'''''
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* ArcWords: Repeated by Mars: "Something bigger than us."
* ArmorPiercingQuestion:
* ArmorPiercingQuestion:
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* ArcWords: Repeated by Mars: "Something bigger than us."
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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: How the social structures in space tend to end up -- the biggest and strongest ones there, the stars, control the smaller and weaker planets on the grounds that they're... bigger and stronger and they can burn people to death if they want to. How good of a job they do of it depends on the star, though most ''do'' seem to feel [[ComesGreatResponsibility a genuine urge to protect their planets.]]
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* TheBlank: All of the characters.
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* TheBlank: All of the characters.characters, combined with NonHumanHead.
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* BodyMotifs: Panels focused on one of a character's hands reoccur, and usually indicate either that an important decision has been made or realization has been had.
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* BodyMotifs: Panels focused on one of a character's hands (often clenched into a fist) reoccur, and usually indicate either that an important decision has been made or realization has been had.
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** Viginis: Orange
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** Viginis: OrangePale orange
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* DownerEnding: #15 and #16.
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* DownerEnding: Comics #15 and #16.
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--> "Jupiter is... dumb. Jupiter's really dumb. But that doesn't mean he might not accidentally be right about something for once."
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* MightMakesRight: How the social structures in space tend to end up -- the biggest and strongest ones there, the stars, control the smaller and weaker planets on the grounds that they're... bigger and stronger and they can burn people to death if they want to. How good of a job they do of it depends on the star, though most ''do'' seem to feel [[ComesGreatResponsibility a genuine urge to protect their planets.]]
* MultiPartEpisode: #14 and #15, which was originally one comic but had to be split in two due to length.
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** "I'm hungry." (#3)
** "It's like it's coming from... inside of me?" (#9)
** "...Yeah." (#15)
* WoundedGazelleGambit: [[spoiler:Black Hole convinces Pluto that the others in the solar system are violent monsters for killing Ceres, whom she sent to die in the first place.]]
* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: [[spoiler:Poor [[AmbiguouslyEvil (?)]] Ceres- sent to die by their own commander in order to prove a point to Pluto.]]
** "It's like it's coming from... inside of me?" (#9)
** "...Yeah." (#15)
* WoundedGazelleGambit: [[spoiler:Black Hole convinces Pluto that the others in the solar system are violent monsters for killing Ceres, whom she sent to die in the first place.]]
* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: [[spoiler:Poor [[AmbiguouslyEvil (?)]] Ceres- sent to die by their own commander in order to prove a point to Pluto.]]
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** "I'm hungry." (#3)
(#3)[[labelnote:explanation]]Up until that line there was no way of knowing what exactly Sun meant about being sick, as he himself admitted he didn't really how to explain what was wrong with him; that line revealed it was HorrorHunger. That single line changes how all his subsequent interactions with the planets are viewed.[[/labelnote]]
** "It's like it's coming from... inside of me?"(#9)
(#9)[[labelnote:explanation]]Earth reveals that not only does Black Hole have an active interest in the planets, she has outright supernatural powers.[[/labelnote]]
** "...Yeah."(#15)
(#15)[[labelnote:explanation]]Pluto agrees to leave the solar system behind and join Black Hole, giving up his idealistic dreams of becoming friends and cementing Ceres' death as his CynicismCatalyst.[[/labelnote]]
* WoundedGazelleGambit: [[spoiler:Black Hole convinces Pluto that the others in the solar system are violent monsters for killing Ceres, whom she sent to die in the firstplace.place and who provoked the others by attacking first.]]
* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: [[spoiler:Poor [[AmbiguouslyEvil (?)]]Ceres- Ceres: they are sent to die by their own commander in order to prove a point to Pluto.]]
** "It's like it's coming from... inside of me?"
** "...Yeah."
* WoundedGazelleGambit: [[spoiler:Black Hole convinces Pluto that the others in the solar system are violent monsters for killing Ceres, whom she sent to die in the first
* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: [[spoiler:Poor [[AmbiguouslyEvil (?)]]
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Basically, it's a drama/dark comedy comic about UsefulNotes/TheSolarSystem/space objects in general, which are all sentient and humanoid (apart from the fact that they have representations of what they actually are for heads). It takes various characteristics of various celestial bodies and turns them into character traits and social situations - Earth is seen by her neighbors as overly interested in what everyone else is doing, [[PlutoIsExpendable Pluto is something of an outcast]], Jupiter keeping a comet in orbit around him is regarded about the way as trying to keep a wild animal you found on the street would be, etc.
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Basically, it's a drama/dark comedy comic about UsefulNotes/TheSolarSystem/space objects in general, which are all sentient and humanoid (apart from the fact that they have [[NonHumanHead representations of what they actually are for heads).heads]]). It takes various characteristics of various celestial bodies and turns them into character traits and social situations - Earth is seen by her neighbors as overly interested in what everyone else is doing, [[PlutoIsExpendable Pluto is something of an outcast]], Jupiter keeping a comet in orbit around him is regarded about the way as trying to keep a wild animal you found on the street would be, etc.
* ColdBloodedTorture: [[spoiler:What Ceres uses their powers to do the planets, keeping them in incredible pain while their bodies slowly crumble to pieces.]] It's implied that the entire point of doing that to them was to make Sun run out of time/options and get him to use force to help them, thus ruining everyone's reputation.
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* ViolenceIsTheOnlyOption: [[spoiler:Sun trying to make Ceres back off through talking had absolutely no effect or success in getting them to stop hurting the planets. The only thing that stopped them was him [[ShootTheDog ripping his hand through their torso]].]]
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* ViolenceIsTheOnlyOption: [[spoiler:Sun trying [[spoiler:Trying to make Ceres stop or back off through talking had has absolutely no effect or success in at getting them to stop hurting the planets. The only thing that stopped ends up stopping them was him is Sun [[ShootTheDog ripping his hand through their torso]].]]
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-> ''...Oh. ''
->''...Well.''
->''...Next time.''
->''...Well.''
->''...Next time.''
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...Well.
->''...
...Next time.''
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->''Space is bad, to be honest with you.''
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-->''Space is bad, to be honest with you.''
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* AchillesInHisTent: Sun, who walks off and leaves after Earth says that she can hear Black Hole's voice [[HearingVoices inside her]].
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* AchillesInHisTent: Sun, who walks off and leaves the meeting after Earth says that she can hear Black Hole's voice [[HearingVoices inside her]].
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* TheBlank: All of the main characters.
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* TheBlank: All of the main characters.
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** Earlier, Mars to Earth's.
* HearingVoices: Both Earth and Pluto can hear Black Hole, though only Pluto seems to be listening to her.
* HearingVoices: Both Earth and Pluto can hear Black Hole, though only Pluto seems to be listening to her.
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** Earlier, Mars to Earth's.
Earth's... though it's implied that he's more bark than bite.
* HearingVoices: Both Earth and Pluto can hear Black Hole, though only Pluto seems to be listening toher.her]].
* HearingVoices: Both Earth and Pluto can hear Black Hole, though only Pluto seems to be listening to
* MightMakesRight: How the social structures in space tend to end up -- the biggest and strongest ones there, the stars, control the smaller and weaker planets on the grounds that they're... bigger and stronger and they can burn people to death if they want to. How good of a job they do of it depends on the star, though most ''do'' seem to feel [[ComesGreatResponsibility a genuine urge to protect their planets.]]
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* NonIndicativeFirstEpisode: In the first comic, everyone is far more openly dismissive of Earth and her panic, and are just generally reluctant to interact with each other. Only Mars really remained that way, and he's turned into more of a JerkWithAHeartOfGold.
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* NonIndicativeFirstEpisode: In the first comic, everyone is far more openly dismissive of Earth and her panic, (justified) panic over the meteor, and are just generally reluctant to interact with each other.other when in later installments they actively seek each other out. Only Mars really remained that way, and he's turned into more of a JerkWithAHeartOfGold.
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** #16 is "Even further away than normal".
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** #16 is [[SomethingCompletelyDifferent "Even further away than normal".normal"]].
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* PowerFantasy: Jupiter's daydream about how things will be different once he's in charge. [[IJustWantToBeYou Also, he's inexplicably on fire]].
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* PowerFantasy: Jupiter's daydream about how things will be different once he's in charge.charge, featuring him as king of the planets and everyone bowing and scraping to him. [[IJustWantToBeYou Also, he's inexplicably on fire]].
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* CurbStompBattle: Sun's 'fight' with [[spoiler:Ceres]], which ended with Sun [[HalfTheManHeUsedToBe ripping them in half]] in his first attack and only attack.
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* CurbStompBattle: Sun's 'fight' with [[spoiler:Ceres]], which ended with Sun [[HalfTheManHeUsedToBe ripping them in half]] in with his first attack and only attack.
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You can find part 1 (comics 1-15 and the short story ''Nix'') for sale (pay what you want) at Gumroad [[https://gumroad.com/l/NsWhF here]]. Otherwise, the Ghostfruits tumblr has all the comics and ''Nix'' online [[http://ghostfruits.tumblr.com/tagged/space here.]]
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You can find part 1 (comics 1-15 and the short story ''Nix'') "Nix") for sale (pay what you want) at Gumroad [[https://gumroad.com/l/NsWhF here]]. Otherwise, the Ghostfruits tumblr has all the comics and ''Nix'' "Nix" online [[http://ghostfruits.tumblr.com/tagged/space here.]]
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* AchillesInHisTent: Sun after Earth says that she can hear Black Hole's voice [[HearingVoices inside her]].
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* AchillesInHisTent: Sun Sun, who walks off and leaves after Earth says that she can hear Black Hole's voice [[HearingVoices inside her]].
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* ArcWords: "Something bigger than us."
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* ArcWords: Repeated by Mars: "Something bigger than us."
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* BeQuietNudge: Venus and Neptune give Jupiter two different versions of it, since [[LaResistance what he's talking about]] ''probably'' isn't going to get a great reaction from Sun if he hears him.
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* BeQuietNudge: Venus and Neptune give Jupiter two different versions of it, since [[LaResistance what he's talking about]] ''probably'' isn't going to get a great reaction from Sun if he hears him.him talking about it.
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** Pluto: Light blue/teal
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** Pluto: Light blue/tealblue/Teal
* CurbStompBattle: Sun's 'fight' with [[spoiler:Ceres]], which ended with Sun [[HalfTheManHeUsedToBe ripping them in half]] in his first attack and only attack.
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** 15: [[spoiler:Black Hole successfully convinced Pluto that the others are nothing but monsters and convinced him to join her in [[ForbiddenZone the void]], quite possibly to his doom. The planets are still possibly injured and definitely traumatized from Ceres' attack, and Sun had to kill someone with his bare hands who didn't fight back or even necessarily know what was going on in order to save them.]]
** 16: [[spoiler:Virginis severely burned B's face and shoulder for asking him a question with no repercussions or any indications that something will stop him from doing it again in the future. The comic ended with B curled up in pain as smoke wafted off her skin and Virginis warned her not to move.]]
** 16: [[spoiler:Virginis severely burned B's face and shoulder for asking him a question with no repercussions or any indications that something will stop him from doing it again in the future. The comic ended with B curled up in pain as smoke wafted off her skin and Virginis warned her not to move.]]
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** 15: [[spoiler:Black Hole successfully convinced convinces Pluto that the others are nothing but monsters and convinced convinces him to join her in [[ForbiddenZone the void]], quite possibly to his doom. The planets are still possibly injured and definitely traumatized from Ceres' attack, and Sun has to live with the fact that he had to kill someone with his bare hands who didn't fight back or even necessarily know what was going on in order to save them.]]
** 16: [[spoiler:Virginis severelyburned burns B's face and shoulder for asking him a question with no repercussions or any indications that something will stop him from doing it again in the future. The comic ended ends with B curled up in pain as smoke wafted wafts off her skin and Virginis warned warning her not to move.]]
** 16: [[spoiler:Virginis severely
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* NotSoOmniscientCouncilOfBickering: Even before things started going bad, the solar system could barely agree when they met to discus anything.
* ObliquelyObfuscatedOccupation: Just what ''is'' their job anyway?
* ObliquelyObfuscatedOccupation: Just what ''is'' their job anyway?
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* NotSoOmniscientCouncilOfBickering: Even before things started going bad, the solar system could barely agree when they met to discus discuss anything.
* ObliquelyObfuscatedOccupation: Just what ''is'' their jobanyway?anyway? Mercury, and to some extent Mars certainly seem to think of the other planets as coworkers they have to tolerate with gritted teeth, but what it is they're actually doing (apart from surviving) isn't explained.
* ObliquelyObfuscatedOccupation: Just what ''is'' their job
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* PaintingTheMedium: Black Hole's dialogue appears directly onto the page with no word bubbles around it, and usually has some kind of glitch effect around it.
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* PaintingTheMedium: Black Hole's dialogue appears directly onto the page with no word bubbles around it, is very large, is shown in a pixelated font, and usually has some kind of glitch effect around it.
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-->"'''''They're dead!''''' Because they thought they could just float out into the void like it was nothing. And I told them! B! Just like I tell ''you!'' I ''begged'' them to stay! And nobody would listen. And now they're ''dead.'' All I've ever wanted was for you to not end up that way, B. ''[turns away]'' That's all.
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-->"'''''They're dead!''''' Because they thought they could just float out into the void like it was nothing. And I told them! B! Just like I tell ''you!'' I ''begged'' them to stay! And nobody would listen. And now they're ''dead.'' All I've ever wanted was for you to not end up that way, B. ''[turns away]'' That's all. "
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* OpeningNarration: Most comics begin with "Really far away. Really long ago"[[note]]Or reversed-- "Really long ago. Really far away."[[/note]] over a shot of the main character(s) of that comic. Occasionally, this is changed: #9 has no opening at all and goes straight to action, #12 is "Someday soon, [[FantasySequence one would hope]]", and #15 is [[WhamEpisode "Right here. Right now."]]
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* OpeningNarration: Most comics begin with "Really far away. Really long ago"[[note]]Or reversed-- "Really long ago. Really far away."[[/note]] over a shot of the main character(s) of that comic. Occasionally, this is changed: changed:
** #9 has no opening at all and goes straight toaction, action.
** #12 is "Someday soon, [[FantasySequence one wouldhope]]", and hope]]"
** #15 is [[WhamEpisode "Right here. Right now."]]
** #9 has no opening at all and goes straight to
** #12 is "Someday soon, [[FantasySequence one would
** #15 is [[WhamEpisode "Right here. Right now."]]
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* ThePromise: Mars asks Venus to break his moon if he dies. She agrees.
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* ThePromise: Mars asks Venus to promise to break his moon if he dies.dies, no matter what it takes. She agrees.
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* RightBehindMe: In the middle of Jupiter's rant about how he needs to do more to try to surpass Sun. Since Sun's not exactly inconspicuous, it might double as FailedASpotCheck.
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* RightBehindMe: In Sun interrupts in the middle of Jupiter's rant about how he needs to do more to try to surpass Sun.him. Since Sun's not exactly inconspicuous, it might double as FailedASpotCheck.
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* SmallSecludedWorld: The solar system; no one new comes in, no one who was born there has ever been outside of it, and no one really knows what's beyond it, if anything.
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* SmallSecludedWorld: The solar system; system (and star systems in general); no one new comes in, no one who was born there has ever been outside of it, and no one really knows what's beyond it, if anything.
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* FourPhilosophyEnsemble: For the inner solar system, Mars is the Cynic, Earth the Optimist, Venus the Realist, and Sun the Apathetic.
** And arguably the outer planets: Jupiter is the Optimist, Neptune the Realist, Saturn the Cynic, and Uranus the Apathetic.
** And arguably the outer planets: Jupiter is the Optimist, Neptune the Realist, Saturn the Cynic, and Uranus the Apathetic.
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* FourPhilosophyEnsemble: For the inner solar system, Mars is the Cynic, Earth is the Optimist, Mars the Cynic, Venus the Realist, and Sun the Apathetic.
** And arguably the outer planets: Jupiter is the Optimist, Saturn the Cynic, Neptune the Realist,Saturn the Cynic, and Uranus the Apathetic.
** And arguably the outer planets: Jupiter is the Optimist, Saturn the Cynic, Neptune the Realist,
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: You've got a planet who is almost physically unable to keep her nose out of everyone else's business (Earth), her more mature younger sister (Venus), an office worker who can barely start a conversation without insulting everyone else in the room (Mercury), a melodramatic LeaderWannabe with more ambition than brains (Jupiter), a moon-thief and borderline con-artist (Uranus), a recluse who would really just rather not in general (Saturn), a JerkWithAHeartOfGold who speaks CassandraTruth like a second language (Mars), an often spoken-over voice of reason (Neptune), and a member of a completely different species who's barely suppressing the urge to murder all of them (Sun).
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: You've got a planet who is almost physically unable to keep her nose out of everyone else's business (Earth), her more mature younger sister (Venus), an office worker who can barely start a conversation without insulting everyone else in the room (Mercury), a melodramatic LeaderWannabe with more ambition than brains (Jupiter), a moon-thief and borderline con-artist (Uranus), a recluse who would really just rather not interact with people in general (Saturn), a JerkWithAHeartOfGold who speaks CassandraTruth like a second language (Mars), an often spoken-over voice of reason (Neptune), and a member of a completely different species who's barely suppressing the urge to murder all of them (Sun).
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* RedFilterOfDoom: The last few panels of comic #3 are silent shoots of the other characters, all tinted red.
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* RedFilterOfDoom: The last few panels of comic #3 are silent shoots shots of the other characters, all tinted red.red, and then Sun's final lines.
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* RotatingProtagonist: The focus characters switch comic to comic, with the various plotlines (Black Hole lurking, Sun getting sick, [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking Jupiter...being Jupiter]]) slowly being progressed from multiple PO[==]Vs.
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* RotatingProtagonist: The focus characters switch comic to comic, with the various plotlines (Black Hole lurking, Sun getting sick, [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking Jupiter...being Jupiter]]) slowly being progressed from multiple PO[==]Vs.[=POVs=].
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--> '''Sun''': ...OK, because it doesn't... so much as look like you ate all that. As much as it looks like you're just kind of holding it inside your body.
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--> '''Sun''': ...'''Sun:''' ...OK, because it doesn't... so much as look like you ate all that. As much as it looks like you're just kind of holding it inside your body.
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** Earth: green, [[EarlyInstallmentWeirdness originally blue]]
** Mars and Venus: orange
** Mercury: grey
** Jupiter: orange, sometimes with stripes
** Saturn: beige
** Uranus: blue
** Neptune: dark blue
** Pluto: light blue/teal
** Sun: yellow
** Black Hole: purple
** B: pink
** Viginis: orange
** Mars and Venus: orange
** Mercury: grey
** Jupiter: orange, sometimes with stripes
** Saturn: beige
** Uranus: blue
** Neptune: dark blue
** Pluto: light blue/teal
** Sun: yellow
** Black Hole: purple
** B: pink
** Viginis: orange
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** Earth: green, Green, [[EarlyInstallmentWeirdness originally blue]]
**Mars and Mars: Orange (usually reddish)
** Venus:orange
Orange
** Mercury:grey
Grey
** Jupiter:orange, Orange, sometimes with stripes
** Saturn:beige
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** Uranus:blue
Blue
** Neptune:dark Dark blue
** Pluto:light Light blue/teal
** Sun:yellow
Yellow
** Black Hole:purple
Purple
** B:pink
Pink
** Viginis:orangeOrange
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** Venus:
** Mercury:
** Jupiter:
** Saturn:
** Uranus:
** Neptune:
** Pluto:
** Sun:
** Black Hole:
** B:
** Viginis:
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* {{Interquel}}: ''Nix'' takes place some time between #10 and #14.
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* {{Interquel}}: ''Nix'' "Nix" is a short story from Pluto's [=POV=], and takes place some time between #10 and #14.
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--> '''Uranus''': C'mon! For real, fuck that Sun guy, right?\\
'''Jupiter''': Stop.\\
'''Uranus''': Like, what's his deal? Thinking he's all hot shit? Well, [[WreathedInFlames in a literal sense I guess]] but--
'''Jupiter''': Stop.\\
'''Uranus''': Like, what's his deal? Thinking he's all hot shit? Well, [[WreathedInFlames in a literal sense I guess]] but--
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--> '''Uranus''': '''Uranus:''' C'mon! For real, fuck that Sun guy, right?\\
'''Jupiter''': '''Jupiter:''' Stop.\\
'''Uranus''': '''Uranus:''' Like, what's his deal? Thinking he's all hot shit? Well, [[WreathedInFlames in a literal sense I guess]] but--
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--> '''Mars''': Do you ever think something is... strange? About Sun?\\
'''Earth''': Yeah! Yeah, most things actually. He's weird.\\
'''Mars''': No, I mean... Something ''wrong'' about him, lately. '''''Really''''' wrong.\\
'''Earth''': Yeah! Yeah, most things actually. He's weird.\\
'''Mars''': No, I mean... Something ''wrong'' about him, lately. '''''Really''''' wrong.\\
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--> '''Mars''': '''Mars:''' Do you ever think something is... strange? About Sun?\\
'''Earth''': '''Earth:''' Yeah! Yeah, most things actually. He's weird.\\
'''Mars''': '''Mars:''' No, I mean... Something ''wrong'' about him, lately. '''''Really''''' wrong.\\
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'''Mars''': It's undeniable, Earth. He's different than he used to be. He's never around, and when he is he seems... distracted.
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--> '''Sun''': We. Move. ''On''.
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--> '''Sun''': '''Sun:''' We. Move. ''On''.
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* VitriolicBestBuds: Earth and Mars, though the vitriol is only on Mars' suse.
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* VitriolicBestBuds: Earth and Mars, though the vitriol is only on Mars' suse.side.
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-->'''Uranus''': I think Jupiter is right.\\
'''Neptune''': No, Jupiter is ''loud''.\\
'''Uranus''': Neptune is ''fat''--
'''Neptune''': No, Jupiter is ''loud''.\\
'''Uranus''': Neptune is ''fat''--
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!!Tropes found in Nebula include:
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!!Tropes found in Nebula ''Nebula'' include:
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* ColorCodedCharacters: Earth (green), Mars and Venus (orange), Mercury (gray), Jupiter (orange and red stripes), Saturn (beige), Uranus (blue), Neptune (dark blue), Pluto (light blue), Sun (yellow), and Black Hole (purple).
* ConvenientlyClosePlanet: Played with. The planets in the solar system are portrayed as close enough together that hanging out and talking between them is easy, regardless of how far they really should be from each other. On the other hand, the distance ''between'' various star systems is shown to be just as enormously huge and impassible as it is in reality. So in other words while the planets are conveniently close, the stars are not.
* ConvenientlyClosePlanet: Played with. The planets in the solar system are portrayed as close enough together that hanging out and talking between them is easy, regardless of how far they really should be from each other. On the other hand, the distance ''between'' various star systems is shown to be just as enormously huge and impassible as it is in reality. So in other words while the planets are conveniently close, the stars are not.
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* ColorCodedCharacters: Earth (green), Used mostly when rendering the cast more symbolically at the start of a comic.
** Earth: green, [[EarlyInstallmentWeirdness originally blue]]
** Mars andVenus (orange), Mercury (gray), Jupiter (orange and red stripes), Saturn (beige), Uranus (blue), Neptune (dark blue), Pluto (light blue), Sun (yellow), and Venus: orange
** Mercury: grey
** Jupiter: orange, sometimes with stripes
** Saturn: beige
** Uranus: blue
** Neptune: dark blue
** Pluto: light blue/teal
** Sun: yellow
** BlackHole (purple).
Hole: purple
* ConvenientlyClosePlanet: Played with. The planets in the solar system are portrayed as close enough together that hanging out and talking between them is easy, regardless of how far they really should be from each other. On the other hand, the distance ''between'' various star systems is shown to be just as enormously huge and impassible as it is in reality.So in In other words words, while the planets are conveniently close, the stars are not.
** Earth: green, [[EarlyInstallmentWeirdness originally blue]]
** Mars and
** Mercury: grey
** Jupiter: orange, sometimes with stripes
** Saturn: beige
** Uranus: blue
** Neptune: dark blue
** Pluto: light blue/teal
** Sun: yellow
** Black
* ConvenientlyClosePlanet: Played with. The planets in the solar system are portrayed as close enough together that hanging out and talking between them is easy, regardless of how far they really should be from each other. On the other hand, the distance ''between'' various star systems is shown to be just as enormously huge and impassible as it is in reality.
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** 15: [[spoiler:Black Hole successfully convinced Pluto that the others are nothing but monsters and convinced him to join her in [[ForbiddenZone the void]], quite possibly to his doom, the planets are still possibly injured and definitely traumatized from Ceres' attack, and Sun had to kill someone with his bare hands who didn't fight back or even necessarily know what was going on in order to save them from dying right in front of him, despite his obvious reluctance to do so.]]
** 16: [[spoiler:Virginis severely burned B's face and shoulder for asking him a question with no repercussions or any indications that something will stop him from doing it again in the future, and the comic ended with B curled up in pain as smoke wafted off her skin and Virginis warned her not to move.]]
** 16: [[spoiler:Virginis severely burned B's face and shoulder for asking him a question with no repercussions or any indications that something will stop him from doing it again in the future, and the comic ended with B curled up in pain as smoke wafted off her skin and Virginis warned her not to move.]]
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** 15: [[spoiler:Black Hole successfully convinced Pluto that the others are nothing but monsters and convinced him to join her in [[ForbiddenZone the void]], quite possibly to his doom, the doom. The planets are still possibly injured and definitely traumatized from Ceres' attack, and Sun had to kill someone with his bare hands who didn't fight back or even necessarily know what was going on in order to save them from dying right in front of him, despite his obvious reluctance to do so.them.]]
** 16: [[spoiler:Virginis severely burned B's face and shoulder for asking him a question with no repercussions or any indications that something will stop him from doing it again in thefuture, and the future. The comic ended with B curled up in pain as smoke wafted off her skin and Virginis warned her not to move.]]
** 16: [[spoiler:Virginis severely burned B's face and shoulder for asking him a question with no repercussions or any indications that something will stop him from doing it again in the
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* EverybodysDeadDave: In #16, everybody but B and Virginis has been dead for a long while.
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* EverybodysDeadDave: In #16, everybody but B and Virginis has been dead for a long, long while.
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** Taken even further with Virginis and B, who have been stuck with no one around but each other after everyone else was killed trying to go through the void.
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** Taken even further with Virginis and B, who have been stuck with no one around but each other after everyone else was killed trying to go through the void. And Virginis makes no secret of the fact that he resents her for it.
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* LivingForeverIsNoBigDeal: They're ''planets'' (and one star)-- ''all'' of them are eons old and it's regarded as a matter of course.
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* LivingForeverIsNoBigDeal: They're ''planets'' (and one star)-- (or stars)-- ''all'' of them are eons old and it's regarded as a matter of course.
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** #15 itself, which switches back and forth from Pluto's joy at discovering he isn't alone to the horror and agony the planets are experiencing as Sun frantically tries to save them.
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** #15 itself, which switches back and forth from between showing Pluto's joy at discovering he isn't alone to the horror and agony the planets are experiencing as Sun frantically tries to save them.
* PaintingTheMedium: Black Hole's dialogue appears directly onto the page with no word bubbles around it, and usually has some kind of glitch effect around it.
** Ceres' dialogue/thoughts appear the way Pluto's do, but are a garbled jumble of letters overlaying each other so thick that they're impossible to read.
** Ceres' dialogue/thoughts appear the way Pluto's do, but are a garbled jumble of letters overlaying each other so thick that they're impossible to read.
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** Crosses over with DreamSue, with how the rest of the dream characters act towards him.
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** Crosses over with DreamSue, with how the rest of the dream characters act towards him.like he's the single greatest thing to ever grace the world with his presence.
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* RedFilterOfDoom: The last few panels after Sun tries and fails to explain to Mercury what's bothering him, and just ends up asking Mercury to give him a bit of space.
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* RedFilterOfDoom: The last few panels after Sun tries and fails to explain to Mercury what's bothering him, and just ends up asking Mercury to give him a bit of space.comic #3 are silent shoots of the other characters, all tinted red.
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* VitriolicBestBuds: Earth and Mars, though the vitriol is only on Mars' side.
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* VitriolicBestBuds: Earth and Mars, though the vitriol is only on Mars' side.suse.
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** "I'm hungry."
** "It's like it's coming from... inside of me?"
** "...Yeah."
** "It's like it's coming from... inside of me?"
** "...Yeah."
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** "I'm hungry."
" (#3)
** "It's like it's coming from... inside ofme?"
me?" (#9)
** "...Yeah."" (#15)
** "It's like it's coming from... inside of
** "...Yeah.
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* SmallSecludedWorld: The solar system; no one new comes in, no who was born there has ever been outside of it, and no one really knows what's beyond it, if anything.
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* SmallSecludedWorld: The solar system; no one new comes in, no one who was born there has ever been outside of it, and no one really knows what's beyond it, if anything.
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* SmallSecludedWorld: The solar system; no one new comes in, no who was born there has ever been outside of it, and no one really knows what's beyond it, if anything.
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* AHouseDivided: The fact that there's something out there waiting to kill them if they leave the solar system only exacerbates the problems between the members of the solar system (several of whom disliked each other already).
** Taken even further with Virginis and B, who have been stuck with no one around but each other after everyone else was killed trying to go through the void.
** Taken even further with Virginis and B, who have been stuck with no one around but each other after everyone else was killed trying to go through the void.
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* AHouseDivided: The fact that there's something out there waiting to kill them if they leave the solar system only exacerbates the problems between the members of the solar system (several of whom disliked each other already).
** Taken even further with Virginis and B, who have been stuck with no one around but each other after everyone else was killed trying to go through the void.
** Taken even further with Virginis and B, who have been stuck with no one around but each other after everyone else was killed trying to go through the void.
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* ConvenientlyClosePlanet: Played with. The planets in the solar system are portrayed as close enough together that hanging out and talking between them is easy, regardless of how far they really should be from each other. On the other hand, the distance ''between'' various star systems is shown to be just as enormously huge and impassible as it is in reality. So in other words while the planets are conveniently close, the stars are not.
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-->"'''''They're dead!''''' Because they thought they could just float out into the void like it was nothing. And I told them! B! Just like I tell ''you!'' I ''begged'' them to stay! And nobody would listen. And now they're ''dead.'' All I've ever wanted was for you to not end up that way, B. ''(turns away)'' That's all.
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-->"'''''They're dead!''''' Because they thought they could just float out into the void like it was nothing. And I told them! B! Just like I tell ''you!'' I ''begged'' them to stay! And nobody would listen. And now they're ''dead.'' All I've ever wanted was for you to not end up that way, B. ''(turns away)'' ''[turns away]'' That's all.
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* ViolenceIsTheOnlySolution: [[spoiler:Sun trying to make Ceres back off through talking had absolutely no effect or success in getting them to stop hurting the planets. The only thing that stopped them was him [[ShootTheDog ripping his hand through their torso]].]]
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* ViolenceIsTheOnlySolution: ViolenceIsTheOnlyOption: [[spoiler:Sun trying to make Ceres back off through talking had absolutely no effect or success in getting them to stop hurting the planets. The only thing that stopped them was him [[ShootTheDog ripping his hand through their torso]].]]
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* ColorCodedCharacters
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* ColorCodedCharactersColorCodedCharacters: Earth (green), Mars and Venus (orange), Mercury (gray), Jupiter (orange and red stripes), Saturn (beige), Uranus (blue), Neptune (dark blue), Pluto (light blue), Sun (yellow), and Black Hole (purple).
* ConvenientlyTimedDistraction: Jupiter's incredibly hammy monologue to Venus and Neptune inadvertently provides one for his comet, allowing it to sneak away without him noticing.
* ConvenientlyTimedDistraction: Jupiter's incredibly hammy monologue to Venus and Neptune inadvertently provides one for his comet, allowing it to sneak away without him noticing.
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* TalkingIsAFreeAction: For Jupiter, it is [[AvertedTrope unfortunately not]] when his new pet comet runs away in the middle of his [[LargeHam hammy speech]].
** Averted for drama later. [[spoiler:The time Sun spends trying to make Ceres back off through talking is time the planets spend in agonizing pain. So Sun decides to [[ShootTheDog just kill Ceres]].]]
** Averted for drama later. [[spoiler:The time Sun spends trying to make Ceres back off through talking is time the planets spend in agonizing pain. So Sun decides to [[ShootTheDog just kill Ceres]].]]
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*ViolenceIsTheOnlySolution: [[spoiler:Sun trying to make Ceres back off through talking had absolutely no effect or success in getting them to stop hurting the planets. The only thing that stopped them was him [[ShootTheDog ripping his hand through their torso]].]]
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** 16: [[spoiler:Virginis severely burned B's face and shoulder for asking him a question with no repercussions or any indications that something will stop him from doing it again in the future, and the comic ended with B curled up in pain as smoke wafts off her skin and Virginis warning her not to move.]]
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** 16: [[spoiler:Virginis severely burned B's face and shoulder for asking him a question with no repercussions or any indications that something will stop him from doing it again in the future, and the comic ended with B curled up in pain as smoke wafts wafted off her skin and Virginis warning warned her not to move.]]