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* HandsLookingWrong: Quintin examines himself for injuries after he and Jackie are at the epicenter of the Star Seed's explosion. He soon finds that his hands have [[ImMelting completely melted away into green slime]], the rest of his arms slowly following suit. He panics and shuts his eyes while trying to convince himself it's all in his head, finding relief when he opens his eyes to find his arms and hands intact. This is just the prelude to him discovering his ElementalShapeshifter powers.

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* DeepCoverAgent: Lavani believes Arrio is this, as she can't fathom the idea that a Magite would be allowed on Prime wihout authorization from the Star Guardian. She starts needling Arrio with questions in an attempt to prove that he's lying in convoluted attempt to take the Star Seed, but her prejudices refuse to let her believe he's telling the truth about being born on Prime.



* DeepCoverAgent: Lavani believes Arrio is this, as she can't fathom the idea that a Magite would be allowed on Prime wihout authorization from the Star Guardian. She starts needling Arrio with questions in an attempt to prove that he's lying in convoluted attempt to take the Star Seed, but her prejudices refuse to let her believe he's telling the truth about being born on Prime.


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* VancianMagic: Magite must prepare mediums like magic seeds in advance to use their spells. Each seed can only be used once to invoke a single spell, making casting magic recklessly a prohibitively expensive venture. This is why a SpellBook like Arrio's is so valuable, as it allows a Magite to bypass the requirement for physical materials and cast magic at will.
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* DeepCoverAgent: Lavani believes Arrio is this, as she can't fathom the idea that a Magite would be allowed on Prime wihout authorization from the Star Guardian. She starts needling Arrio with questions in an attempt to prove that he's lying in convoluted attempt to take the Star Seed, but her prejudices refuse to let her believe he's telling the truth about being born on Prime.

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* {{Touche}}: Quintin wonders how Arrio, who is partly Hispanic, is failing an "easy" subject like Spanish. Arrio asks how Quintin is failing social studies. Quintin mutters touché and drops the subject.

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** In Episode 50, Arrio is about to relax and play video games in his room when he's spooked by Jackie appearing out of nowhere. Arrio asks if she's ever heard of a front door. Jackie points out that Arrio frequently climbs into her room through the window, to which he mutters touché and asks what she wants.
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* GlamourFailure: The Mun Tech holograms used to keep the Jupiter-Men's identities safe do not work on travelers from other dimensions. Lavani is able to immediately identify Quintin and notice that he doesn't look like Daejung at all, while the invading Magite instantly recognizes Arrio from their previous encounter.
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* TheMagicVersusTechnologyWar: The Rochambeau War was an interdimensional war fought between the two most powerful factions of ex-Primari: the [[MageSpecies Magitte]] and the [[HigherTechSpecies Mechi]]. While the Magitte possesses the unique ability to manipulate the forces of nature with magic, the Mechi developed extremely advanced technology. Both factions hate each other and consider the other abominations, and their attempts to take Prime for themselves nearly destroyed it, necessitating the creation of the Star Seed by Mother Nature to repel both factions and regulate the flow of cosmic energy.
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: The revelation that Arrio's mother was a Magite who entered Prime in violation of interdimensional treaties brings the subject of immigrants illegally crossing a country's border to mind. This image is only strengthened when Nathan threatens to deport Arrio for being part-Magite despite him living his whole life on Prime.

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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: The revelation that Arrio's mother was a Magite who entered Prime in violation of interdimensional treaties brings the subject of immigrants illegally crossing a country's border to mind. This image is only strengthened when Nathan threatens to deport Arrio for being part-Magite despite him living his whole life on Prime. The introduction of Lavani triples down on this, as she interrogates him on his ties to Magi and continues to believe that he doesn't have clearance to be on Prime despite explicitly promising Nathan that she wouldn't push the issue.

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* AttackDrones: Nathan's DeadlyTrainingArea is filled with drones capable of shooting an AgonyBeam that gives a painful jolt on impact but leaves no lasting harm. When these drones are controlled by a Star Struck, they become much more aggressive and dangerous, even slicing off Quintin's slime arm with one beam.



-->'''Nathan:''' I'll let that one slide. I'm in a good mood.\\

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* ImplausibleDeniability: In Episode 22, he goes upstairs to get some air and locks Quintin and Jackie in the training room so they'll keep training without his supervision. Quintin follows Nathan and asks if he locked them down there on purpose. Nathan has a BeatPanel before saying "No." Quintin replies that it wouldn't have worked anyways because he memorized the passcodes with his PhotographicMemory.

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In Episode 22, he Nathan goes upstairs to get some air and locks Quintin and Jackie in the training room so they'll keep training without his supervision. Quintin follows Nathan and asks if he locked them down there on purpose. Nathan has a BeatPanel before saying "No." Quintin replies that it wouldn't have worked anyways because he memorized the passcodes with his PhotographicMemory.PhotographicMemory.
** In Episode 49, Jackie presses Nathan on how to start up the video games in his living room. She adds that she saw him playing so he can't deny it. He tries to change the subject by saying that if she saw him playing, then she wasn't training. Jackie fires back by asking why wasn't ''[[HypocriticalHumor he]]'' [[HypocriticalHumor training]].
-->'''Nathan:''' I'll let that one slide. I'm in a good mood.\\
'''Arrio:''' I let things slide when I don't have a comeback too.
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* FreeRangeChildren: Due to their mom's busy schedule as a police officer and their dad being conspicuously absent, the Avalon twins are generally left to their own devices with only Arrio serving as a chaperone and chauffeur from time to time. This is why Quintin and Jackie are able to do superhero things without getting in trouble with their mom. Arrio has the excuse of his part-time job to be out after hours. Nathan has no supervision at all since both of his parents are missing and his guardian is an apathetic GoldDigger.
* FreudianTrio:
** Quintin, Jackie, and Nathan form this dynamic as the Id, Ego, and Superego respectively. Quintin is a WideEyedIdealist who is often recklessly determined to help others and is prone to [[DidntThinkThisThrough not thinking things through]]. Nathan is the stern and disciplined ExperiencedProtagonist who admonishes Quintin for his short-sightedness and is reluctant to seek out crime to fight because of how the team is barely handling their Star Guardian duties as is. Jackie is not as uptight as Nathan or as optimistic as Quintin, voicing complaints about both of their approaches to their roles.
** Quintin and Jackie form another one of these with Arrio, but with Jackie as the Superego and Arrio as the Ego. Quintin's idealism and feelings of responsibility causes him to butt heads with Jackie's more selfish and down-to-earth wants. Arrio is older and wiser than both of them, approaching both of them with equal parts kindness and measured reason.



* PaperThinDisguise: Justified. Nathan's DominoMask, while seemingly minimal as far as disguises go, utilizes holographic technology that toggles through random facial features to keep his SecretIdentity safe. He gives similar masks to Quintin and Jackie to protect their identities as well. It's later revealed that the masks are secondary and that the team's earbuds are the source of the holographic effect.
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** Nathan's yellow Volkswagen Beetle is based on the heroes' car in ''Anime/LupinIII''.

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** Nathan's yellow Volkswagen Beetle is based on the heroes' car in ''Anime/LupinIII''.''Franchise/LupinIII''.
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** Nathan's yellow Volkswagen Beetle is based on the heroes' car in ''Franchise/LupinTheThird''.

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** Nathan's yellow Volkswagen Beetle is based on the heroes' car in ''Franchise/LupinTheThird''.''Anime/LupinIII''.
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** Nathan's yellow Volkswagen Beetle is based on the heroes' car in ''Franchise/LupinTheThird''.
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* NonAnswer: Arrio is repeatedly pressed about whether he has a driver's license or not when he asks to drive Nathan's car. Arrio responds with "I know how to drive." instead of saying "yes" or "no". After taking Nathan's car for a spin, Arrio asks why anyone would need a license while swerving through traffic in a car chase, revealing for certain that Arrio doesn't have one.

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* FreeRangeChildren: Due to their mom's busy schedule as a police officer and their dad being conspicuously absent, the Avalon twins are generally left to their own devices with only Arrio serving as a chaperone and chauffeur from time to time. This is why Quintin and Jackie are able to do superhero things without getting in trouble with their mom. Meanwhile, Arrio has work as an excuse to be outside home and Nathan's dad has gone missing, leaving him nearly completely without supervision.

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* FreeRangeChildren: Due to their mom's busy schedule as a police officer and their dad being conspicuously absent, the Avalon twins are generally left to their own devices with only Arrio serving as a chaperone and chauffeur from time to time. This is why Quintin and Jackie are able to do superhero things without getting in trouble with their mom. Meanwhile, Arrio has work as an the excuse of his part-time job to be outside home out after hours. Nathan has no supervision at all since both of his parents are missing and Nathan's dad has gone missing, leaving him nearly completely without supervision.his guardian is an apathetic GoldDigger.



* LoyalPhlebotinum: Nathan is alarmed to learn that the Star Seed has been bonded to Quintin's and Jackie's souls, meaning there's no removing their powers without ripping the life out of them. This forces him to enlist the twins' aid as Star Guardians until they can find Jupiter-Man and safely remove the Star Seed from them.



* MistakenForRelated: Inverted. When Nathan brings the twins to his base without blindfolds, they find a picture of Daejung Mun, the wealthy CEO of Mun Tech Industries. Quintin asks if Nathan admires him to have a picture of a celebrity in his home. Nathan replies that Mun is his dad.

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** Inverted with the Avalon twins. Given how they avert AlwaysIdenticalTwins, it never occurs to Rick that Quintin could be Jackie's twin brother, initially assuming that Jackie and Quintin are just friends or acquaintances.
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Inverted. When Nathan brings the twins to his base without blindfolds, they find a picture of Daejung Mun, the wealthy CEO of Mun Tech Industries. Quintin asks if Nathan admires him to have a picture of a celebrity in his home. Nathan replies that Mun is his dad.



* MySignificanceSenseIsTingling: As the bearers of the Star Seed, the Avalon twins are able to get a vague sense of concentrations of cosmic energy to locate starstruck monsters and supervillains. Quintin gets a runny nose and sneezes as his response to feeling this out.
* MySuitIsAlsoSuper: Quintin and Jackie's costumes are created by secret Mun Tech technology specifically to adapt to their powers. Quintin's costume breaks down when he transforms parts of his body into slime and back to avoid impeding his movement. Jackie gets a self-recharging battery to help her use her powers for longer periods before waiting for it to recharge.

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* AllLoveIsUnrequited: Victoria's much more demure BetaBitch, Pepper, clearly has a thing for Quintin, stammering and getting tongue-tied while triyng to talk to him and CannotSpitItOut. Quintin is [[ObliviousToLove oblivious to this]] and only watches in confusion as Pepper gets called away by Victoria.



* BrotherSisterTeam: The Avalon Twins.



* FreeRangeChildren: Due to their mom's busy schedule as a police officer and their dad being conspicuously absent, the Avalon twins are generally left to their own devices with only Arrio serving as a chaperone and chauffeur from time to time. This is why Quintin and Jackie are able to do superhero things without getting in trouble with their mom.

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* FreeRangeChildren: Due to their mom's busy schedule as a police officer and their dad being conspicuously absent, the Avalon twins are generally left to their own devices with only Arrio serving as a chaperone and chauffeur from time to time. This is why Quintin and Jackie are able to do superhero things without getting in trouble with their mom. Meanwhile, Arrio has work as an excuse to be outside home and Nathan's dad has gone missing, leaving him nearly completely without supervision.
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* InertiaIsACruelMistress: Jackie makes a point of catching the crook that flies out of the truck [[PedestrianCrushesCar she stops]] with her SuperStrength. She even lampshades it, noting that he can't have her dying on him from her actions lest her hero card get revoked.


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* PedestrianCrushesCar: When the Titans are fleeing from the Jupiter-Men in a speeding truck, Jackie jumps in front of said truck, crushing the front of it against her SuperStrength and SuperToughness to stop it in its tracks.
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* AlwaysIdenticalTwins: Discussed. Quintin's hair is shorter and thicker than his sister Jackie's much curlier and more voluminous hair. Their eyes are slightly different shades of brown and Quintin's hair is dyed light green at the ends. They don't dress alike either, with Quintin wearing a simple hoodie and shorts while Jackie wears denim over a shoulderless blouse and short shorts. Rick is surprised to learn that Quintin is Jackie's twin, as they're fraternal twins who don't look identical, initially assuming that they're simply friends.
-->'''Jackie:''' Hmm... have I never mentioned my twin brother?\\
'''Rick:''' Twins...? But you guys don't look the same.\\
''[BeatPanel as Rick looks between the two of them]''\\
'''Jackie:''' Jeez! I sure hope not!\\
'''Quintin:''' Hey!



* CannotSpitItOut: Victoria's BetaBitch Pepper is shy and demure. She clearly has a crush on Quintin but gets tongue-tied trying to make small talk with him.



* FieryRedhead: Inverted. Pepper has fiery red hair akin to the mascot for Wendy's, but is the most soft-spoken, demure, and nicest of the Doll Set. She has a crush on Quintin and stammers while trying to say hello to him.



* WonderTwinPowers: Quintin and Jackie possess Jupiter-Man's ability to remove the cosmic energy that mutates starstruck creatures into monsters, but only while they're both touching it. Nathan needs both twins on board with becoming superheroes because of this, as there's no other way to permanently neutralize a starstruck monster.



* YouthfulFreckles:
** Inverted with Bea, Quintin and Jackie's mother. Bea has freckles despite her largely serious and responsible demenor in contrast to her freckleless and more irresponsible children.
** Pepper is a member of the Doll Set, a GirlPosse of the most beautiful girls at Jupiter High. While Victoria and Mai have unblemished skin and flaunt their looks and social status, Pepper is freckled and is considerably shyer and less confident. She CannotSpitItOut to Quintin and stammers in his presence, marking her as less mature than her friends.

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* BookDumb: Quintin, Jackie, and Arrio all struggle in different subjects in school. Quintin flunked his social studies project thanks to his StringTheory-laden presentation about Jupiter-Man, while Jackie is a straight-C student. Arrio mentions struggling with Spanish and Jackie says they can all be dumb together.



* ChickMagnet: According to Arrio, Rick Chang has most of the female student body at Jupiter high fawning over him, letting Rick have his pick of hte litter. But Jackie isn't interested and Rick wants to know why she's immune to his charms.
* ChromaticArrangement: The three main characters at the start of the story are Quintin, Jackie, and Nathan, who are strongly associated with green, blue, and red respectively. This is reflective of their personalities: Quintin is energetic and sweet, Jackie socially adept but superficial, and Nathan is deadly serious and the most devoted to the role of being a Star Guardian.
* ColorCodedForYourConvenience:
** Quintin is strongly associated with bright green colors to match his slime powers and excitable personality. Jackie is associated with baby blue colors, reflecting her [[BlueIsCalm relatively down-to-earth]] personality and [[TrueBlueFemininity femininity.]]
** Each part of Jupiter-Man's lair is predominantly one color. The containment bays are red, break room is orange, the tech room is green, the training room is blue, the medbay is pink, and the main hub is purple. This makes it easy to tell where in the facility the characters are and doubles as a ShoutOut to ''Franchise/PowerRangers''.

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* ChickMagnet: According to Arrio, Rick Chang has most of the female student body at Jupiter high fawning over him, letting Rick have his pick of hte litter. But Jackie isn't interested and Rick wants to know why she's immune to his charms.
* ChromaticArrangement: The three main characters at the start of the story are Quintin, Jackie, and Nathan, who are strongly associated with green, blue, and red respectively. This is reflective of their personalities: Quintin is energetic and sweet, Jackie socially adept but superficial, and Nathan is deadly serious and the most devoted to the role of being a Star Guardian.
* ColorCodedForYourConvenience:
** Quintin is strongly associated with bright green colors to match his slime powers and excitable personality. Jackie is associated with baby blue colors, reflecting her [[BlueIsCalm relatively down-to-earth]] personality and [[TrueBlueFemininity femininity.]]
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ColorCodedForYourConvenience: Each part of Jupiter-Man's lair is predominantly one color. The containment bays are red, break room is orange, the tech room is green, the training room is blue, the medbay is pink, and the main hub is purple. This makes it easy to tell where in the facility the characters are and doubles as a ShoutOut to ''Franchise/PowerRangers''.



* InstantCostumeChange: Secret Mun Tech gadgetry allows the Jupiter-Men to instantly don their costumes just by wearing their mask and/or putting on their team communicators. This cause their super outfits to overwrite their current clothes. Returning to civilian wear is as simple as taking their masks off.



* LikeFatherLikeSon: Beatrice is a devoted ByTheBookCop who takes down crooks and robbers while at work. Her son Quintin has similar ChronicHeroSyndrome and fights crime as a vigilante while defending the world from extradimensional threats as a Star Guardian. Like her daughter Jackie, Beatrice is relatively down to earth about her priorities and is exasperated with Quintin's energy and obsession with Jupiter-Man. Beatrice has a twin sibling, Atticus, as alluded to in background photos.



* KidHero: The story revolves around first-year high schoolers Quintin and Jackie Avalon, who gain superpowers and become Jupiter City's protectors in place of Jupiter-Man. They're soon joined by sixteen-year-old Arrio and seventeen-year-old Nathan.

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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: After nearly blowing up Styx and Stones with her powers, Jackie admits to Arrio that she doesn't feel special or worthy of being a hero of any kind, especially compared to Quintin who JumpedAtTheCall. Arrio assures her that he's felt the same way at times, but it's because of her willingness to step up to the plate despite being a normal girl not long ago that makes her a hero.



** Pepper is a member of the Doll Set, a GirlPosse of the most beautiful girls at Jupiter High. While Victoria and Mai have unblemished skin and flaunt their looks and social status, Pepper is freckled and is considerably shyer and less confident. She CannotSpitItOut to Quintin and stammers in his presence.

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** Pepper is a member of the Doll Set, a GirlPosse of the most beautiful girls at Jupiter High. While Victoria and Mai have unblemished skin and flaunt their looks and social status, Pepper is freckled and is considerably shyer and less confident. She CannotSpitItOut to Quintin and stammers in his presence.presence, marking her as less mature than her friends.
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* DeducingTheSecretIdentity: Quintin's mom Beatrice, a cop for the Jupiter City Police Department, realizes that the handwriting on the sticky notes left by the Jupiter-Men matches Quintin's handwriting while cleaning his room. She soon confronts him about his absences and can tell he's lying. [[spoiler:The only reason she doesn't blow the lid on Quintin's SecretIdentity is because Nathan arrives and gives a hasty, more palatable excuse for Quintin's behavior. Although Quintin's alibi is flimsy, Beatrice takes this excuse if only because [[SelectiveObliviousness she'd rather not confront the idea that her son is risking his life to fight monsters.]]]]
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* InstantCostumeChange: Secret Mun Tech gadgetry allows the Jupiter-Men to instantly don their costumes just by wearing their mask and/or putting on their team communicators. This cause their super outfits to overwrite their current clothes. Returning to civilian wear is as simple as taking their masks off.

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* DepartmentOfChildDisservices: Mrs. Jones, a social worker for child services, places Binny as Nathan's interim guardian after Daejung's disappearance. Nathan immediately pins Binny as a BitchInSheepsClothing and a GoldDigger who wants nothing more than to gain access to the Mun fortune, but child services does not. In the end, Nathan is only able to get Binny off his back by bribing her with his personal funds to stay out of his life and not touch his family's finances.



* PaperThinDisguise: Justified. Nathan's DominoMask, while seemingly minimal as far as disguises go, utilizes holographic technology that toggles through random facial features to keep his SecretIdentity safe. He gives similar masks to Quintin and Jackie to protect their identities as well.

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* PaperThinDisguise: Justified. Nathan's DominoMask, while seemingly minimal as far as disguises go, utilizes holographic technology that toggles through random facial features to keep his SecretIdentity safe. He gives similar masks to Quintin and Jackie to protect their identities as well. It's later revealed that the masks are secondary and that the team's earbuds are the source of the holographic effect.



* SecretIdentity: Deconstructed. Nathan tells the twins to keep their role as Star Guardians a secret from even their closest friends and family to hold up TheMasquerade as much as possible to prevent panic. This puts a serious strain on Quintin's and Jackie's normal lives. Arrio comes to the mistaken conclusion that they'd gotten caught up in gang activity and Bea is beside herself with worry when Arrio tells her about the twins' strange behavior. This comes to a head when Arrio gets into a heated argument with the twins over their refusal to tell the truth. Later on, Quintin tries to protect Arrio as Gusher. But Arrio refuses to trust "Gusher" because he doesn't know anything about him. That's when Quintin makes the decision to unmask himself to Arrio to finally remove this barrier of dishonesty.

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* SecretIdentity: Deconstructed. Nathan tells the twins to keep their role as Star Guardians a secret from even their closest friends and family to hold up TheMasquerade as much as possible to and prevent panic. This puts a serious strain on Quintin's and Jackie's normal lives. Arrio comes to the mistaken conclusion that they'd gotten caught up in gang activity and Bea is beside herself with worry when Arrio tells her about the twins' strange behavior. This comes to a head when Arrio gets into a heated argument with the twins over their refusal to tell the truth. Later on, Quintin tries to protect Arrio as Gusher. But Arrio refuses to trust "Gusher" because he doesn't know anything about him. That's when Quintin makes the decision to unmask himself to Arrio to finally remove this barrier of dishonesty.



* SpoilerCover: The fact that Jupiter-Man is missing is TheReveal in-story and a major revelation that gives context to Quintin and Jackie's powers. But pretty much every reader will know about it in advance by virtue of the comic's blurb mentioning it in the first few sentences.

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* KeepingSecretsSucks: Nathan's insistence that the twins keep their friends and family out of the superhero life puts serious strain on Quintin's and Jackie's relationship with Arrio. The twins constantly make flimsy excuses as to why they can't hang out like usual and have no time to relax due to Nathan's TrainingFromHell. Arrio is constantly worried about the twins's inability to explain why they're suddenly so busy. This comes to a head when Quintin and Arrio, both normally cheery and easy-going people, get into a heated argument in which Arrio assumes the twins have gotten involved in a gang due to their unwillingness to come clean to him.

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* KeepingSecretsSucks: Nathan's insistence that the twins keep their friends and family out of the superhero life puts serious strain on Quintin's and Jackie's relationship with Arrio. The twins constantly make flimsy excuses as to why they can't hang out like usual and have no time to relax due to Nathan's TrainingFromHell. Arrio is constantly worried about the twins's twins' inability to explain why they're suddenly so busy. This comes to a head when Quintin and Arrio, both normally cheery and easy-going people, get into a heated argument in which Arrio assumes the twins have gotten involved in a gang due to their unwillingness to come clean to him.



* LoyalPhlebotinum: Nathan is alarmed to learn that the Star Seed has been bonded to Quintin's and Jackie's souls, meaning there's no removing their powers without ripping the life out of them. This forces him to enlist the twins's aid as Star Guardians until they can find Jupiter-Man and safely remove the Star Seed from them.

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* LoyalPhlebotinum: Nathan is alarmed to learn that the Star Seed has been bonded to Quintin's and Jackie's souls, meaning there's no removing their powers without ripping the life out of them. This forces him to enlist the twins's twins' aid as Star Guardians until they can find Jupiter-Man and safely remove the Star Seed from them.



* TitleDrop: After dealing with the ManEatingPlant monster, Quintin declares that as Jupiter-City's first-ever superhero team, they should call themselves the Jupiter-Men, followed by a panel of the series's logo.

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* BigFancyHouse: Nathan leaves in his father's mansion, which is built into the side of a seaside cliff. Its modest lobby belies the sprawling complex only accessible by elevator, leading to an elaborate penthouse with a large kitchen, multiple bedroom, and a huge living room/break room. Even deeper into the mansion is Jupiter-Man's ElaborateUndergroundBase, complete with a DeadlyTrainingArea, a medical bay, and a tech room for building gadgets.

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* BigFancyHouse: Nathan leaves lives in his father's mansion, which is built into the side of a seaside cliff. Its modest lobby belies the sprawling complex only accessible by elevator, leading to an elaborate penthouse with a large kitchen, multiple bedroom, and a huge living room/break room. Even deeper into the mansion is Jupiter-Man's ElaborateUndergroundBase, complete with a DeadlyTrainingArea, a medical bay, and a tech room for building gadgets.
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* BigFancyHouse: Nathan leaves in his father's mansion, which is built into the side of a seaside cliff. Its modest lobby belies the sprawling complex only accessible by elevator, leading to an elaborate penthouse with a large kitchen, multiple bedroom, and a huge living room/break room. Even deeper into the mansion is Jupiter-Man's ElaborateUndergroundBase, complete with a DeadlyTrainingArea, a medical bay, and a tech room for building gadgets.


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* ElaborateUndergroundBase: Deep in the Mun family mansion is Jupiter-Man's lair. It has at least five rooms for various purposes, including a sprawling DeadlyTrainingArea, a medical bay for treating injuries, a tech room for designing and constructing gadgets, and a line of containment cells for detaining people of interest.

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* InstantlyProvenWrong: While demonstrating his growing mastery of his powers to Jackie, Quintin declares that he's pretty much mastered his abilities right before accidentally reeling a soda can into his head.

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* JawDrop: This is Nathan's reaction when he learns that Binny had somehow gotten past all of Jupiter-Man's safeguards to access his ElaborateUndergroundBase. It says a lot about Nathan's shock and disbelief given that he's usually TheStoic.


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* StunnedSilence: Quintin and Nathan give Jackie a wide-eyed stare of shock when Jackie says to "get RID" of Binny along with a chopping motion along her neck. Jackie then specifies that she means to bribe Binny, confusing Quintin who clearly thought she meant something else.

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* FreudianTrio: Quintin, Jackie, and Nathan form this dynamic as the Id, Ego, and Superego respectively. Quintin is a WideEyedIdealist who is often recklessly determined to help others and is prone to [[DidntThinkThisThrough not thinking things through]]. Nathan is the stern and disciplined ExperiencedProtagonist who admonishes Quintin for his short-sightedness and is reluctant to seek out crime to fight because of how the team is barely handling their Star Guardian duties as is. Jackie is not as uptight as Nathan or as optimistic as Quintin, voicing complaints about both of their approaches to their roles.

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* FreudianTrio: FreudianTrio:
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Quintin, Jackie, and Nathan form this dynamic as the Id, Ego, and Superego respectively. Quintin is a WideEyedIdealist who is often recklessly determined to help others and is prone to [[DidntThinkThisThrough not thinking things through]]. Nathan is the stern and disciplined ExperiencedProtagonist who admonishes Quintin for his short-sightedness and is reluctant to seek out crime to fight because of how the team is barely handling their Star Guardian duties as is. Jackie is not as uptight as Nathan or as optimistic as Quintin, voicing complaints about both of their approaches to their roles.roles.
** Quintin and Jackie form another one of these with Arrio, but with Jackie as the Superego and Arrio as the Ego. Quintin's idealism and feelings of responsibility causes him to butt heads with Jackie's more selfish and down-to-earth wants. Arrio is older and wiser than both of them, approaching both of them with equal parts kindness and measured reason.



** When Quentin accidentally covers his entire math class with slime, the teacher mistakes it all for snot and demands he visit the nurse's office. The next person to use the restroom Quintin was in thinks little of him fleeing out the door screaming. Similarly, Jackie's classmates in gym are largely indifferent to how she made a volleyball pop and bumped another one into the ceiling, calling the ball and the ceiling "flimsy".

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** When Quentin Quintin accidentally covers his entire math class with slime, the teacher mistakes it all for snot and demands he visit the nurse's office. The next person to use the restroom Quintin was in thinks little of him fleeing out the door screaming. Similarly, Jackie's classmates in gym are largely indifferent to how she made a volleyball pop and bumped another one into the ceiling, calling the ball and the ceiling "flimsy".

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* PhysicalMagicalTechnological: Jackie, Arrio, and Nathan have this relationship regarding their roles in combat. Jackie's powers grant her SuperStrength and SuperToughness, making her the go-to girl for tackling the problem head-on and protecting her much more vulnerable teammates. Arrio is the TokenWizard capable of using powerful magic to assist and defend. Nathan's experience and mastery of his father's advanced technology allow him to provide technical solutions and lead while aiding Jackie on the frontlines.

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* PhysicalMagicalTechnological: PhysicalMysticalTechnological: Jackie, Arrio, and Nathan have this relationship regarding their roles in combat. Jackie's combat.
** Jackie is the Physical, as her
powers grant her SuperStrength and SuperToughness, making her the go-to girl for tackling the problem head-on and protecting her much more vulnerable teammates. teammates.
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Arrio is the Mystical. He's the TokenWizard capable of using powerful magic to assist and defend. Nathan's defend.
** Nathan is the Technological. His
experience and mastery of his father's advanced technology allow him to provide technical solutions and lead while aiding Jackie on the frontlines.
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* PhysicalMagicalTechnological: Jackie, Arrio, and Nathan have this relationship regarding their roles in combat. Jackie's powers grant her SuperStrength and SuperToughness, making her the go-to girl for tackling the problem head-on and protecting her much more vulnerable teammates. Arrio is the TokenWizard capable of using powerful magic to assist and defend. Nathan's experience and mastery of his father's advanced technology allow him to provide technical solutions and lead while aiding Jackie on the frontlines.

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