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* TheWrongfulHeirToTheThrone: Dara's "father" 9r stepfather is the King Regent, which means he is not king in his own right and his claim to the throne comes through Dara.
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* TheWrongfulHeirToTheThrone: The current king, who may be Dara's "father" 9r stepfather or stepfather, it's not made clear, is the King Regent, which means meaning he is not king in his own right and his claim to the throne comes through Dara.Dara. This is something he is trying to rectify by having Dara killed.
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* LoopholeAbuse: Elnor arranges with Caspian's father to get herself and Dara wounded as a way out of her contract. [[spoiler: We later learn that this specifically won't get her out of her contract, so what's her game?]]. Unfortunately, he second attempt with the Assasin's Guild ends up backfiring on her.
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* LoopholeAbuse: Elnor arranges with Caspian's father to get herself and Dara wounded as a way out of her contract. [[spoiler: We later learn that this specifically won't get her out of her contract, so what's her game?]]. Unfortunately, he second her attempt with at loopholing the Assasin's Guild ends up backfiring on her.
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* PeakABangs: Only one of Elnor's eyes is typically visible at any one time. It's not always the same one, though.
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* PeakABangs: Only one of Elnor's eyes is typically visible at any one time. It's not always the same one, though.
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* ProfessionalKiller: Elnor is an assassin, though she's currently contracted as Dara's bodyguard. She finds this tedious as Dara is an ExtraordinarilyEmpoweredGirl raised by warrior monks and doesn't need much guarding.
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* ProfessionalKiller: Elnor is an assassin, though she's currently contracted as Dara's bodyguard. She finds this tedious as Dara is an ExtraordinarilyEmpoweredGirl raised by warrior monks and who doesn't need much guarding.
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** Roan is wondering why he isn't supporting Auhle, and has learned that Elnor's contract has been changed from "protect the princess" to "terminate the princess."
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** Roan is wondering why he isn't supporting Auhle, and has Auhle. [[spoiler: He's also learned that Elnor's contract has been changed from "protect the princess" to "terminate the princess.""]]
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* BreakingTheFellowship: The crew is on the verge of breaking up by the end of chapter 14, as depicted symbolically on [[http://impurebloodwebcomic.com/comic/chapter-14/page-324/ page 324]]:
**Dara has run off and joined up with Auhle
**Kaleb is dead, leaving them in the dark as to how to defeat Auhle
**Elnor is torn among her mixed allegiances.
**Roan is wondering why he isn't supporting Auhle, and has learned that Elnor's contract has been changed from "protect the princess" to "terminate the princess."
**Jaem thinks they have to do ''something'' and is at odds with Roan's "What's in it for me?" attitude.
** Kaspian is frustrated by the whole situation and worried about being overwhelmed
** No one is paying any attention to Mac, who is the only one with a chance of working things out.
**Dara has run off and joined up with Auhle
**Kaleb is dead, leaving them in the dark as to how to defeat Auhle
**Elnor is torn among her mixed allegiances.
**Roan is wondering why he isn't supporting Auhle, and has learned that Elnor's contract has been changed from "protect the princess" to "terminate the princess."
**Jaem thinks they have to do ''something'' and is at odds with Roan's "What's in it for me?" attitude.
** Kaspian is frustrated by the whole situation and worried about being overwhelmed
** No one is paying any attention to Mac, who is the only one with a chance of working things out.
* FaceHeelTurn: Dara joins up with Auhle after she's had her fill of rejection.
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* ItIsDehumanizing: Caspian initially makes a point of referring to [[HalfHumanHybrid Roan]] this way. He gets better as Roan earns his respect.
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* LoopholeAbuse: Elnor arranges with Caspian's father to get herself and Dara wounded as a way out of her contract. [[spoiler: We later learn that this specifically won't get her out of her contract, so what's her game?]]game?]]. Unfortunately, he second attempt with the Assasin's Guild ends up backfiring on her.
* ThenLetMeBeEvil: Auhle practically glories in "Then let me be evil". Dara is wavering on this after a series of rejections. Her willingness to swear a blood oath to Auhle indicates that Evil is currently winning.
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* NotSoOmniscientCouncilOfBickering: The Watchers can't agree on any course of action, which led Caspian to strike out on his own.
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* NotSoOmniscientCouncilOfBickering: The Watchers can't agree on any course of action, which led Caspian to strike out on his own. Later we see why: they all insist on talking but none of them ever bothers to listen.
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* ScarsAreForever: Roan is heavily scarred. Mac thinks it's cool.
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* TheWrongfulHeirToTheThrone: Dara's "father" is the King Regent, which means he is (or was) the Queen's consort and his claim to the throne comes through Dara.
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* TheWrongfulHeirToTheThrone: Dara's "father" 9r stepfather is the King Regent, which means he is (or was) the Queen's consort not king in his own right and his claim to the throne comes through Dara.
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* UngratefulBastard: The Watchers in general are this towards Roan, but [[BlondGuysAreEvil the blond one]] in particular fits.
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* UngratefulBastard: The Watchers in general are this towards Roan, but [[BlondGuysAreEvil the blond one]] one in particular fits.
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'''''[[http://www.impurebloodwebcomic.com/ Impure Blood]]''''' is a fantasy webcomic featuring Roan, a not entirely human enslaved gladiator known as The Abomination, who is given a chance to escape by joining a quest. Caspian, who masterminds Roan's escape, is in conflict with most of the powers that be in their world, including his own father. Meanwhile, Caspian's servants Dara and Elnor have agendas of their own. In a world where humans have supplanted a magical race known as the Ancients, can there a place for those who are part human and part Ancient, or are they forever cursed -- or blessed -- by their ''Impure Blood?''
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* BloodMagic: Ancient blood powers most of the setting's {{Magitech}} gadgets. A villain appears to have the ability to teleport by dripping blood on the ground.
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* BloodMagic: Ancient blood powers most of the setting's {{Magitech}} {{Magitek}} gadgets. A villain appears to have the ability to teleport by dripping blood on the ground.
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* AmazonChaser: Jaem, towards Dara. A magnificent CrushBlush when he says she shouldn't [[FreakinessShame hide her eyes]] suggests that it could be reciprocated.
* ForScience: Kaleb Karrigan, who is very interested in the {{Magitek}} applications of Ancient blood, and less so in trivial matters like societal approval and his test subjects' consent.
* HurtingHero: Roan, thanks to being MadeASlave [[spoiler:after his mother was killed]].
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* {{Leader}} {{Leader}}: Dara is the true leader of the group. Caspian doesn't like it.
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'''''[[http://www.impurebloodwebcomic.com/ Impure Blood]]''''' is a fantasy webcomic featuring Roan, an enslaved gladiator known as The Abomination, who is not entirely human and is given a chance to escape by joining a quest. Caspian, who masterminds Roan's escape, is in conflict with most of the powers that be in their world, including his own father. Meanwhile, Caspian's servants Dara and Elnor have agendas of their own. In a world where humans have supplanted a magical race known as the Ancients, can there a place for those who are part human and part Ancient, or are they forever cursed -- or blessed -- by their ''Impure Blood?''
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'''''[[http://www.impurebloodwebcomic.com/ Impure Blood]]''''' is a fantasy webcomic featuring Roan, an a not entirely human enslaved gladiator known as The Abomination, who is not entirely human and is given a chance to escape by joining a quest. Caspian, who masterminds Roan's escape, is in conflict with most of the powers that be in their world, including his own father. Meanwhile, Caspian's servants Dara and Elnor have agendas of their own. In a world where humans have supplanted a magical race known as the Ancients, can there a place for those who are part human and part Ancient, or are they forever cursed -- or blessed -- by their ''Impure Blood?''
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*** RedEyesTakeWarning: They switch to red when she's angry, and become SupernaturalGoldEyes when she's using her powers o "convince" someone.
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** Dara, after the guy she just saved from a golem sneaks up behind her and bashes her over the head with a pipe.
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* GambitPileup: Caspian and Dara are not the only ones seeking the last Ancient, and some of the Watchers are working at cross purposes. Elnor has her own agenda, as do the smugglers, the Regent, the Rebellion and TheBigBad. All of them are set collide in Eldendore on the princess' 18th Birthday.
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* GambitPileup: Caspian and Dara are not the only ones seeking the last Ancient, and some of the Watchers are working at cross purposes. Elnor has her own agenda, as do the smugglers, the Regent, the Rebellion and TheBigBad. All of them are set collide in Eldendore on in the runup to the princess' 18th Birthday.
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* SchizoTech: Combining Magitek and DieselPunk technology with Victorian aestheticsaesthetics. The comic advertises itself as SteamPunk, but it's very late steam era (Edwardian vs high Victorian) if that's the case.
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* ServileSnarker: Dara's bodyguard Elnor sarcastically refers to her principal as "princess". [[spoiler: turns out Dara really is a princess.]]
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* ServileSnarker: Dara's bodyguard Elnor sarcastically refers to her principal as "princess". [[spoiler: turns out Dara really is a princess.]]]] Could be considered a form of SarcasticConfession.
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* GambitPileup: Caspian and Dara are not the only ones seeking the last Ancient, and some of the Watchers are working at cross purposes. Elnor has her own agenda, as do the smugglers, the Rebellion and TheBigBad. All of them are set collide in Eldendore on the princess' 18th Birthday.
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* GambitPileup: Caspian and Dara are not the only ones seeking the last Ancient, and some of the Watchers are working at cross purposes. Elnor has her own agenda, as do the smugglers, the Regent, the Rebellion and TheBigBad. All of them are set collide in Eldendore on the princess' 18th Birthday.
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* ProfessionalKiller: Elnor is an assassin, though she's currently contracted as Dara's bodyguard. She finds this tedious as Dara is an ExtraordinarilyEmpoweredGirl raised by warrior monks that doesn't even need much guarding.
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* BizarreSexualDimorphism: Second hand. Half bloods with a human mother are human sized and appear human. Crossbreeds with ancient blood on their father's side inherit psychic powers. Those with ancient blood on their mother's side are much larger inherit enormous size and look like the HalfHumanHybrids they are. strength. Those who inherit ancient blood from both parents look more draconic still.inherit both.
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* CondemnedContestant: Roan wasn't just a gladiator, he was a gladitorial executioner, forced to fight condemned criminals to the death
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* DarkActionGirl: Elnor, of the amoral assassin variety, in contrast to Dara's action girl. Ironically, Elnors's the blonde one.
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* GambitPileup: Caspian and Dara are not the only ones seeking the last Ancient, and some of the Watchers are working at cross purposes. Elnor has her own agenda, as do the smugglers, the Rebellion and TheBigBad. All of them are set collide in Eldendore on the princess' 18th Birthday.
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* ProfessionalKiller: Elnor is an assassin, though she's currently contracted as Dara's bodyguard. She finds this tedious, as killing someone is much easier than keeping them alive, and Dara is an ExtraordinarilyEmpoweredGirl raised by warrior monks that doesn't even need much guarding.
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'''''[[http://www.impurebloodwebcomic.com/ Impure Blood]]''''' is a fantasy webcomic featuring Roan, an enslaved gladiator known as The Abomination, who is not entirely human and is given a chance to escape by joining a quest. Caspian, who masterminds Roan's escape, is in conflict with most of the powers that be in their world, including his own father. Meanwhile, Caspian's servants Dara and Elnor have agendas of their own.
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'''''[[http://www.impurebloodwebcomic.com/ Impure Blood]]''''' is a fantasy webcomic featuring Roan, an enslaved gladiator known as The Abomination, who is not entirely human and is given a chance to escape by joining a quest. Caspian, who masterminds Roan's escape, is in conflict with most of the powers that be in their world, including his own father. Meanwhile, Caspian's servants Dara and Elnor have agendas of their own.
own. In a world where humans have supplanted a magical race known as the Ancients, can there a place for those who are part human and part Ancient, or are they forever cursed -- or blessed -- by their ''Impure Blood?''
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** Lampshaded later when another part-ancient tells him that most people are willing to ignore such differences if you give them an excuse.
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'''''[[http://www.impurebloodwebcomic.com/ Impure Blood]]''''' is a fantasy webcomic featuring Roan, an enslaved gladiator known as The Abomination, who is not entirely human and is given a chance to escape by joining a quest. Caspian, who masterminds Roan's escape, is in conflict with most of the powers that be in their world, including his own father. Meanwhile, Caspian's associates servants Dara and Elnor have agendas of their own.
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* GambitPileup: Caspian and Dara are not the only ones seeking the last of the Ancients, and some of the Watchers are working at cross purposes.
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* LastOfHisKind: Roan believes that he's the last until he meets others. Dara [[spoiler:(who, like Roan, is a half-blood)]] is searching for the last pure Ancient.
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* LittleStowaway: Mac stows aboard Mithlin's zeppelin on the way back to Turien, though she's not little so much as immature
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* LittleStowaway: Mac stows aboard Mithlin's zeppelin on the way back to Turien, though she's not little so much as immatureimmature.
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* ProfessionalKiller: Elnor is an assasin, though she's currently contracted as Dara's bodyguard. She finds this tedious as killing someone is much easier than keeping them alive, and Dara is an ExtraordinarilyEmpoweredGirl raised by warrior monks that doesn't even need guarding.
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* ProfessionalKiller: Elnor is an assasin, assassin, though she's currently contracted as Dara's bodyguard. She finds this tedious tedious, as killing someone is much easier than keeping them alive, and Dara is an ExtraordinarilyEmpoweredGirl raised by warrior monks that doesn't even need guarding.
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* TheDandy: Caspian, who is almost never goes without his top hat, vest, coat and cane, even in a desert.
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* TheDandy: Caspian, who is almost never goes seen without his top hat, vest, coat and cane, even in a desert.
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* TheDandy: Caspian, who is almost never goes without his tophat, vest, coat and cane, even in a desert.
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* TheDandy: Caspian, who is almost never goes without his tophat, top hat, vest, coat and cane, even in a desert.
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* DarkActionGirl: Elnor, of the amoral assassin variety, in contrast to Dara's action girl. Ironically,Elnors's the blonde one.
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* DarkActionGirl: Elnor, of the amoral assassin variety, in contrast to Dara's action girl. Ironically,Elnors's Ironically, Elnors's the blonde one.