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** RealityEnsues for Adell the rogue. Calling a "[[http://neorice.com/hoh_burk_653 secret attack]]" kind of defeats its purpose. Unless she wanted to scare Pablo off.
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** RealityEnsues for Adell the rogue. Calling rogue lampshades this by stating calling a "[[http://neorice.com/hoh_burk_653 secret attack]]" kind of defeats its purpose. Unless she wanted to scare Pablo off.
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* {{Egopolis}}: Justopia combines this with PeoplesRepublicOfTyranny, since its name both suggests "justice" or Emperor Justin's name.
* TheEmpire: The Empire of Justopia. The morning radio broadcasts blare out propaganda and magic users are pressed into service.
* TheEmpire: The Empire of Justopia. The morning radio broadcasts blare out propaganda and magic users are pressed into service.
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* {{Egopolis}}: Justopia Justopea combines this with PeoplesRepublicOfTyranny, since its name both suggests "justice" or Emperor Justin's name.
* TheEmpire: The Empire ofJustopia.Justopea. The morning radio broadcasts blare out propaganda and magic users are pressed into service.
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* GambitPileup: The events at Clovercoast in Burk's storyline. Basically, Mage Baron and Livarall conduct poorly-coordinated investigations of systemic robberies. Of course, the culprits counteract. Additionally, Mage Baron keeps some interesting prisoners, who won't pass an opportunity to escape. Then Burk and Aristocrat stumble in the middle of it.
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* GambitPileup: The events at Clovercoast in Burk's storyline. Basically, Mage Baron and Livarall conduct poorly-coordinated investigations of systemic robberies. Of course, the culprits counteract. Additionally, Mage Baron keeps some interesting prisoners, who won't pass up an opportunity to escape. Then Burk and Aristocrat stumble in the middle of it.
* KillAllHumans: [[http://neorice.com/hoh_1655 Ghouls have this reputation]].
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** Mind of Detlef the elf's -- an abstract memory of the first time he met Empire soldiers, whom he sees as mindless suits of armour setting things on fire with their eye-beams.
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* MutantDraftBoard: In Justopia ''illegal'' magic users are drafted into service for TheEmpire. It's not stated explicitly, but looks like there's no legal magic outside empire service.
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* MutantDraftBoard: In Justopia Justopea ''illegal'' magic users are drafted into service for TheEmpire. It's not stated explicitly, but looks like there's no legal magic outside empire service.
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*** And then [[spoiler:their respective stories continue more or less like in ''APTGG''.]]
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*** And then [[spoiler:their [[spoiler:the three respective stories continue more or less like in ''APTGG''.]]
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* RPGMechanicsVerse: Hinted at in Burk's arc and TOM RPG (which both referenced a ranking system), and played completely straight in the first few chapters of Tobi's arc (complete with dungeon crawls, class changes, stat menus and rankings). [[spoiler:Tobi seems to have lived in a MORPG.]]
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* RPGMechanicsVerse: RPGMechanicsVerse:
** Hinted at in Burk's arc and TOM RPG (which both referenced a rankingsystem), and played system)
** Played completely straight in the first few chapters of Tobi's arc (complete with dungeon crawls, class changes, stat menus and rankings). [[spoiler:Tobi seems to have lived in a MORPG.]]
** Ghouls behave as if they are player characters and the rest of the world is their MMORPG.[[spoiler: They respawn, when killed, and kill [=NPCs=] for fun.]]
** Hinted at in Burk's arc and TOM RPG (which both referenced a ranking
** Played completely straight in the first few chapters of Tobi's arc (complete with dungeon crawls, class changes, stat menus and rankings). [[spoiler:Tobi seems to have lived in a MORPG.]]
** Ghouls behave as if they are player characters and the rest of the world is their MMORPG.[[spoiler: They respawn, when killed, and kill [=NPCs=] for fun.]]
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* SchoolUniformsAreTheNewBlack: The students in Noah's chapters all wear their uniforms, even when they're not attending. [[http://www.neorice.com/hoh_250 The same appears to be true of other schools in Gloria]], too.
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* SchoolUniformsAreTheNewBlack: The students in Noah's chapters all wear their uniforms, even when they're not attending. [[http://www.neorice.com/hoh_250 The same appears to be true of other schools in Gloria]], too. Felix is an exception, though.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Quite a few examples. In the Justopian Empire it's associated with elves, but elsewhere it isn't anything unusual (aside from the fact it usually happens because [[http://www.neorice.com/hoh_544 there was a lot of magic about when they were born]]).
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Quite a few examples. In the Justopian Justopean Empire it's associated with elves, but elsewhere it isn't anything unusual (aside from the fact it usually happens because [[http://www.neorice.com/hoh_544 there was a lot of magic about when they were born]]).
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** Ariara is [[spoiler:one of the world's top wanted criminals, "Pirate of the Storm"]]. Nobody knows, how the baron managed to catch her. She wants all the prisoners to join her pirate crew — possibly, to replace the old crew that either fled or died.
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** Ariara is [[spoiler:one of the world's top wanted criminals, "Pirate of the Storm"]]. Nobody knows, how the baron managed to catch her. She wants all the prisoners to join her pirate crew — — possibly, to replace the old crew that either fled or died.
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** Guy Juliet assists Iron Judge, but has his own agenda. [[spoiler:For one, Justopea wants Ariara dead.]]
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** Guy Juliet assists seems to assist Iron Judge, but has his own agenda. [[spoiler:For one, agenda and isn't trusted. [[spoiler:He was tailing "3rd magic user" and his partner, tried to warn Mage Baron, but was too late. In addition, Justopea wants Ariara dead.]]
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* OurElvesAreBetter: On two levels; the ''HOH'' universe has at least one magic-using race of humans called elves... apparently as an insult because they resembled elves that already "existed" in the Empire's mythologies.
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* OurElvesAreBetter: OurElvesAreDifferent: On two levels; the ''HOH'' universe has at least one magic-using race of humans called elves... apparently as an insult because they resembled elves that already "existed" in the Empire's mythologies.
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* GambitPileup: The events at Clovercoast in Burk's storyline. Basically, Mage Baron and Livarall conduct poorly-coordinated investigations of systemic robberies. Of course, the culprits counteract. Additionally, Mage Baron keeps some interesting prisoners, who won't pass an opportunity to escape. Then Burk and Aristocrat stumble in the middle of it.
** Livarian diplomat Pablo needs to discuss robberies with Baron. But entry is denied. He then tries to sneak in.
** Burk's plan involves following Pablo and bragging about beating Baron.
** The nameless rogue helps them sneak in. To use them as a distraction while she empties the baron's safe.
*** Then Pablo proves smarter than he seemed and somewhat hinders her.
** Ramien is the former king overthrown by Mage King. He is the leader of non-magical prisoners. If freed, he can easily start a popular uprising. [[spoiler:Actually, he knows the uprising would be doomed and wants to negotiate a surrender on better terms.]]
** Moe the Shifter [[spoiler:assisted the baron in the investigation, then was given magic and driven insane to make him kill the baron]]. Now he wants to continue his rampage. Switches sides real often.
** Ariara is [[spoiler:one of the world's top wanted criminals, "Pirate of the Storm"]]. Nobody knows, how the baron managed to catch her. She wants all the prisoners to join her pirate crew — possibly, to replace the old crew that either fled or died.
** "3rd magic user" and his partner were sent to [[spoiler:kill the baron and take his amulet]], but somehow got caught. When freed, they proceed with the old plan ruthlessly.
** Iron Judge and Piper Pol investigate the robberies [[spoiler:and the baron's death]].
** Guy Juliet assists Iron Judge, but has his own agenda. [[spoiler:For one, Justopea wants Ariara dead.]]
** Aristocrat just wants Burk's backpack.
** Livarian diplomat Pablo needs to discuss robberies with Baron. But entry is denied. He then tries to sneak in.
** Burk's plan involves following Pablo and bragging about beating Baron.
** The nameless rogue helps them sneak in. To use them as a distraction while she empties the baron's safe.
*** Then Pablo proves smarter than he seemed and somewhat hinders her.
** Ramien is the former king overthrown by Mage King. He is the leader of non-magical prisoners. If freed, he can easily start a popular uprising. [[spoiler:Actually, he knows the uprising would be doomed and wants to negotiate a surrender on better terms.]]
** Moe the Shifter [[spoiler:assisted the baron in the investigation, then was given magic and driven insane to make him kill the baron]]. Now he wants to continue his rampage. Switches sides real often.
** Ariara is [[spoiler:one of the world's top wanted criminals, "Pirate of the Storm"]]. Nobody knows, how the baron managed to catch her. She wants all the prisoners to join her pirate crew — possibly, to replace the old crew that either fled or died.
** "3rd magic user" and his partner were sent to [[spoiler:kill the baron and take his amulet]], but somehow got caught. When freed, they proceed with the old plan ruthlessly.
** Iron Judge and Piper Pol investigate the robberies [[spoiler:and the baron's death]].
** Guy Juliet assists Iron Judge, but has his own agenda. [[spoiler:For one, Justopea wants Ariara dead.]]
** Aristocrat just wants Burk's backpack.
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*** Chapter 2 begins with the criminal Sharkface Sam cornering a young blonde woman on the street. In ''APTGG'', he kills her. In ''HOH'', [[spoiler:she blasts him with her magic.]]
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*** Chapter 2 begins with the criminal Sharkface Sam cornering a young blonde woman on the street. In ''APTGG'', he kills her.her, but immediately falls victim to a suspicious cult. In ''HOH'', [[spoiler:she blasts him with her magic.]]
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* StealthPun: [[http://neorice.com/news_2008 The authour said]] Noah needed reflections to talk to Ciel, because he was self reflecting. He didn't touch the implications of no longer needing mirrors.
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* TheBlank: Mr. Three, who is a HumanoidAbomination and speaks entirely in unintelligible TV static. He seems friendly though.
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* BadassGrandpa: Tobi's grandfather no longer goes to dungeons. But only because he's so high level, he gets no treasure. [[spoiler:He also has either cheat codes or debug access as seen [[http://neorice.com/hoh_tobi_436 here]].]]
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* OldMaster: Tobi's grandfather no longer goes to dungeons. But only because he's so high level, he gets no treasure. [[spoiler:He also has either cheat codes or debug access as seen [[http://neorice.com/hoh_tobi_436 here]].]]
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** Subverted when the Aristocrat pretends to do this [[http://www.neorice.com/hoh_60 in order to give himself a chance to run away]].
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* OurElvesAreBetter: On two levels; the HOH universe has at least one magic using race of humans called elves...apparently as an insult because they resembled elves that already "existed" in the Empire's mythologies.
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* OurElvesAreBetter: On two levels; the HOH ''HOH'' universe has at least one magic using magic-using race of humans called elves...elves... apparently as an insult because they resembled elves that already "existed" in the Empire's mythologies.mythologies.
* OurHumansAreDifferent: Humans are able to use magic and can also randomly have strange hair colours (the latter typically being from being born in high magic areas regardless of if the person in question has any powers). The setting's [[OurElvesAreDifferent elves]] are a race (in the non-Tolkien sense) of humans with [[PeopleofHairColor green hair]], skin and GreenThumb powers who're called "elves" as a slur by TheEmpire.
* OurHumansAreDifferent: Humans are able to use magic and can also randomly have strange hair colours (the latter typically being from being born in high magic areas regardless of if the person in question has any powers). The setting's [[OurElvesAreDifferent elves]] are a race (in the non-Tolkien sense) of humans with [[PeopleofHairColor green hair]], skin and GreenThumb powers who're called "elves" as a slur by TheEmpire.
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In addition there's a one-shot story, set in the same universe, which fills in some of the setting's details and can be found on Neorice's deviantArt account [[http://neoriceisgood.deviantart.com/gallery/46020257/TOM-RPG here]].
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In addition there's a one-shot story, set in the same universe, which fills in some of the setting's details and can be found on Neorice's deviantArt account [[http://neoriceisgood.deviantart.com/gallery/46020257/TOM-RPG here]]. There is also a wiki which can be found [[http://hero-oh-hero.wikia.com/wiki/Hero_oh_Hero_Wiki here]].
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* DefeatMeansFriendship: Burk tries (and fails) to invoke this with Piggy.
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* HollywoodAcid: The "[[http://neorice.com/hoh_tobi_837 shimmering sea]]" under Lorg. Dissolves anything organic. (AWizardDidIt, of course.) Created to solve the waste problem, mainly sewer and dead bodies.
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* HollywoodAcid: The "[[http://neorice.com/hoh_tobi_837 shimmering sea]]" under Lorg. Dissolves anything organic. (AWizardDidIt, of course.) Created to solve the waste problem, mainly sewer sewage and dead bodies.
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* IHaveNoSon: It's not uncommon in Justopea to disown children if they manifest magic abilities, because of fear and hatred of magic. [[spoiler:Noah's mother does this.]] Presence of any legal guardian seems to severely limit what Justopean government people are allowed to do to magical children. [[spoiler:Thus Noah's estranged father shows up to help him.]]
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* IHaveNoSon: It's not uncommon in Justopea to disown children if they manifest magic abilities, because of fear and hatred of magic. [[spoiler:Noah's mother does this.]] Presence The presence of any legal guardian seems to severely limit what Justopean government people are allowed to do to magical children. [[spoiler:Thus Noah's estranged father shows up to help him.]]
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** Aude ends up being one [[spoiler: when she attacks an elf who was happy to let her, Nail and Noah leave, since they weren't soldiers]].
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* TwinkleInTheEye: Burk has these quite frequently. Usually when he's motivated to do something.
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* TwinkleInTheEye: Burk has these quite frequently. Usually when he's motivated to do something. Sometimes he'll [[ExageratedTrope get a twinkle in both eyes.]]
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** Burk and Logan get one [[http://www.neorice.com/hoh_198 when they begin sparing]], even with ArtShift.
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* TheWikiRule: [[http://hero-oh-hero.wikia.com/wiki/Hero_oh_Hero_Wiki Has one here]].
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* ApocalypseHow: Emergence of magic a few decades ago. Worldwide societal disruption or even collapse in some places. Many areas effectively reverted to feudalism and many technologies were lost, such as making [=TVs=] or robots, as told [[http://neorice.com/hoh_tobi_843 here]].
* BadassGrandpa: Tobi's grandfather no longer goes to dungeons. But only because he's so high level, he gets no treasure. [[spoiler:He also has either cheat codes or debug access as seen [[http://neorice.com/hoh_tobi_436 here]].]]
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* CallingYourAttacks: Most magic users do that.
** Students at Veda's [[http://neorice.com/hoh_noah_613 demonstration]].
** [[http://neorice.com/hoh_burk_735 Iron Judge]] and [[http://neorice.com/hoh_burk_1088 Piper]]. Note that the teenage girl and an old man use different names for similar spells.
** Pablo names his diplomatic [[http://neorice.com/hoh_burk_653 "weapons"]]. Strictly speaking, [[http://neorice.com/hoh_burk_507 some]] of those aren't attacks.
** RealityEnsues for Adell the rogue. Calling a "[[http://neorice.com/hoh_burk_653 secret attack]]" kind of defeats its purpose. Unless she wanted to scare Pablo off.
** Same for Aristocrat [[http://neorice.com/hoh_burk_670 against Burk]].
** [[http://neorice.com/hoh_burk_735 Iron Judge]] and [[http://neorice.com/hoh_burk_1088 Piper]]. Note that the teenage girl and an old man use different names for similar spells.
** Pablo names his diplomatic [[http://neorice.com/hoh_burk_653 "weapons"]]. Strictly speaking, [[http://neorice.com/hoh_burk_507 some]] of those aren't attacks.
** RealityEnsues for Adell the rogue. Calling a "[[http://neorice.com/hoh_burk_653 secret attack]]" kind of defeats its purpose. Unless she wanted to scare Pablo off.
** Same for Aristocrat [[http://neorice.com/hoh_burk_670 against Burk]].
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* CorruptCop: The bandit leader is revealed to be [[http://www.neorice.com/hoh_102 the ex-captain of the guard]].
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* CorruptCop: CorruptCop:
** Thebandit leader is bandits are revealed to be former guards led by [[http://www.neorice.com/hoh_102 the ex-captain of ex-captain]]. Subversion -- working as money collectors for bigger bads looked like the guard]].least harmful course of action.
** Housten [[http://neorice.com/hoh_tobi_1157 claims to be honest]] which is quite rare in [[WretchedHive Lorg]].
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** Housten [[http://neorice.com/hoh_tobi_1157 claims to be honest]] which is quite rare in [[WretchedHive Lorg]].
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* EyeColourChange: In Tobi's chapter, someone looking at a menu has their eyes shift to the colour of the menu.
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* EyeColourChange: In Tobi's chapter, someone looking at a menu has their eyes shift to the colour of the menu. [[WordOfGod The authour said]] that other people may notice blue sparks in Tobi's eyes -- but only if they look very hard.
* HiddenElfVillage: Tobi's hometown, Rauel. Almost a TreeTopTown, but instead of trees it's built on metal pillars and platforms -- to stay safe from desert predators. Inhabited by pointy-eared people with some unconventional abilities.
* HollywoodAcid: The "[[http://neorice.com/hoh_tobi_837 shimmering sea]]" under Lorg. Dissolves anything organic. (AWizardDidIt, of course.) Created to solve the waste problem, mainly sewer and dead bodies.
* HollywoodAcid: The "[[http://neorice.com/hoh_tobi_837 shimmering sea]]" under Lorg. Dissolves anything organic. (AWizardDidIt, of course.) Created to solve the waste problem, mainly sewer and dead bodies.
* IHaveNoSon: It's not uncommon in Justopea to disown children if they manifest magic abilities, because of fear and hatred of magic. [[spoiler:Noah's mother does this.]] Presence of any legal guardian seems to severely limit what Justopean government people are allowed to do to magical children. [[spoiler:Thus Noah's estranged father shows up to help him.]]
* TheMagicComesBack: This happened several decades ago. With drastic consequences.
* MinorLivingAlone: Noah is a highschooler living in a dorm. Which looks more like an apartment complex.
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* RPGMechanicsVerse: Hinted at in Burk's arc and TOM RPG (which both referenced a ranking system), and played completely straight in the first few chapters of Tobi's arc (complete with dungeon crawls, class changes, stat menus and rankings).
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* RPGMechanicsVerse: Hinted at in Burk's arc and TOM RPG (which both referenced a ranking system), and played completely straight in the first few chapters of Tobi's arc (complete with dungeon crawls, class changes, stat menus and rankings). [[spoiler:Tobi seems to have lived in a MORPG.]]
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* NotWhatItLooksLike: Noah went to a petting zoo and came home around midnight with bleeding hands. Guards assume something kinky, possibly illegal. Actually, no animals were harmed. [[He got stuck in a cow's mind and had to dig the exit in the imaginary soil.]]
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* NotWhatItLooksLike: Noah went to a petting zoo and came home around midnight with bleeding hands. Guards assume something kinky, possibly illegal. Actually, no animals were harmed. [[He [[spoiler:He got stuck in a cow's mind and had to dig the exit in the imaginary soil.]]
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* HonourBeforeReason: Several characters have their moments. Lacey borders on insanity when someone speaks ill or just brings bad news about his king.
* InstantSedation: Weapon of choice of Adel, the rogue girl, is [[http://neorice.com/hoh_burk_581 syringes]]. For throwing and stabbing.
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* MentalWorld: [[spoiler: Noah's power turns out to be able to enter these. So far we've seen Detlef the elf's (an abstract memory of the first time he met Empire soldiers) and "Home" (which is presumably Noah's own mind, in the form of a subway station).]]
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* MentalWorld: [[spoiler: Noah's power turns out to be able to enter these. ]] So far we've seen seen:
** Mind of Detlef the elf's(an -- an abstract memory of the first time he met Empire soldiers) and soldiers, whom he sees as mindless suits of armour setting things on fire with their eye-beams.
** "Home"(which is -- presumably Noah's [[spoiler:Noah's own mind, mind]], in the form of a subway station).station.
** Cow's mind -- an infinite flat grassland, where the cow is the only landmark. Exiting it proves tricky. [[spoiler:Noah needed a place the cow didn't know. He had to dig a pit with his bare hands.]]
** Mind of Detlef the elf's
** "Home"
** Cow's mind -- an infinite flat grassland, where the cow is the only landmark. Exiting it proves tricky. [[spoiler:Noah needed a place the cow didn't know. He had to dig a pit with his bare hands.]]
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* MutantDraftBoard: The beginning of the second chapter implies that magic users (or at least ''illegal'' magic users) are drafted into service for TheEmpire.
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* MutantDraftBoard: The beginning of the second chapter implies that magic users (or at least In Justopia ''illegal'' magic users) users are drafted into service for TheEmpire.TheEmpire. It's not stated explicitly, but looks like there's no legal magic outside empire service.
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** Chapters 1 and 2 each start out like the beginnings of their arcs in ''A Path to Greater Good'', but then go in different directions:
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** Chapters 1 1, 2 and 2 3 each start out like the beginnings of their arcs in ''A Path to Greater Good'', but then go in different directions:
*** And then [[spoiler:their respective stories continue more or less like in ''APTGG''.]]
** Several scenes in ''APTGG'' involved Burk fighting offscreen and losing some of his clothes. Several scenes involved losing clothes onscreen. In ''HOH'' all of them happen [[NoodleIncident offscreen]] with just a comment they were "a casualty of war".
** Several scenes in ''APTGG'' involved Burk fighting offscreen and losing some of his clothes. Several scenes involved losing clothes onscreen. In ''HOH'' all of them happen [[NoodleIncident offscreen]] with just a comment they were "a casualty of war".
* NotWhatItLooksLike: Noah went to a petting zoo and came home around midnight with bleeding hands. Guards assume something kinky, possibly illegal. Actually, no animals were harmed. [[He got stuck in a cow's mind and had to dig the exit in the imaginary soil.]]
* RulesLawyer: Burk promised Pablo not to fight bad guys while inside the castle. But if a bad guy destroyed part of the castle, [[http://www.neorice.com/hoh_729 does it count as outside?]] Burk decides it does.
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* VersusCharacterSplash: Burk and Logan get one [[http://www.neorice.com/hoh_198 when they begin sparing]].
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* VersusCharacterSplash: VersusCharacterSplash:
** Burk and Logan get one [[http://www.neorice.com/hoh_198 when they beginsparing]].sparing]], even with ArtShift.
** [[http://neorice.com/hoh_burk_653 Adel the Rogue vs. Pablo the Diplomat.]]
** [[http://www.neorice.com/hoh_611 The three pairs of students]] giving a demonstration in "The Meeting" chapter. Two pairs get their own smaller splashes.
** [[http://www.neorice.com/hoh_668 Burk vs. The Aristocrat.]] They are interrupted, though.
** [[http://www.neorice.com/hoh_774 Pirate of the Storm vs. Iron Judge.]]
** [[http://www.neorice.com/hoh_867 Pirate of the Storm vs. Burk.]]
** Burk and Logan get one [[http://www.neorice.com/hoh_198 when they begin
** [[http://neorice.com/hoh_burk_653 Adel the Rogue vs. Pablo the Diplomat.]]
** [[http://www.neorice.com/hoh_611 The three pairs of students]] giving a demonstration in "The Meeting" chapter. Two pairs get their own smaller splashes.
** [[http://www.neorice.com/hoh_668 Burk vs. The Aristocrat.]] They are interrupted, though.
** [[http://www.neorice.com/hoh_774 Pirate of the Storm vs. Iron Judge.]]
** [[http://www.neorice.com/hoh_867 Pirate of the Storm vs. Burk.]]
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''[[http://neorice.com/archive Hero Oh Hero]]'' is a {{Pixel Art|Comic}} webcomic created by Guido "Neorice" Bos which is a reboot of ''WebComic/APathToGreaterGood''.
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''[[http://neorice.com/archive Hero Oh Hero]]'' (also available in an ArchiveBinge friendly format [[https://tapastic.com/series/Hero-Oh-Hero here]]) is a {{Pixel Art|Comic}} webcomic created by Guido "Neorice" Bos which is a reboot of ''WebComic/APathToGreaterGood''.
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* BlindingBangs: Burk's fringe casts his eyes in shadow.
** However, he puts on a headband to keep his hair out of his eyes when he [[LetsGetDangerous gets serious]].
** However, he puts on a headband to keep his hair out of his eyes when he [[LetsGetDangerous gets serious]].
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* BlindingBangs: Burk's fringe casts his eyes in shadow.
**shadow. However, he puts on a headband to keep his hair out of his eyes when he [[LetsGetDangerous gets serious]].
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* TheDandy: The aristocrat cares enough about his appearance to ask that his clothes be repaired and addresses a crowd as "Ladies and Gentlemen... and Ladies.".
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* TheDandy: The aristocrat cares enough about his appearance to ask that his clothes be repaired and addresses a crowd as "Ladies and Gentlemen... and Ladies.".Ladies".
* DistinctionWithoutADifference: The girl from class C wasn't arrested; just conscripted into the VEDA project for using magic illegally!
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* NoExceptYes: The girl from class C wasn't arrested; just conscripted into the VEDA project for using magic illegally!
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It follows a plot, similar to its predecessor, with three separate characters with their own PlotThreads (which WordOfGod says will eventually intersect), set in a fantasy world and updates on Mondays, Wednesdays and Fridays (with the occasional week of daily updates).
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It follows a plot, similar to its predecessor, with three separate characters with their own PlotThreads (which WordOfGod says will eventually slowly intersect), set in a fantasy world and updates on Mondays, Wednesdays and Fridays (with the occasional week of daily updates).
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* LightBulbJoke:
-->[[http://www.neorice.com/hoh_36 "How many Burks does it take to screw in a lightbulb? It takes... FIVE LIGHTBULBS!"]]
-->[[http://www.neorice.com/hoh_36 "How many Burks does it take to screw in a lightbulb? It takes... FIVE LIGHTBULBS!"]]
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* RPGMechanicsVerse: Hinted at in Burk's chapter and TOM RPG (which both referenced a ranking system), and played completely straight in Tobi's chapter (complete with dungeon crawls, class changes, stat menus and rankings).
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* RPGMechanicsVerse: Hinted at in Burk's chapter arc and TOM RPG (which both referenced a ranking system), and played completely straight in the first few chapters of Tobi's chapter arc (complete with dungeon crawls, class changes, stat menus and rankings).
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It follows a plot, similar to its predecessor, with three separate characters with their own non-intersecting PlotThreads, set in a fantasy world and updates on Mondays, Wednesdays and Fridays (with the occasional week of daily updates).
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It follows a plot, similar to its predecessor, with three separate characters with their own non-intersecting PlotThreads, PlotThreads (which WordOfGod says will eventually intersect), set in a fantasy world and updates on Mondays, Wednesdays and Fridays (with the occasional week of daily updates).
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* TheEmpire: It's called exactly this. The morning radio broadcasts blare out propaganda and magic users are pressed into service.
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* DungeonBasedEconomy: The desert town of Rauel gets all its resources from the dungeons which spring up (traps, enemies and all) for 24-hours and disappear. It's so common that the townsfolk consider them a natural resource. [[spoiler: While it's routine, it can still be very dangerous, [[BreakTheCutie as the first chapter demonstrates.]]]]
* {{Egopolis}}: Justopia combines this with PeoplesRepublicOfTyranny, since its name both suggests "justice" or Emperor Justin's name.
* TheEmpire:It's called exactly this.The Empire of Justopia. The morning radio broadcasts blare out propaganda and magic users are pressed into service.
* {{Egopolis}}: Justopia combines this with PeoplesRepublicOfTyranny, since its name both suggests "justice" or Emperor Justin's name.
* TheEmpire:
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Quite a few examples. In the Justopian Empire it's associated with elves, but elsewhere it isn't anything unusual (aside from the fact it usually happens because [[http://www.neorice.com/hoh_544 there was a lot of magic about when they were born).
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Quite a few examples. In the Justopian Empire it's associated with elves, but elsewhere it isn't anything unusual (aside from the fact it usually happens because [[http://www.neorice.com/hoh_544 there was a lot of magic about when they were born).born]]).
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Melany, the girl from the opening, is the only character shown (so far) with an unnatural hair colour. Nobody's commented on it.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Melany, Quite a few examples. In the girl Justopian Empire it's associated with elves, but elsewhere it isn't anything unusual (aside from the opening, is the only character shown (so far) with an unnatural hair colour. Nobody's commented on it.fact it usually happens because [[http://www.neorice.com/hoh_544 there was a lot of magic about when they were born).
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* TheChick: Burk's ideal party includes [[DiscussedTrope a character simple named "Girl"]].
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* TheChick: Burk's ideal party includes [[DiscussedTrope a character simple simply named "Girl"]].
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** The Aristocrat to Burk. Similar appearance, [[HotBlooded similar fighting style and approach to problems]]. Opposing personalities (and hygiene). The same is true of Logan, who's skinny build and HonourBeforeReason attitude contrasts Burk in another way.
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** The Aristocrat to Burk. Similar appearance, [[HotBlooded similar fighting style and approach to problems]]. Opposing personalities (and hygiene). The same is true of Logan, who's whose skinny build and HonourBeforeReason attitude contrasts Burk in another way.
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* GoofyPrintUnderwear: When Burk [[http://www.neorice.com/hoh_89 loses his pants]] (somehow), his underwear has white-on-red polka-dots.
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* GoofyPrintUnderwear: When Whenever Burk [[http://www.neorice.com/hoh_89 loses his pants]] (somehow), his underwear has white-on-red polka-dots.
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* TheChick: Burk's ideal party includes [[DiscussedTrope a character simple named "Girl"]].
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* MentalWorld: [[spoiler: Noah's power turns out to be able to enter these. So far we've seen Detlef the elf's (an abstract memory of the first time he met Empire soldiers) and "Home" (which is presumably Noah's own mind, in the form of a subway station).
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* MentalWorld: [[spoiler: Noah's power turns out to be able to enter these. So far we've seen Detlef the elf's (an abstract memory of the first time he met Empire soldiers) and "Home" (which is presumably Noah's own mind, in the form of a subway station).]]
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* BeneathNotice: It turns out that the version of Detlef Noah meets [[spoiler: in Detlef's MentalWorld]] was friendly to him because he [[NonActionGuy barely even noticed him]] before.
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* MentalWorld: [[spoiler: Noah's power turns out to be able to enter these. So far we've seen Detlef the elf's (an abstract memory of the first time he met Empire soldiers) and "Home" (which is presumably Noah's own mind, in the form of a subway station).
