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* PerkyGoth: Subverted. Alisin is cheerful, fun-loving, and free-spirited, and it's only when you look closely that it's revealed that [[StepfordSmiler underneath the perky exterior]] she's neurotic, self-loathing and nihilistic mess.
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* PerkyGoth: Subverted. Alisin is cheerful, fun-loving, and free-spirited, and it's only when you look closely that it's revealed that [[StepfordSmiler underneath the perky exterior]] she's a neurotic, self-loathing and nihilistic mess.
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* ConstrainedWriting: The "Crossover" arc is structured so as to form a crossword puzzle at the end, with dialogue-free frames as black squares, and the first letter in each square with dialogue as part of the puzzle's solution.
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* ConstrainedWriting: The "Crossover" arc is structured so as to form a crossword puzzle CrosswordPuzzle at the end, with dialogue-free frames as black squares, and the first letter in each square with dialogue as part of the puzzle's solution.
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* BettyAndVeronica: Rumy (the shy, nerdy artist struggling to express herseld) is the Betty, and Alisin (the wild, promiscuous PerkyGoth with a dark path and huge anger issues) is the Veronica to Rikk's Archie. At the end of the webcomic's first run, the love triangle is solved by having them enter a threesome... though the revival does explore their relationship a little further and reveals that they all still had a number of issues to work out before the relationship was anywhere near stable.
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* BettyAndVeronica: Rumy (the shy, nerdy artist struggling to express herseld) herself) is the Betty, and Alisin (the wild, promiscuous PerkyGoth with a dark path and huge anger issues) is the Veronica to Rikk's Archie. At the end of the webcomic's first run, the love triangle is solved by having them enter a threesome... though the revival does explore their relationship a little further and reveals that they all still had a number of issues to work out before the relationship was anywhere near stable.
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* FantasticHonorifics: "Sirrah", the honorific used to address General Maximillianna, is a real, if archaic, English honorific. You see it all the time in Shakespeare. However, it is used in the opposite way from its historical usage: "Sirrah" was not a "greater" form of "Sir", but a ''lesser'' one, used to address someone younger or of lower status than oneself.
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* FantasticHonorifics: "Sirrah", the honorific used to address General Maximillianna, is a real, if archaic, English honorific. You see it all the time in Shakespeare. However, the strip (or Maximilliana's culture/timline of origin) use it is used in the opposite way from its historical usage: "Sirrah" was not a "greater" form of "Sir", but a ''lesser'' one, used to address someone younger or of lower status than oneself.
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** And of course, the FreudianExcuse offered by Robert Worthington, ALisin's uncle in the Order of the Dragon, is just absurd.
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** And of course, the FreudianExcuse offered by Robert Worthington, ALisin's Alisin's uncle in the Order of the Dragon, is just absurd.
