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** The Guzman brothers nicknames are [[SesameStreet Bert and Ernie]].
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** The Guzman brothers nicknames are [[SesameStreet [[Series/SesameStreet Bert and Ernie]].
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* ColonizedSolarSystem: The solar system is being colonized. Mars and much of the Belt seem to be largely independent of the United World while the moon, Venus, and Mercury are (officially at least) under its heel. The first Mars colonists were members of a private space corporation that hijacked the International Space Station when it was scheduled to be decommissioned.
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* SettlingTheFrontier: The Colonies.
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** The High Commissioner of the UW revenue service looks like a pirate-copy of LexLuthor.ComicBook/LexLuthor. His secretary's name is Tessmucker, a play on the Teschmacher, Lex Luthor's accomplice in the movies.
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* LongevityTreatment: Rejuvenation treatments are one of many examples of bio- and nanotechnology that are officially banned on Earth. Reggie King and Babbette the elder undergo the treatment on Mars, and the first man on Mars is a great-great-great-grandfather who looks no older than 30.
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* LongevityTreatment: Rejuvenation treatments are one of many examples of bio- and nanotechnology that are officially banned on Earth. Reggie King and Babbette the elder undergo the treatment on Mars, and the first man on Mars is a great-great-great-grandfather [[http://www.bigheadpress.com/eft?page=870 great-great-great-great-grandfather]] who looks no older than 30.
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** [[http://www.bigheadpress.com/eft?page=772 "He's dead,]] [[Series/StarTrek Jim"]]. And it actually gets referenced [[http://www.bigheadpress.com/eft?page=775 later]].
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* StealthInSpace: [[http://www.bigheadpress.com/eft?page=159 Some]] Ceres mining ships manage to sneak close enough to the invading UW fleet simply by hiding behind small asteroids they tossed ahead of them.
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** Ernie was talking about a "[[http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Kessel_Run Kessel Run]]" (a name for a hyperspace "lane" from StarWars) he made in "less than 12 parsecs".
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** Ernie was talking about a "[[http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Kessel_Run Kessel Run]]" (a name for a [[http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Hyperlane hyperspace "lane" "lane"]] from StarWars) he made in "less than 12 parsecs".
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** Or Reggie King after he rode an rollercoaster [[RecycledInSpace on mars]].
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** Ernie was talking about a "[[http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Kessel_Run]Kessel com/wiki/Kessel_Run Kessel Run]]" (a name for a hyperspace "lane" from StarWars) he made in "less than 12 parsecs".
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** Ernie was talking about a "[url=http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Kessel_Run]Kessel Run[/url]" (a name for a hyperspace "lane" from StarWars) he made in "less than 12 parsecs".
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** Ernie was talking about a "[url=http://starwars."[[http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Kessel_Run]Kessel Run[/url]" Run]]" (a name for a hyperspace "lane" from StarWars) he made in "less than 12 parsecs".
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* LongevityTreatment: Rejuvenation treatments are one of many examples of bio- and nanotechnology that are officially banned on Earth. Reggie King and Babbette the elder undergo the treatment on Mars, and the first man on Mars is a great-great-great-grandfather who looks no older than 30.
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* JustFollowingOrders: The defense of the weapons officer, who fired a deathray at some poor guy's and his families shack and killed them. This defense was taken as it was in Nürnberg, it got him a slightly milder sentence. A [[BoomHeadshot headshot]] instead of being shot in the chest like Butcher Harris, his superior, who ordered the strike.
* LongevityTreatment: Rejuvenation treatments are one ofmany many examples of bio- and nanotechnology that are officially banned on Earth. Reggie King and Babbette the elder undergo the treatment on Mars, and the first man on Mars is a great-great-great-grandfather who looks no older than 30.
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* TakingYouWithMe: Reggie King wanted to surrender himself to Harris, but pocketed a industrial Pocket Nuke (they used it to crack asteroids, it's 0,1 kilotons strong, because it was not intended to be used as a weapon) to take him down with him.
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* TakingYouWithMe: Reggie King wanted to surrender himself to Harris, but pocketed a industrial Pocket Nuke (they used it to crack asteroids, it's 0,1 kilotons strong, because it was not intended to be used as a weapon) to take him down with him. He's discovered, though.
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* TakingYouWithMe: Reggie King wanted to surrender himself to Harris, but pocketed a industrial Pocket Nuke (they used it to crack asteroids, it's 0,1 kilotons strong, because it was not intended to be used as a weapon) to take him down with him.
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* VomitIndiscretionShot: "King" Reggie reaction to Butcher Harris' use of a death ray against a civilian target and his demand to surrender himself and his government, even when there's no government to begin with. One of the reasons he's so shocked is not only, that these poor people died, but they died because Butvcher Harris is going after them because of HIS ruse.
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* VomitIndiscretionShot: "King" Reggie reaction to Butcher Harris' use of a death ray against a civilian target and his demand to surrender himself and his government, even when there's no government to begin with. One of the reasons he's so shocked is not only, that these poor people died, but they died because Butvcher Butcher Harris is going after them because of HIS ruse.ruse of a monarchy.
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* VomitIndiscretionShot: "King" Reggie reaction to Butcher Harris' use of a death ray against a civilian target and his demand to surrender himself and his government, even when there's no government to begin with.
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* VomitIndiscretionShot: "King" Reggie reaction to Butcher Harris' use of a death ray against a civilian target and his demand to surrender himself and his government, even when there's no government to begin with.
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** The High Commissioner of the UW revenue service looks like a pirate-copy of LexLuthor. His secretary's name is Tessmucker, a play on the Teschmacher, Lex Luthor's accomplice in the movies.
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** The High Commissioner looks like a pirate-copy of LexLuthor.
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** One of the asteroids is called FlyingSpaghettiMonster.
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* VomitDiscretionShot: When the ship they've been traveling in has to adjust rotation, Guy's stomach doesn't take it very well.
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* ClipboardOfAuthority: How Robyn and Sajjan escape the moon penitentiary, currently the page image.
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* ClipboardOfAuthority: How Robyn and Sajjan escape the moon penitentiary, currently the page image.penitentiary.
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** Tobikuma Kobayashi's private asteroid is called ''TheLittlePrince''.
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** Tobikuma Kobayashi's private asteroid is called ''TheLittlePrince''.''Literature/TheLittlePrince''.
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* AutoDoc: One in every household on Mars and the Belt, illegal on Terra. Have been used to heal someone clinically dead more than once, one one case a shot through the heart.
* BrainComputerInterface: Occipital (bone at base of skull) "occ" computers, with optional Tanglenet transceiver.
* BrainComputerInterface: Occipital (bone at base of skull) "occ" computers, with optional Tanglenet transceiver.
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* AutoDoc: One in every household on Mars and the Belt, illegal on Terra. Have been used to heal someone clinically dead more than once, one [[http://www.bigheadpress.com/eft?page=693 in one case a after being shot through the heart.
heart]].
* BrainComputerInterface: Occipital (bone at the base of the skull) "occ" computers, with optional Tanglenet transceiver.
* BrainComputerInterface: Occipital (bone at the base of the skull) "occ" computers, with optional Tanglenet transceiver.
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* DuelToTheDeath: Legal on Ceres, Guy's cousin Pierre tries to start one after a "misunderstanding" at a gay bar, but backs off after Guy and his opponent's second add a couple of [[http://www.bigheadpress.com/eft?page=818 ridiculous conditions.]]
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* DuelToTheDeath: Legal on Ceres, Ceres; Guy's cousin Pierre tries to start one after a "misunderstanding" at a gay bar, but backs off after Guy and his opponent's second add a couple of [[http://www.bigheadpress.com/eft?page=818 ridiculous conditions.]]
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* GlobalCurrency: The UW uses "continentals" that are [[GlobalCurrencyException worthless in the belt,]] where they typically barter in grams of gold.
* HawaiianShirtedTourist: The UW's last ditch attempt to provoke an incident on Ceres involves a hapless soldier dressed as one.
* HawaiianShirtedTourist: The UW's last ditch attempt to provoke an incident on Ceres involves a hapless soldier dressed as one.
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* HawaiianShirtedTourist: The UW'slast ditch last-ditch attempt to provoke an incident on Ceres involves a hapless soldier dressed as one.
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* ThisIsNotMyLifeToTake: At Admiral Harris and the gunnery officer's trial for killing the Rose family Emily, the sole survivor of the massacre, shoots them herself.
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* ThisIsNotMyLifeToTake: At Admiral Harris and the gunnery officer's trial for killing the Rose family family, Emily, the sole survivor of the that massacre, shoots them herself.
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* ThrownOutTheAirlock: The girls toss Jamal out for tampering with Ernie's air, but pull him back in after he loses consciousness, [[http://www.bigheadpress.com/eft?page=773 and soils himself]].
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* AmicableExes: [[http://www.bigheadpress.com/eft?page=736 Ernie and Lili]]
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* SpaceAmish: Subverted, there is a Mennonite colony on the moon but they're one of those sects that don't shun technology.