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** Downplayed in the case of [[spoiler:Nessa freeing Mags' monster all those years ago. She did correctly deduce that it was a mistreated prisoner who would do better outside, but didn't know Mags controlled its urges and thus accidentally sicced it on a neighbor.]]
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** Downplayed in the case of [[spoiler:Nessa freeing Mags' monster all those years ago. She did correctly deduce that it was a mistreated prisoner who would do better outside, but didn't know Mags controlled its urges and thus accidentally sicced it on a neighbor.]]]]
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''Darkest Night'' is a webcomic by Creator/MollyOstertag, published on Substack. It can be read [[https://ostertag.substack.com/s/darkest-night here]].[[note]]Chapters 1-6 are free to read as completed chapters, with individual pages behind paywalls. Chapters 7 and 8 have all pages available for free individually and as a full chapter.[[/note]]
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''Darkest Night'' is a webcomic by Creator/MollyOstertag, published on Substack. It can be read [[https://ostertag.substack.com/s/darkest-night here]].[[note]]Chapters 1-6 are free to read as completed chapters, with individual pages behind paywalls. Chapters 7 and 8 have all pages available for free individually and as a full chapter.[[/note]]
[[/note]] It was later published as a graphic novel under the title ''The Deep Dark''.
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* TheReveal: One flashback leads to two reveals across the story. [[spoiler:Nessa admits that she was the one who let out Mags’ monster, which causes Mags to realize that, since the creature didn’t attack Nessa the moment it was free, it only attacks those she wants it to harm.]]
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* TheReveal: One flashback leads to two reveals across the story. [[spoiler:Nessa admits that she was the one who let out Mags’ monster, which causes Mags to realize that, since the creature didn’t attack Nessa the moment it was free, it only attacks those she wants it to harm.]]
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* AssholeVictim: In the first chapter, a young boy named Emil yells at young Mags and Nessa. [[spoiler:He turns out to have died in an attack by Mags’ monster. That said, both Mags and Nessa are horrified upon learning of his death, making this a DownplayedTrope.]]
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* AssholeVictim: In the first chapter, a young boy named Emil yells at young Mags and Nessa.Nessa, throwing a stone at the former. [[spoiler:He turns out to have died in an attack by Mags’ monster. That said, both Mags and Nessa are horrified upon learning of his death, making this a DownplayedTrope.]]
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* AssholeVictim: In the first chapter, a young boy named Emil yells at young Mags and Nessa. [[spoiler:He turns out to have died in an attack by Mags’ monster.]] That said, both Mags and Nessa are horrified upon learning of his death, making this a DownplayedTrope.
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* AssholeVictim: In the first chapter, a young boy named Emil yells at young Mags and Nessa. [[spoiler:He turns out to have died in an attack by Mags’ monster.]] That said, both Mags and Nessa are horrified upon learning of his death, making this a DownplayedTrope.]]
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* AssholeVictim: In the first chapter, a young boy named Emil yells at young Mags and Nessa. [[spoiler:He turns out to have died in an attack by Mags’ monster.]]]] That said, both Mags and Nessa are horrified upon learning of his death, making this a DownplayedTrope.
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** Early in the story Nessa mentions having broken up with her boyfriend Aaron. [[spoiler:He shows up in Chapter 7, attempting to get back together with Nessa.]]
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* SelfServingMemory: Aaron's conversation with Mags is juxtaposed with what he pictures and what she’s really saying, the line art overlayed over each other. He pictures a dialogue where she’s open to getting back together, while in reality she’s uneasy and uncomfortable around him.
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** The reveal that Nessa [[spoiler:freed Mags’ monster all those years ago can also be seen as this, in that she assumed incorrectly that it was a sad misunderstood prisoner when in actuality it was being kept locked up for everyone else’s safety.]]
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** The reveal that Nessa [[spoiler:freed Downplayed in the case of [[spoiler:Nessa freeing Mags’ monster all those years ago can also be seen as this, in that she assumed incorrectly ago. She did correctly deduce that it was a sad misunderstood mistreated prisoner when in actuality who would do better outside, but didn’t know Mags controlled its urges and thus accidental sicced it was being kept locked up for everyone else’s safety.on a neighbor.]]
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* ChekhovsGunman: Early in the story Nessa mentions having broken up with her boyfriend Aaron. [[spoiler:He shows up in Chapter 7, attempting to get back together with Nessa.]]
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** Early in the story Nessa mentions having broken up with her boyfriend Aaron. [[spoiler:He shows up in Chapter 7, attempting to get back together with Nessa.]]
** Mags's uncle is mentioned a couple of times as having his own creature. [[spoiler:He turns out to have been the fortune teller Mags and Nessa had met.]]
** Early in the story Nessa mentions having broken up with her boyfriend Aaron. [[spoiler:He shows up in Chapter 7, attempting to get back together with Nessa.]]
** Mags's uncle is mentioned a couple of times as having his own creature. [[spoiler:He turns out to have been the fortune teller Mags and Nessa had met.]]
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''Darkest Night'' is a webcomic by Creator/MollyOstertag, published on Substack. It can be read [[https://ostertag.substack.com/s/darkest-night here]].[[note]]Chapters 1-6 are free to read as completed chapters, with individual pages behind paywalls. Chapter Chapters 7 has and 8 have all pages available for free individually and as a full chapter.[[/note]]
