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* TheAtoner: By the end of the story both [[spoiler: Rikes and Solon]] become this. And it's heavily implied by the ending and the myth that [[spoiler: Aesop in Rikes body said in the beginning of the story]] that [[spoiler: Peisistratos ends up becoming this as well]].
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* AntiVillain: [[spoiler: Solon]] in part 3. Sure, he wants to bring democracy to Athens and free the slaves but you have to admit that [[spoiler: staging a coup where every Arcon is killed during a celebration is going too far]]. And ItGetsWorse when [[spoiler: the coup [[GoneHorriblyWrong goes horribly wrong]] and Yadmon co-opts it for his own purposes]]. His MyGodWhatIDone is completely justified.
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* ContrastingSequelAntagonist: [[spoiler: Solon]] in Part 3, where his actions sentence Aesop to [[spoiler: death]]. To be more specific, he is more of an {{Antihero}} than a villain, since he realises his mistake. Yadmon still serves the role of the BigBad, however.
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* ContrastingSequelAntagonist: [[spoiler: Solon]] in Part 3, where his actions sentence Aesop to [[spoiler: death]]. To be more specific, he is more of an {{Antihero}} than a villain, AntiVillain, since he eventually realises his mistake. Yadmon still serves the role of the BigBad, however.
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* DeliberateValuesDissonance: As important as the Greek civilisation was, the creators make an effort that times and values were really different back then.
** The webcomic shows that the wealth of ancient Greece was mostly built on the backs of hard-working slaves. There were slaves who rose up to become quite important and even managed to escape slavery, and/or were practically brothers to their masters (such as Archius), but for the most part the life of a slave was a hard and often very short one. And the most horrific thing is that '''both''' the masters and the slaves view this situation as ''perfectly normal''. You really couldn't imagine a society without slaves back then.
** The webcomic shows that the wealth of ancient Greece was mostly built on the backs of hard-working slaves. There were slaves who rose up to become quite important and even managed to escape slavery, and/or were practically brothers to their masters (such as Archius), but for the most part the life of a slave was a hard and often very short one. And the most horrific thing is that '''both''' the masters and the slaves view this situation as ''perfectly normal''. You really couldn't imagine a society without slaves back then.
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* DeliberateValuesDissonance: As important as the Greek civilisation was, the creators make an effort to show that times and values were really different ''really different'' back then.
** The webcomic shows that the wealth of ancient Greece was mostly built on the backs of hard-working slaves.There Sure, there were slaves who rose up to become quite important and even managed to escape slavery, and/or were practically brothers to their masters (such as Archius), but for the most part the life of a slave was a hard and often very short one. And the most horrific thing is that '''both''' the masters and the slaves view this situation as ''perfectly normal''. You really couldn't imagine a society without slaves back then.
** The webcomic shows that the wealth of ancient Greece was mostly built on the backs of hard-working slaves.
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* EvilerThanThou: Drakon uses Yadmon to his advantage but when he goes back on his promise to promote him as an Arcon, and pretty much tells him [[TriggerPhrase he is going to be his puppet from now on]], in return for [[BlackmailIsSuchAnUglyWord not telling anyone his father attacked Athens]], be ends up [[BlackmailBackfire mysteriously suffocating]] during the victory celebration in Aigina. Yadmon becomes an Arcon short-after.
* EvilMentor: Drakon is this to Yadmon. Not only does he initiate him in the "dog eat dog" world of Athenian politics, he tells him his ideas of taking over power, and shows him how to be a more effective ManipulativeBastard to get ahead. Unfortunately for everyone Yadmon takes those lessons to heart.
* EvilMentor: Drakon is this to Yadmon. Not only does he initiate him in the "dog eat dog" world of Athenian politics, he tells him his ideas of taking over power, and shows him how to be a more effective ManipulativeBastard to get ahead. Unfortunately for everyone Yadmon takes those lessons to heart.
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* EvilerThanThou: Drakon uses Yadmon to his advantage but when he goes back on his promise to promote him as an Arcon, and pretty much tells him [[TriggerPhrase he is going to be his puppet from now on]], in return for [[BlackmailIsSuchAnUglyWord not telling anyone his father attacked Athens]], be Athens]]. He ends up [[BlackmailBackfire mysteriously suffocating]] during the victory celebration in Aigina. Yadmon becomes an Arcon short-after.
* EvilMentor: Drakon is this to Yadmon. Not only does he initiate him in the "dog eat dog" world of Athenian politics, he tells him his ideas of taking over power, and shows him how to be a more effective ManipulativeBastard to get ahead. Unfortunately for everyone in the webcomic Yadmon takes those lessons to heart.
* EvilMentor: Drakon is this to Yadmon. Not only does he initiate him in the "dog eat dog" world of Athenian politics, he tells him his ideas of taking over power, and shows him how to be a more effective ManipulativeBastard to get ahead. Unfortunately for everyone in the webcomic Yadmon takes those lessons to heart.
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** Subverted with Drakon. History states that he suffocated after being covered by numerous pieces of cloth in Aigina. In the webcomic, that's how ''history'' records his death. In reality he was suffocated by Yadmon.
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** Subverted with Drakon. History states that he suffocated after being covered by numerous pieces of cloth in Aigina. In the webcomic, that's how ''history'' records his death. In reality he was suffocated poisoned by Yadmon.
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* ManipulativeBastard: Drakon is this initially, manipulating Yadmon into turning on his father and then using that fact to blackmail him. [[EvilerThanThou Yadmon soon surpasses him however and become more ruthless and manipulative than Drakon ever was]].
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* ManipulativeBastard: Drakon is this initially, manipulating Yadmon into turning on his father and then using that fact to blackmail him. [[EvilerThanThou Yadmon soon surpasses him however and become ends up becoming more ruthless and manipulative than Drakon ever was]].
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* ChekhovsGunman: Plenty people that Aesops meets during his life, turns out to have a biggest role later in the series.
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* ChekhovsGunman: Plenty people that Aesops meets during his life, turns turn out to have a biggest role later in the series.
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* ArtisticLicenseHistory: Unsurprising, since this is a historical fiction webcomic. It should be noted that for the most part the webcomic's creators have ShownTheirWork.
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* ArtisticLicenseHistory: Unsurprising, since this is a historical fiction webcomic. It should be noted however that for the most part the webcomic's creators have ShownTheirWork.
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* ClarkesThirdLaw: PlayedForLaughs. When the Barbarian encounters [[DeusExMachina the mechanical "God" created by Thales]], he thinks it's an actual ''God'' with real powers. Thales explaining to him that it's all based on machinery doesn't change his opinion.
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* ClarkesThirdLaw: PlayedForLaughs. When the Barbarian encounters [[DeusExMachina the mechanical "God" DeusExMachina created by Thales]], Thales, he thinks it's an actual ''God'' with real powers. Thales explaining to him that it's all based on machinery doesn't change his opinion.
* EvilMentor: Drakon is this to Yadmon. Not only does he initiate him in the "dog eat dog" world of Athenian politics, he tells him his ideas of taking over power, and shows him how to be a more effective ManipulativeBastard to get ahead. Unfortunately for everyone Yadmon takes those lessons to heart.
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* FamilyValuesVillain: Yadmon's only redeeming quality is that he deeply loved both his mother and his son. He show concern when Rikes got poisoned.
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* FamilyValuesVillain: Yadmon's only redeeming quality is that he deeply loved both his mother and his son. He show shows concern when Rikes got poisoned.
* GuileHero: As a complete aversion to the IdiotHero trope, Aesop is not dumb at all! In fact, he is very cunning (in a good way), knows how to deal with every situation and uses his rhetoric skills effectively.
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* IdiotHero: Completely averted. Aesop is no dumb at all! In fact, he is very cunning (in a good way), knows how to deal with every situation and uses his rhetoric skills effectively.
* ManipulativeBastard: Drakon is this initially, manipulating Yadmon into turning on his father and then using that fact to blackmail him. [[EvilerThanThou Yadmon soon surpasses him however and become more ruthless and manipulative than Drakon ever was]].
* MisplacedRetribution: Yadmon failed to get back Elli and inadvertedly caused her death, so he takes it out on poor Aesop by going out of his way to make the poor kid's life as miserable as possible.
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* TheLostLenore: Heavily deconstructed with Yadmon's obsession with Elli. Losing her causes him to become a tyrant, and abuse Aesop for the remainder of his life. In the end, Yadmon is reduced to buying blonde women and naming them Elli as a [[ReplacementGoldfish replacement of sorts]], much to Aesop's chagrin.
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* TheLostLenore: Heavily deconstructed with Yadmon's obsession with Elli. Losing her causes him to become a tyrant, and and [[MisplacedRetribution abuse Aesop for the remainder of his life.life]]. In the end, Yadmon is reduced to buying blonde women and naming them Elli as a [[ReplacementGoldfish replacement of sorts]], much to Aesop's chagrin.
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** Master Yadmon was deeply in love with Ellis and hunted her down for TEN years after she and Frontis run away. He found her in Athens, where one of his guard accidentally killed her.
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* SleazyPolitician: Drakon. He is a sexist, greedy, ambitious "Arcon" (ie high ruler of the city) who looks down on his fellow Athenians and deliberately made his laws ''bloody strict'' because he detests them. He detests the oligarchy of Athens and is only a part of it because [[{{Hypocrite}} he admits it's the best place for him ''for now'']]. He then goads Yadmon into turning on his own father by promising him a position as an Arcon, and then goes back on his promise on the basis that "it's not appropriate to promote a man who killed his own father". [[RightForTheWrongReasons He is right not to trust him]] but still...
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* SleazyPolitician: Drakon. He is a sexist, greedy, ambitious "Arcon" (ie high ruler of the city) who looks down on his fellow Athenians and deliberately made his laws ''bloody strict'' because he detests them. He detests the oligarchy of Athens and is only a part of it because [[{{Hypocrite}} he admits it's the best place for him ''for now'']]. He then goads Yadmon into turning on his own father by promising him a position as an Arcon, and then goes back on his promise on the basis that "it's not appropriate to promote a man who killed his own father". [[RightForTheWrongReasons He is right And then he attempts to blackmail Yadmon into becoming [[TriggerPhrase his puppet]] in return for not revealing to trust him]] but still...anyone that his father attacked Athens. [[BlackmailBackfire It doesn't end very well for him...]]
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* StrongFamilyResemblance: Aesop looks almost like his father.
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* StrongFamilyResemblance: Strong Family Resemblance: Aesop looks almost like his father.father, [[AdaptationalAttractiveness minus being a hunchback]]. Which makes Yadmon [[MisaimedRetribution take his anger and bitterness out on him even more]].
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* UnnecessaryRoughness: Master Yadmon shouldn't be that harsh on Aesop. He is just a kid!
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* UnnecessaryRoughness: Unnecessary Roughness: Master Yadmon shouldn't be that harsh on Aesop. He is just a kid!kid! Then again there's MisplacedRetribution at play so...
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** In RealLife Solon was a benevolent law-maker who reformed the Draconian Laws into a system that was much more humane and fair than before. He went into a self-imposed exile because he thought his laws were as fair as they could be and he didn't want to be forced to change them. In the webcomic he is an AntiVillain who [[spoiler: organizes a coup that [[GoneHorriblyWrong goes horribly wrong]] in order to get rid of Athens' corruption and emancipate the slaves]]. He ends up [[spoiler: [[UnwittingPawn unwittinlgy helping Yadmon gain ultimate political power]] and causes Aesop's death]]. He is [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone understandably horrified]] and goes into self-imposed exile because of that instead.
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** In RealLife Solon was a benevolent law-maker who reformed the Draconian Drakonian Laws into a system that was much more humane and fair than before. He went into a self-imposed exile because he thought his laws were as fair as they could be and he didn't want to be forced to change them. In the webcomic he is an AntiVillain who [[spoiler: organizes a coup that [[GoneHorriblyWrong goes horribly wrong]] in order to get rid of Athens' corruption and emancipate the slaves]]. He ends up [[spoiler: [[UnwittingPawn unwittinlgy helping Yadmon gain ultimate political power]] and causes Aesop's death]]. He is [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone understandably horrified]] and goes into self-imposed exile because of that instead.
* BlackmailBackfire: Drakon refuses to promote Yadmon as an Arcon and tells him [[TriggerPhrase he is going to be his puppet]], in return for not revealing that it was Yadmon's father who attacked Athens. The next day he ends up mysteriously "suffocating" during the victory celebrations in Aigina.
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** Subverted with Drakon. History states that he suffocated after being covered by numerous pieces of cloth in Aigina. In reality, the webcomic, that's how ''history'' records his death. In reality he was poisoned suffocated by Yadmon.
* EvilerThanThou: Drakon uses Yadmon to his advantage but when he goes back on his promise to promote him as an Arcon, and pretty much tells him [[TriggerPhrase he is going to be his puppet from now on]], in return for [[BlackmailIsSuchAnUglyWord not telling anyone his father attacked Athens]], be ends up [[BlackmailBackfire mysteriously suffocating]] during the victory celebration in Aigina. Yadmon becomes an Arcon short-after.
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** Drakon, who was a SleazyPolitician and a huge [[HeManWomanHater misogynist]] ends up [[spoiler: dying from suffocation, after the crowd threw clothes upon him]].
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** Drakon, who was a SleazyPolitician and a huge [[HeManWomanHater misogynist]] ends up [[spoiler: "mysteriously" dying from suffocation, after the crowd threw clothes upon him]].him]]. In reality [[spoiler: he was [[EvilerThanThou poisoned by Yadmon]] after he had tried to [[BlackmailBackfire blackmail him]] into [[TriggerPhrase becoming his puppet]]]].
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* DeliberateValuesDissonance: As important as the Greek civilisation was, the creators make an effort that times and values were really different back then.
** The webcomic shows that the wealth of ancient Greece was mostly built on the backs of hard-working slaves. There were slaves who rose up to become quite important and even managed to escape slavery, and/or were practically brothers to their masters (such as Archius), but for the most part the life of a slave was a hard and often very short one. And the most horrific thing is that '''both''' the masters and the slaves view this situation as ''perfectly normal''. You really couldn't imagine a society without slaves back then.
** Same goes to the teacher in Agoge about the way he treats his students, especially Lenius and Daross. He instantly beat Lenius the moment he saw him, just because he was late, told him to cut one of Aesop's limbs and threatened Daross that he would harm his brother if he didn't bring him Aesop. We might consider this sort of behaviour brutal and dehumanizing but this was really how tough and unforgiving the Spartan Agoge was.
** The webcomic shows that the wealth of ancient Greece was mostly built on the backs of hard-working slaves. There were slaves who rose up to become quite important and even managed to escape slavery, and/or were practically brothers to their masters (such as Archius), but for the most part the life of a slave was a hard and often very short one. And the most horrific thing is that '''both''' the masters and the slaves view this situation as ''perfectly normal''. You really couldn't imagine a society without slaves back then.
** Same goes to the teacher in Agoge about the way he treats his students, especially Lenius and Daross. He instantly beat Lenius the moment he saw him, just because he was late, told him to cut one of Aesop's limbs and threatened Daross that he would harm his brother if he didn't bring him Aesop. We might consider this sort of behaviour brutal and dehumanizing but this was really how tough and unforgiving the Spartan Agoge was.
** Yadmon gets it as well in part 3, as he sinks lower than he ever has before.
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** Thales really did use his calculations [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Battle_of_the_Eclipse to an eclipse and end a war]].
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** Thales really did use his calculations [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Battle_of_the_Eclipse to predict an eclipse and end a war]].
* SourGrapesTropes: The myth that the tropes reference is mentioned verbatim, and a lot of them show up here too.
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** Master Yadmon shouldn't be that harsh on Aesop. He is just a kid!
** Same goes to the teacher in Agoge about the way he treats his students, especially Lenius and Daross. He instantly beat Lenius the moment he saw him, just because he was late, told him to cut one of Aesop's limbs and threatened Daross that he would harm his brother if he didn't bring him Aesop.
** Master Yadmon shouldn't be that harsh on Aesop. He is just a kid!
** Same goes to the teacher in Agoge about the way he treats his students, especially Lenius and Daross. He instantly beat Lenius the moment he saw him, just because he was late, told him to cut one of Aesop's limbs and threatened Daross that he would harm his brother if he didn't bring him Aesop.
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**UnnecessaryRoughness: Master Yadmon shouldn't be that harsh on Aesop. He is just a kid!
** Same goes to the teacher in Agoge about the way he treats his students, especially Lenius and Daross. He instantly beat Lenius the moment he saw him, just because he was late, told him to cut one of Aesop's limbs and threatened Daross that he would harm his brother if he didn't bring him Aesop.kid!
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** Same goes to the teacher in Agoge about the way he treats his students, especially Lenius and Daross. He instantly beat Lenius the moment he saw him, just because he was late, told him to cut one of Aesop's limbs and threatened Daross that he would harm his brother if he didn't bring him Aesop.
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*** One: don't be fooled by people who pretend to be in need, since they might want to take advantage of you or harm you.
*** Two: be careful when you visit a place you know it's dangerous! Chances are you never come back!
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*** From the same chapter, we have this line:
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*** Chapter 65: Someone owes you for the shadow? They need to pay with the shadow. Aesop solved with this way an argument between a courtesan and a peasant, when a latter bragged to everyone about a night he spent with the former. In his dreams!
*** Chapter 66: You found yourself in a narrow situation against someone? Don't provoke them! A long time ago, two goats run into each other in the middle of the bridge and ended up in the water after they fought.
*** Once you meet someone, you never fully forget them, even if they have passed 10 years since you last saw them.
*** Being only one-armed doesn't stop you from being [[HandicappedBadass utterly awesome]]!
*** Chapter 66: You found yourself in a narrow situation against someone? Don't provoke them! A long time ago, two goats run into each other in the middle of the bridge and ended up in the water after they fought.
*** Once you meet someone, you never fully forget them, even if they have passed 10 years since you last saw them.
*** Being only one-armed doesn't stop you from being [[HandicappedBadass utterly awesome]]!
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--> '''Theo''': Remember, Aesop, you only need one thing to cheat someone. It's the greed inside of that person.
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--> '''Spartan King''': Sometimes, peace is crueler than war.
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*** Chapter 38:
--> '''Aesop''': You can't be sure that your load that departs today [[MakesSenseInContext isn't cotton that gets heavier when it gets wet]].
--> '''Aesop''': You can't be sure that your load that departs today [[MakesSenseInContext isn't cotton that gets heavier when it gets wet]].
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*** Chapter 38:
-->38: A donkey was carrying a heavy sack full of salt and it fell into the stream by accident. The water melted the salt and the sack became lighter. A fortnight later, it was carrying a sack full of cotton. It fell into the stream on purpose, thinking that the water would make the load lighter, just like the previous time. The cotton, however, sucked the water and the donkey could not get out of the stream.
---> '''Aesop''': You can't be sure that your load that departs today [[MakesSenseInContext isn't cotton that gets heavier when it gets wet]].
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---> '''Aesop''': You can't be sure that your load that departs today [[MakesSenseInContext isn't cotton that gets heavier when it gets wet]].
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** Chapter 7: Mrs. Crysan gives to Aesop a good advice on how to deal with enemies: [[EyeForAnEye make them feel the same way they made you feel]].
*** One, however, would consider it a BrokenAesop and argue that this causes more problems.
** Chapter 13: The story with the man and the goose that laid golden eggs tells that you should be satisfied with what you've got and not to "kill" your precious resources.
** Chapter 16: A not-so-friendly one, but one way to control and capture humans is by offering them something they desire, via the myth with the monkey and the peanuts.
*** One, however, would consider it a BrokenAesop and argue that this causes more problems.
** Chapter 13: The story with the man and the goose that laid golden eggs tells that you should be satisfied with what you've got and not to "kill" your precious resources.
** Chapter 16: A not-so-friendly one, but one way to control and capture humans is by offering them something they desire, via the myth with the monkey and the peanuts.
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** '''Part 1''':
*** Chapter 7: Mrs. Crysan gives to Aesop a good advice on how to deal with enemies: [[EyeForAnEye make them feel the same way they made you feel]].
*** **** One, however, would consider it a BrokenAesop and argue that this causes more problems.
** *** Chapter 13: The story with the man and the goose that laid golden eggs tells that you should be satisfied with what you've got and not to "kill" your precious resources.
** *** Chapter 16: A not-so-friendly one, but one way to control and capture humans is by offering them something they desire, via the myth with the monkey and the peanuts.
*** Chapter 7: Mrs. Crysan gives to Aesop a good advice on how to deal with enemies: [[EyeForAnEye make them feel the same way they made you feel]].
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** The "Lion's Den" offers two:
*** One: don't be fooled by people who pretend to be in need, since they might want to take advantage of you or harm you.
*** Two: be careful when you visit a place you know it's dangerous! Chances are you never come back!
** Chapter 25:
*** It's important to make the difference between enemies and allies! What's weird is that this particular [[AnAesop aesop]] is coming from the [[EvilTeacher teacher in the agoge]].
*** From the same chapter, we have this line:
*** One: don't be fooled by people who pretend to be in need, since they might want to take advantage of you or harm you.
*** Two: be careful when you visit a place you know it's dangerous! Chances are you never come back!
** Chapter 25:
*** It's important to make the difference between enemies and allies! What's weird is that this particular [[AnAesop aesop]] is coming from the [[EvilTeacher teacher in the agoge]].
*** From the same chapter, we have this line:
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** Frontis has also adviced his son and has provided him with a {{Deconstruction}} of the [[{{Determinator}} Never Give Up]] trope: it's alright to quit, but only after you have tried hard and know that there's no way for you to succeed, or else, your efforts will prove to be meaningless.
** Chapter 31: A greedy person will not only harm themselves, but the people around them. The dog from Yadmon's story ends up starving not only itself to death, but the horses as well, for not wanting to abandon a beautiful manger full of barley.
** From Chapter 32, we have this line by Sir Alkanos:
** Chapter 31: A greedy person will not only harm themselves, but the people around them. The dog from Yadmon's story ends up starving not only itself to death, but the horses as well, for not wanting to abandon a beautiful manger full of barley.
** From Chapter 32, we have this line by Sir Alkanos:
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** Chapter 34: The world itself is a "wolf". And the "sheep" feel security when the "wolf" eats others and not them, for it's because of these coward "sheep" that the world is monstrous.
*** Speaking of which, to solve this, the "sheep" must beat the fear against their "wolves".
** Chapter 38:
*** Speaking of which, to solve this, the "sheep" must beat the fear against their "wolves".
** Chapter 38:
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** ''"My conceit and delusion drew ruin upon myself".''
** Chapter 45: If you try to get rid of your problems, new ones will come and trouble you. Sir Alkanos told the story of a fox which fell down in the river and had ticks drink her blood to show that a free-man's life is not better than a slave's. A free-man has to pay taxes, while if a slave becomes free, they will suffer from poverty.
** Chapter 56: No matter how fast a rabbit is, it always loses to a slow but untiring turtle that heads towards the finishing line.
** Chapter 45: If you try to get rid of your problems, new ones will come and trouble you. Sir Alkanos told the story of a fox which fell down in the river and had ticks drink her blood to show that a free-man's life is not better than a slave's. A free-man has to pay taxes, while if a slave becomes free, they will suffer from poverty.
** Chapter 56: No matter how fast a rabbit is, it always loses to a slow but untiring turtle that heads towards the finishing line.
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*** Chapter 45: If you try to get rid of your problems, new ones will come and trouble you. Sir Alkanos told the story of a fox which fell down in the river and had ticks drink her blood to show that a free-man's life is not better than a slave's. A free-man has to pay taxes, while if a slave becomes free, they will suffer from poverty.
** '''Part 2''':
*** Chapter 57: Your desire at the moment will bring ruin upon yourself. The thirsty pigeon assumed that the painting on the wall was a puddle of water. It crashed into the wall and died.
*** Chapter 61: Don't avoid your superior's wrath if it means saving your kind. Once, a tamed pigeon was caught by a hunter. A few hours later, a wild pigeon came to help the tamed one. The moment it landed, the hunter caught the wild one. The wild one asked the tamed one why didn't it help it, since they are both pigeons, to which the tamed one said that it's better for it to avoid its master's wrath than its kind's blaming.
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** The chase scene from Chapter 57 to Chapter 58. Doesn't it scream WesternAnimation/{{Aladdin}}?!
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** The chase scene from Chapter 57 to Chapter 58. Doesn't it scream WesternAnimation/{{Aladdin}}?!
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** Frontis has also adviced his son and has provided him with a {{Deconstruction}} of the [[{{Determinator}} Never Give Up]] trope: it's alright to quit, but only after you have tried hard and know that there's no way for you to succeed, or else, your efforts will prove to be meaningless.
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** It's important to make the difference between enemies and allies!
** A greedy person will not only harm themselves, but the people around them.
** ''"I have been telling you. The biggest asset is not money, but people".''
** The world itself is a "wolf". And the "sheep" feel security when the "wolf" eats others and not them, for it's because of these coward "sheep" that the world is monstrous.
** A greedy person will not only harm themselves, but the people around them.
** ''"I have been telling you. The biggest asset is not money, but people".''
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** Chapter 25:
*** It's important to make the difference between enemies andallies!
allies! What's weird is that this particular [[AnAesop aesop]] is coming from the [[EvilTeacher teacher in the agoge]].
*** From the same chapter, we have this line:
--> '''Spartan King''': Sometimes, peace is crueler than war.
** Frontis has also adviced his son and has provided him with a {{Deconstruction}} of the [[{{Determinator}} Never Give Up]] trope: it's alright to quit, but only after you have tried hard and know that there's no way for you to succeed, or else, your efforts will prove to be meaningless.
** Chapter 31: A greedy person will not only harm themselves, but the people aroundthem.
them. The dog from Yadmon's story ends up starving not only itself to death, but the horses as well, for not wanting to abandon a beautiful manger full of barley.
**''"I From Chapter 32, we have this line by Sir Alkanos:
--> '''Sir Alkanos''': I have been telling you. The biggest asset is not money, butpeople".''
people.
** Chapter 34: The world itself is a "wolf". And the "sheep" feel security when the "wolf" eats others and not them, for it's because of these coward "sheep" that the world is monstrous.
*** It's important to make the difference between enemies and
*** From the same chapter, we have this line:
--> '''Spartan King''': Sometimes, peace is crueler than war.
** Frontis has also adviced his son and has provided him with a {{Deconstruction}} of the [[{{Determinator}} Never Give Up]] trope: it's alright to quit, but only after you have tried hard and know that there's no way for you to succeed, or else, your efforts will prove to be meaningless.
** Chapter 31: A greedy person will not only harm themselves, but the people around
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--> '''Sir Alkanos''': I have been telling you. The biggest asset is not money, but
** Chapter 34: The world itself is a "wolf". And the "sheep" feel security when the "wolf" eats others and not them, for it's because of these coward "sheep" that the world is monstrous.
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** Chapter 38: you can't be sure that your load that departs today [[MakesSenseInContext isn't cotton that gets heavier when it gets wet]].
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--> '''Aesop''': You can't be sure that your load that departs today [[MakesSenseInContext isn't cotton that gets heavier when it gets wet]].
--> '''Aesop''': You can't be sure that your load that departs today [[MakesSenseInContext isn't cotton that gets heavier when it gets wet]].
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** Chapter 56: No matter how fast a rabbit is, it always loses to a slow but untiring turtle that heads towards the finishing line.
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** Chapter 7, Mrs. Crysan gives to Aesop a good advice on how to deal with enemies: [[EyeForAnEye make them feel the same way they made you feel]].
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** The story with the man and the goose that laid golden eggs tells that you should be satisfied with what you've got and not to "kill" your precious resources.
** A not-so-friendly one, but one way to control and capture humans is by offering them something they desire, via the myth with the monkey.
** A not-so-friendly one, but one way to control and capture humans is by offering them something they desire, via the myth with the monkey.
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** Chapter 13: The story with the man and the goose that laid golden eggs tells that you should be satisfied with what you've got and not to "kill" your precious resources.
** Chapter 16: A not-so-friendly one, but one way to control and capture humans is by offering them something they desire, via the myth with themonkey.monkey and the peanuts.
** Chapter 16: A not-so-friendly one, but one way to control and capture humans is by offering them something they desire, via the myth with the
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* VillainWithGoodPublicity: Master Yadmon. After he gave Athens a whole fleet, he started to be quite respected by the citizens. This doesn't exclude the rest of Greece.
* WhamEpisode: Chapter 128, where [[spoiler: the protagonist, the antagonist, the antagonist's son and love interest all die]]. And then comes Chapter 129…
* WhenItAllBegan: Elli and Frontis' love.
* WhamEpisode: Chapter 128, where [[spoiler: the protagonist, the antagonist, the antagonist's son and love interest all die]]. And then comes Chapter 129…
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* WizardsLiveLonger. Averted. [[spoiler: Bri]] may became a [[spoiler: Pythia]], but she died at the age of 40.
* WordsDoNotMakeTheMagic: Pythias' mystic dance.
* WordsDoNotMakeTheMagic: Pythias' mystic dance.
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* TheXOfY: Some arc titles.
** The Delusion of A Wolf".
** "A Village of Burning Dresses".
** "The Shadow of Reality".
** "Flame of Hope".
** The Delusion of A Wolf".
** "A Village of Burning Dresses".
** "The Shadow of Reality".
** "Flame of Hope".
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** Chapter 45: If you try to get rid of your problems, new ones will come and trouble you. Sir Alkanos told the story of a fox which fell down in the river and had ticks drink her blood to show that a free-man's life is not better than a slave's. A free-man has to pay taxes, while if a slave becomes free, they will suffer from poverty.
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* UnusualPetsForUnusualPeople: Paian, a woman who lives in the wild, has a whole army of forest animals.
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* VillainousLegacy: If you thought that Master Yadmon was the only villain in the story, you haven't met his father! Not only was an awful husband, but a horrible father as well, who controlled Yadmon all his life and never showed him any sign of love. When Yadmon meets him in a battle, where he leads the enemy, he doesn't hesitate and [[spoiler: kills him]].
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** Same goes to the teacher in Agoge about the way he treats his students, especially Lenius and Daross. He instantly beat Lenius the moment he saw him, just because he was late, told him to cut one of Aesop's limbs
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** Same goes to the teacher in Agoge about the way he treats his students, especially Lenius and Daross. He instantly beat Lenius the moment he saw him, just because he was late, told him to cut one of Aesop's limbslimbs and threatened Daross that he would harm his brother if he didn't bring him Aesop.
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** Same goes to the teacher in Agoge about the way he treats his students, especially Lenius and Daross.
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** Same goes to the teacher in Agoge about the way he treats his students, especially Lenius and Daross. He instantly beat Lenius the moment he saw him, just because he was late, told him to cut one of Aesop's limbs
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** Chapter 38: you can't be sure that your load that departs today [[MakesSenseInContext isn't cotton that gets heavier when it gets wet]].
** ''"My conceit and delusion drew ruin upon myself".''
** ''"My conceit and delusion drew ruin upon myself".''
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* UltimateJobSecurity: Yadmon's guardians had only one job: to capture Elli and kill the father and kid. They end up killing both of the parents. Seriously, these guys need to enroll in aiming lessons! The only guardian who does his job correctly and deeply respects his master is Archius.
* UnderestimatingBadassery: Kollos'two minions were pretty sure they would beat up Daross, for he was just a child. But little did they know that Daross was a Spartan and was taught how to be a warrior…
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* UnnecessaryRoughness:
** Master Yadmon shouldn't be that harsh on Aesop. He is just a kid!
** Same goes to the teacher in Agoge about the way he treats his students, especially Lenius and Daross.
** Master Yadmon shouldn't be that harsh on Aesop. He is just a kid!
** Same goes to the teacher in Agoge about the way he treats his students, especially Lenius and Daross.
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* TakeThat: The "Lion's Den" story arc is essentially a big one for the film Film/ThreeHundred by showing some of the nastier aspects of the Spartan way of life, such as the ''Krypteia'' (where Helots where routinely murdered for training), and by driving the point home that Spartan Society is absolutely '''not''' one that should be romanticized and idolized. The "Zeus Stinger" arc contains another big one by showing the LogicalWeakness of the Spartan way of fighting, namely its inflexibility and strict adherence to protocol which can be lethal if they are fighting someone who is a good strategist.
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* TakeThat: The "Lion's Den" story arc is essentially a big ''huge'' one for the film Film/ThreeHundred by showing some of the nastier aspects of the Spartan way of life, such as the ''Krypteia'' (where Helots where routinely murdered for training), and by driving the point home that the Spartan Society is absolutely '''not''' one that should be romanticized and idolized. The "Zeus Stinger" arc contains another big one by showing the LogicalWeakness of the Spartan way of fighting, namely its inflexibility and strict adherence to phalanx protocol which can be lethal if they are fighting someone who is a good strategist.strategist and can come up with a good way to break them up.
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* LaserGuidedKarma: Yadmon manages to get Aesop falsily accused and summarily sentenced to a painful death by stoning on the cross. Too bad for him that [[spoiler: his mind is transferred into Aesop's body right before the execution reaches its climax]].
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* LaserGuidedKarma: Yadmon manages to get Aesop falsily accused LaserGuidedKarma:
** Drakon, who was a SleazyPolitician andsummarily sentenced to a painful death by stoning on the cross. Too bad for him that huge [[HeManWomanHater misogynist]] ends up [[spoiler: dying from suffocation, after the crowd threw clothes upon him]].
** [[TheBully Kollos]] and hismind is transferred into two minions, three of the most massive [[{{Jerkass}} jerkasses]] in the webtoon, [[spoiler: are abandoned close to the coasts of Miletus]].
** Master Yadmon killed both of Aesop's parents and made the rest of his life miserable. After [[spoiler: Bri transfers his soul to Aesop's bodyright before the execution reaches its climax]].(and Aesop's soul to Rikes' body, and Rikes' soul to his father's body), he finally dies and Aesop is free at last]].
** Drakon, who was a SleazyPolitician and
** [[TheBully Kollos]] and his
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** Drakon, who was a SleazyPolitician and a huge [[HeManWomanHater misogynist]] ends up [[spoiler: dying from suffocation, after the crowd threw clothes upon him]].
** [[TheBully Kollos]] and his two minions, three of the most massive [[{{Jerkass}} jerkasses]] in the webtoon, [[spoiler: are abandoned close to the coasts of Miletus]].
** Master Yadmon killed both of Aesop's parents and made the rest of his life miserable. After [[spoiler: Bri transfers his soul to Aesop's body (and Aesop's soul to Rikes' body, and Rikes' soul to his father's body), he finally dies and Aesop is free at last]].
** Drakon, who was a SleazyPolitician and a huge [[HeManWomanHater misogynist]] ends up [[spoiler: dying from suffocation, after the crowd threw clothes upon him]].
** [[TheBully Kollos]] and his two minions, three of the most massive [[{{Jerkass}} jerkasses]] in the webtoon, [[spoiler: are abandoned close to the coasts of Miletus]].
** Master Yadmon killed both of Aesop's parents and made the rest of his life miserable. After [[spoiler: Bri transfers his soul to Aesop's body (and Aesop's soul to Rikes' body, and Rikes' soul to his father's body), he finally dies and Aesop is free at last]].
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* TakeThat:
** Drakon, who wasTakeThat: The "Lion's Den" story arc is essentially a SleazyPolitician and a huge [[HeManWomanHater misogynist]] ends up [[spoiler: dying from suffocation, after big one for the crowd threw clothes upon him]].
** [[TheBully Kollos]] and his two minions, threefilm Film/ThreeHundred by showing some of the most massive [[{{Jerkass}} jerkasses]] in nastier aspects of the webtoon, [[spoiler: Spartan way of life, such as the ''Krypteia'' (where Helots where routinely murdered for training), and by driving the point home that Spartan Society is absolutely '''not''' one that should be romanticized and idolized. The "Zeus Stinger" arc contains another big one by showing the LogicalWeakness of the Spartan way of fighting, namely its inflexibility and strict adherence to protocol which can be lethal if they are abandoned close to the coasts of Miletus]].
** Master Yadmon killed both of Aesop's parents and made the rest of his life miserable. After [[spoiler: Bri transfers his soul to Aesop's body (and Aesop's soul to Rikes' body, and Rikes' soul to his father's body), he finally dies and Aesopfighting someone who is free at last]].a good strategist.
** Drakon, who was
** [[TheBully Kollos]] and his two minions, three
** Master Yadmon killed both of Aesop's parents and made the rest of his life miserable. After [[spoiler: Bri transfers his soul to Aesop's body (and Aesop's soul to Rikes' body, and Rikes' soul to his father's body), he finally dies and Aesop
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*** Speaking of which, to solve this, the "sheep" must beat the fear against their "wolves".
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** A greedy person will not only ruing harm themselves, but the people around them.them.
** ''"I have been telling you. The biggest asset is not money, but people".''
** The world itself is a "wolf". And the "sheep" feel security when the "wolf" eats others and not them, for it's because of these coward "sheep" that the world is monstrous.
** ''"I have been telling you. The biggest asset is not money, but people".''
** The world itself is a "wolf". And the "sheep" feel security when the "wolf" eats others and not them, for it's because of these coward "sheep" that the world is monstrous.
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* TragicVillain:
** Periander, who, after he killed his wife, ordered Corinth to burn all of the women's dresses. He still grieves about her to this day.
** Solon, who just wanted his city-state and the slaves to be free, but ended up [[spoiler: killing Aesop in the process]].
** Periander, who, after he killed his wife, ordered Corinth to burn all of the women's dresses. He still grieves about her to this day.
** Solon, who just wanted his city-state and the slaves to be free, but ended up [[spoiler: killing Aesop in the process]].
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** A greedy person will not only ruing themselves, but the people around them.
* LikeFatherLikeSon:
** Just like his father, Rikes also fell in love with a beautiful woman from Samos, who was, however, engaged.
** Aesop shares a StrongFamilyResemblance with his father and they are both [[NiceGuy nice guys]].
* LikeFatherUnlikeSon: As stated above, Rikes also fell in love with a beautiful woman from Samos, who was engaged to someone else. However, unlike his father, he realised his mistakes and spent the rest of his life fixing them.
** Just like his father, Rikes also fell in love with a beautiful woman from Samos, who was, however, engaged.
** Aesop shares a StrongFamilyResemblance with his father and they are both [[NiceGuy nice guys]].
* LikeFatherUnlikeSon: As stated above, Rikes also fell in love with a beautiful woman from Samos, who was engaged to someone else. However, unlike his father, he realised his mistakes and spent the rest of his life fixing them.
* SpannerInTheWorks: Aesop's plan in Part 2 is to get enough money to buy his freedom and live a happy life with Bri. None of these happens as Bri [[spoiler: suddenly gets sick and the only way to save her is to accept her fate and become a Pythia, losing every bit of memory from her previous life]] and he's captured by Master Yadmon after a ten-year chase.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: RealLife Aesop died by crossing. There, [[spoiler: his soul is transferred to Rike's body before he died]].
* TheSpartanWay: One of the city-states' culture that the webcomic covered was about Ancient Sparta, mentioning the ''Krypteia'', a ritual where Spartan youths were sent to hunt down and kill dangerous helots, and a glimpse of life in the ''Agoge''.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: RealLife Aesop died by crossing. There, [[spoiler: his soul is transferred to Rike's body before he died]].
* TheSpartanWay: One of the city-states' culture that the webcomic covered was about Ancient Sparta, mentioning the ''Krypteia'', a ritual where Spartan youths were sent to hunt down and kill dangerous helots, and a glimpse of life in the ''Agoge''.
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* SpannerInTheWorks: Aesop's plan in Part 2 is to get enough money to buy his freedom and live a happy life with Bri. None of these happens as Bri [[spoiler: suddenly gets sick and the only way to save her is to accept her fate and become a Pythia, losing every bit of memory from her previous life]] and he's captured by Master Yadmon after a ten-year chase.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: RealLife Aesop died by crossing. There, [[spoiler: his soul is transferred to Rike's body before he died]].
* TheSpartanWay: One of the city-states' culture that the webcomic covered was about Ancient Sparta, mentioning the ''Krypteia'', a ritual where Spartan youths were sent to hunt down and kill dangerous helots, and a glimpse of life in the ''Agoge''.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: RealLife Aesop died by crossing. There, [[spoiler: his soul is transferred to Rike's body before he died]].
* TheSpartanWay: One of the city-states' culture that the webcomic covered was about Ancient Sparta, mentioning the ''Krypteia'', a ritual where Spartan youths were sent to hunt down and kill dangerous helots, and a glimpse of life in the ''Agoge''.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: RealLifeStrongFamilyResemblance: Aesop died by crossing. There, [[spoiler: looks almost like his soul is transferred to Rike's body before he died]].
* TheSpartanWay: One of the city-states' culture that the webcomic covered was about Ancient Sparta, mentioning the ''Krypteia'', a ritual where Spartan youths were sent to hunt down and kill dangerous helots, and a glimpse of life in the ''Agoge''.father.
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** Going on a trip to Sparta. Even if it is to save your best friend.
** Whenever Aesop confronts Master Yadmon.
* TookALevelInBadass: Bri spent her teenage years training under Lady Sappho, and as a result, she became an incredible good warrior, who saved Aesop many times. No wonder she's a fan-favourite among the audience.
* TookALevelInJerkass: Master Yadmon was already a despicable human being, but as time passed, his treatment towards Aesop became harsher (sending him to the Dungeon, whipping him every day etc).
* TrainingTheGiftOfMagic: At the end of the second part, [[spoiler: Bri is trained to become a Pythia]], something like a fortune-teller in UsefulNotes/AncientGreece.
* ThisIsGonnaSuck:
** Going on a trip to Sparta. Even if it is to save your best friend.
** Whenever Aesop confronts Master Yadmon.
* TookALevelInBadass: Bri spent her teenage years training under Lady Sappho, and as a result, she became an incredible good warrior, who saved Aesop many times. No wonder she's a fan-favourite among the audience.
* TookALevelInJerkass: Master Yadmon was already a despicable human being, but as time passed, his treatment towards Aesop became harsher (sending him to the Dungeon, whipping him every day etc).
* TrainingTheGiftOfMagic: At the end of the second part, [[spoiler: Bri is trained to become a Pythia]], something like a fortune-teller in UsefulNotes/AncientGreece.
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** It's important to make the difference between enemies and allies!
* ShoutOut: The Spartans' appearance and clothing is literally taken away from Film/ThreeHundred.
* StarcrossedLovers: Aesop and Bri. After their ten-year reunion, they are forced to be separated, because Bri ought to obey her destiny and become a Pythia, in order to be saved. To do that, however, [[spoiler: she has to forget everything about her previous life]].
* StrictlyFormula: The first two parts are all about Aesop traveling all around Greece.
* {{Stripperiffic}}: All the Spartans presented in "Lion's Den" arc wear nothing but [[{{Loincloth}} loincloths]] and [[BadassCape capes]], not unlike those in Film/ThreeHundred.
* {{Stripperiffic}}: All the Spartans presented in "Lion's Den" arc wear nothing but [[{{Loincloth}} loincloths]] and [[BadassCape capes]], not unlike those in Film/ThreeHundred.
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** Drakon, who was a SleazyPolitician and a huge [[HeManWomanHater misogynist]] ends up [[spoiler: dying from suffocation, after the crowd threw clothes upon him]].
** [[TheBully Kollos]] and his two minions, three of the most massive [[{{Jerkass}} jerkasses]] in the webtoon, [[spoiler: are abandoned close to the coasts of Miletus]].
** Master Yadmon killed both of Aesop's parents
** Drakon, who was a SleazyPolitician and a huge [[HeManWomanHater misogynist]] ends up [[spoiler: dying from suffocation, after the crowd threw clothes upon him]].
** [[TheBully Kollos]] and his two minions, three of the most massive [[{{Jerkass}} jerkasses]] in the webtoon, [[spoiler: are abandoned close to the coasts of Miletus]].
** Master Yadmon killed both of Aesop's parents
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''"Do you know what makes a human strong? The power no one can fight against. The power no one can handle. What creates such almighty power is… hatred and wrath."''
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--> '''Theo''': Remember, Aesop, you only need one thing to cheat someone. It's the greed inside of that person.
** The "Lion's Den" offers two:
*** One: don't be fooled by people who pretend to be in need, since they might want to take advantage of you or harm you.
*** Two: be careful when you visit a place you know it's dangerous! Chances are you never come back!
--> '''Theo''': Remember, Aesop, you only need one thing to cheat someone. It's the greed inside of that person.
** The "Lion's Den" offers two:
*** One: don't be fooled by people who pretend to be in need, since they might want to take advantage of you or harm you.
*** Two: be careful when you visit a place you know it's dangerous! Chances are you never come back!
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* InsultBackfire: When some male guards meet Sappho's female guardians and see that they gather knives, they tell them that the only place a woman is allowed to hold a knife is in the [[StayInTheKitchen kitchen]]. The guardians' response? Pulling out their spears!
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* StayInTheKitchen: The guardians dismiss Sappho's female guardians and tell them that the only place they are allowed to hold a knife is in the kitchen. This backfires when they pull out their spears.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Yadmon, in Real life, actually cared about RealLife Aesop and tried to free him. In the webtoon, he killed his parents, tormented him in daily basis, hunted him down for ten straight years after Aesop managed to escape, and still treated him the same awful way he did when the latter was a kid.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: AdaptationalVillainy:
** Yadmon, in Real life, actually cared about RealLife Aesop and tried to free him. In the webtoon, he killed his parents, tormented him in daily basis, hunted him down for ten straight years after Aesop managed to escape, and still treated him the same awful way he did when the latter was akid.kid.
** In RealLife Solon was a benevolent law-maker who reformed the Draconian Laws into a system that was much more humane and fair than before. He went into a self-imposed exile because he thought his laws were as fair as they could be and he didn't want to be forced to change them. In the webcomic he is an AntiVillain who [[spoiler: organizes a coup that [[GoneHorriblyWrong goes horribly wrong]] in order to get rid of Athens' corruption and emancipate the slaves]]. He ends up [[spoiler: [[UnwittingPawn unwittinlgy helping Yadmon gain ultimate political power]] and causes Aesop's death]]. He is [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone understandably horrified]] and goes into self-imposed exile because of that instead.
** Yadmon, in Real life, actually cared about RealLife Aesop and tried to free him. In the webtoon, he killed his parents, tormented him in daily basis, hunted him down for ten straight years after Aesop managed to escape, and still treated him the same awful way he did when the latter was a
** In RealLife Solon was a benevolent law-maker who reformed the Draconian Laws into a system that was much more humane and fair than before. He went into a self-imposed exile because he thought his laws were as fair as they could be and he didn't want to be forced to change them. In the webcomic he is an AntiVillain who [[spoiler: organizes a coup that [[GoneHorriblyWrong goes horribly wrong]] in order to get rid of Athens' corruption and emancipate the slaves]]. He ends up [[spoiler: [[UnwittingPawn unwittinlgy helping Yadmon gain ultimate political power]] and causes Aesop's death]]. He is [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone understandably horrified]] and goes into self-imposed exile because of that instead.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Drakon might be a ruthless sleazy, greedy, sexist and self-centred ruler who intentionally made his laws extremely strict and bloody to punish his fellow citizens, but even he looks down on Yadmon for betraying his own father.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Played with. Drakon might be a ruthless sleazy, greedy, sexist and self-centred ruler who intentionally made his laws extremely strict and bloody to punish his fellow citizens, but even he looks down on Yadmon for betraying his own father.father. [[{{Hypocrite}} It should be noted however that it was him that goaded him into it]] by promising to make him an Arcon if he did so.
** During chapter 8 Drakon describes the oligarchy of Athens as a Hydra, and that the proper way to get power is not to just cut off its head (killing the Arcons) but to subsequently burn it (replace them with loyal "puppets"). 118 Chapters later [[spoiler: this is exactly how Yadmon gains ultimate power by co-opting Solon's coup and using it to his advantage]].
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Yadmon dismisses Aesop's fables and makes fun of them, but he uses them to impress his student, Peisistratus, who seems to enjoy them.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Drakon and Yadmon, big time.
** Drakon goads Yadmon into betraying his father by promising to make him an Arcon. When Yadmon actually does so, he reneges on this promise on the basis that [[EvenEvilHasStandards "it's not appropriate to promote a man who killed his own father"]].
** Yadmon dismisses Aesop's fables and makes fun of them, but he uses them to impress his student, Peisistratus, who seems to enjoy them.
** Drakon goads Yadmon into betraying his father by promising to make him an Arcon. When Yadmon actually does so, he reneges on this promise on the basis that [[EvenEvilHasStandards "it's not appropriate to promote a man who killed his own father"]].
** Yadmon dismisses Aesop's fables and makes fun of them, but he uses them to impress his student, Peisistratus, who seems to enjoy them.
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* SleazyPolitician: Drakon. He is a sexist, greedy, ambitious "Arcon" (ie high ruler of the city) who looks down on his fellow Athenians and deliberately made his laws ''bloody strict'' because he detests them. He detests the oligarchy of Athens and is only a part of it because he admits it's the bast place for him ''for now''. He then goads Yadmon into turning on his own father by promising him a position as an Arcon, and then goes back on his promise on the basis that "it's not appropriate to promote a man who killed his own father". [[RightForTheWrongReasons He is right not to trust him]] but still...
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* SleazyPolitician: Drakon. He is a sexist, greedy, ambitious "Arcon" (ie high ruler of the city) who looks down on his fellow Athenians and deliberately made his laws ''bloody strict'' because he detests them. He detests the oligarchy of Athens and is only a part of it because [[{{Hypocrite}} he admits it's the bast best place for him ''for now''.now'']]. He then goads Yadmon into turning on his own father by promising him a position as an Arcon, and then goes back on his promise on the basis that "it's not appropriate to promote a man who killed his own father". [[RightForTheWrongReasons He is right not to trust him]] but still...
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** The story with the man and the goose that laid golde
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** The story with the man and the goose that laid goldegolden eggs tells that you should be satisfied with what you've got and not to "kill" your precious resources.
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** The story with the man and the goose that laid golde
* ArtShift: When the webtoon wants to retell a story, the drawings change to a style that looks exactly like it's been taken from a greek pottery.
* StrictlyFormula: The first two parts are all about Aesop traveling all around Greece.
* SurpriseCreepy: The webtoon can be very nightmarish-y if it wants. Like, when Aesop first visits Sparta and he's in a mountain full of bones.
* SurpriseCreepy: The webtoon can be very nightmarish-y if it wants. Like, when Aesop first visits Sparta and he's in a mountain full of bones.
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* XanatosSpeedChess: Part 2 is essentially all about Aesop trying to get enough money to buy his freedom and Yadmon chasing after him to force him back into slavery. [[spoiler: Aesop eventually loses]].
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* XanatosSpeedChess: Part 2 is essentially all about Aesop trying to get enough money to buy his freedom and Yadmon chasing after him to force him back into slavery. [[spoiler: Aesop eventually loses]].loses]].
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''"I remember a story Aesop told me a long time ago."''
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''"I remember a story Aesop told me a long time ago."''