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* KillEmAll: If you make a really bad choice everyone will die.
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* RupturedAppendix: The victim gets to the hospital just in time. [[spoiler: Unfortunately, the recent outbreak prevents the operation from happening, [[AdultFear leaving her to die a slow, painful death while her husband is powerless to do anything to save her]].]]
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* RupturedAppendix: The victim gets to the hospital just in time. [[spoiler: Unfortunately, the recent outbreak prevents the operation from happening, [[AdultFear leaving her to die a slow, painful death while her husband is powerless to do anything to save her]].her.]]
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WebOriginal/DeadEnds is a work of interactive zombie fiction by Creator/NatePiekos that follows the story of a young delivery boy named Eddie Beames who finds himself in the middle of a zombie apocalypse when strange meteors begin falling from the sky one night. With each new chapter comes new twists and turns, new allies and enemies, and new danger. Sadly, as of this writing it hasn't updated in over a year (but at six chapters is still worth checking out). It can be found here: http://visitdeadends.com/indicia.html
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* MenAreTheExpendableGender: Massively averted. By the end of the first chapter alone an entire girl's school (except for one of the main characters) is zombified along with their head mistress.
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DeadEnds is a work of interactive zombie fiction by Creator/NatePiekos that follows the story of a young delivery boy named Eddie Beames who finds himself in the middle of a zombie apocalypse when strange meteors begin falling from the sky one night. With each new chapter comes new twists and turns, new allies and enemies, and new danger. Sadly, as of this writing it hasn't updated in over a year (but at six chapters is still worth checking out). It can be found here: http://visitdeadends.com/indicia.html
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DeadEnds is a work of interactive zombie fiction by NatePiekos Creator/NatePiekos that follows the story of a young delivery boy named Eddie Beames who finds himself in the middle of a zombie apocalypse when strange meteors begin falling from the sky one night. With each new chapter comes new twists and turns, new allies and enemies, and new danger. Sadly, as of this writing it hasn't updated in over a year (but at six chapters is still worth checking out). It can be found here: http://visitdeadends.com/indicia.html
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* GlowingEyesOfDoom: All of the undead have glowing red eyes. This leads to some serious NightmareFuel whenever the characters are in a dimly lit area. Just read the beginning of chapter [[spoiler:2]].
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* GlowingEyesOfDoom: All of the undead have glowing red eyes. This leads to some serious NightmareFuel horror whenever the characters are in a dimly lit area. Just read the beginning of chapter [[spoiler:2]].
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* CompleteMonster: Ms. Dorrance.
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: Stupefied silence. Everyone was looking at Eddie like dancing lobsters had erupted from his ass and performed the musical version of SavingPrivateRyan.
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* TearJerker: Many.
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* GraveClouds: Early in the story Eddie finds himself walking down a lonely road in freezing cold weather. As he is making his way through the darkness he happens to stumble upon a cemetery. CueTheRain.
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* RupturedAppendix: The victim gets to the hospital just in time. [[spoiler: Unfortunately, the recent outbreak prevents the operation from happening, [[AdultFear leaving her to die a slow, painful death while her husband is powerless to do anything]].]]
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* RupturedAppendix: The victim gets to the hospital just in time. [[spoiler: Unfortunately, the recent outbreak prevents the operation from happening, [[AdultFear leaving her to die a slow, painful death while her husband is powerless to do anything]].anything to save her]].]]
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* CrazySurvivalist: Several appear from chapter 3 onwards.
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** Eddie has the option of doing this to a dog in the first chapter. [[spoiler:It gets him bitten and infected.]]
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* LuckBasedMission: Early chapters have randomized consequences for choices, which means that it is possible to exhaust every option and still end up dead due to poor luck. Fortunately, this feature seems to have disappeared in the more recent chapters.
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* NoPeriodsPeriod: Averted by Foxy, who gets hers in the middle of the story... [[spoiler:It ends up having zero effect on the overall plot.]]
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* AnyoneCanDie: Sure enough, by the end of each chapter the number of remaining survivors can usually be counted on one hand.
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* OhCrap: Usually at least a couple per chapter, but the best example happens at the very end of chapter [[spoiler:1.]]
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* RaisingTheSteaks: Let's go to a farm!
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* ZombieInfectee: This occurs to [[spoiler:Eddie]] if you make a bad choice.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler:Ralph]] averts this my pulling a HeelFaceTurn before he did something he'd regret.