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* MeaningfulName: If they ARE even their names, then each of the words on each of the Factotums' hats each roughly describe them. The short first one's hat says "cockalorum", which means "a self-important little man", the sole female one's hat says "termagnant", which means "a harsh-tempered or overbearing woman", etc.
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* MeaningfulName: If they ARE even their names, names/codenames, then each of the words on each of the Factotums' hats each roughly describe them. The short first one's hat says "cockalorum", which means "a self-important little man", the sole female one's hat says "termagnant", which means "a harsh-tempered or overbearing woman", etc.
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This short is five and a half minutes long, so be warned that '''there may be unmarked spoilers below'''.
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* EyeScream: During her fight with the KingMook, Origami caves his face in with a headbutt. The man proceeds to spit out his own eyeball, get up, ''[[{{Determinator}} and carry on fighting]]''.
* FreezeFrameBonus: By pausing during the massacre, it's possible to see several moments where Origami shows herself to be NotSoStoic. For example, during the final sword fight with a KingMook, after he gets up following Origami's infliction of EyeScream, you can see for a split second that Origami has a "[[WhyWontYouDie holy shit, you survived that?]]" expression.
* FreezeFrameBonus: By pausing during the massacre, it's possible to see several moments where Origami shows herself to be NotSoStoic. For example, during the final sword fight with a KingMook, after he gets up following Origami's infliction of EyeScream, you can see for a split second that Origami has a "[[WhyWontYouDie holy shit, you survived that?]]" expression.
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* MeaningfulName: If they ARE even their names, then each of the words on each of the Factotums' hats each roughly describe them. The short first one's hat says "cockalorum", which means "a self-important little man", the sole female one's hat says "termagnant", which means "a harsh-tempered or overbearing woman", etc.
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-->'''Miss Conduct''': Lack of... psychotherapy?\\
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-->'''Miss Conduct''': Conduct:''' Lack of... psychotherapy?\\
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'''Jacobi''': I meant the Red Eclipse.
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-->'''Jacobi''': Do you ''have'' a [[PianoDrop piano]]?\\
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* BringIt: Before fighting the henchmen, Origami settles into a combat stance and gestures for them to approach.
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* BringIt: Before fighting the Encyclopath's henchmen, Origami settles into a combat stance and gestures for them to approach.
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* BringIt: Before fighting the henchmen, Origami settles into a combat stance and gestures for them to approach.
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* TheStinger: After the credits, there's a short scene of Origami in her apartment, cooking on the stove. The camera zooms out to show a bunch of dollar bills on her table folded into origami cranes.
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* InLoveWithYourCarnage: Miss Conduct gives Oragami her phone number after witnessing the latter's massacre of Encyclopath's mooks.
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* InLoveWithYourCarnage: Miss Conduct gives Oragami Origami her phone number after witnessing the latter's massacre of Encyclopath's mooks.
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* PaperMaster: [[MeaningfulName Origami]] is shown using her paper armor to create deadly paper airplanes, a revolver to send back a bullet she was hit with, and swords.
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* WholePlotReference: The premise is that the villains are meeting in a warehouse to discuss a way to dispatch the Red Eclipse, it opens with them playing poker while waiting for Aviv. All of this pays homage to the WesternAnimation/BatmanTheAnimatedSeries episode "Almost Got 'Im".
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* WholePlotReference: The premise is that the villains are meeting in a warehouse to discuss a way to dispatch the Red Eclipse, it opens with them playing poker while waiting for Aviv. All of this pays homage to the WesternAnimation/BatmanTheAnimatedSeries ''WesternAnimation/BatmanTheAnimatedSeries'' episode "Almost Got 'Im".
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* WholePlotReference: The premise is that the villains are meeting in a warehouse to discuss a way to dispatch the Red Eclipse, it opens with them playing poker while waiting for Aviv. All of this pays homage to the Batman the animated series episode "Almost Got 'Im".
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* WholePlotReference: The premise is that the villains are meeting in a warehouse to discuss a way to dispatch the Red Eclipse, it opens with them playing poker while waiting for Aviv. All of this pays homage to the Batman the animated series WesternAnimation/BatmanTheAnimatedSeries episode "Almost Got 'Im".
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''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eoIniko3sO0 The Red Eclipse!]]'' is an animated web short about a group of villains plotting against a common adversary, the Red Eclipse.
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''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eoIniko3sO0 The Red Eclipse!]]'' is an animated web short by Insane Inkorporated about a group of villains plotting against a common adversary, the Red Eclipse.
Eclipse. It was published on [=YouTube=] in June 2023.
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[[quoteright:350:https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/the_red_eclipse.png]]
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!This web animation provides examples of:
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A page listing tropes for the indie animation [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eoIniko3sO0&t=278s The Red Eclipse]].
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* WholePlotReference: The premise is that the villains are meeting in a warehouse to discuss a way to dispatch the Red Eclipse, it opens with them playing poker while waiting for Aviv. All of this pays homage to the Batman the animated series episode "Almost Got 'Im".
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* WholePlotReference: The premise is that the villains are meeting in a warehouse to discuss a way to dispatch the Red Eclipse, it opens with them playing poker while waiting for Aviv. All of this pays homage to the Batman the animated series episode "Almost Got 'Im".'Im".
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* EvilOldFolks: Verdict is a typical looking elderly cartoonish judge and he's also a supervillain
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* EvilOldFolks: EvilOldFolks:
** Verdict is a typical looking elderly cartoonish judge and he's also a supervillain
** Verdict is a typical looking elderly cartoonish judge and he's also a supervillain
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* HandsGoDown: When the other villains discuss how to deal with the Red Eclipse, Blot raises his hand, hesitant.
-->'''Jacobi''': Do you ''have'' a [[PianoDrop piano]]?\\
''(Blot reabsorbs his hand)''
* InLoveWithYourCarnage: Miss Conduct gives Oragami her phone number after witnessing the latter's massacre of Encyclopath's mooks.
-->'''Jacobi''': Do you ''have'' a [[PianoDrop piano]]?\\
''(Blot reabsorbs his hand)''
* InLoveWithYourCarnage: Miss Conduct gives Oragami her phone number after witnessing the latter's massacre of Encyclopath's mooks.
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-->'''Miss Conduct''': Lack of... psychotherapy?//
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-->'''Miss Conduct''': Lack of... psychotherapy?//
''({{Beat}})//psychotherapy?\\
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* {{Contortionist}}: [[ProfessionalKiller Origami]] is introduced by cutting herself out of the package she shipped herself in.
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* TheGhost: In spite of being the title character, the Red Eclipse does not make an appearance.
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* PaperMaster: [[MeaningfulName Origami]] is shown using her paper armor to create deadly paper airplanes, a revolver to send back a bullet she was hit with, and swords.
* SesquipedalianLoquaciousness: Encyclopath speaks almost exclusively this way. Blot engages in CopycatMockery, while Miss Conduct accuses him of having DelusionsOfEloquence.
* SoundtrackDissonance: Origami's massacre of Encyclopath's "factotums" is backed by "[[Music/RayCharles Hit the Road, Jack]]".
* SesquipedalianLoquaciousness: Encyclopath speaks almost exclusively this way. Blot engages in CopycatMockery, while Miss Conduct accuses him of having DelusionsOfEloquence.
* SoundtrackDissonance: Origami's massacre of Encyclopath's "factotums" is backed by "[[Music/RayCharles Hit the Road, Jack]]".
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* AllThereInTheScript: Aviv Jacobi's name isn't spoken in the main short, instead featured in the credits.
* ComicallyMissingThePoint: When Jacobi tells the assembled villains that they all share a common problem, we get this:
-->'''Miss Conduct''': Lack of... psychotherapy?//
''({{Beat}})//
'''Jacobi''': I meant the Red Eclipse.
* ComicallyMissingThePoint: When Jacobi tells the assembled villains that they all share a common problem, we get this:
-->'''Miss Conduct''': Lack of... psychotherapy?//
''({{Beat}})//
'''Jacobi''': I meant the Red Eclipse.
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* OpaqueLenses: Verdicts glasses are completely white.
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* OpaqueLenses: Verdicts Verdict's glasses are completely white.
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A page listing tropes for the indie animation [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eoIniko3sO0&t=278s The Red Eclipse]].
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* ElementalHairComposition: Miss Conduct's hair is pure energy, just like the rest of her body.
* EvilOldFolks: Verdict is a typical looking elderly cartoonish judge and he's also a supervillain
** Miss Conduct also has some aspects to her design that imply she's an older woman.
* OpaqueLenses: Verdicts glasses are completely white.
* WholePlotReference: The premise is that the villains are meeting in a warehouse to discuss a way to dispatch the Red Eclipse, it opens with them playing poker while waiting for Aviv. All of this pays homage to the Batman the animated series episode "Almost Got 'Im".
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!This web animation provides examples of:
* ElementalHairComposition: Miss Conduct's hair is pure energy, just like the rest of her body.
* EvilOldFolks: Verdict is a typical looking elderly cartoonish judge and he's also a supervillain
** Miss Conduct also has some aspects to her design that imply she's an older woman.
* OpaqueLenses: Verdicts glasses are completely white.
* WholePlotReference: The premise is that the villains are meeting in a warehouse to discuss a way to dispatch the Red Eclipse, it opens with them playing poker while waiting for Aviv. All of this pays homage to the Batman the animated series episode "Almost Got 'Im".
