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* ArchEnemy: Sophodra and Commander Vera have a past history, with the former identifying the latter on sight with a pointed "''You.''" before essentially getting into a ''Tom and Jerry'' routine against her.
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* QueerEstablishingMoment: When the old weevil asks Rose if she's found anyone yet and suggests finding a man, Rose starts to stammer and is about to state her actual preferences when she gets interrupted by Sophodra's actions in the background. According to WordOfGod, Rose is a lesbian.
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* AmbiguousSituation: Rose tells the old weevil that while there are plenty of other macrovolute tarantulas, she is the only ''Grammostola rosea'', male or female. It's unclear whether she means it in the sense of her simply being the only one in the area, a SingleSpecimenSpecies, or if she's [[LastOfHisKind the only one left.]]
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* AmbiguousSituation: Rose tells the old weevil that while there are plenty of other macrovolute tarantulas, she is the only ''Grammostola rosea'', male or female. It's unclear whether she means it in the sense of her simply being the only one in the area, a SingleSpecimenSpecies, or if she's [[LastOfHisKind the only one left.]]]] The old weevil's reaction leans towards one of the latter two.
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* AmbiguousSituation: Rose tells the old weevil that while there are plenty of other macrovolute tarantulas, she is the only ''Grammostola rosea'', male or female. It's unclear whether she means it in the sense of her simply being the only one in the area, a SingleSpecimenSpecies, or if she's [[LastOfHisKind the only one left.]]
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* ColourCodedforYourConvenience: pink indicates smell-of-vision, while red (a colour that most humans can see but most bugs cannot) usually indicates the humans' perspective.
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* ColourCodedforYourConvenience: pink Pink indicates smell-of-vision, while red (a colour that most humans can see but most bugs cannot) usually indicates the humans' perspective.
* InterspeciesRomance: Briefly discussed when Rose tells the old weevil that she's the only Chilean rose hair tarantula she knows of any gender after he asks if she's found a "conspec"[[note]]The macrovolute equivalent of a spouse[[/note]] yet, and he then wonders if there must be a "close enough" she can join with.
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* SingleSpecimenSpecies : Rose confirmed herself that, while there are other macrovolute tarantulas, she is the only Grammostola rosea.
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* ColourCodedforYourConvenience: pink indicate smell-of-vision, while red (a colour that most humans can see but most bugs cannot) usually indicates the humans' perspective.
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* ColourCodedforYourConvenience: pink indicate indicates smell-of-vision, while red (a colour that most humans can see but most bugs cannot) usually indicates the humans' perspective.
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* ColourCodedforYourConvenience: pink indicate smell-of-vision, while red (a colour that most humans can see but most bugs cannot) usually indicates the humans' perspective.
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* SingleSpecimenSpecies : Rose confirmed herself that, while there are other macrovolute tarantulas, she is the only Grammostola rosea.
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* CallASmeerpARabbit: Downplayed. Various vertebrates such as chickens and penguins look different and have different biology from their Earth counterparts, yet are still referred to by the same name. To complicate things further, "protocule" (what we would consider "normal animals") versions of the "demivolute" (aka mutant) animals still co-exist with each other - and protocules can ''still'' have bizarre abilities that would make no sense to us.
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* CallASmeerpARabbit: Downplayed. Various vertebrates such as chickens and penguins look different and have different biology from their Earth counterparts, yet are still referred to by the same name. To complicate things further, "protocule" (what we would consider "normal animals") versions of the "demivolute" (aka mutant) animals still co-exist with each other - and protocules can ''still'' have bizarre abilities that would make no sense to us.us, such as protocule goats being able to manipulate the Unknown Nature to boost the power of their headbutts.
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* FinalSolution: The ants are implied to have genocided all other eusocial macrovolutes such as social bees and all other ant species. It's for this reason that their actual species (yellow crazy ants) isn't directly mentioned, because as far as everyone is is concerned they're the only ants that exist anymore.
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* FinalSolution: The ants are implied to have genocided all other eusocial macrovolutes such as social bees and all other ant species. It's for this reason that their actual species (yellow crazy ants) isn't directly mentioned, because as far as everyone is else is concerned they're the only ants that exist anymore.
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Mundle has an artificial face, not limb.
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* ArtificialLimbs: Mumble, a housefly, has a prosthetic face.
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* ArtificialLimbs: Mumble, a housefly, as a prosthetic leg.
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* ArtificialLimbs: Mumble, a housefly, as has a prosthetic leg.face.
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* InterspeciesAdoption: Rose is a rose hair tarantula whose family includes her father, a harvestman, and her sister Violet, a scorpion.
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* InterspeciesAdoption: Rose is a Chilean rose hair tarantula whose family includes her father, a harvestman, and her sister Violet, a scorpion.
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** Sophodra's name is a reference to the genus of praying mantises ''Sophodromantis''.
** Rose is a rose hair tarantula, has a flower pattern on her body, sleeps in a bed of flowers, and likes floral scents.
** Rose is a rose hair tarantula, has a flower pattern on her body, sleeps in a bed of flowers, and likes floral scents.
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** Sophodra's name is a reference to the genus of praying mantises ''Sophodromantis''.
''Sphodromantis''.
** Rose is a Chilean rose hair tarantula, has a flower pattern on her body, sleeps in a bed of flowers, and likes floral scents.
** Rose is a Chilean rose hair tarantula, has a flower pattern on her body, sleeps in a bed of flowers, and likes floral scents.
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* FantasticCasteSystem: The ants have a hierarchy with themselves at the top, then the five major Swarms (True Bug, Fly, Beetle, Moth, and Roach), and then smaller sister or daughter Swarms that are subordinate to one of the upper five.
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* FinalSolution: The ants[[note]]Professor Gregorsa identifies them as yellow crazy ants in particular.[[/note]] are implied to have genocided all other eusocial macrovolutes such as bees and all other ant species.
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* FinalSolution: The ants[[note]]Professor Gregorsa identifies them as yellow crazy ants in particular.[[/note]] are implied to have genocided all other eusocial macrovolutes such as social bees and all other ant species.species. It's for this reason that their actual species (yellow crazy ants) isn't directly mentioned, because as far as everyone is is concerned they're the only ants that exist anymore.
