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Not to be confused with the "fall of an empire" a musical metal opera about sobra's orgins and the Crystal empire.
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Not to be confused with the "fall L-Train's ''Fall of an empire" Empire'', a musical symphonic metal opera about sobra's orgins Sombra's origins and the Crystal empire.
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* AltoVillainess: Luna's voice changes noticeably when she [[spoiler: becomes Nightmare Moon]].
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* AltoVillainess: Luna's voice changes noticeably when she [[spoiler: becomes [[spoiler:becomes Nightmare Moon]].
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--> [[spoiler: '''Nightmare Moon''']] : You claim to know fear ? ''I shall show you true terror''!
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--> [[spoiler: '''Nightmare [[spoiler:'''Nightmare Moon''']] : You claim to know fear ? ''I shall show you true terror''!
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* CastingAShadow: The main focus of Sombra's powers, though shown to be more versatile here than in the original cartoon. Also makes him almost invincible, as he's able to shrug off any injury, even being impaled by Celestia and Luna's weapons.
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* CastingAShadow: The main focus of Sombra's powers, though shown to be more versatile here than in the original cartoon. Also It also makes him almost invincible, as he's able to shrug off any injury, even being impaled by Celestia and Luna's weapons.
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-->'''Sombra''': Relentless... Why such lengths to protect your petty imperialistic interests?
-->'''Luna''': (Standing protectively between Sombra and Celestia) You're a fool if you think that's what I'm trying to protect.
-->'''Luna''': (Standing protectively between Sombra and Celestia) You're a fool if you think that's what I'm trying to protect.
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-->'''Sombra''': Relentless... Why why such lengths to protect your petty imperialistic interests?
-->'''Luna''':(Standing ''(standing protectively between Sombra and Celestia) Celestia)'' You're a fool if you think that's what I'm trying to protect.
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--> [[spoiler: '''Nightmare Moon''']]: I... am a nightmare.
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--> [[spoiler: '''Nightmare [[spoiler:'''Nightmare Moon''']]: I... am a nightmare.
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Not to be confused with the "fall of an empire" a musical metal opera about sobra's orgins and the Crystal empire.
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* AnAxeToGrind[=/=]BladeOnAStick: Celestia's weapon is an ornate golden halberd.
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* AdaptationPersonalityChange: Notably King Sombra, who in the source material is a DefiantToTheEnd NoNonsenseNemesis of very few words. In this animation is much more talkative, has SuicidalOverconfidence, and is a [[spoiler:DirtyCoward when faced with an actual threat]].
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* AdaptationPersonalityChange: Notably King Sombra, who Sombra - who, in the source material material, is a DefiantToTheEnd NoNonsenseNemesis of very few words. In this animation is - he's much more talkative, has SuicidalOverconfidence, and is a [[spoiler:DirtyCoward when faced with an actual against another threat]].
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* ShoutOut: While the phrasing is different, Luna’s TheReasonYouSuckSpeech begins with her basically telling Sombra, [[Film/TheDarkKnightRises "You merely adopted the dark. I was]] ''[[Film/TheDarkKnightRises born]]'' [[Film/TheDarkKnightRises in it!"]]
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* ShoutOut: While the phrasing is different, Luna’s TheReasonYouSuckSpeech begins with her basically telling Sombra, [[Film/TheDarkKnightRises "You think darkness is your ally? You merely adopted the dark. I was]] ''[[Film/TheDarkKnightRises born]]'' [[Film/TheDarkKnightRises in it!"]]
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* ShoutOut: The first few lines of Luna’s TheReasonYouSuckSpeech sound very similar to [[Film/TheDarkKnightRises Bane’s]] BadassBoast, just with different phrasing.
-->'''Luna''': You think you've found an ally in darkness? Do you comprehend the powers you were gifted with? The same powers I was ''born'' into?
-->'''Luna''': You think you've found an ally in darkness? Do you comprehend the powers you were gifted with? The same powers I was ''born'' into?
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* ShoutOut: The first few lines of While the phrasing is different, Luna’s TheReasonYouSuckSpeech sound very similar to begins with her basically telling Sombra, [[Film/TheDarkKnightRises Bane’s]] BadassBoast, just with different phrasing.
-->'''Luna''': You think you've found an ally in darkness? Do you comprehend"You merely adopted the powers you were gifted with? The same powers dark. I was ''born'' into?was]] ''[[Film/TheDarkKnightRises born]]'' [[Film/TheDarkKnightRises in it!"]]
-->'''Luna''': You think you've found an ally in darkness? Do you comprehend
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-->'''Luna''': You think you've found an ally in darkness? Do you comprehend the powers you were gifted with? The same powers I was ''born'' into?
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Luna gives one to Sombra [[spoiler: as she transforms into Nightmare Moon]].
--> '''Luna''': You think you've found an ally in darkness? Do you comprehend the powers you were gifted with, the same powers I was ''born'' into? Where do you think the shadows all go to hide from the precious light? Just who do you think stands against them? What you posses is a mere fraction of their might, the same might I stand unyielding against each and every night. You are nothing compared to them. You are nothing compared to ''me''! You claim to know fear? I shall show you true terror!
--> '''Luna''': You think you've found an ally in darkness? Do you comprehend the powers you were gifted with, the same powers I was ''born'' into? Where do you think the shadows all go to hide from the precious light? Just who do you think stands against them? What you posses is a mere fraction of their might, the same might I stand unyielding against each and every night. You are nothing compared to them. You are nothing compared to ''me''! You claim to know fear? I shall show you true terror!
* ShoutOut: The first few lines of Luna’s TheReasonYouSuckSpeech sound very similar to [[Film/TheDarkKnightRises Bane’s]] BadassBoast, just with different phrasing.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Luna gives one to Sombra [[spoiler: as she transforms into Nightmare Moon]].
--> '''Luna''': You think you've found an ally in darkness? Do you comprehend the powers you were gifted with, the same powers I was ''born'' into? Where do you think the shadows all go to hide from the precious light? Just who do you think stands against them? What you posses is a mere fraction of their might, the same might I stand unyielding against each and every night. You are nothing compared to them. You are nothing compared to ''me''! You claim to know fear? I shall show you true terror!
--> '''Luna''': You think you've found an ally in darkness? Do you comprehend the powers you were gifted with, the same powers I was ''born'' into? Where do you think the shadows all go to hide from the precious light? Just who do you think stands against them? What you posses is a mere fraction of their might, the same might I stand unyielding against each and every night. You are nothing compared to them. You are nothing compared to ''me''! You claim to know fear? I shall show you true terror!
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* NotSoDifferent: Sombra's claims to Luna, that he understands the night more than Celestia ever could.
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* NotSoDifferent: NotSoDifferentRemark: Sombra's claims to Luna, that he understands the night more than Celestia ever could.
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* AdaptationDistillation: While Sombra does get more action and dialogue here than on the actual show, this version also has SuicidalOverconfidence and is a complete [[spoiler:DirtyCoward when faced with an actual threat]]. In contrast, the original Sombra was a DefiantToTheEnd NoNonsenseNemesis.
* AdaptationPersonalityChange: Notably King Sombra, who in the source material is a villain of very few words, but in this animation is much more talkative. Arguably justified, since (A) spending over a thousand years [[AndIMustScream trapped in a glacier]] and (B) HulkingOut into practically a sentient WorldWreckingWave probably didn't do his mind any favors.
* AdaptationPersonalityChange: Notably King Sombra, who in the source material is a villain of very few words, but in this animation is much more talkative. Arguably justified, since (A) spending over a thousand years [[AndIMustScream trapped in a glacier]] and (B) HulkingOut into practically a sentient WorldWreckingWave probably didn't do his mind any favors.
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** Also during his WeCanRuleTogether conversation with Luna, he gets her entranced until he mentions making everyone ''fear'' the night when she wants them to ''love'' it, and her.
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* BittersweetEnding: Sombra's been defeated and Luna's [[spoiler:staved off Nightmare Moon for now]]; however, the Crystal Empire has been banished and the viewer knows [[spoiler:Luna will eventually give in to the nightmare anyways]].
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* AdaptationDistillation: While Sombra does get more action and dialogue here than on the actual show, this version also has SuicidalOverconfidence and is a complete [[spoiler:DirtyCoward when faced with an actual threat]]; in contrast, the original Sombra was a DefiantToTheEnd NoNonsenseNemesis.
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* AdaptationDistillation: While Sombra does get more action and dialogue here than on the actual show, this version also has SuicidalOverconfidence and is a complete [[spoiler:DirtyCoward when faced with an actual threat]]; in threat]]. In contrast, the original Sombra was a DefiantToTheEnd NoNonsenseNemesis.
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* ShutUpKirk: Celestia and Luna do this several times, but Sombra naturally ignores it.
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* ShutUpKirk: ShutUpHannibal: Celestia and Luna do this several times, but Sombra naturally ignores it.it.
--> '''Celestia''': Silence, you cur!
--> '''Celestia''': Silence, you cur!
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* ShutUpHannibal: Celestia and Luna do this several times, but Sombra naturally ignores it.
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* ShutUpHannibal: ShutUpKirk: Celestia and Luna do this several times, but Sombra naturally ignores it.
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'''Fall of the Crystal Empire''' is a FanAnimation based on ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' created by Silly Filly Studios.
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'''Fall of the Crystal Empire''' is a WebAnimation based on ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' created by Silly Filly Studios. It presents a fan representation of the defeat of King Sombra by Princesses Celestia and Luna and the disappearance of the Crystal Empire a thousand years before the show began. Can be seen [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vL4q7BBzanI here]].
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'''Fall of the Crystal Empire''' is a WebAnimation FanAnimation based on ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' created by Silly Filly Studios. Studios.
It presents a fan representation of the defeat of King Sombra by Princesses Celestia and Luna and the disappearance of the Crystal Empire a thousand years before the show began.Can It can be seen [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vL4q7BBzanI here]].
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It presents a fan representation of the defeat of King Sombra by Princesses Celestia and Luna and the disappearance of the Crystal Empire a thousand years before the show began.
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* AdaptationPersonalityChange: Notably King Sombra, who in the source material is a villain of very few words, but in this animation is much more talkative. Arguably justified, since (A) spending over a thousand years [[AndIMustScream trapped in a glacier]] and/or (B) ultimately HulkingOut into practically a sentient WorldWreckingWave probably didn't do his mind any favors.
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* AdaptationPersonalityChange: Notably King Sombra, who in the source material is a villain of very few words, but in this animation is much more talkative. Arguably justified, since (A) spending over a thousand years [[AndIMustScream trapped in a glacier]] and/or and (B) ultimately HulkingOut into practically a sentient WorldWreckingWave probably didn't do his mind any favors.
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* AdaptationDistillation: While Sombra does get more action and dialogue here than on the actual show, this version also has SuicidalOverconfidence and is a complete [[spoiler:DirtyCoward when faced with an actual threat]]; in contrast, the original Sombra was a NoNonsenseNemesis who even faced his imminent destruction via Crystal Heart, with defiance instead.
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* AdaptationDistillation: While Sombra does get more action and dialogue here than on the actual show, this version also has SuicidalOverconfidence and is a complete [[spoiler:DirtyCoward when faced with an actual threat]]; in contrast, the original Sombra was a NoNonsenseNemesis who even faced his imminent destruction via Crystal Heart, with defiance instead.DefiantToTheEnd NoNonsenseNemesis.
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* BadassBoast:
---> [[spoiler: '''Nightmare Moon''']] : You claim to know fear ? ''I shall show you true terror''!
---> [[spoiler: '''Nightmare Moon''']] : You claim to know fear ? ''I shall show you true terror''!
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If a villain succeeds in an endeavor, yet it still backfires somehow, then it's "Right" instead of "Wrong."
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* AdaptationDistillation: While Sombra does get more action and dialogue here than on the actual show, this version also has SuicidalOverconfidence and is a complete [[spoiler:DirtyCoward when faced with an actual threat]]; in contrast, the original Sombra was a NoNonsenseNemesis who even faced his imminent destruction via Crystal Heart Heart, with defiance instead.
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* GoneHorriblyWrong: Sombra spends his entire battle with Luna trying to persuade her to turn against her sister. [[spoiler:And after hitting her with his nightmare-inducing attack, he actually successfully turns her into Nightmare Moon, but instead of [[WeCanRuleTogether joining him]], she just kills him.]]
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* GoneHorriblyWrong: GoneHorriblyRight: Sombra spends his entire battle with Luna trying to persuade her to turn against her sister. [[spoiler:And after hitting her with his nightmare-inducing attack, he actually successfully turns her into Nightmare Moon, but instead of [[WeCanRuleTogether joining him]], she just kills him.]]
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* VillainHasAPoint: Despite saying it while [[WeCanRuleTogether trying to turn Luna to his side]], Sombra does accurately predict that Equestria would face other significant threats after him, and also correctly predicts that the underlying conflict between Celestia and Luna would come to a head.