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The web animation can be found [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UGa8eReR_ns here]] at Liam Vickers' Youtube Channel.
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The web animation can be found [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UGa8eReR_ns here]] at Liam Vickers' Youtube [=YouTube=] Channel.
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--> '''Cordie:''' "I once looked at something and only lost focus for [[PunctuatedForEmphasis THREE! HOURS!]]"
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--> '''Waylon''': Nice! [[ItsAllAboutMe I'm a better shot than I thought]].
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--> '''Waylon:''' (''While doing his voiceover'') That's Honest Jo. My partner in crime. [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment She's never told a lie]]. (''Misses his shot aimed at a [[EpicFail non moving target]]'')\\
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--> '''Waylon:''' I once shot a sheriff just because I was grumpy from shooting sheriffs all day.
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--> '''Waylon''': You should have seen us! It was so awesome! [[InfoDump We killed a giant pterodactyl! And Death Itself!]]\\
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--> '''Waylon''': '''Waylon:''' You should have seen us! It was so awesome! [[InfoDump We killed a giant pterodactyl! And Death Itself!]]\\
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--> '''Jo:''' What in tarnation is going on!?\\
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--> '''Waylon:''' Who's a good Death? Who's a good little Death? You earned that star, didn't you? [[AintTooProudToBeg Please don't kill me]].
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--> Cordie: "I once looked at something and only lost focus for [[PunctuatedForEmphasis THREE! HOURS!]]"
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--> Cordie: '''Cordie:''' "I once looked at something and only lost focus for [[PunctuatedForEmphasis THREE! HOURS!]]"
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--> '''Waylon''': (''While doing his voiceover'') That's Honest Jo. My partner in crime. [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment She's never told a lie]]. (''Misses his shot aimed at a [[EpicFail non moving target]]'')\\
'''Jo''': [[DeadpanSnarker You're bad at this]].
'''Jo''': [[DeadpanSnarker You're bad at this]].
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--> '''Waylon''': '''Waylon:''' (''While doing his voiceover'') That's Honest Jo. My partner in crime. [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment She's never told a lie]]. (''Misses his shot aimed at a [[EpicFail non moving target]]'')\\
'''Jo''': '''Jo:''' [[DeadpanSnarker You're bad at this]].
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--> '''Waylon''': I once shot a sheriff just because I was grumpy from shooting sheriffs all day.
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--> '''Waylon''': '''Waylon:''' I once shot a sheriff just because I was grumpy from shooting sheriffs all day.
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'''Cordie''': Well, not Death Itself. I mean... you can't kill Death.\\
'''Waylon''': Oh, right! Well, [[CaptainObvious obviously]].\\
'''Cordie''': [[LampshadeHanging It's kind of his whole thing]].\\
'''Waylon''': But yeah, [[RealisticDictionIsUnrealistic I uh... we uh...]] ''[[[{{Beat}} awkward pause]]]'' [[LateToTheRealization Wait, what!?]]
'''Waylon''': Oh, right! Well, [[CaptainObvious obviously]].\\
'''Cordie''': [[LampshadeHanging It's kind of his whole thing]].\\
'''Waylon''': But yeah, [[RealisticDictionIsUnrealistic I uh... we uh...]] ''[[[{{Beat}} awkward pause]]]'' [[LateToTheRealization Wait, what!?]]
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--> '''Jo''': What in tarnation is going on!?\\
'''Waylon''': Oh, man. [[LampshadeHanging She's gone southern]].
'''Waylon''': Oh, man. [[LampshadeHanging She's gone southern]].
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--> '''Jo''': '''Jo:''' What in tarnation is going on!?\\
'''Waylon''': '''Waylon:''' Oh, man. [[LampshadeHanging She's gone southern]].
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--> '''Waylon''': Who's a good Death? Who's a good little Death? You earned that star, didn't you? [[AintTooProudToBeg Please don't kill me]].
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--> '''Waylon''': '''Waylon:''' Who's a good Death? Who's a good little Death? You earned that star, didn't you? [[AintTooProudToBeg Please don't kill me]].
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--> '''Waylon''': Whoa. [[BreakingTheFourthWall Montages are dangerous]].
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--> '''Waylon''': '''Waylon:''' Whoa. [[BreakingTheFourthWall Montages are dangerous]].
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* SpoofAesop: If you give someone validation, you can manipulate them into doing what you want.
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* SpoofAesop: If The moral of the episode, as summed up by Waylon: if you give someone validation, you can manipulate them into doing what you want.
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* MeaningfulLook: At the end, as Jo and Cordie walk away, talking about how whoever shot the previous sheriff was never caught, Waylon gets a mischievous look, implying that he had something to do with it.
* MediumAwareness:
** After Jo reminds Waylon that the town is surrounded by monsters, he claims:
--->'''Waylon:''' I shot like 50 in the intro sequence!
** After Cordie's TrainingMontage leads to her terrorizing and robbing a bank:
--->'''Waylon:''' Whoa. Montages are dangerous.
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** After Jo reminds Waylon that the town is surrounded by monsters, he claims:
--->'''Waylon:''' I shot like 50 in the intro sequence!
** After Cordie's TrainingMontage leads to her terrorizing and robbing a bank:
--->'''Waylon:''' Whoa. Montages are dangerous.
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* ThePlace: The pilot is titled after its main setting, the town of [=CliffSide=].
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* TwoDVisualsThreeDEffects: Some elements of the animation, such as the guns and some of the background props, are rendered in 3D CGI.
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* TwoDVisualsThreeDEffects: Some The art is mostly 2D, but some elements of the animation, such as the guns and some of the background props, are rendered in 3D CGI.
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* WeirdWest: A more recent entry in animation. It starts with a gunslingin' outlaw and his pardner fighting a Wendigo in a prairie town, and goes from there.
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* WeirdWest: A more recent entry in animation. It starts with a gunslingin' outlaw and his pardner fighting a Wendigo in a prairie town, and goes from there.
